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 Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:26 pm
3/9
"Let us pretend for a moment that tree is an enemy..." He took his spinal staff and whipped it outward like a whip and it wrapped tightly around the tree he then looked back at Shinowho nodded in undertsanding of what he was explaning. "The next step is to create a spear-like appendage that is almost an absolute offense meaning usually the enemy has a low chance of survival from the technique...In this case you must focus on your arm to create the solid spear and then make sure you make the point to an incredible sharpness, which you should have learned by now by doing the Dance of Camellia...Now you practice..."
Shino nodded to Kimmimairo and then began what he knew would become a rather grueling time of practice and dedication, as well as a great amount of focus. He first started on trying to force his spine up like Kimmimairo, however his shoulder blades kept popping out instead, he focussed on the thousands of bones and tried once more. He could feel it move however for some reason he could not make it go upward, he knew this meant he had a very long way to go. He tried once more, causing the spine to move finally up a slight bit but then it sank back into place and he cursed silently under his breath and kept practicing.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:35 pm
4/9
Shino moved along slightly in his training, it was not easy to forcefully rip your spine out of your back and then regrow it as you went. Kimmimairo had to help Shino multipule times now that Shino had ripped his spine out but had managed to not grow it back quickley enough and had went as limp as a noodle. Shino looked apologetically at Kimmimairo and then kept on with his training, he needed to force the calcium in his body to produce his bone a bit faster. He would not be able to manage the technique if he could not stand up straight after he had taken out his spine, this was probabley the hardest part of the technique. He was doing rather well at getting the spine out from his body and only twice had it gotten stuck after he had finally managed to get it out of his back to the point where he could grasp onto it. "Harder then the rest of the techniques I've done..." He sighed sadly and then kept on going, he knew he wasn't going to get the technique down by moping about it only forward to go there was not back for him and his ambitions. He once more pulled his spine out and had nearly gotten it right but he had forgotten a few of those vital parts of it and collapsed, he once again forced them together. He was really starting to get annoyed by this however there was nothing for him to do, he kept training over and over, hopefully he'd get it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 2:58 pm
5/9
Shino watched Kimmimairo perform the technique once more, he was unsure if he was perhaps doing it wrong, he also had him explain how to do it. He was beggining to understand he just needed to pull it out and then use a small burst of chakra to regrow the spine as quickley as he pulled it out it was how to do it. The only problem now was to finally manage to get the technique going, this was proving still difficult no matter how he tried to get it going down. He just kept on going though he still was not able to grow the spine fast enough he was making progress better off then he had been when he first started it. "Hmm...Just need to get the right amount of chakra before I can manage it..." He began now to work on gather chakra to grow the certain bones he needed to grow, he was good at his chakra control and now he just needed to focus on it and get it right. He first focussed on just growing the bones out of his body like he would in the Dance of the Willows then he just needed to get it down before he could start it on his spine.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:04 pm
6/9
Shino was improving more now that he was figuring out the right amount of chakra needed for him to be able to jolt his spine back into existance. The only problem was actually doing it though, this was harder then he had expected, growing certain bones was one thing but these other bones was something completely different. He was having quite a hard time cause the bones were so much smaller then the ones that he had been practicing on, he wished he could do a better job at this. However it was not the case, he was really beggining to be tired of all of this, he once more had succeded in ripping his spine out and not regrowing. "I will get this right..." Once more he began the practice of the first part of this technique, he just needed to get this whip staff spine thing right and then he would be able to manage to move on to the rest. However of course like always, it wasn't so easy for him to do of course this was the same as everything he had learned so far including most of his basic jutsu.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:20 pm
7/9
Shino focused once more on creating the bones that he needed to use, and began to fuse them together however all he could manage to do was to make a weird looking bludgeoning device. He sighed as he looked at the large club that had now become his arm, he grumbled under his breath about how hard it had been. He looked at it one more time and then he made the bones recede back inside of his body he looked about once more he then decided on a new approach and began to sprout blade-like bones from his arm. Then now he tried to focus them forward into a point directly in front of him, he then tried to meld them together. This however proved to be futile of an effort to manage he managed to make it into a point however the point split and flowered out instead of staying into one. "Hmm...This is harder then the spine removal...And it results are riddiculous..." He sighed and then began to concentrate on the bones once again trying to force them once more into a point, he wanted to just get this into a point at the least then the rest could be improved. However every time it seemed he had just only managed to turn the thing either into a club or a staff
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:25 pm
8/9
Shino thought he was finally managing to be able to get this thing down, he just was having a hard time with the spear point still, he couldn't get the sharpness. He managed to finally get the thing into a point but he couldn't make it as sharp a point as he had always made the rest of his bones that he used in combat or training. He focussed hard on what he was trying to do however to no avail it seemed was he able to make the bone sharpen to such a lethal point. He was however sucessful now at the point at least he wasn't making flowers and clubs sprout from his arm anymore that was most certainly something. "yes...What a thing I'm getting better though..." He smirked keeping the smile from the view of Kimmimairo however he once more sprouted the bones from his arms a finally he formed them together into a point that he thought would pierce. However now he was only in the point were he needed to now put them all together he would now wait for Kimmimairo's instruction on what to do next.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:56 pm
9/9 Dance Of Clematis
You have managed to make the spinal whipstaff, you have managed to make the devistating spear, but now it is time for me to show you how you put them together...Of course I'm sure you may also develop your own styles with this since you are still young and have a mind of your own...Which is why I hope to see great things from you ...Now I will show you...The Dance...Of Clematis..."
Kimmimairo approached a nearby log for training purposes, he reached behind him and pulled his spine from his body in a fluid motion he whipped the long spine around the tree. This is what he said would hold the victom of the technique into place and not allow them a chance to run away since the spine was an almost unbreakable substance at the moment. Then he pointed his hand fingers first toward the tree, it then began to sprout bones which form into the larg spear he spoke of that Shino had just managed. Then he thrusted forward with the spear at first however it looked like nothing had happend and then suddenly the log was gone and all that remained was a small junk missing from the ground.
Now it was time for Shino to test out this technique that had taken so long to figure out, first he forced his spine up and then wrapped his fingers around it. Then he removed it from his body in a dull fluidity which then he also regrew the bones that were missing, then he whipped the thing around another log that was close to him. The he focussed silently on the bones needed for his purpose, they slowley sprouted from his body and came together into a wicked point of a spear. He then took in a breath and struck forward toward the log exhaling as he went then finally he struck the log, it splintered for a moment and then suddenly exploded magnificantly.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:35 pm
1/10
" whats next Kimmimairo" "Lets start on the dance of camellia" Its like the last technique you did but instead of a whip or a spear its a deadly sword" "I think I'll pass on that one Thats enough bone weaopns for me what else do you got for me" "uum let me see... ah the dance of pines. with this jutsu you can make razor-sharp bones quickly grow out all over the user's body. Not only does this surprise opponents and make it difficult for them to fight in melee range, but the user's body becomes a deadly weapon." "I like this one Kimmimairo show me the first step
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:58 pm
2/10
"This jutsu is like the dance of the willows but instead of razor sharp bones comming from their hands they come from the whole body making you like a walking mace. The first step is gathering up your chakra. then concentrare on your bones throughout you whole body." Kimimaro gathered his chakra and pushed the bones through his back, arms legs and his head. " wo man can't wait to try that out" "dont hurt yourself shino"
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 5:19 pm
3/10
"Try to do one body part at a time them when your ready do it fully" "Alright Kimimaro I wil start with my arms since I know a little bit" Shino triies with his hands. he startes with his hands to have a good beginning for the jutsu. Shino also made the bones come out of his elbow" that was easier than I thought"
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 5:34 pm
4/10
Shino retracted his bones then he tried to make the razor bones come out of his back. After the second time triing he made the bones come out of his back. "shinoboro is coming along better than I expected" Kimimaro whispered. " your doing good shino your just about half way done" "I know Kimimaro"
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 5:44 pm
((Make sure 6 lines please))
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:28 pm
5/10
"Hey shino do you need to take a break" " nope I am goiong to finish training today" "ok just checking so you dont pass out on me for overworking" " I got this handled Kimimaro I will take a break when I finish this jutsu." "Start on your knees" Shino retracts hisbones in his back from his spine. Shino consentrates tomake the bones come from his knees. "Dont stand up straight bend your knees a little more the bone comes from your bottom leg bone"
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 7:18 pm
6/ 10
"Is this good enough Kimimaro" "yeah now try it again shino" Shino tries but it
doesn't work bones come out but they were very short "man this shouldn't be so hard" frustrated shino shoots his finger bullets into a tree. Calm down shino you will get it"think about basic training" "Send more chakra to your legs than you was already using and the bones should come out more. You should be able to get the technique this time
Shino
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:14 pm
7/10
Shino gets it this time and he tries to make bones come out of his head. " wait before you do this Shino I have something to tell you. you have to get it the first time or you can make the bone from your skull go the wrong way and it will go through your brain. Don't kill yourself". Shino is having second thoughts about it but he takes 10 min to meditate" I'm ready now. "Think about you bones going out don't think about what could happen just believe what will happen"
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