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 Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:51 pm
|R|osarian |G|atō
Rosey|Genin|Sound|Medical nin|Rose   xxxxxHer eyes grew wide when he came at her quickly. She bent backwards wih her flexibility kicking in to dodge the upper slash marks the lower ones got her legs though. It wasen't bad as she jumped back from him. "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you what it's suppose to be."
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:59 pm
Hana Tsukikage
Hana grinned as she was getting the picture seeing as people were more likely to attack just out of the blue like he did. Hana smiled as he suddenly focused his chakra around the kunai and used the Nagare Isou no Jutsu (Current Transfer Skill) to form a visible layer of electricity around both of the kunai. Hana then charged again striking at the same places he had before.
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:11 pm
|R|osarian |G|atō
Rosey|Genin|Sound|Medical nin|Rose xxxxxRosarian caught on to his repeated movements and pushed up on her toes into the air with greater force then had chakra forma round her right hand as she tried to land down on him. "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you what it's suppose to be."
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:17 pm
Hana Tsukikage
Hana quickly rolled off to the side then jumped away quickly seeing as he knoticed that she had focused chakra into her hand. Hana stopped and stood in place with the electricity flowing around the kunai making small crackling sounds. Hana watched to see how powerfull Rosarians punches were so that he could make a note to never get her angrey and so that he could dodge them if needed.
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:17 pm
little mintchan |R|osarian |G|atō
Rosey|Genin|Sound|Medical nin|Rose xxxxx"How does this help me not to get hit while healing a teammate?" She asked Hana while doing the hand signs.[1/4] She had great chakra control so it didn't take her long to focus her chakra into the justu.[2/4] Rosarian looked at Hana for a second with a tint of blush then went back to her training.[3/4] After awhile she repeated the hand seals, focusing chakra became easier, then created the strange clone she had never heard of.[4/4] "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you what it's suppose to be."
This is pathetic
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:19 pm
havikthecold little mintchan |R|osarian |G|atō
Rosey|Genin|Sound|Medical nin|Rose xxxxx"How does this help me not to get hit while healing a teammate?" She asked Hana while doing the hand signs.[1/4] She had great chakra control so it didn't take her long to focus her chakra into the justu.[2/4] Rosarian looked at Hana for a second with a tint of blush then went back to her training.[3/4] After awhile she repeated the hand seals, focusing chakra became easier, then created the strange clone she had never heard of.[4/4] "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you what it's suppose to be."
This is pathetic (( i kinda agree on that... it needs more description in it. each post has to atleast be 2-3 sentences long.))
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:26 pm
[[so what? it dosen't really matter xP and what happened to our other posts?]]
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:31 pm
|R|osarian |G|atō
Rosey|Genin|Sound|Medical nin|Rose xxxxx[[hope this is allowed]]
Rosarian landed her fist on the ground creating a small hole the size of a apple in it's place. "Oppsy sorry." She said standing up. "Live life the way you want it to be. Not the way someone tells you what it's suppose to be."
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:45 pm
little mintchan [[so what? it dosen't really matter xP and what happened to our other posts?]] I does matter this is a pathetic form of RPing you shouldn't even post if thats the best your going to do. -Edit- Your post abve dosn't even say you used Chakra to make the punch mre powerful. Why do yu even Rp if your going to half a** it the hole time?
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:47 pm
[[i can post if i want to so get your b*tchy a** out of my business! if you can't say anything nice then shut that mouth! i'm trying to clean and cook something to eat so it dosen't matter if it's descriptive or not!]]
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:50 pm
little mintchan [[so what? it dosen't really matter xP and what happened to our other posts?]]
the whole point is that you are putting RP effort into learning these skills, but you barely put any effort into that at all. In fact, your character was barely even concentrating on the task at hand.
Any post that is done to learn a technique should show effort to prove that you've EARNED the right to use it and that you understand how the technique works. So, for every post required, it should be at least 3-4 lines of text. I don't think this is too much to ask for a technique you will be able to use for the rest of your character's career.
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:52 pm
[Yes it does matter, if you cleaning and cooking then stop Rping for a few moments and finish.
There is no point in you posting that way in the first place yu might as well auto learn it if you going be like that.
If you havn't noticed already I edited my last post]
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:53 pm
little mintchan [[i can post if i want to so get your b*tchy a** out of my business! if you can't say anything nice then shut that mouth! i'm trying to clean and cook something to eat so it dosen't matter if it's descriptive or not!]]
Havik is right...if you aren't going to put the effort into a post, don't bother posting. It's not like you're the only one we make do this... everyone has to conform to the same standard.
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 9:55 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 10:01 pm
[All we ask is that you go back and edit your training post, put some effort into it.
If you put alot of effrt into it and you make it good you writeing skills improve and yu feel good about your posts.
On top of both of those things people will notice your a good Rper and therfor respect you more and want to Rp with you. It truley is better for everyone including yurself
Sorry for typos my keys are sticking...]
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