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 Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:28 pm
the dipell jutsu allowd the sword to be immobilized so the giant toad could help jiraiya fight.the toad the did toad blade cut to slow wing down.then jiraiya appeared behind him and did a fire ball jutsu causing massive and critical damage wing was defeated.jiraiya said"ok im out of chakra one of you two is going to have to fight the next one while i carry naruto."the group then ran down the hall to the next guardian.but to their dismay their were to guardians at this one they said they were the fourth and fifth dungeon guardians.the fourth and fifth dungeon guardians said"no one has ever made it this far so you must have two fighters up for the challenge.
16/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:34 pm
sakura looked at nyu and said"that's us."sakura and nyu stepped forward.the fourth and fifth dungeon guardians said"let's begin!"then one of them quickly used earth barrier clay prison and the other used lighting static bolt to shoot the thunder inside the prison.nyu noticed that their had to be a hole some where if lighting could get in.nyu decided to try and not use gates as frequently as possible.so nyu oped the view gate to see where the hole was.apparently it was at the top left hand ceiling of the prison it was covered in paper that looked 100% just like the real rocks.
17/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:40 pm
nyu ripped the paper off and walked out he then opened the initial gate and said"this is all i need."the fourth and fifth dungeon guardians said"i see you found the loophole but know you have fell into our trap.there was a lighting seal under ground along with all the other element seals.sakura was knocked out by this.nyu was on his own.nyu said"jiraiya quickly take sakura to safety i can beat them."jiraiya did so.nyu said"without a partner ill need a few more gate nyu opened the heal and life gate while at the same time having the view and initial open.the fourth and fifth dungeon guardians begn stepping back and saying"wow i didn't know he could open that many gates."
18/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:45 pm
nyu thought about practicing releasing the death gate then thought naaaaaa."nyu then appeared behind both of them and did a udima kick sending them into a tornado.nyu used ashura senku to get through the wind and activated the wound gate to not be ble to feel the pain after getting inside the tornado.nyu then pummeled the fourth dungeon guardian until he was knocked out.the fifth guardian was damaged but still had some fight left in him.the fifth dungeon guardian said"i didn't need him anyway he was just slowing me down so it looks like its just you and me."
19/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:51 pm
nyu said my mission is to bring sasuke back i have no time for this."nyu opened all the gates from one to seven.he said"i have to get sasuke back no matter what the costs even if i have to scrifice myself!"nyu quickly bounced the fifth dungeon guardian around in the air just like a paddle ball and to finish him off he did ultra power wind vortex.((udima kick,hurricane kick,flip kick combined with the power of the gates one through seven))the fifth guardian was toast nyu then closed the gates and said"ill bring sasuke back you take care of naruto and sakura.jiraiya said"ok good luck."
20/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 6:56 pm
nyu had entered a room where sasuke was practicing his sword attacks on a training post.sasuke said"who re you what are you doing here?"nyu said"im nyu of the hidden haze village her to bring you back to the village of konoha before orichimaru takes over your body."sasuke said"die!"then slashed his sword nyu jumped back and said"why not?"sasuke said"my goal in life is to defeat my brother i will do it at any costs even if it means giving up my body to orichimaru as long as my body is the one to kill his."nyu said"either way my mission is to bring you back to konoha."
21/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:02 pm
nyu said"even if i have to bring you back by force!"sasuke said"that sounds like a challenge lets fight!"nyu said first ill see what he's got with the initial gate.sasuke didn't hesitate he moved straight behind nyu and slashed him in the back with his sword.nyu thought he's fast im going to need all the gates i got.after nyu opened the gates one through seven sasuke activated chidori sword.sasuke said"since you upgraded so did i now my sword can cut through anything.with one slash of that sword nyu would instantly die.nyu said"i need more ppower if he has his own sword that can kill anyone in one hit.nyu thought now is the time.
22/23
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 7:29 pm
nyu dug deep down inside of him to his heart and opened the most powerful of all gates The Death Gate!nyu was now granted power beyond the hokages.nyu said"you can't win even with that sword."sasuke said"ok then i will activate the sharingan."nyu said there's no point let me demonstrate."nyu instantly appeared behind sasuke and hit him in the back.sasuke was then smashed into the wall sasuke then got up.sasuke then charged at nyu with his chidori sword nyu took it straight on and grabbed the blade and broke it.sasuke looked astonished he then did grand fireball jutsu nyu quickly dodged and combined all his wind atttacks into mega power wind vortex this caught sasuke in ahuge whirlwind defeatin him.although nyu had mastered the death gate he fell unconsious in orichimaru's dungeon.
23/23 death gate mastered
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:15 am
Warrior_Shokan Shokan nodded trying to figure out how to do it. "It's in the chakra control." Naruto said smiling, he enjoyed being the teacher, becuase he is useually the one being taught. Shokan nodded and did a bushin no jutsu. "Good now all that you need to do is put chakra into the clone, enough for the byakugan to not be able to tell the diffrence, you must evenly split yuor chakra among your clones. Once you do that your cloning will be complete." Shokan nodded and attempted to clone again, but it turned out to be just another bushin no jutsu. Shokan sighed, knowing he'll need time to learn this one. 3/12 Shokan continued to strenuously practice, 4 hours had gone completely to waste. "This is taking forever!" He continued to makea clone of himself that wasn't really there. "You're not molding your chakra, you're just creating a clone, you need to use the hand sign not just have it on your hands becuase that's just like having a fire jutsu han signs and not molding your chakra with them." Naruto said while his eyes were closed. Shokan nodded, "Okay I'll try to do my best." Naruto shook his head, "No" he said, "You WILL do you best!" Naruto gave a thumbs up sign to Shokan, and Shokan nodded happily.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:30 am
Shokan closed his eyes just enough so he couldn't see the light, no more. He began to concintrate deeply almost as if in a trance. In his mind he pictured his chakra and his chakra points, and pictured chakra molding with in the seal of the kage bushin and being transphered to into a clone and chakra being transphered into the clone itself, it took on actual form and it had a pyhsical likeness to it. He could see it hitting and injuring an opponent. He smiled to himself and attmpted to do it. After a few moments he began to sweat he had heard the jutsu go off, but wasn't sure if it worked, invisioning isn't always the same thing as doing, though it does normally help with executing the technique.
5/12
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:37 am
Shokan finally opened his eyes and slowly moved his head to glance at the clone. And of course it was just a normal genjutsu clone. "God....dam-rn it!" Naruto shook his head, "You didn't mold again, you thought you did but you actually didn't you need to feel the chakra flow and you must mold it!" Naruto's voice was always supportive but it had a slight seriousness to it now, you could just hear it in the tone. Shokan was now becoming slightly agrivated with himself. Why couldn't he just mold his chakra like he wanted?! He was trying his best and all he wanted to do was be the best ninja he could be for the chunin exams! "ARRRGH!!!" He called out in his own desperation.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:46 am
Shokan became furious with himself, "KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU!" He cried, "KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU, KAGE BUSHIN NO JUTSU!!!!" 9 clones appeared and one had a slight chakra in him. But that one vanished quickly, and the others vanished when he disengaged them. He began to pant heavily. "I will get this." He promised himself he continued trying to create the clone with normal results, as it seemed. Naruto continued preaching about how it is control of the chakra, and conceintration and pracitce would be the key. Shokan continued to try and continued to barely get any better at all.
7/12
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:48 am
Shokan continued in his attmempt, finally is had seemed that shokan was
now getting better with every attempt, after about 300 or so clones had been created they were now starting to have chakra within their chakra systems. They were gaining being, they were becoming more real. "Kage Bushin no jutsu!" he created 3 each with a tiny amount of chakra, he disengaged and attmpted again "kage bushin no jutsu!" one with the 3 of the chakra combined, finally he could begin to see some progress. "I will do it!"
8/12
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 1:59 pm
when nyu awoke he was still in orichimaru's labrynth luckily none of orichimaru's hench men had found him.nyu heard a voice in the distance the voice said"let's check over here."nyu couldn't turn around because he had used the death gate too long.nyu noticed the voice didn't sound or seem evil at all.luckily when the person turned him over it was gai sensei.gai said"im so proud but a little dissapointed that you weren't strong enough to beat sasuke without using that gate."gai then called in a group of medical nin and police ninja to heal nyu and take sasuke in for questioning.
1/10 Morning peacock
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 2:07 pm
the medical nin took nyu in on a stretcher and carried him back to the hidden leaf village.one of the medical nin said"it would be best if you sleep until we get their."the medical nin did some hand signs and blew this powder on nyu.during nyu's slumber he was in critical condition in the hospital.gaii was pacing outside the room and biting his finger nail while rock lee kept doing challenges to himself like"if i can do one thousand push ups then nyu will heal."nyu's condition was so serious that he had to call in fifth hokage tsunade to use her expertice in medical skills on nyu.
2/10
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