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 Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:31 pm
((It's previously 34. 4laugh And subtract the 3, it becomes 31!))
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 7 (1-10)
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:33 pm
((RIGHT! Sorry... Forgot about that >.<))
HP:31
Ryn roared, as the great dragon made of water enveloped him, and he beat his injured wings in rage. He knew he couldn't win, but he had to hold them back, and give time for Izzy, and Nendir to escape.
He hit the ground, smashing his wings wide, to knock the water dragon off of him, his own blood splattering all around him. He looked up at the boy, and charged, his wings launching him upwards to him in one beat, and his sword swinging straight for the boys chest.
((NIGHT FOLKS!))
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Posted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 11:34 pm
Craig put down the body of the soldier. He wasn't sure whether the purifier was getting the point he was trying to make. For a matter of fact, Craig was unsure what point he was trying to make himself. He sputtered some while then looked to Kin.
He thought for a while, then spoke, what Craig could only describe as him speaking words of heresy. "The humans.....they.... they... They are not worthless! they have courage and belief! Unity and strength... They are more original in design than us!" He wasn't sure what he was thinking, wehther the thought or words he just said opened the door to higher thinking, or was his mind dissolving into that of a humans...either way, Craig had no control over it...and if he was dissolving, then it was the plan of the gods, or the god fault...Craig couldn't be sure...
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 8:37 am
"C'mon... C'mon... 376... 378... 379!" After a rather long run to the Nation Guard HQ, Amadeus had made a beeline for the lockers. Finally, he reached his and grabbed his assault rifle and side-arm, along with as many spare clips as he could carry. He didn't bother to change into his uniform, as there was no point and no time for that now. He simply tied his handgun's holster around his waist, slung the rifle's shoulder strap over his shoulder, and made his way towards the Pentagon.
He ran a little bit slower this time, although not due to fatigue. It occured to him that whoever had caused the catastrophe might still be there, and it was best not to charge in with guns a-blazing. No, it would be better to slowly approach and observe before engaging.
When he was finally close enough to get a good look at what was going on at ground-zero, his blood ran cold. He'd never seen... anything like what was going on here. Giant dust storms... watery constructs in the shape of dragons... people flying... it was like something out of a sci-fi game he used to play years ago. Except this time, he was watching it happen not on a television screen, but here... at the Pentagon.
"Jesus Christ..."
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Kind Stranger rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 9 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:38 am
HP: 36
Kin took the risk of getting the sword as close to him as only an inch before punching it away in one blow, the sword flying over and piercing into the crater's edge. He then reached out for the being's head with his claws to break it open, but then hesitated as the fellow purifier called out. Annoyed, he spatted out, "Look, if all you do is stand aroundtalking worthless junk, then you're better off not say a word. I am in a battle here, and you ought not to disturb me. We are sent here to destroy these worthless jellybags, and we are far more superior and original in design. The humans imagined us and the gods made us real, get it? So go enjoy yourself in their annhialation and stop bothering me. If you don't..." he turned towards the human shaped being with a crooked smile, "Then I'll consider you as an enemy, and I'll kill you."
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
7
Total: 7 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 10:45 am
HP:31
Ryn barely ducked his foes swing, his own bloody wings splattering the air, as he heard the Purifier below him begin his confused fall away from destruction. He dropped to the ground, next to the being and said,"What do you expect us to be? Of course we are not original... we were constructed from Humanities fears."
His claws clicked on the ground for a second, before he spun back towards Kin, and launched himself skywards, slashing his claws at Kins gut, trying to eviscerate him.
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SirBayer rolled 1 10-sided dice:
9
Total: 9 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:24 am
"Sorry to interfere with your fight, but you don't seem to be winning," Mark commented, walking up shortly behind Ryn, taking careful aim, and firing packaged energy point-blank at Kin, with every intent of blowing his brains out.
HP: 60
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Kind Stranger rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 10 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:26 am
FP: 36
His claws merely went throguh Kin's body, Kin's ghostly pressence emerging, "And humanities' fears are the very creation of the god of fear himself, his ingenious ideas implanted into the human mind!" He smirked and slashed with the claws of his own.
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
6
Total: 6 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 11:47 am
((What about showing your health Kind?))
HP:31
Ryn watched as his own attack missed, and then the being behind him fired and missed as well. He growled, his eyes narrowing, and dodged his foes attack, before saying,"The god of Fear, did not implant these fears inside the Human mind! He merely knows how to use them against human kind!"
He flapped again, blood splattering the ground, as he shot towards Kin, his with every intention of slashing him wide open with his claws.
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Kind Stranger rolled 2 10-sided dice:
5, 2
Total: 7 (2-20)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:42 pm
((LOL >_> You got me...))
HP: 30
"Argh!" Kin stepped back, his chest dripping with blood. He glared at the two supernaturals with sheer anguish, and frowned at their mischief, "That's what you think, AND THE VERY HUMAN KIND WHO THINK POMPOUSLY OF THEMSELVES! RAAAH!!!"
He struck lightning from each palm, crisscrossing and intended to hit both of them.
((The first is for Souron, and the second is for SirBayer.))
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Sauronbane rolled 1 10-sided dice:
3
Total: 3 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:52 pm
((OUCH!))
HP:26
Lightning struck Sauron, knocking him from the sky, and he rolled across the ground, blood trailing along where he hit. Finally he ended up against the side of a tank, his chest and wings trailing blood, as he slowly pushed himself to his feet. Despite the pain, he grinned up at Kin, showing his many sharp teeth and saying,"My mother, the Goddess of Death, says otherwise BOY!"
He beat his blood soaked wings, flapping loudly into the air, and stopping twelve feet from his foe. Roaring he launched forwards, kicking out with his clawed feet at his foes chest.
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Kind Stranger rolled 1 10-sided dice:
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Total: 8 (1-10)
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:15 pm
HP: 27
Kin was able to stop the blood flow in this chest, and made it seem to heal into black scales when the kick arrived, and almost pushed him back, his wings wide open to halt his motion. He wouldn't want Saki or Amati to get involved or burden. Something told him that he had to protect them. Then, that 'something' told him again, "The more you should kill him. The goddess of death is all too kind for creating beings that could serve their purpose."
Kin smirked as the claws of ryn's feet didn't even penetrate the black scaly armor. Kin's eyes shot open and glared down on Ryn, enforcing terrible hallucinations of drowning. He then summoned two large humanoid monsters made of earth that shot upwards from the dirt in front of the two.
((Is it okay if I do this, and so, with the Battle System, roll three times as supposed with Kin and each monster, of which has its own HP of say, 10?))
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Posted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 1:51 pm
((AGG! MORE? I guess so... we should wait for Saki to tell us if it is razz ))
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