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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 1:44 am
O: Can you extend that a little bit? For example you can describe the forest, the greenery and all that or you could talk about the weather, like the hot sun beating down on him as he trained or whatever. And like feelings and stuff. have you read the scrolls? O:
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 1:22 pm
My character's name is Youma Tora (last, first.) Here's my Rp sample:
Deep blue eyes that reflected the sea, scanned the beach. The smell of blood came carried on the ocean breeze came into the air. The eyes turned in the direction of the smell. Tora walked over to a fallen animal.
"Poor thing..." Tora said as she reached for the small bird. She grabbed its wings, seeing the blood-tanted wings. "I wish I could help." She took the small blue bird into her hands, pulling something from her pocket.
The small bird's golden eyes raised to meet blue ones. "I hope this helps." she muttered in a low, calm tone. A hand reached out pulling the wing. Tora wrapped bandges on the wing.
The bird spread out its wing. "Twet!" it said, flying away. "I hope I helped." A small smile appeared on her pale, white face.
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Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 5:46 pm
Quote: RP Sample: Akio had been traing since dawn out in the forest. The Forest seemed to glow from the suns rays hitting it. Eagerly preparing himself for his first day at the ninja academy, Akio found a quiet place in the middle of the forest to train. A few hours had passed since he had begun to train, the sun hit that particular part of the forest almost head on. He was exhasted from all the push-ups, sit-ups, and jump ropes; the bark on several trees had been either pushed deep into the wood or laid scattered on the dry grass. Drops of sweat tumbled down his face, Akio just wiped it off. Then he took a deep sigh and said, "Ah man, I still have a lot of training to do if I'm tired already." He looked up at the sky, the sky had gone from a dull gray early in the morning to the clue light blue it was now. He stretched a bit to loosen up his muscles and went back to his training. Hows this? I did read it, I guess I really didn't get it. I rewrote the passage, sorry I'm not completely used to doing it this way.
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 4:55 am
@Cloud: Pass :3
@Omnikid: Pass! Well I guess that means I have to redo it gonk Maybe some day... >.> Wow has it really been almost a year since this RP academy was opened? So unbelievable o.o anyway see you in Suna! ^_^
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:24 pm
Here's an rp sample I did for a real rp ten minutes ago: Quote: Syra rose, and yawned slightly. Daylight had disappeared, the soft slashes of pink highlighting the horizon. The bustle of the city had grown a little less at this time. This was the middle part between the wars of the night, and the tension of the day. The night was quiet; not a storm would disturb the peace in the city that day. It took her a moment to realize Feeling refreshed, she stood up and walked over to the window. She felt great, better than she had in a week. Her mind felt clear, alleviated. She scooped up her jacket, and shook it on. The tanto was also reclaimed, and put into her pocket. She withdrew her fukumi bari from the depths of a pocket, and slipped a few into her mouth. She inhaled a sharp breath. Syra rarely slept more than six hours; by the light it had been over twelve. She checked the gauze on her arm. No blood had soaked through, meaning the demon was abating. She smiled, and ripped them off. Her arm had gotten back her colour, and hopefully her cheeks had as well. In the back of her mind, Syra felt something. Something was out of place. She wasn't quite sure what it was, but she felt the mist enshrouding her thoughts. It was time to return home. Fear of what laid within would be faced. " Eric?" She whispered. " You awake? I'm leaving now. I'll be in home. I can tell something is wrong, it might be Zinclaire. See you later." She kissed him on the lips, unsure if he was still asleep. Either way, he knew how to find her. She leapt out the window, and rushed down the dusty, silenced road.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 12:46 am
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 6:38 pm
Well, here is my rpg sample. My char name is Houka.
Houka suddenly woke up, out of is nigthmare. Is hearth was stomping hard. Is face was covered with sweat. Nigthmare are a normal part of human life, but for a eigth years old to have sweat, it isn't. This was so far, the worst nigthmare he had. He didn't know what to do. Will is parent ever understood him, if he said he dream of him being eaten by a oni...every once in a while?
He suddenly sit on is bed, and he ligthed a table lamp, near is bed. He could not and would not want to go back to sleep. Ever since is friend had show him a picture of an oni to scare him, is nigthmare had occur. Well it did bother him if he would not sleep, the sun was already coming up and Houka could see speek of ligth going trough is window.
Houka let out a long sigh. He really needed to tell his parent's about his nigthmare, after all, they where there to help him.
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 5:31 am
Check your spelling a little bit, Fire. Besides that, I think you passed. Just wait for Kouri or somebody else to check it.
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 7:03 pm
Quote:
Roleplay Example :
As the night sky floated ahead, Cheikko remained in her sunny personality. Cheikko is usually one to be headstrong, and conceited, though is not always like that. In battle, she was always one to observe her surroundings and approach stealthily and calmly, even in times of crisis. She seemed like a mixture of fire and water, evenly balanced out.
" Well, at least in my spare time I can think choose which village academy to attend. "
She thought as she rubbed her eyes. She had been anxious to become a ninja, ever since she recieved a autographed headband from a local anbu member. And, she was not about to let it drag on any longer. Though, one set back, was the disappearance of her pet cat, Dei, who's faults ended Cheikko in the forest to find her.
Dei was a slim cat, with a sheer, shimmering black coat that could put any onyx gem to shame. She had deep emerald eyes, just like Cheikko, but her pupils were sharp, and deep, just like her long nails.
Cheikko, being there since lunch, had randomly ended on the picture of a bowl of beef flavored ramen. At the thought of food, Cheikko had immediately received a massive growl from her stomach, that must have been pretty loud, since at once Dei jumped out from behind a rock, and landed straight in Cheikko's path...
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Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 8:09 pm
Ok well here's my Rp sample:
Silver awoke stiff and agitated, his eyes the only thing not hurting abit. Silver slowly, and sorely slide his body obliquely and got onto his feet. Silver took a deep breathe in and then quickly bend over backwards, and as he bent loud cracks echo'd threwout his room. Silver continued to bend, trying to loosen his body for the busy day ahead of him. After about half an hour of streaching, Silver was limber enough to get dressed and leave the house. Once outside Silver saw afew figures in the trees to his left and said "this should be interesting" as he sighed and lowered his hand to grab a kunai and hide it in his sleave
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 2:28 am
@FireSturm: Your spelling and grammar is a little messed up but that doesn't matter much since it's understandable and English is like a second language and all. Pass!
@Prettykitty: Pass heart Wow I wonder if there is a conspiracy afoot... everyone is putting cats in their samples nowadays knowing that I succumb to their cuteness...
@Silver: Don't always start your sentences with 'Silver'.. you know words like 'he' exist you know xD Looks ok, but do another one please?
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 5:04 pm
ok, will do *salutes* lol
Silver ran threw the dense forest outside of his house, not looking back at all. The forest was mainly composed of cedar tree's, but there a good group off willow tree's gathered in variuose parts. Knowing that his enemys behind him where of greater skill and strenght, Silver continued to run quickly, also knowing that there only weakness was there speed and agility. Silver looked over his shoulder slightly to find that there was about a twenty yard gap between them, So he grabed a branch and flung himself up into a thick branched tree, just barely getting his footing* "man..... why me? why today?" He mumbled to himself as he watched the two goons walk by undering him, looking up hoplessly into the tree's around him
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue May 22, 2007 9:51 pm
Yeah that works :3 Pass. But watch the asterisks!
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Posted: Mon Jun 04, 2007 12:11 am
My RP ninja name is Hideko Uehara and I'm thinking about joing the village hidden in the leaves.
Here is an RP sample:
The sun is just setting over the village hidden in the leaves. at the edge of a forest near a small river a ninja is practicing throwing shurikins at distant trees. He looks like he was practicing all night. The shurikin he threw hit the tree in the exact spot where he aimed it. There were a bunch of other shurikins in a group around it.
"Huh, I need to practice more, those were a couple inches apart not good enough."
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jun 07, 2007 5:54 pm
O: If the sun is just setting that means he was practicing all day..?
But yeah... work on making it more interesting and you pass. It's kinda.. bleh ><
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