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 Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:15 am
Interesting end there. Ohhh flesh ....I mean flash gordan.. That will be fun . sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:21 am
Diana Godstone Interesting end there. Ohhh flesh ....I mean flash gordan.. That will be fun . sweatdrop , yeah, I'll probably put up a new thread once I get started on it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 7:06 am
Just to let you all know, I'm using my old guild as storage for any of my stories etc. I've added a reviews thread too, so if anyone who is a member of the guild wants to leave a review or give feedback on any of my stuff then you can do it there. I'd really appreciate it if someone were to write a proper review of one of the chapters actually, that'd be really cool. Link
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Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2007 9:01 am
biggrin love the last chapter. very awesome. .... I liked how you ended the fight in the first version, but it was wrapped up better in the second. if you could find a way to combine the two, it might be even better. sweatdrop although, that might be a bit difficult.
biggrin I did like how you ended it both times though. 3nodding an awesome end to an awesome story.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:53 pm
Finally finished the chapters I didn't get a chance to read before, awesome story FS.
The ending was awesome too, and surprisingly I lived! surprised
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:55 pm
Zen Rider Finally finished the chapters I didn't get a chance to read before, awesome story FS. The ending was awesome too, and surprisingly I lived! surprised Cause of your assistant.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 8:59 pm
Lifeless-Fox Zen Rider Finally finished the chapters I didn't get a chance to read before, awesome story FS. The ending was awesome too, and surprisingly I lived! surprised Cause of your assistant. Thank you Foxley. Now get me some tea scream
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:06 pm
Zen Rider Lifeless-Fox Zen Rider Finally finished the chapters I didn't get a chance to read before, awesome story FS. The ending was awesome too, and surprisingly I lived! surprised Cause of your assistant. Thank you Foxley. Now get me some tea scream D<
no u
Haha, you got a dagger thrown at you.
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Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 9:09 pm
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