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 Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 8:28 pm
Master of 3 Faces Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Flight of White
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: After the creation of snow, Ayume is able to create a flock of large birds to dive and attack the target to do physical damage.
Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Crimson Sights
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: Once the enemy is injured and blood has been spilled onto her snow, she is able to use that bloody snow into an attack that hones in onto the person who's blood has been used, making it nearly impossible to avoid. This Jutsu can be used in conjunction with any of her other Yukiton attacks as long as an efficient amount of blood can be used. (Unable to use small drops of blood for any attack) The only way to avoid being hit by any attack used with this Jutsu is to dodge in time for it to hit something else, or melt the snow with a B-rank Katon Jutsu.
Flight of White: Are you taking about making use of Hatsuyuki cloud snow, or straight up creating these birdies? Either way, it should be fine.
Crimson Sights: Mmm... so, you'd be using the actual red snow to perform the techniques, or what?
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 8:58 pm
A genjutsu based on the transmission of light. Following the proper handsigns, the shinobi permeates chakra into the light around them, which creates a dormant illusion that triggers through sight with the distilled air around the user. This illusion causes the afflicted to believe their opponent (the user) is able to make them spontaneously combust with a single gesture! Once captured by this technique, the afflicted will be pestered by hot and uncomfortable sensations—all sorts of signs one might feel if they were standing near, or even in, a raging humid fire. Because this technique is triggered through sight with the distilled air around the user, it can afflict multiple targets, but only the one first put under the technique is capable of experiencing it in full. Those who are affected after the first target feel only the discomfort and grogginess of fire and humidity.
Umm... something like that sound right?
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:04 pm
Shinsua
A genjutsu based on the transmission of light. Following the proper handsigns, the shinobi permeates chakra into the light around them, which creates a dormant illusion that triggers through sight with the distilled air around the user. This illusion causes the afflicted to believe their opponent (the user) is able to make them spontaneously combust with a single gesture! Once captured by this technique, the afflicted will be pestered by hot and uncomfortable sensations—all sorts of signs one might feel if they were standing near, or even in, a raging humid fire. Because this technique is triggered through sight with the distilled air around the user, it can afflict multiple targets, but only the one first put under the technique is capable of experiencing it in full. Those who are affected after the first target feel only the discomfort and grogginess of fire and humidity.
Umm... something like that sound right?
exactly and then the little bits about effective range and all that.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:25 pm
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Spectral Havoc ( I'd consider renaming it, though )
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A genjutsu based on the transmission of light. Following the proper handsigns, the shinobi permeates chakra into the light around them, which creates a dormant illusion that triggers through sight with the distilled air around the user. This illusion causes the afflicted to believe their opponent (the user) is able to make them spontaneously combust with a single gesture! Once captured by this technique, the afflicted will be pestered by hot and uncomfortable sensations—all sorts of signs one might feel if they were standing near, or even in, a raging humid fire. Because this technique is triggered through sight with the distilled air around the user, it can afflict multiple targets, but only the one first put under the technique is capable of experiencing it in full. Those who are affected after the first target feel only the discomfort and grogginess of fire and humidity. Duration: 5 posts.
• 20ft range.
Just like that then?
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:38 pm
Yes, but then theirs is the on turn duration for those indirectly effected by the jutsu. Also what would you name it?
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 10:46 pm
*Shakes head*
I powered it down a little bit. Those who are indirectly affected by it really only feel the humidity and heat of the technique, none of the pain, so the duration is no different.
I'm not really sure, but something related to "fire" or "heat" would probably seem right... Maybe... "Molten Psyche," or something.
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:03 pm
Shinsua
*Shakes head*
I powered it down a little bit. Those who are indirectly affected by it really only feel the humidity and heat of the technique, none of the pain, so the duration is no different.
I'm not really sure, but something related to "fire" or "heat" would probably seem right... Maybe... "Molten Psyche," or something.
Kamado-gami's Tsukamu [Kojin's grasp] pretty much fire gods grasp in other words. slap that on it and if it's good to go I'll add it to my list of approved customs. Still need three others ont he last page looked at but this one looking pretty good. =3
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:12 pm
Reaper Elyse Shinsua
*Shakes head*
I powered it down a little bit. Those who are indirectly affected by it really only feel the humidity and heat of the technique, none of the pain, so the duration is no different.
I'm not really sure, but something related to "fire" or "heat" would probably seem right... Maybe... "Molten Psyche," or something.
Kamado-gami's Tsukamu [Kojin's grasp] pretty much fire gods grasp in other words. slap that on it and if it's good to go I'll add it to my list of approved customs. Still need three others ont he last page looked at but this one looking pretty good. =3
Yeah, that's good, and if you wouldn't mind, can you please repost the others? > . <
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Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 11:29 pm
Shinsua
Yeah, that's good, and if you wouldn't mind, can you please repost the others? > . <
Fine, fine. Give me a sec i might need to refresh them a bit and tighten up my grammar.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:37 pm
Shinsua Master of 3 Faces Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Flight of White
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: After the creation of snow, Ayume is able to create a flock of large birds to dive and attack the target to do physical damage.
Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Crimson Sights
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: Once the enemy is injured and blood has been spilled onto her snow, she is able to use that bloody snow into an attack that hones in onto the person who's blood has been used, making it nearly impossible to avoid. This Jutsu can be used in conjunction with any of her other Yukiton attacks as long as an efficient amount of blood can be used. (Unable to use small drops of blood for any attack) The only way to avoid being hit by any attack used with this Jutsu is to dodge in time for it to hit something else, or melt the snow with a B-rank Katon Jutsu.
Flight of White: Are you taking about making use of Hatsuyuki cloud snow, or straight up creating these birdies? Either way, it should be fine.
Crimson Sights: Mmm... so, you'd be using the actual red snow to perform the techniques, or what?
Crimson Sights: Technically yes, after a decent amount of blood is spilled on the snow, she could use it inside of another attack, such as Flight of White. The birds would then be able to hone in on the person they're aimed at, and be a LOT harder to avoid, and would only dissipate once they hit something at full speed. Whether that be another object, or the person they are after.
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Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:49 pm
Master of 3 Faces Shinsua Master of 3 Faces Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Flight of White
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: After the creation of snow, Ayume is able to create a flock of large birds to dive and attack the target to do physical damage.
Character: Ayume Unagi
Technique Name: Crimson Sights
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Yukiton
Description: Once the enemy is injured and blood has been spilled onto her snow, she is able to use that bloody snow into an attack that hones in onto the person who's blood has been used, making it nearly impossible to avoid. This Jutsu can be used in conjunction with any of her other Yukiton attacks as long as an efficient amount of blood can be used. (Unable to use small drops of blood for any attack) The only way to avoid being hit by any attack used with this Jutsu is to dodge in time for it to hit something else, or melt the snow with a B-rank Katon Jutsu.
Flight of White: Are you taking about making use of Hatsuyuki cloud snow, or straight up creating these birdies? Either way, it should be fine.
Crimson Sights: Mmm... so, you'd be using the actual red snow to perform the techniques, or what?
Crimson Sights: Technically yes, after a decent amount of blood is spilled on the snow, she could use it inside of another attack, such as Flight of White. The birds would then be able to hone in on the person they're aimed at, and be a LOT harder to avoid, and would only dissipate once they hit something at full speed. Whether that be another object, or the person they are after.
Flight of White: Alright, so it's similar to the dismissal technique I made, except it turns the snow into something other than wind. Approved.
Crimson Sights: Mmm... smokey dokes, as well.
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:51 am
Character: Ivilice Takamatsu
Technique Name: Mirrors of Doubt
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A two stage genjutsu. The targets vision reverses the ground and sky sending them into a state of vertigo. An obvious genujutsu to be sure however when broken the dormant stage awakens. This stage tricks the targets mind into thinking his jutsu simply require more chakra to use. Or that they are just low on chakra. This jutsu is activated when the target sees a reflection of Wednesday in shards of her glass, surrounded by an aura of chakra.
Stage 1: Vision of ground and sky flips.
Stage 2: Any technique that requires chakra consumes double the amount of its base chakra usage.
Duration: Five posts after initial release.
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 9:58 am
Character: Sakuta Hentona Nara (Doc)
Technique Name: Healing Shadows
Rank: C
Type: Shadow Technique/ Kageton
Element: N/A
Description: Doc will gather shadows up into his hands, making his palms all black. He can then make the shadows on one of his palms reach out to someone that needs help. It will create a dome around the person that is injured. The dome is extremely strong and will block any long range attacks. It will only disappear if someone attacks it close up and any light will dispel it as well. Doc moves his chakra through the shadows so that it makes the dome strong and will have chakra flowing in side the dome healing minor wounds someone might have.
Note: The dome isn't that strong and will break from an attack from a ninja that is 2 ranks above Doc. Also, once Doc is Jounin, it will heal major wounds. And once Doc becomes Sannin, it will heal severe wounds. At every level, the healing time that is needed is reduced.
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 10:23 am
Character: Flou Hojo Uwa
Technique Name: Ikainkukuraudo [ Squids Ink Cloud ]
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu :: Complex
Element: Bloodline/Ink
Description: Much like a normal squid or octopus, Flou will excrete his ink from his hands and cover an area in ink to spread it over a large area. Flou will shunshin to a local position and use the momentum to tilt his body and go into a spin, when he get's to the location he wishes, he will begin to spin and ink will secrete from his body and fling it within a large radius of 20 meters in diameter. Flou will pay the Ink's chakra cost along with Ikainkukuraudo's cost.
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Posted: Mon Nov 26, 2012 10:37 am
@Holy I am goign to have to deny this one. The first half is fine but the second is the kicker. Since genjutsu is mearly an ilision there is no way to FORCE a person to use extra chakra since the first time he uses a jutsu and sees his justu work he would know that tada they do work for the regular amount. IF its was a seal I could see that working.
@ pklu- ******** it. You know who you are. XD
I am ok with it up until the sannin part. I hate to say it but if a dude gets his throat cut open hes down for the count no matter what healing you got going. So make is severe wounds and were good but not all wounds. Cause technically cutting someones head off is classified as a wound and I will be damned if I allow that one XD
@logic not really seeing a point to this one but APPROVED XD
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