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 Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:09 am
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:32 am
Hi all, Afternoon evening morning .
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:38 am
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:41 am
Hi, when you gonna put up the next chapter? I am starved of reading matter. I need more books blaugh
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 6:44 am
I haven't decided I am kinda swamped on homework right now. ~writing a paper on islam as we speak~ I am also kicking around a couple of ideas for the second chapter.
I cant decide whether to pick up where I left off, and do the chapter at the asteroid, or to start from another culties point of view and gradually work my way over to the asteroid in chapter three.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:02 am
Well your homework is more important so get that finished if you can.
I just read the story again . If the asteroid is a major plot then you should maybe try another culties view and gradually work up to the asteroid, giving a little background maybe.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:06 am
Yeah, it isn't really that tough there is just a lot of it. Quite annoying actually ^_^;;
As for that the asteroid isn't a huge storyline plot, but it does kinda continue the story. I am leaning for starting from another characters prospective. Possibly Wayne, Denko, or Koosei's... So many choices.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:10 am
I think maybe from Wayne's point of View. Koosei was quite a big character last time where as wayne wasn't. Denko is too new in the story as yet ,you need to introduce him and stuff, maybe a bit later.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:14 am
Yeah it is kinda between Wayne and Denko. I am thinking one of the heads. I really like the character I have developed for Wayne. It is similar to his previous one, but not exactly. Denko's character is like you said something I need to work on, but I can see him fitting in in certain upcoming parts.
Koosei is actually just in the asteroid chapter which is why I was thinking about starting from her point of view.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:34 am
Hmmm well I will stop now I don't want people accusing me of influencing you ,into using some one else instead of them .Hee hee
Though I know you will decide for yourself which you like . If you need to run any ideas pm me and I will try and help if I can . blaugh
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:39 am
rofl Yeah that would prolly not end well. I will have a choice soon enough anyhow XP
Thanks I most likely will do that.
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:44 am
xd no arguments from me for having me show up again. xp
but, might be interesting to see it from Wayne or Denko's POV.
...... chapter with the asteroid, eh? anything to do with South HQ? *innocent*
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:48 am
No worries if not now you are going to be in it Koosei.
XD Dont worry that is coming up :roflk:
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:51 am
xd it really doesn't matter if the next one is my POV or not. go with who you think would work best.
xd is it too obvious that I just enjoy bugging Trenn? xp he's just so fun to tease/haze
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Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 7:58 am
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