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 Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:21 pm
[[ Doh! XD I sorta randomly timeskipped.. Im gonna delete the post~ ]]
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:39 pm
 ~Cherrydrop~ Mentor of Breezeclan
When life gives you cherries...
[ Cherrydrop stopped in not too far from camp and let out a hurtful moan. ]
My body aches...
But I can't rest now...
[ Cherrydrop let out a hiss and dragged herself up. She was going to call for cats who needed aid.. If there were any injured or something. ]
" IT'S MEEE... CHERRYDROP! IS ANYONE HURT!!?? "
[ Cherrydrop collapsed. She let out a silent yowl that only something 20 inches away could hear. She then heaved herself up, and waited for any replies. ]
... It's perfect!
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:36 am
 ♪Fallingpaw
ღWhat would it take For things to be quiet Quiet like the snow I know, this isn't much But I know I could, I could be better...☁╔══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╗☁ εїз Fallingpaw squeaked as she caught sight of her mentor, blue eyes wide and sparkling with joy. She pelted towards her mentor with a frenzy of relief.] "Are you ok Cherrydrop? Can you walk? Get up? Please be ok!" [Fallingpaw mewed affectionately.]♩╚══════════════════════════════════════════════════════════════╝♩ I don't think I deserve it, Selflessness Find your way into my heart All stars could be brighter All hearts could be warmer... 
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:29 pm
~Cherrydrop~ Mentor of Breezeclan
When life gives you cherries...
[ Cherrydrop heaved herself up to see Fallingpaw. ]
Fallingpaw! Thank Starclan you're okay!
" Fallingpaw.. I worried about you..
I'm fine.. The gathering was attacked... As well as the camp. I can tell you everything once we make sure everything is okay... "
[ Cherrydrop stopped to think. ]
" Fallingpaw, did you see anyone leave from camp?
Kits, warriors, any cat. "
[ Cherrydrop looked at her apprentice. Maybe they could do a rescue search. ]
... It's perfect!
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:06 pm
Existing in this place now are uncleanable l i e s ↪
I wonder when it has ↩ b e g u n
How f a r ↪ do
I have to go to see the ↩ l i g h t?
sмσкєραω ╬ ⑥ мσσиs σl∂ ╬ вяєєzєcLαи
Creator: Cometsrain    
(Smokepaw dashed across the moors, darting in between bushes as he ran. He saw birds swooping around camp and heard screeches and screams from cat and bird alike. Gritting his teeth, he continued dashing forward, painful fear shooting through him. Were his friends dying? Was Dicefoot okay? Were the cats winning or loosing? He bit back a wail as he ran, his heart pounding in his chest.
He was most worried about Mewkit, and Moonpaw and Sunkit. They were his bestest of best friends, and he couldn't bear it if another of them died. It would tear him apart! He moaned at the thought.
He began to slow down, wheezing painfully. He'd run too fast from the gathering and now felt winded from darting from reed to reed, bush to bush, glancing at the sky in fear, listening to the sounds of his clanmates, paying attention and losing his train of thought. He stood in a thicket, panting heavily as he caught his breath. As he crouched, he heard a voice call out from the darkness.)
"Somebody, HELP!"
(Pricking his ears, Smokepaw recognized the voice and scrambled.) "Dicefoot?!" he called, leaping to his feet.
"Smokepaw! Come quick! Someone's collapsed on the river and I need help dragging them off!"
(Smokepaw whirled around and saw his kin's glittering green eyes in the shadows.) He ran towards them, calling out, "Don't worry, I'm coming!" (His feet flew forward, but he saw his aunt's eyes turn and disappear into the night. He spotted her black and white pelt as she raced ahead of him. He followed her quickly, feeling his previous exhaustion erase at the thought of a fellow Clanmate being hurt. I hope it's not Mewkit! he thought wildly.
It took him a while to realize they'd crossed into SeaClan. He slowed down a bit, but kept pace with Dicefoot unsurely. What were they doing in SeaClan? Had a clanmate been dropped from a bird into SeaClan?! Yes! That was the only exclamation! He renewed his vigor, speeding ahead again as he caught his aunt's silhouette running in the moonlight.
He followed her to the frozen river and was almost stunned by its glittering beauty. Shaking his head, he quickly scanned for a limp form on the ice. Confusion struck his face as he didn't spot any, but Dicefoot ran to the riverbank.)
"Hurry! Follow me!"
(Smokepaw dashed after her, padding across the ice with careful yet urgent pawsteps. She led him to a part of the river hidded by the shadows of skinny yet tall trees brinking the StormClan marker. How far had they traveled?! He realized with horror that they'd run across SeaClan territory and nearly into StormClan. He couldn't help but wonder what his aunt was doing so far from BreezeClan, but at that moment she turned around.)
Nodding forward, she said breathlessly, "She's over there. I couldn't reach that area because the ice is thinner and I'm too heavy. You have to hurry-SeaClan is being attacked by snakes right now and wolverines in StormClan! You're the only one who can help!"
(He was too preoccupied with the horror of who 'she' could be to wonder how his kin knew that. He padded forward delicately, feeling the ice creak under his paws and spotted a limp form hidden in the shadows. Its scent was muffled by mud and muck, and he padded forward cautiously. As he approached, he prodded it with a paw. It rolled over and he gasped. This wasn't a cat! This was a dead squirrel!
He turned around in confusion and saw his aunt slowly approaching him. Her worried face had changed. Now, she looked nothing like the Dicefoot he knew. Her face was contorted in an evil sneer on the brink of a snarl, and her eyes glittered mutinously. Shadows covered her face as she approached slowly, her fur rising.
He scrambled backwards, but the ice cracked under his paws and he froze. He couldn't move, or he'd plunge into icy water-!Dicefoot cackled, her fangs glittering in the moonlight.)
"I finally have you where I want you!"
You will live in shadow of s h a d e ↑
And commit the eight s i n ↓
Unrequited existence will t u r n ↑
Everything into n o t h i n g ↓     There is always some madness in love...
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[Dicefoot was overjoyed.
She had finally gotten the rotten furball alone.
She was constantly under surveilance from suspicious clanmates, so she could never implement her plans without Galestar breathing down her neck. Due to recent events, however, she was the Clan's smallest problem, and had thus been forgotten. So she'd set to work. Nobody noticed her slipping away. Nobody was out of their camps or away from the gathering. Everyone was fighting for their Clans.
Nobody would come to the rescue.
She giggled, an insane glint in her eyes.] "The time has come, Smokepaw," she meowed, sounding surprisingly calm. "You've been guided in the wrong pawsteps. Following the wrong path. Of all the warriors Galestar could've chosen, he gave you Embergaze. The mouse-brained tom who doesn't have the courage to kill a mouse! Some mentor."
Piping up to his mentor's defense, Smokepaw said shrilly, "Th-that's not true! He killed an eagle and saved me from them too!""Shut up!" she snapped, her eyes glinting. "He can't guide you like I can! He doesn't even come close. Has Embergaze planned or schemed before? Has Embergaze spoken with demons themselves? Has Embergaze used a demon for his purposes? I think not! He is powerless compared to me!"
[Smokepaw stared at her, obviously below Dicefoot's amazing intellegence. He couldn't know or understand. Not without her.]
"I can teach you how to really live," she growled. "You're mine. MINE! And nobody else's!"
"NO! You're insane, leave me alone! I'm not yours! You can't own me-nobody owns me! Why are you doing this?!""Why are you doing this, leave me alone, neh neh neh!" she imitated shrilly, a sneer on her face. "You're pathetic. Even my sister can't have strong, powerful kittens. I was hoping her children would show some promise, but you're just like her-soft. You really have no use, don't you? You're a lost cause, just like she is! I should've killed her before she brought such weaklings into the world! You're just a wretched excuse for a cat!""That description fits you better," Smokepaw said darkly.
"What?" Dicefoot snarled, surprise ruffling her pelt.
"You heard me!" Smokepaw yowled. "Y-you're just a mean ol' she-cat! Why do you want my mother to be in pain? That doesn't sound like you at all! Snap out of it, Dicefoot! You're my friend. Why are you stooping so low?!"
[Dicefoot's eyes narrowed, but she seemed to hesitate. His words struck a chord in a voice she'd ignored for a while. What am I doing? This is my kin. My sister's kin. I love him. I love him, right? How could I even think of...
NO. He's got her blood in him. He's tainted with her lies and her morals. He might as well be her! Will you let her get away this time, Dicefoot? This time there is no Galestar, nobody to ruin your plans! Will you let her get away again...?
"NEVER," Dicefoot snarled, her face twisting. "I'll end what I've started!"
[Smokepaw stared at her in horror as she padded forward. Fear struck him and he began to shiver torturedly, his eyes glittering in panic and pain. He began to sob, fear greater than any he'd known taking hold of him, and panic seeping into his bones. He glanced around wildly for a chance to escape, but there was none. She'd cornered him onto a sheet of delicately thin ice. Below then, the river raged, its current flowing strongly. He hadn't noticed that the river was moving below them, ripping at the ice above as it thawed, and now it would be his grave.
His eyes hardened. There was one point Dicefoot had overlooked-she was on thin ice, too. There was no way she'd let him pad cautiously off the ice alive, so there was only one thing to do. He waited, feeling his heart thrum in his chest as she approached, closer and closer, her sharp claws unsheathing as she padded slowly forward.]
"Yes, that's it," she growled. "Stand like a scared rabbit-stand still now, this'll be much cleaner that way!"
[Lights flashed in Dicefoot's eyes. A monster was approaching, but not fast enough. It wouldn't kill Spadestripe-it hadn't before. She was a bigger monster. The biggest monster. She was the only one who could end it FOREVER.
Smokepaw swallowed, glancing up at the WHITE moon. He remembered Embergaze's ORANGE eyes now, and had to hold back from crying. I'm sorry, Embergaze. I lied to you. I just didn't realize that eagles weren't the only thing to be afraid of...
His face twisted as he thought, But I'll protect you. I'll protect them all! If I have to die, then I'll take this monster down with me! I'll...I'll make sure she can never hurt anyone else again!
Dicefoot was only a tail-length away from him. Her teeth glinted at him as she snarled, preparing to kill him. Suddenly, as fear propelled him forward, he let out a furious yowl, launching himself at her. She was completely unprepared for the assault and her snarl turned into a yowl of surprise. Barreling ino her mercilessly, he dug his claws into her and bit her neck, digging his fangs deep down.
She gurgled in fear as the ice cracked from under them. "NO-" she cried, but it was too late. There was a sudden drop as they collapsed into the water. Foam rushed over their heads and swallowed them, sucking them into the raging river below.
The world spun as they were thrashed around. Smokepaw was barely able to hold on to her for a few more moments before they were ripped apart by the current, sent in different directions. Smokepaw was smashed against the ice roof above him over and over, almost as if the current were trying to release him, but the ice here was too thick. As if it had given up, the river sucked him down again, away from the WHITE light above and into the murky dephts of the merciless shadows beneath him. Water filled his mouth as he tried to scream, but his scream was unheard, only released as a gurgle as bubbles escaped him. The world was dark, and there was only pain and water. Soon the darkness rose from the BLUE water and wrapped around him, claiming him finally as he let out one last kick.
Here I come, brother... he thought, closing his eyes for the last time.
Dicefoot wanted to scream, to fight the waves that were throwing her around like a piece of fresh-kill. How dare they interrupt her battle! How dare the stop her! She'd never kill her now. Spadestripe would never die. NO, NO! MOTHER! STARCLAN! ANYONE! HELP ME!
But nobody answered. There was nobody to save her. Nobody left. They had abaned her-or had she abandoned them...?
The river held no answers. It simply sucked her breath away, replacing it with water until she felt her life fading. Yes, that was what it was doing. It was replacing everything with water. Nothing but water. Water drowned secrets and swallowed them forever, never to return. It was her haven. There was no need to fight it. She relaxed, letting herself be carried by the river, feeling it rock her to sleep.
Eternal sleep...
The waves of the sea crashed on the shore, sending sprays of foam everywhere. At the river delta where the river emptied into the sea, two bodies sprung forth from the foam, thrown by the current to the rocks of the cliffs. Their pelts snagged on the rocks, suspending them on the cliffbase, until the sea sucked them out again.
After being tossed around some more by the sea, they resurfaced and were thrown once more to shore, where their bodies finally rested peacefully on the beach.
A scrawny gray apprentice could be recognized. He was laid gently on the shore, his body curled almost as if in sleep. The other, a black and white she-cat, was thrown more violently and rested in a more awkward position, her broken limbs splayed out. Both their faces were calm, almost serene. Their bodies had been whipped clean so that their fur glistened, and any wounds they recieved were sparkling clean, only recognizable by a faint scar and missing fur.
The she-cat's neck was somehow torn a bit. Blood, bright crimson blood, dripped slowly from her neck, a mere small amount compared to what normally would have flowed forth. The sea had sucked most her blood from the wound, but some still remained, seeping gently into the sand in the smalles pool around her neck fur.
The two bodies faced each other, the wind whipping their fur almost as if to wake them.
But they were fast asleep.
Forever.
Together.
(( This is in SeaClan right now, mind you, just thought I should post it here for BC peeps to read. ))
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...But there is also always some reason in madness.
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:05 am
(( Did everyone forget that Moonkit is Moonpaw now that he's Galestar's apprentice? D: ))
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Winged Timberwolf Captain
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:36 am
  XX╣XG A L E S T A RX╠╣XB R E E Z E C L A NX╠XX XXX█████ ███ █XXＲＥＬＥＡＳＥXＹＯＵＲXＴＲＯＵＢＬＥＳXXX█████ ███ █XXＲＥＬＥＡＳＥXＹＯＵＲXＦＥＡＲXXX█████ ███ █XXＯＰＥＮXＹＯＵＲXＨＥＡＲＴXXX█████ ███ █XXＫＥＥＰXＹＯＵＲXＬＯＶＥＤXＯＮＥＳXＮＥＡＲone day my W I N G S will grow and I will S O A R through the S K I E S ｉｆ ｗｅ ａｌｗａｙｓ ｌｉｖｅ ａｓ ｉｆ ｗｅ ｗｉｌｌ ｄｉｅXX
ｔｈｅｎ ｗｅ ｗｉｌｌ ｎｅｖｅｒ ｌｉｖｅ ａ ｄａｙ ａｌｉｖｅXX FOR WHAT IS IT TO DIE
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[Galestar wobbled into camp, his fur fluffed out as his pelt was sticky with poultices.] He quickly padded to the Highbranch and yowled, "Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highbranch for a Clan meeting."
[He waited for warriors to emerge from their dens and hiding spots, murmuring in anticipation as they realized their leader had returned. He flicked his tail for silence.]
"Some of you may have heard that Talon is dead," he began wearily. "He is. Talon's flock attacked both at the gathering and at camp, but Talon was at the gathering. With the help of our fellow warriors, I killed him. Now that we are free at last from that menace, we must move on. I know this is sudden, but there has been far enough delay and this needs to be taken care of now. My ceremonies were split in half because of the gathering, and we shall complete them tonight!"
[The Clan cats murmured amongst each other, excitement glittering in their eyes.]
"Ghostpaw, Stormpaw, Shadekit, Siegekit, Firekit, Mewkit, Trapkit, Sunkit, Hauntednight, Bluemoon, Dicefoot, Reedwhikser, Frostclaw, and Mapleleaf, please step forward," Galestar listed briskly.
All the cats stepped forward, except for Dicefoot. Galestar pricked his ears, narrowing his eyes. "Dicefoot?" When no cat answered, he took a sharp breath. "Has anyone seen Dicefoot?" Cats looked around with wide eyes, shaking their heads. Galestar muttered to himself, then continued, "...Stripedwhisker, would you please step forward?"
Once the other cats had stepped forward, Galestar spoke to the apprentices softly. "From this day forward, until they have earned their warrior names, these apprentices will be called Shadepaw, Siegepaw, Firepaw, Trappaw, Mewpaw, and Sunpaw."
Turning to the warriors, Galestar said, "Hauntednight, Bluemoon, Reedwhisker, Frostclaw, and Mapleleaf, you are all ready for an apprentice. Hauntednight will begin Shadepaw's training, Bluemoon Siegepaw's, Reedwhisker Firepaw's, Frostclaw Sunpaw's, Stripedwhisker Mewpaw's, and Mapleleaf Trappaw's.You have all shown valor, strength, loyalty, and diligence. And you are all now ready to be a mentor."
[The mentors and apprentices then touched noses consecutively.]
"And now...Ghostpaw, Stormpaw, and Pepperpaw, please step forward. "
The apprentices stepped forward, their eyes glowing.
"Leader: I, Galestar, leader of BreezeClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down on these apprentices. They have trained hard to understand the ways of your noble code, and I commend them to you as warriors in their turn. Ghostpaw, Pepperpaw, and Stormpaw, do you promise to uphold the warrior code and to protect and defend this clan, even at the cost of your life?"
The apprentices chimed, "I do."
Galestar nodded and stated, " Then by the powers of StarClan I give you your warrior names. Ghostpaw, from this moment you will be known as Ghostface. Stormpaw, from this moment on you will be known as Stormclaw. Pepperpaw, from this moment on you will be known as Peppertail ((That was the name he wanted right? )). StarClan honors your patience and your courage, and we welcome you as full warriors of BreezeClan."
[Galestar rested his muzzle on the top of the new warriors' heads, and the new warriors licked his shoulder in respect. The rest of the Clan chanted the new warriors' new names. Galestar purred at his Clan hoarsely, his eyes alight.]
"We survived the worst any Clan could imagine, my friends! And now we can rest. I want hunting parties organized to go into the territory and catch us some fresh kill- only the strongest warriors. The rest of you, please stay in camp and recover, and let Iceears heal you. We have a long rest ahead of us to get stronger.
Also, can someone please go out and look for Dicefoot? I'm worried that-"
Embergaze piped up with a worried tone, "Galestar, I sent Smokepaw back to camp to help out, and I don't see him around. Could everyone please keep an eye out for him?"
Another cat spoke and yowled, "Moonpaw, Pebbleheart, and Serpentfang are gone, too! I think Moonpaw was carried off by a bird."
Galestar gasped in horror and hissed, furious that he was in no state to help. "First and foremost," he yowled, "we need cats to find our missing warriors. Is anyone fit enough to go?"
Embergaze spoke: "I'll go look for Smokepaw." Before Galestar could protest, he said swiftly in his baritone voice, "I sent him out on his own. He is my responsibility, and I want to see to it that he is safe."
Galestar nodded to him with narrow eyes. "Be careful," he warned as the grey warrior turned and left camp, his eyes gloomy. "Mapleleaf, go after him," Galestar whispered to the pretty she-cat.
"Anyone else who can hunt in a hunting party or a search party to find Moonpaw, Pebbleheart, and Serpentfang?"
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BUT TO STAND IN THE SUN AND MELT IN THE WIND?  ....................................................................................................... ......................................................................................... 
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 11:21 am
I've been here for too long.
Every moment, I see your face.
All I ask for,
is love.
I want to know what's going on.
Please help me. Until my very last breath, You can call me:Birdpaw BreezeClan|Apprentice|She-Cat|Young Love|Distant&Solitary _______________________________________________________________________________________ [Gasping for breath, small paws aching, covered in blood, I finally made it back to camp, just as Galestar was holding a Clan meeting. Chest heaving, I sat down respectfully, claws scratching at the ground anxiously, wanting to call out to Shadepaw, my mother, my siblings. As Shadepaw's name was called, I hopped to my paws, trying to look over the heads of the other warriors. Of course, I had to chose to sit right at the edge, behind everyone else. So, I didn't get to see him. Once Galestar was finally finished, I pushed my way through the crowd, bounding over to the nursery, sticking my head inside] "Mother? Mom!" [I spotted her, lounging by the side. I bounded over to her and allowed myself to be covered in licks and fussed over, feeling like a kit again. After a few minutes, I pulled away, trying to look annoyed, but failing. We spoke quietly, then I rested against her, the gentle rhythm of her cleaning my fur lulling. I could've fell asleep, but I had to go and find Shadepaw, just to reasure myself he was ok and alive. Saying goodbye to my mother, I padded back out into the sunlight, green eyes wide and anxious] "Shadepaw? Shadepaw! Where are you?" ________________________________________________________________________________________ Reincarnation of Birdsong I vow to protect you. I've seen this all before.
Nothing seems old,
yet it all seems new.
My life is split in two.
Will it be like this forever?
Will I ever find you?
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ll oceanic_shimmer ll Crew
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 2:58 pm
[@Timber- Yes, he can mentor Mewpaw :3 I'll try to keep up with both Stripewhisker and Firepaw. Whoo, just got back from an AWESOME Bat Mizvah. I swear, I got high off of salt water taffy. I took about five billion bags of those things. and I still have 36 left.]
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 3:10 pm
When life knocks you down FIREKIT _______ [Firekit watched as the remaining birds flew off, and listened as Galestar called his name for his ceremony. Yes, finally! It was his time to shine. And, oh cool. His mentor was that Reedwhisker guy.]"C'mon, Sandpaw. We gotta go."[He began to drag his sister back to camp, but felt a pain below his rib cage. It burned, and ached. Breeze had definitely hurt him horribly. She had pecked at his back, thrown him across the territory, everything possible.]"Make it go away, make it go away!"[He shouted, but no one was around. The kit collapsed to the ground, feeling sick on the inside.] Just get back up when it knocks you down
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 5:17 pm
Patience is the companion of wisdom
Frostclaw
[Frostclaw left the bird on the ground. It was cruel, that she couldn't fly but the silver warrior couldn't help but be glad...that a creature that had helped cause so much pain, even under the frightful eyes of Talon, was now in pain herself.]
[Frostclaw stepped up to the front of the crowd of cats. She had a faint idea of what Galestar would say, about Talon being dead and the crisis being over. But when he assigned her an apprentice she tensed, despite the wave of pain it sent through her body. Her a mentor? Not to long ago she had been almost completely isolated from her fellow warriors. She had practically hated kits and apprentices. Though the longer she thought about it, the less horrid it became. When finally she touched noses with Sunkit-now Sunpaw- she felt confused at the pang of pride and excitement.]
[Quietly Frostclaw chanted with the rest of her clan. Could she sleep now? She desperately wanted to. She wanted to let the world fade away into the black abyss that was her mind. It seemed StarClan, or fate, did not want her to rest. Another problem. She looked down at her new apprentice.]
"Sun...paw stay in the camp and help Iceears with the wounded." She ordered.
[Frostclaw didn't know if there was still danger lurking. She didn't want Sunpaw out there at such a young age, only to get killed. Slowly she limped forward.]
"I will search for Dicefoot."
(Ehem...>.> I shall post with Pepperpelt XD (Remember Satly was Salttail wink ) when I have a new style for him smile )
_________________________________________________________________ Patience has its limits. Take it too far, and it's cowardice
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:37 pm
Pepperpelt (For lack of an actual posting style)
[Pepperpelt licked Galestar's shoulder, practically shaking with excitement. The battle was finally over, but little did he know, his family was being wiped out, one by one.]
[Pepperpelt stepped back to give his leader room and to soak in the chants around him. His new name, the one had had worked so hard for, the one he had tolerated his mentor for. The one, he practically went to and from the realm of death for.]
[Joy, shattered. His son, missing. He felt his pelt go cold in worry. He had already lost one kit, poor little one died in Spadestripe's tommy. But now, another was probably in mortal danger. He padded over to Embergaze, his claws leaving gouges in the ground.]
"Embergaze, I wish to accompany you to search for Smokepaw." His voice was weak with worry, his heart slowly shattering with every moment that went by.
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Posted: Sat Apr 09, 2011 7:55 pm
Moonpaw & Sunpaw We may look alike, but we're different. ▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀ [Moonpaw didn't know how to solve the situation, there seems to be no solution. But in the meantime, he would only tug on Serpentfang's tail.
That was no longer an option, his eyes clouded with guilt as he gazed at Serpentfang. What was he doing? Supporting the enemy and not the one she-cat who actually called him her family? Was he being possessed by his foolish thoughts?
He didn't have the time to sink into deep thoughts as Serpentfang was being attacked by Mook. What has be done?! He created a disaster! For a minute, he watched as Mook approached Serpentfang with threat. Pebbleheart tried to get around the bird, but had to risk her life. Moonpaw dashed in front of Serpentfang, deep frowning eyes darting up at Mook and fur laid flat.
"STOP!" Moonpaw cried.
"Stop this fight! I've had enough of the sights of blood and despair, why can't we just stop?! Isn't Talon slaughtered? Didn't you want to be free?! Why waste your time taking away the few source of happiness I currently possess and just fly to the moon, like you always wanted?!" Moonpaw cried, a blob of tear forming in his eyes. "Don't hurt Serpentfang, she's my clan mate. My family!" Moonpaw cried, shuddering at the end.
(( Sorry asian; I edited your post. Bost Sunkit and Moonkit are Sunpaw and Moonpaw now Dx
~Timber)) ▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀▄▀
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:33 am
I will be the lightning... _____________________________________
[Mook flinched at his little friend's loud NO and jumped back from the wildcat. His sharp eyes fixated upon Moonkit and only Moonkit. A feeling of guilt washed over him as his freind stood there defensively over the she cat who had attacked him.] "well, yes, Talon is dead. But she started it. I thought you said you only had your brother back in the clan. Well, i guess im glad to see that i wount be leaving you all alone here. Goodbye Moonkit." [He said as he spread his wings and flew over breezeclan. As he soared he noticed Breeze laying on her back in the middle of the camp. Finding this strange he flew down by her side. She had passed out from pain. Without a word he picked her up in his talons and carried her off into the sky, never to be seen again.]
_____________________________________ ...that strikes you out of the sky, Avalon.   Even if a snake is not poisonous...__________________________________________________________
[Serpentfang's heart jumped as Moonkit stood infront of the large eagle. To her surprise Mook backed off without a word or fuss. Her bright emerald eyes looked at Moonkit.] He did it! He made him leave! Maybe Serpentfang should try not to jump in so angrily next time... she still has so much to learn. [She watched as Mook disappeared into the clear blue sky. She smiled, his graceful soaring now symbolized freedom and peace, like it used to to her kind in the mountines before the war. Everything was right again, that is until her wond started to act up again. She flinched silently as she got up to her paws.] "Moonkit, Pebbleheart, lets head back to the camp quickly. Serpentfang needs to talk with Iceears..." [She began to climb down from the barn and limp off deeper into the Breezeclan territory.] Hang in there Serpentfang. we can make it, just a little farther....
____________________________________________________________________...it should pretend to be venomous. 
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2011 7:16 am
♈sтяιρєωнιsкєя♈ We are the boxers in the ring
We are the bells that never sing ╔══════════════╗ [Stripewhisker padded up to the tree/rock(dunno) thing his leader was sitting on. He was announcing new apprentices. He hoped to get an apprentice, and listened closely for him name to be called. It wasn't. But wait! Dicefoot wasn't there. Maybe he would be getting an apprentice!]"Me, me me! I'll go, Galestar. I shall find the two bundles of joy."[He shouted from down below to his leader.] ╚══════════════╝ There is a title we can't win no matter
How much we might sing
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