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Hello everyone! Greetings from the crazy world! (Joke, I am not really crazy, though many do wonder some days...)

My name would be Tesunie, for those that can't see it already. rofl
I like to have fun, make jokes (even if they only make sense to me... stare ) and to role play.

How many of you have seen the main role play for this guild? What? You haven't looked in there?! eek
Get over there and read it! Penden out did herself on this one! It has lots of detail, and a true story line to work with.

Also, for the person above me, as long as you don't break Gaia TOS, they wont ban you from Gaia. Now the captain on the other hand.... mrgreen

Hey miz! Sounds totally awesome! lol

Hi
I'm Cage!! (Not real name XP)

Nice to meet ya all!

Dart jumps suddenly to an unseen force which cuts the side of his lip causing him to fall do to the uncetainty of where it came from and the speed of the attack, Dart however had never before fallen, and he was so terrified that his dark red dragon-like tail was exposed which caused him to fall not as hard, but still roughly.

"Apparently there's an unseen force at work here, or maybe the dragon cam from behind me and twisted quickly that I didn't notice his presence till he was five centimeters from me, either way, these eyes got in the way, however without them i couldn't see in any way now could I?" Dart said Retorically.

"Kaori, I hope you know what your doing, because if the dragon does another thing like that it's going to make me use my full strength, which weakens my pendant terribly, which will make it break if it falls or is scratched lightly, which may cause Arisa to die due to the overwhelming power of the creatures, and even more of a chance for her to die if they take control of me." Dart said with his face hardened near the scratch.

"I don't remember any sort of pain beyond the pain of 10,000 years ago, but that pain was unbearible, and nearly killed me, and then, they could've have done worse than kill me, they could've taken over me if I were'nt adapted to the battle conditions. By the way, me being part dragonic demon is part of how I know so much about the dragon, however my mix of races has caused me to be so much more unpredictable and quicker, most dragons don't know the secret of power, they only know pure strength." Dart said vaugely.

"I haven't had a good battle in a long time. I hope this will change that. I hope my practice sessions in the backroom have helped me stay sharp. Those games of checkers should help. Remind me to thank Arisa for helping me stay sharp with all her textbooks, and also remind me to apologize for reading her textbooks, they just look so nice compared to those textbooks that I used when I was an aprentice to my...to my father."Dart said his mood sudenly changing.

"Did you know that most demons have to kill thier father in order to prove manhood? And they have to kill thier mothers to prove brutality? I bet you all think that I killed my parents after saying that don't you. Calm down I didn't...atleast not on purpose. The demons set me up to battle my father and kill him. My father was the one who recommended it. Demons pass on thier powers upon death, and death by your own son is something honorable, and wanted among most demons, however the demons were just trying to get rid of my father who ruled them and they feared him. They were very foolish thinking if I were to kill my father they'd have nothing to fear..."Dart said than took a deep breath.

"...But they didn't think that they'd be threatened by someone who was strong enough to kill him, as well as my mother, expecialy at the same time. At the start of this battle, they throw one of my scales that they pulled off of me, and threw it straight at my pendant. It broke. Nothing happened, atleast not immediately, they thought that there was nothing stored in there, but my dad knew there was, and he didn't want to stop it, because he wouldn't want me to surpress and form of power against him, he knew that I'd need it. After a minute or so of nothing happening, I was taken over completely by that that infested the amulet...I don't remember after that, but I remember seeing my parents gone and the demons cheering." Dart said grimly.



Here is an example of my RP style, I would like your opinions on what i need to work on(I Run "A night out on the town(the bar RP)" which resides in this forumn if you want to see the RP that this came from(it is on page 20)

You should post that as a new thread if you want more help with your character smile

OK i will try to type more from now on ok, but right now i am sorta waiting for Staci Dragoon to reply again, or are we supposed to decide what the spirit things do

It is not just the lengths of posts, but also the way that the RP is set up. Not every RP needs a set up like the one in Feretris just to have fun. Not all RPs have to be super duper, but I wanted to recognize the RPs that went that extra mile in effort and know-how. If you look at some of my RP posts in the Feretris forum, you'll see that not all of mine are the longest, either. Some times they could be longer, but I'd rather it be a bit on the concise side than say nothing at all after the first paragraph.

You all are doing really well in improving your RP style. It is hard to write a monologue like the one above. The more you read books and practice writing and seek out information and tips, the better you will become.

I've always been an avid reader. I can't imagine trying to write without reading so much!