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 Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 9:35 pm
Zero had was dozing off as he was medetating him and
shikamaru was sleeping for a couple hours when Zero
had woke up and it was night time he had woke shikamaru
up and it was time for bed but he had still medtated so then
afteer it got late he would sleep
5/9
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 9:42 pm
It was morning and Zero woke up He was trying his shadow on a bird for
pratice as he caught itprating on a bird that weak and so much trouble you can hurt it said chojiyea......but what else is there to train on then isee nothing else but a birdsaid Zero why dont you try it on me said chojiget eady for a sparing match said Zero as he caught choji in his shadowno fair that was cheap choji we never really started 1 more time we start said choji even though choji was more advance in the fighting feild coz zero was new to this stuff he had just finished the ninja academy he wanted to use his combo the drill kick and impress everyone so this was pretty hard to pull off it was a 14 hit combo of all kicks taijutsu he stronger feild then the rest.5/9 hope thats good that motre than 6
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 9:42 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:08 pm
Zero had made choji do stupid stuff when he had him in his shadow its pretty fun do this choji looks funy as naruto laugh "i like this kid said naruto"Zero made choji drop his chips and a tear came down his eye when they hit the ground.maby i should just try the skill then choji broke free this is for the chips he said ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh as he got mad he yelled at zero he wasnt finish with the chips and he barly like to share unless it was with shikamaru so now he was mad zero did not know what to do he was in a shocked state as the squrriel at his chips he had wanted the last chip now he was even more mad about this
6/9
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:11 pm
((That's four lines. Two more to make a good post.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:12 pm
the way i put it ti looks like 6 lines this is complicated that like 2 paragraphs a ost not many ppl can handle it
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:13 pm
((Well, your going to have to get used to it or someone in the guild will get pissed that you get to make smaller posts than them.))
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:26 pm
(well i guess it gonna be a long road damn small a** screen)
Zero had gotten serious he was ready to finnally learn the skill as choji charged at him Zero Jumped over him and kicked him in the back and started his drill kick combo it was a hit to the left then to the right in a repedly faishion till like the eightth hit then he knock his opponet in the air with contuie the combo until the 14 and last kick when he drilled chji in the ground with force choji was knocked out but Zero lost alot of chakra and had to take a rest the path of a ninja was going to be harder than the test at the academy so now he had to brace himself for more than anything he had thought be fore now he was going to get serious about his training
7/9
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Posted: Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:26 pm
((5.5 lines. A bit more and it would be perfect.))
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:05 am
might gai said" to activate the Initial Gate you must dig down deep and find the chakra hidden away in your body.This gate is what restricts one's mentality on how much their muscles can take. Releasing this gate will cause your Chakra and Stamina to increase.although this gate does not have any cons against the body it shouldn't be used constently.might gai said lets go inside the dojo then lee and i will show you the power of the gates.inside the dojo nyu said"could i have an example of the initial get please?"gai said of course.gai stood in one position then his chakra was flowing around him.
2/5
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:15 am
suddenly the chakra flowing around gai sensei wahmbulance .gai said there is your example.nyu said"wow what a powerful technique.gai told nyu to try.nyu sudddenly was surrounded by a powerful force of chakra.gai sensei said"looks like we've got ourselves a little protejie the first day and he's almost already mastered the initial gate.nyu remeber what i said This gate is what restricts one's mentality on how much their muscles can take. Releasing this gate will cause your Chakra and Stamina to increase.this gate should not be opened consetently.nyu said ok but theirs one thing i dont get.
3/5
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:29 am
nyu said"you said i had ALMOST mastered the first gate what did you mean by that?"gai said"you have to be able to do it a will very fast so your opponent can't stop you.'nyu had an idea what if he had a spar with lee them both using the initial gate.gai said'alright i approve.once again gai had to be all official announcing the match and stuff.gai said let the match begin!nyu and lee both opened the initial gate.nyu removed his sword from its case and lee untied his bandages.this gave nyu the idea that he was going to do the forward lotus.but nyu wasn't worried.nyu with his new found speed and energy clashed with lee.
4/5
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 7:42 am
nyu could only defend himself because lee was even fast before activating the gate.then nyu stepped it up a knoch he activated ashura senku and went through lee and slashed him in the back with great force.this didn't seem to have much effect on lee because they were moving at abnormal speeds.lee suddenly appeared behind nyu and went in for a forward lotus. when he tried to rap the bandage around nyu he used ashura senku.lee expected this from last time lee quickly moved out of range from the bandages.then nyu didnt rap the bandages around lee's body he rapped the badanges around his legs.then pounded him with no resistance what so ever.rock lee said"i guess you win the initial gate battle.gai sensei said congatulations you have mastered the first of the eight gates.
5/5 gate mstered
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:01 am
nyu came back to the village to learn the next of the celestial gates.on the way their he stopped for his favorite bowl of ichiraku ramen.on the way their he saw sasuke sasuke said hey you i want a rematch.nyu said i have a name."sasuke said"what ever the point is i want a rematch.nyu said ok lets go to that grass field we we're at earlier.nyu was wondering what had changed from their last battle other than nyu getting the initial gate.sasuke might have gotten a bit stronger.sasuke said lets begin!sasuke asked arent you going to pull out your sword?nyu said"i don't need it to beat you.sasuke became furious.
1/8
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Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:14 am
gai quickly came to the fight and said"if you're here to learn the next gate i suggest you watch my example closely.gai quickly opened the heal gate all his injuries were healed. nyu said thats exactly what i need to activate my power lotus!gai gave nyu the nice guy pose then sat down to watch.sasuke said"can we please get my rematch started?"nyu said of course bring it on sasuke said lets get started he then shot a powerful grand fire ball jutsunyu jumped back and activated thefirst of the eight gates and said initial gate!!nyu suddenly doubled his chakra and stamina.
2/8
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