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 Posted: Sat Sep 02, 2006 10:39 pm
Matsuri nodded her head slightly when hearing him then gave a small smile as she then got in to her own stance which seemed alittle to cartoonish. She then gathered her chakra trying to make another image of her however it seemed hard.
"Try again, but this time run tords the dummy while doing this then have your clone go tords the other way.." He said whiel cough afterwords.
"H-hai."She studdered after hearing him. The child then closed her eyes since she found it easier to gather her chakra that way.The arua around her was a light blue color this time instead of it being dark blue however that might have been because of the demon, it was goen now. She missed it which reminded her to smack or kick Bone whenever he came back. Maybe with his arm which she still carried with her. The child then ran tords the dummy with great speed, creating two side clones on her self. The fake one disaperd when it slashed at the dummy, it being stright on whiel the real on slashed tords it on the side.
She then stood up from the ground after landing on it from the attack. Glancing back tords him with slight narrowed eyes thanks to her being her old self now, she coudn't help it, it was a bad habbit to brake.
Hayate watched her with narrowed eyes to only end up coughing a few times."I'll see you later,.." Saying this as he left.
(7/7)
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Posted: Sun Sep 03, 2006 4:52 pm
After a long vacation from trainning Neoshin walks around the village again ready to start up again as he sees a girl and kakashi talking as he then dissapears Neo smirks "Never seen any women around konoha, intresting...." He glances at her as he leans on wall resting from walking around for so long
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:38 am
Finally rested back up I walk away until i find rock lee again in the streets just checking around the alley way as I go up to him and ask him for more trainning, soon we head iout toi the field and get ready to start up
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:42 am
seeing gai in the fields too they both look at me sereiously as they tell me what i will be learning today "Ok Neoshin you have been a great exception to are style and skills for a long time, so we think it's just the right moment and time to now teach you ............. the other inner eight gates, are you ready for this my boy?"
I was surprised as my eyes widenend with shock then i smiled as i jumped up in the air shouted in joy as happy as i've every been "Yes sir's, i'm ready to learn more, please teach me the way.."
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:52 am
((4th gate wound gate trainning))
As they smile also ready to teach me they both walk out to the open as they then get distance to not get blown away from my first time going to the next level "Ok Neoshin this gate is called the wound gate, this gate is the 4th gate in the eight inner gates, already going half wy this gate will give you the power to no longer feel or experience pain during battle because of your mind not setting on that qualitiy. It's a very powerfull gate but it can only be used for short period of time as if it is used for too long, it could damage you mucsles and then you'll experience more pain then even imanginable, ok lets start this thing off!!!" As I look at thm both i then put my arms in front of my face as i get ready to open the first gate already knowing how to activate the 4th gate from the book but just to see if i can handle it and master it to full extent
((1/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:59 am
As I close my eyes i then open the first chakra gate as my body increases mucsle size a little looking back up with my eyes still closed I start to go further as I feel the power now tensing up my body i go to the second gate as my body is surrounded around hot air and my hair start's to stand out I open my eye's looking back at them as i go to te third gate taking no time to waste my eyes go completely white as i unleash my arms from my face as my power explode's around me my skin goes red as my head grows vien's from the strain i look back at them as i sustain the power so far my body can feel the rush of chakra go through my body as it feels so vigorating "I can do this...... stressed "
((2/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:09 am
feling the great rush of power through my body i can feel the power making my body stronger as the power of the life gate increases my strength and stamina as i can feel the power now to go to the 4th gate i look back at them and then i yell as my bodies chakra then explodes all over my body making a giant swirl of aura's as they look at me with impression "Sensei, he is truelly like me when i was younger and still trainning like that, is'nt he?"
Gai sensei just looked at lee shaking his head "No Lee he is diffrent, he is even diffrent from when you were that way.... he's a survivor." As my power keeps explodeing off in rushes of strength i can feel my body now geting tighter but my muscle mass growing at a very fast rate with my body still going i can feel my skin getting even darker and my head growing more viens with alot of power going through me at once
((3/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:17 am
As i can feel the power nearly to me the rush of power just keeps increasing as i can only feel my fist clutching as blood was nearly released from the stress in my body i can nearly not feel anything nor pain, it was alot of power but with determination and skill i would get their in not time as i was sure my power could increase and then handle the power and wield like a little kid with a toy ball anytime of the day i knew in my mind that i could master and that nothing could stop me at this point there was no turning back there was only room to go forward and only so i yelled out as my power kept growing on and on they could tell I was truely determined to go to the next level and make my power greater "Lee he's getting close to it i can feel it...!" Lee noded with Gai's saying as they saw not just ninja anymore but a warrior of all caliber's
((4/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:23 am
My power was nearly enough as i could feel the power in my body but i almost did'nt know how to get it out but with my mind and body and spirit i knew it was possible as i could only wonder what it would be like to be as strong as lee and gai sensei one day, being able to do two thousand push ups and kicking a tree five hundred times i could only wonder if i could be the best i could be with all my might i only wanted the one thing that makes me diffrent from everyone else in this village or in any other village, determination to go the distance as my body increases mucsle size again my body felt numb now as i have struggled for too long trying to get the gate to activate i knew my body could'nt hold out for to long as i did'nt give even though i knew what could happen i would take that chance
((5/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:33 am
I knew that i could'nt pull it of now but with time i knew that it could be done easily if i was stronger i could master it in one if i wanted but that option was not chooseable as i could only get the time to worry about myself going to the next level there was nothing i could do to finish this jutsu so as i tried to push it father my muscle started to tear a little bit as i felt a very sharp through my arms and then my legs as i could feel the fracture make my body loose power as it could only get worse if i kept the gate up i started to go down gates as Lee and Gai both looked surprise in my effort and strength
((6/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:37 am
As i could see from my own eyes as they started to worry about my body i then lost the skin power and my veins from my head went away as i feel down to my knees with my hands on the ground as sweat grew down from my face i could feel my tears closeing back up as my body was in ome real pain "It hurts..... but this is not the end, no pain no gain...... right Gai sensei, Lee-san....." They looked at me a tear in there eye as they started to get emotional on me "I can keep going, it won't kill me..... right guys." I start to get back up as Lee and Gai really do see the determination i have to get what i want
((7/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:29 am
As I get up gain I feel my body slowing down as my arms and legs are nearly lifeless i get back into the stance trying it again knowing maybe this time i can go o the 4th gate by only shear effort and force as rock lee said on one accasion "A failure can even become a genius with the power of effort...." as I put my hands back up i can feel the wind passing me at a soft speed i can see gai and lee looking at me waiting for my next action with much caution as i then close my eyes thinking of what I can do to finish this without killing myself "I know i can do this, it's in me body and i have to unleash it at any cost, even if it cost my life to do it!"
((8/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:31 am
As my eyes stay shut i think about my home back in the village where my father is probly still home with my mother just wondering what has become of me as i can only wonder but never know living a life as a shinobi "I can do this..... for mother....... for father........ for Gai and Lee sensei.......!!!" I then go into the first gate as my body shakes alot from the wound i got the first time i can feel it openeing but i try to keep the wound shut being as carefull as i can be to this extent "Here I go........ first gate release!!!"
((9/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:48 am
As I yell out the first gate i then increase my muscles and stamina as i can tel my wounds will react to it soon as i can only feel the pain right now i also feel the first gate opening with only my eyes feeling the power i then yell out as my body then goes back to normal size i close my eyes trying to focus my chakra as i have an idea to get to the 4th gate quickly i clutched my fist as hard as i can trying to hold my chakra back as i have seen this done by lee and gai sensei once before so maybe i can do it too with the power of effort
((10/12))
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Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:48 am
"Ok, if this work then i i can truely say that i am a shinobi to the vilage of the leaf..... but if i fail then I will probly die, either way i can't turn back now so here goes nothing....!!!" As I clutch my fist and open my eyes i then raise my arms up into the air as ifocus my chakra around my body as my body turns red again I can feeel the chakra in me holding back just as i wanted it too as I can feel my body tensing up three times harder then the first time i was nearly there as I then yell out into the air "4th Gate Wound Gate Release!!!!!!"
((11/12))
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