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 Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:09 pm
@Kahara: My longest post was I think 14 paragraphs + a whole song. @_@
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:10 pm
Should work, there are a couple of awkward parts in some of the sentences.. and a few comma splices, but overall for it's purpose it's good. 3nodding
Edit: @ Rosette - eek wow that's long.. I don't think i have it in me to write that long for one thing
Unless it was a short story or something.. but not a roleplay post
Ooh and i also wanted to tell you I started watching Chrno Crusades. It's very very good so far. I finished episode 6 this afternoon, and so i'll be working on the 7th and foreward later tonight and tommorow.. when i'm not studying for my exams..
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:13 pm
*Shrugs* I'm not very good with grammar.
You're in college and I'm still in middle school..xDD
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:13 pm
YAY. ISN'T ROSETTE PWNSOME?!Quote: Kisa ran to the stage, her right hand clutching Asuka's left wrist. Both of their faces were covered in beads of sweat, and their hair was a bit messy. The blonde looked back at her best friend and stuck out her tongue with one eye shut. "Asuka-chan, let's sign up!" Again with the sucking up. Asuka'd face reddened as she shook her head viciously. "N-n-n-no! Y-you know h-how I feel about s-s-singing on..." The neko gulped, having trouble making the next word come out. "S-stage..." Kisa gave a thumbs up half-heartedly. "But... I'LL BE WITH YA'! It's time to show of your mad skills, baby!" Asuka raised an eyebrow. Damnit, Kisa spoke odd. Oh well, that's why everybody loved her. The lovable girl grinned and ran off, leaving a very anxious teen behind. She returned about 3 minutes later with a beaming face.
"Ok! We're SIGNED UP!" She exclaimed, her high-pitched voice ringing inside Asuka's ears. It may be annoying to strangers, but Kisa was the one who had saved Asuka from herself all those years ago. She'd gotten quite used to it and, even though she hated to admit it, Kisa's voice was very comforting. Annoying, squeaky, childish... but heart-warming. The neko nodded shakily and they sat down to watch the others until it was their turn. Kisa hummed an unknown melody, dragging her shorter pal behind her. The dragged girl was groaning and whining, crying and complaining. She sounded like a child. The blonde girl pointed at the song selections.
"s**t, Asuka, I don't know any English songs." Kisa whispered angrily. Asuka nodded. "Yeah, me neither." She mumbled. They scanned the list and both of their faces brightened when they saw a familiar song. Eternal Snow. The neko punched in the number and they both rushed onto the stage, hunching together to get in range of the microphone. The song started playing and both girls smiled as she familiar melody reached their ears. The blonde and brunette opened their mouths, waiting for the song to start so they could sing for the crowd.
Kimi wo suki ni natte Dorekurai tatsu no kaNA?
Kimochi Fukurande yuku bakari de
Kimi wa Kono omoi kidzuiteiru no kana?
Ichido mo kotoba ni wa Shitenai kedo
Asuka's long hair bobbed up and down as she tapped her foot to the unforgotten melody. Her honey-coloured kimono folded and unfolded easily in the knee area as she moved slightly. She had been wearing her bottom-long hair down for once in a long while, mainly because she thought it made her look mature. She wasn't all that, she had cat ears and a tail to add to her odd appearance. Honey eyes and pale brown hair, aswell. The neko had always felt inferior to the tall girl next to her. I mean, she was everything Asuka wasn't. Tall, blonde, beautiful, slender, charming... and HUMAN. Asuka used to be human, or as human as she could get. One day she had woken up and her human ears were gone. In their place were large, black cat ears.
She glanced at the teal-eyed beauty to her side and smiled weakly as she continued to sing with her.
Yuki no youni Tada shizukani
Furitsumori Tsudzukete yuku
Kisa glanced at the girl next to her who was smiling weakly at her. Kisa felt guilty. Everybody always considered Asuka to be her sidekick, but the blonde felt as if the brunette was her other half. Her amazing, athletic, sarcastic, carming half. Kisa was just... annoying. That's what she herself thought though. She turned her wide eyes back to the audience, regaining her focus.
Hold me tight Konna omoi nara
Dareka wo suki ni naru kimochi
Shiritaku Nakatta yo
I love you Namida tomaranai
Konnan ja Kimi no koto
Shirazuni ireba Yokatta yo
Kisa and Asuka glanced at eachother again and gripped hands, the expressions on their faces extremely intense and strong. They were looking at the audience with the expression before grinning and finishing the chorus loud and clear.
Kimi wo itsumade omotteiru no kaNA?
Tameiki ga mado GARASU(Glass) Kumoraseta
Yureru kokoro Tomosu KYANDORU(Candle) de
Ima Tokashite Yukenai kaNA?
Both girls felt like the world had stopped when they looked at eachother again. Listening to the song had made them question their friendship. They both argued so often... could they grow to hate eachother so easily, then?
IMPOSSIBLE.
It was impossible, but could that be true? Kisa turned to look at her right, at the sakura trees. Her spare hands ran through her hair, tugging some strands of strawberry blonde hair out of the tie at the bottom of her locks. It blew in the wind, tickling the front of her neck. She ignored the urge to giggle like a child and scratch. The blonde's hand fell to her kimono, which was a white colour. A lilac and sky blue floral pattern played across the bottom. Her slender hand ran up and down her side nervously.
Hold me tight Oreru hodo tsuyoku
Kogarashi Fubuki ni deatte mo
Samukunai youni to
I miss you Kimi wo omou tabi
Amikake no Kono MAFURAA(Muffler)
Konya mo hitori Dakishimeru yo
Geez, this song all of a sudden seemed to lag for a very long amount of time. It was only 5 minutes though. It was agrivating both of them, bringing back memories of childhoods. But... they loved singing. Maybe they should just keep going without thinking. Without hesitating. Stepping forward instead of backwards.
Eien ni furu yukiga aru nara
Kimi he to tsudzuku kono omoi Kakuseru no kaNA?
They had both stepped back two steps so they could jump jump forward and scream out the last 3 words of the 7th (or so. >.>) verse. Large grins played on the girls' faces. Time for the last verse, then their score.
Hold me tight Konna omoi nara
Dareka wo suki ni naru kimochi
Shiritaku Nakatta yo
I love you Mune ni komiageru
Fuyuzora ni sakebitai
Ima sugu kimi ni Aitai yo
A slender hand covered a tan hand on the microphone hard, seeming to give of the feeling of saying 'I'm always going to be there.'. It seemed re-assuring. Both screamed out the last chorus enthusiastically, and both had tears in their eyes. Tears filled of mixed emotions.
Joy.
Fear.
Happiness.
Excitement.
Knowledge of friendship.
The song finished right after, and Asuka shook with excitement. Kisa rubbed her hands together. The score appeared being an 8.5. Asuka let out a happy squeal. "YAY!" She screamed, throwing a fist in the air before squeaking and Kisa turned quickly to see her falling backwards. The moron.
"AHHHHH, KISA, HELP MEEEEE!" The neko screamed in a high-pitched, scratchy voice. A look of confusion appeared on the tall girl's face before she dived onto the ground of the stage, just missing. Asuka made an odd noise and crashed noisily on the ground, moaning painfully. Kisa glanced over and blushed with embarrasment. "G-gomen!" She squeaked out. Asuka waved her hand. "No problem." Her voice was strained.
It didn't matter what other people thought about the girls. All that mattered was what the girls thought they were, and they'd remain that way for all their lives.
Best friends forever!
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:19 pm
Don't worry, Dee. I'm not that talented at grammar either. Though, last year, I was 7C's grammar queen. XD
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:20 pm
xDD
*Attempts to read..but fails*
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:24 pm
I looked at it, then I continued to scroll.
u.u
What do y'all think of when someone says "Jazz" ?
((..Other than the night, instruments, dark colours, and music notes.))
@_@
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:24 pm
If you press quote, you can see it.
But please don't. I hate it.
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:28 pm
Rosette needs not be ashamed! Thy post is wondrous!
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:29 pm
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:29 pm
SHINY. --Glomp--
Hello Kira. =D
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:31 pm
I feel special all of a sudden... Oh and my erro-ness from earlier has worn off... *Snugglesnuggle teh Rosie*
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:33 pm
xD Kira's siggy is cute.
"Maybe it's best I keep away"
<3
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:33 pm
I GOT COMPLIMENTED LIKE CRAZY ON MY HAIR BY A GUY I MIGHT KINDA LIKE TODAY. ='D
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Posted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 6:37 pm
So far my sig is either scary or cute...
Odd...
Hey Casey, I told you about my party right?
Shiny Edit: That you did my shaven friend.
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