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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 12:01 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:20 pm
[@ Shin: It's edited.]▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Psy Nickname: N/A
Age: 22 Birthdate: 12/21 Gender: Male
Height: 69 inches(5 feet, 9 inches) Weight: 140 lb's
Nindo: " Reality is nothing more then an illusion created by humans. " Personality: He is normally serious and can come off apathetic. His eyes are hard and cold but carry a tint of loneliness. He is very observant and will study an opponent before fighting them in full-fledged combat. He is extremely skilled with using his Sakkakugan but suffers heavily from its drawbacks when using it. He always thinks thing through thoroughly. Can sometimes be highly unpredictable and does not accept others having control over him.
Village: Leaf Rank: Genin Class: Genjutsu ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Sakkakugan
Chakra Pool: 300 Chakra Color: White Chakra Element: Wind, Water
Strengths: • Genjutsu • Extremely intelligent Weaknesses: • Fragile body • Taijutsu Fears: • Something he can't understand or comprehend • Being outsmarted
Attributes: • Never Ending Fight: +75 chakra • Jackrabbit's Feet: Increased agility Bloodline Attribute • Otherwordly Imagery: Genjutsu performed cannot be mimicked or reversed by any means. Class Attribute: • C. Attribute - Perceiving Mind: Able to detect Genjutsu rank D ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: - One-edged straight sword Weapon Range: - 3 feet Weapon Weight: - 2.5 lb's Weapon Location: - Hilt is attached to the bottom of his forearm. The blade is inside of the hilt and by applying a minuscule amount of chakra, it will extend out to partial or full length.
Summoning Type: None Summon Sage: No Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Kunai(made of steel that is highly reflective) • 5 Explosive Notes • 5 Smoke Bombs • Razor Wire(15 meters) • 5 Highly Explosive Spiked Balls • 10 Shuriken
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Fuuton •
Suiton •
Sakkakugan(Bloodline) •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u
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▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u
• ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬Psy seemed to have just appeared out of nowhere one night in the leaf village. He was about 6 when it happened. The village leaders investigated his past and history but found no documents or records of a family or anything of that sort. He had literally just appeared into existence. His brain had matured much earlier then should have been possible, perhaps this was due to his possession of the Sakkakugan. He kept that secret away from everyone, he didn't want people to know that he possessed a Dojutsu.
He spent all of his time in the library, studying on everything from basic weaponry to highly advanced techniques. He studied all of the fighting styles and jutsu's that were recorded. He learned all of the handsigns and how to use all the elements. Even though he could only use water and wind, he still studied how each element worked. The village leaders saw an opportunity with him and allowed him access to secret scrolls. He spent his entire life since he appeared into existence studying things such as this, until he finished every book and scroll he could find. After that he decided to become a shinobi. He passed the academy in an hour, taking all of there final tests and scoring perfectly on them. He had a reason for why he did all of this and spent his life studying books and scrolls, but he keeps it as secret as his Sakkakugan.
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:46 pm
TvIaMsOqTuHeYz ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Yukio, , Yuuto Nickname: N/a
Age: 15 Birthdate: 6/27 Gender: Male
Height: 60'' Weight: 120 lbs
Nindo: " You can break my puppets, but I'll just peice them back together. " Personality: He has a typically aloof attitude, despite his excelling in his practice. However, fortune tends not to smile upon him, balancing out the good with the bad.
Village: Konohagakure Rank: Genin Class: Puppetry ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: N/a
Chakra Pool: 200 Chakra Color: Black Chakra Element: Lightning, Water
Strengths: • Access to Kugutsu • Naturally does things at a level his peers can only hope to do. Weaknesses: • unable to be in close combat for extended periods of time • Often fumbles after doing something he should have never been able to do. ( Often resulting in stab wounds ) Fears: • Termites • Tapeworms
Attributes: • Extreme reaction speed • Great at crafting object, such as puppet limbs. Class Attribute: • Able To Learn [Kugutsu] • Learn Kugutsu [1] Post Faster • C. Attribute - Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: N/a Weapon Range: N/a Weapon Weight: N/a Weapon Location: N/a
Summoning Type: N/a (Puppets) Summon Sage: No Pacts: N/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 30 explosive senbon
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Raiton • ---
Suiton • ---
Kugutsu • --- ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • --- ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u --- • --- ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u --- • --- ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Yukio was born in Yukigakure, which is where he got his name "snow boy". His parents moved to Konohagakure to raise him in a warmer climate since he was sickly as an infant.
When Yukio was old enough to walk and move easily his parents gave him a marianette. Yukio mastered the art of puppetry with the marianette within three years, even to the point where he could use a single hand to move both of the wooden peices to manipulate the marianette.
When Yukio was in the academy, He was one of the few who couldn't keep up in physical activity with the rest of the class, but he excelled in fine useage of chakra. If something was needed to delicately be done with chakra, Yukio could do it in a flash.
Reposting because it was on the page before this.
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:21 pm
Both look good to go... though, Angel, don't have "greatly increased," just "increased."
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:24 pm
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Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 3:48 pm
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:22 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Doki Kodoki Nickname: "Doki-Doki"
Age: 14 Birthdate: 8/15 Gender: Female
Height: 5'4 Weight: 123lb
Nindo: "Perform at least one good deed a day." Personality: Under normal circumstances, Doki is a comical sort of failure. She comes off as a mischievous, sarcastic, slightly flippant and prideful individual who is as haughty as she dresses. When not being admired, Doki enjoys teasing her associates with bundles of jokes that usually attracts more trouble than with bees do honey. She is nowhere near modest and almost always places a high opinion on herself. However, in a serious situation, she will compose herself into an entirely different person. Doki isn't reckless and knows her limits as well as showing distinct respect for those her senior.
Despite her common misdemeanors, her mind is fairly flexible and is more keen to thinking outside the box. Once she loses interest in something, she'll immediately give up pursuing it.
Village: Kumogakure Rank: Gennin Class: Taijutsu ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬
Chakra Pool: 175 Chakra Color: Lime Green Chakra Element: Earth, Fire
Strengths: • Quicker Reactions • Close Combat Weaknesses: • Long Ranged Combat • Genjutsu Fears: • Ghosts • Abandonment • Cats
Attributes: • Learn Taijutsu 1 post faster • Physical Defense Slightly Increased Class Attribute: • C. Attribute - Upper Body Training: Physical strength slightly increased ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{Money} {Start at zero} AC: {Advancement credit} {Start at zero}
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bowie Combat Knife Weapon Range: Close ranged / Blade length 8-10 inches / Nearly one feet Weapon Weight: 13.3 oz Weapon Location: Alligned next to her right knee • {When you create your profile, you may have any one basic weapon.)
Summoning Type: {Ex. Dogs, Bears, Slugs, etc.} {If none, remove summon section} Summon Sage: {Yes or No} Pacts: {Ex. Dogs: Pakkun, etc. Sages do not need to list pacts}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 10 Shurriken/10 meter wire • 10 kunai knives • 5 Explosive Notes • Nail File • 5 Smoke Bombs ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon •
Doton •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Doki was born in the hidden Cloud Village and was raised into a common civilian family. Her parents were not well off but they often held pride for their eldest sons who were brilliant and intelligent. Feeling like she could achieve nothing as an ordinary person, Doki entered the academy in order to become a formidable shinobi. Since then, her will to be extraordinary has pushed her in various directions. Often, they lead her into craving excessive attention which resorted into slight misdemeanors. Others found new light.
During her early years in the academy, Doki fell behind her classmates on numerous occasions because she never took her classes seriously. Doki was told by a respected teacher that she was not proficient enough to handle any more ninjutsu classes since she was already not capable of chakra molding at the time. Other children started to tease her for it. Out of humiliation and resentment towards the teacher she once respected, the girl became more cantankerous just to spite them all. Her childhood however was augmented with less sincerity due to an unstable home environment. Her parents fought constantly and stressed over when or which child should be most fed. Her father became less impertinent and grew ill from the stress. A short time after, he passed away. Her mother disappeared a year after. Her two eldest brothers took on different paths upon turning the right age. All Doki had left was her third eldest brother.
Her graduation came a little later than she had intended to since the bulk of her academy years consisted of nothing useful other than goofing off and skipping. This greatly disappointed her brother, who was solely the one responsible as the head of the remaining family. In his few years of bitterness of not being able to explore his talents as a promising scholar, he spent discouraging his sister, sometimes unintentionally but always without regret. And soon enough, he left, just as the others had.
Feeling immensely betrayed and disdained by her late resolution, she came to rely less on others and focused more on the essentials. In time, she chose to forget about them and had became a prodding thorn to anyone who came to know her. Her dream of becoming an extraordinary individual firmly remained at her side so she would pursue.
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 7:19 pm
Looks good, good, good. c:
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Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2011 11:27 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Akane Haruka Nickname: Akan
Age: 14 Birthdate: May 15th Gender: Male
Height: 5 feet 10 inches Weight: 153lbs
Nindo: "All Sting has an end once you cut it." Personality: Akane is a well centered person, very reasonable and very tolerable. But when in battle it is as if he becomes a different person, he becomes blood thirsty and will be like a wrecking ball trying to destroy his opponent with any possible way. He will become very happy as he fights, showing his father and mother ravaging and evil genes.
Village: Sunagakure Rank: Genin Class: Puppet Class ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 240 Chakra Color: Fire Brick Red Chakra Element: Lightning (Main Heart)
Strengths: • Quick Thinking • Defensive Tactics Weaknesses: • Genjutsu's of High rank is almost unable to escape for him. • Possessive: If His Puppet is damaged, his emotions begin to become wild. Fears: • Having his own heart ripped out • Losing one of his Favorite Puppets
Attributes: • Learns Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster • Able to Learn [1] Bukijutsu Class Attribute: • Able To Learn [Kugutsu] • Learn Kugutsu [1] Post Faster • C. Attribute - Bunraku: Able to use one hand for D and lower ranked techniques Bloodline Attributes • Fooling Death: If a killing blow is struck, a spare heart is expanded and used as a replacement. • Organic Alteration: Able to rearrange internal organs on a whim. • Jiongu users have deep chakra pools. ( Chakra pool maximum +40. ) • Jiongu users learn ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Jiongu threads are roughly the width of an index finger. • Jiongu threads are roughly three times as long as their owner's height. ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Chakra Connector (This weapon is not yet acquired, Akane must go to Takumi and get it created in the Blacksmiths.) Weapon Range: 1ft - 100m Weapon Weight: 3lb's Weapon Location: It is strapped to his left arm. Weapon Appearance: It is strapped to his arm by some braces on the bottom part of his arm, the top of his arm is plated with a strong metal and can be used to block bladed weapons much like a small shield. In the area closest to his wrist their is a small indent and a hole, this is where the projectile is released. Under the weapon where it connected the skin there is multiple needle like projections that stab into Akane's arm. In the middle of the needle there is a hole that is able to pull out things from Akane's body. Weapon's Use: The Weapon mix Akane's Bloodline and Class together creating the Perfect Chakra Projector. By using some skill's that Akane has produced he is able to take tendril's from his body, cut them, make them straighten and Fire them out at anything (eg: Puppets, People, Areas). The Main use of the Weapon is to make a greater and more fluent connection between Akane and his puppet, when one of these projections are in the puppet, connecting his strings to the puppet will not cost the [5] chakra it usually would. It can also be an effective senbon projector and the straight Tendrils can help with Jutsu's able to seek out an opponent if not pulled out.
Summoning Type: Summon Sage: Pacts:
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 25x Senbon • First Aid • 5x Smoke Bombs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton {Start with the following six only} • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Main Element (Heart One): Raiton [Lightning] • • • • • •
Heart Two: Katon [Fire] • • • • • • • •
Heart Three: N/A •
Heart Four: N/A •
Heart Five: N/A •
Kugutsu Techniques: •
Bloodline Techniques: •
Custom Techniques: •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ When Akane was young, Akane was raised by his grandmother, who was one of the Elder's of the Sand Village. His Mother and father, were rogues on the other hand who were widely know as the "Connectors" they were very ravage people, they would literally kill people then instead of taking the heart for life they would just tear the body apart fighting even each other to take a heart, usually destroying it in the process. They used weapons much like Akanes Chakra Projector and they used them so their tendril's would be able to mass on a target, they left the schematics with Akane, and that is all he was given by his parents. His Grandmother tells him stories of their ways and gave him the schematics for the weapon and also trained him in the way of Puppetry. His grandmother has taught him the way to connect his weaknesses and strength to make a balanced Chakra and Battle Types...
Although Akane has been raised by a sane woman, he does have a dark side to him that he inherited from his parents... He'll kill someone without a second thought but he has manners and won't rip them apart. He know's he needs their hearts to survive...
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 9:26 am
Mmm... well, the chakra element you put on your profile (the upper part) is supposed to be what your original heart holds, as that heart has the ninjutsu restriction of your class instead of the 8 that stolen hearts have. =o I see that you did that in the technique section, but you should still at least put Lightning up top. Mmmm... aside that, you look good to go.
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 6:38 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Valentine Greir Nickname: Madness
Age: 15 Birthdate: August 12 Gender: Male
Height: 5 Foot 8 Inches Weight: 131 lbs
Nindo: "Have fun without care." Personality: Rather whimsical character as does what he wants to be amused. He has no morals or ethics causing him to be rather twisted.
Village: Mist Rank: Genin Class: Bloodline▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Jiongu
Chakra Pool: 265 Chakra Color: Black Chakra Element: Wind
Strengths: • Bloodline • Close Combat Weaknesses: • Bladed Combat • Demon Fire Fears: • Being Vulnerable • Boredom
Attributes: • Blood Hate [Bloodline Jutsu Increase in Power] • Blood Lust [Recover 10 Chakra every A or S Bloodline Jutsu used] • Fooling Death • Organic Alteration Class Attribute: • Weak Blood ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Claws Weapon Range: 6 Inches Weapon Weight: 5 lbs. Weapon Location: Waist
Summoning Type: None Summon Sage: No Pacts: None
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Senbon w/ exploding tags [30]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Wind [Fuuton] •
Thread Techniques [Bloodline] •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u • {If none, remove section}
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬His background is shrouded in mystery before he entered the hidden mist village. He entered the village at a young age and was a seemingly evil boy but didn't cause any trouble. When he was the right age he entered the academy and became a ninja.
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 6:46 pm
You can still make up two of your own attributes in addition to the ones you get from your bloodline. Though, if you really don't want to, you're all good to go now.
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Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2011 8:57 pm
For your first attribute have it read "Bloodline technique power increased" and you're good to go.
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 4:26 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Rayzu Shakuton Nickname: The Deseret Flame Age: 16 Birthdate: Sand village Gender: Male
Height: 6'2 Weight: 175lb
Nindo: "I'll cut my own path to the future " Personality: calm controlled collective
Village: Cloud Rank: Genin Class: Bloodline ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Shakuton
Chakra Pool: 265 Chakra Color: Rainbow Red Chakra Element: Fire wind
Strengths: • Red Blaze : Rayzu Shakuton are very flashy and are all alittle bigger than normal but not stronger. •Red flash : Rayzu is a very fast fighter sending a barrage of taijutsu Bukijutsu and ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Wet Fear : Rayzu has a weakness to water jutsu and hates wet places. • Swordsmen path : Rayzu will not use another weapon besides a sword. Fears: • Water lands • losing his friends
Attributes: • One hand seal master : Rayzu only needs one hand to use preform jutsu. • Monkey grip : Rayzu can hold any sword in one hand as if he were using two and may use any skills that need two hands with only one. Bloodline • Heat Resistant: Shakuton users are accustomed to heat and humidity, and thus are not offset by such climates or Katon techniques. Class Attribute: • Learn Bloodline Techniques [1] Post Faster • Weak Blood: Bloodline technique effects slightly increased ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0 ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬
Weapon Name: Red Steel Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 4 ft Weapon Weight: 5lb Weapon Location:waist Weapon Info: This is a Katana give to Rayzu by his dad it is a normal Katana but the blade is red.
Summoning Type: none Summon Sage: nope Pacts: none
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ •15 explosion tags • 5 flash bomb • 10 ninja bombs
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton • Henge no Jutsu [Transformation Technique] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] • Bushin no Jutsu [Clone Technique] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [Act of Water Surface Walking] • Kinobori no Waza [Act of Tree Climbing] • Kai [Release]
Katon •
Fuuton •
Shakuton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u •
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u Kaiser Fist Stage 0 •
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u Descending Greatness - Shigure Soen Stage 0 • ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Rayzu was a main branch his bloodline due to he was a direct descent of Pakura of the Sand Giving him a strong and natural gift with his bloodline. He was always training to be a greats master of his bloodline and to lead his clan one day. but his father saw that his son was unhappy so as his father was already the head of the clan he thought he might as well let his son have his way he told his son to live his own life and to come back and lead the clan when he was ready. Rayzu left the next day to find a new village he is a wounder finding his way his path will be his own and won't be control by anyone.
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Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2011 6:19 pm
Mmm... you sort of need to reword your strengths, just because it kinda sounds like they're attributes. Something like "Powerful upper arms", but even then, that sounds like an attribute. *Taps chin* To be perfectly honest, I think you could just replace it with Shakuton Aura, because I can't really approve that.
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