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 Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 11:19 am
I like buff guys...... buff blacksmiths if there were a guy on this guild like that I would hunt him down and rape him.... i would track him into vegas where we would get stoned and hammered than have crazy sex in hotel room....
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 11:30 am
rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl OMG THERE ISN'T AN ICON ON HERE THAT CAN TELL YOU HOW BAD I LAUGHED WITH I READ THAT!!! XD Nice one Cheerios!!!
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 5:49 pm
awww kira thank you for saying that you would want to rape me heart but alas i would have to decline blaugh heart
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:09 pm
((Rosies back story))
Tick....
Tick....
Tick....
When the world turns its back on you, and you on it... You have only one fear, what now do you embrace? When the world goes dark, and silance strangels sound from your ears, how do you compensate? You kill them. Then again, you kill them if they are in fine health to... Just kill them. But how, how? I'll tell you how! You kill them with beauty! You kill them with cunning? You kill them, with Trapt Mannor! Allura, a devils name for a devils daughter. Allura, with dreams of feasting on souls... Allura, whom wanted just one thing, her first child! Now now now, don't get me wronge, she didn't want to bear the child, heavens no, she just wanted to kill it... Allura leaned forwards resting her head in her hands, and her elbows on her knees. The girl sat in an ornate chair, which sat in front of a large glass box, which held her greatest creation, the Man Eating Music Box... Well Child Eating Music Box, anyways... It sat behind the devil herself, ticking away, until it recieved a sacrafise!
Nothing....
Nothing....
Nothing....
A world where nothing was there, except for what was there... Nothing was truth, except for what was truth. Nothing was anything, ever... There was tangelable... But then again, so meny things where tangable, yet not real... Rosie Yubei, a quick mind, and a higher sense of things. A child of upmost respect, why because she was blind, and deft.... Yet lived as though without ailments did... But that made her a target, and when the devil comes for you masked in kindness not even a higher sense of thing can reveil that the woman you trust is the devils advocit, how are you to know what learks ahead?
"Hehehehehe..... Rosie Yubie...," A dark laugh issued from the throught of the carming lady fallowing the blind girl, "What do I have in store for you?" a sly grin spreed across the womens face. Rosie turned around, her pitch black eyes stairing right through Allura, "Well whatever you have in store is all nce and good, but can ya' please stop fallowin' me?" Allura took a step back caught off gaurd, how had she heard that... Allura had been told the yubie girl was deft... "Well you see.... Rosie is it? I have something I want to show you!" She laughed, a kind warming laugh. Rosie took this as an offer to make a new friend and began walking into Allura clutches.
"Would you lke to see a very special music box Rosie?"
"Would I ever! I always enjoy bein' around music, even if I cant always hear it."
"Good good, well turst me you'll be sure to enjoy the way it sounds."
And so it whent, Rosie fallowed Allura into her music boxes home, her own home, the house of death.
"Rosie will you please wait at the bottom of the stairs?"
"Yes miss Allura Trapt."
Allura stifeled back, how did the girl know her name? This was most chilling, and unfortunet... For only three types of people knew her by Allura Trapt, and that was the damned, the dead, and the dearly departed. That ment she must know... She had to be delt with. Allura ran up the stairs fliping switches and pulling triggers, she was ina cold sweat, a sweat of fear that she had never felt before.
"Okay Rosie will you please walk up the stair to me?"
"Sure thing..."
Rosie took hold of the hand rail walking up the first step. She calmly let go of the handrail, just as Allura had sent 3000 Volts of electricity hurteling down it. She continued up the stairs taking one step at a time. As she was about three steps up she stoped, just what Allura had wanted. Allura quikly looked down pressing a button, as the tile Rosie was on snaped close much like a bear trap. When Allura stoped though, she heard no screams, no stuggling or begging for her life. She looked up. The Yubie girl had steped onto the tile next to the bear trap looking now at the wall.
"I'lll give you a hint... Misses Trapt.... You had best run before I get up there."
Allura held her ground however. Waiting. As Rosie took another step up the stair case Allura hit a button sending a pendulum swinging towered her prey. But Rosie was not in it's path, she had taken one step back... and she simply stood there snikering as the trap slamed into the wall and Rosie crawled over it. She continued her advance up the staircase slowly, smiling... And laughing so demonicaly it chilled Allura to the core.
"Left..."
The arrows shooting out of the floor passed her by.
"Forwards..."
Rosie advanced up the staircase
"Right..."
A Giant rock fell from the cieling crushing the place Rosie once stood.
"Forwards... Backwards."
She moved up the staircase then took her step back as a lance shoot out from the wall.
"Forwards."
Rosie advanced.
"Your not running?"
Rosie stoped, now at the top of the staircase. Smiling and stairing through the shell of a person That was Allura...
"But how... Olof... and... You are no child... You are the Devil in his rightful skin!"
Allura paniced trying to run passed the girl to escape. But she was stoped by the armed of a little girl. An 11 year old girl had done what an army of 30 year old men could not do...
"Now... How should I deal with you." Rosie closed her eyes for a moment thinking of an idea, "I know just the thing."
Rosie desened the staircase walking into the midle of the room, holding Allura by the throat. Doors behind the sacrafice opened up as a chain shoot out, piercing the body of one Allura Trapt, as she was dragged into the turning gears of her own trap. As she reached the door she was raised riding on a gear before being crushed by thefour gears. But her ride through the trap only had just begun... It had been feed blood, so now it played it's haunting melody. Alluras body was dragged alonge the gears through the clockwork in the glass box. The chain had ripped through her body, and her entrails could be seen issueing form her body. At the end of the road, through the crushing gears, all the whiel the haunting melody palyed in the background. The Music box then spat out the remains of the victum, throwing it only a grate, as all of Alluras blood ran down the drain Rosie bent over the ragdoll body, "You where right... I did like the music." Rosie kicked the grate, as hinges broke open and the body feel into the grave Allura herself had dug.
The blood had been collected in the trap and was now dispened in bottles, this was to make it so Allura could dump the blood without bringing suspicion to herself, but now. As Rosie took the seat that Allura had been sitting in, some two days ago, she opened the bottle and began drinking the blood of Allura. All the whiel Smiling, and laughing to herself, humming the tune the music box had played.
Rosie set down her bottle leaving the house. It was about time she meet with some old friends. And more oft, it was time for her to get to school, or someone may come looking for her. A two days walk to get back into Oto... She would have to hurry.
((And thats basically what happened and why she was gone for so long...))
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 7:22 pm
interesting can i tell you what happened to raine?
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Posted: Sun May 25, 2008 8:08 pm
Go for it, I just posted mine because I may make referances to it.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 2:15 am
night_wraith ((Rosies back story))
Tick....
Tick....
Tick....
When the world turns its back on you, and you on it... You have only one fear, what now do you embrace? When the world goes dark, and silance strangels sound from your ears, how do you compensate? You kill them. Then again, you kill them if they are in fine health to... Just kill them. But how, how? I'll tell you how! You kill them with beauty! You kill them with cunning? You kill them, with Trapt Mannor! Allura, a devils name for a devils daughter. Allura, with dreams of feasting on souls... Allura, whom wanted just one thing, her first child! Now now now, don't get me wronge, she didn't want to bear the child, heavens no, she just wanted to kill it... Allura leaned forwards resting her head in her hands, and her elbows on her knees. The girl sat in an ornate chair, which sat in front of a large glass box, which held her greatest creation, the Man Eating Music Box... Well Child Eating Music Box, anyways... It sat behind the devil herself, ticking away, until it recieved a sacrafise!
Nothing....
Nothing....
Nothing....
A world where nothing was there, except for what was there... Nothing was truth, except for what was truth. Nothing was anything, ever... There was tangelable... But then again, so meny things where tangable, yet not real... Rosie Yubei, a quick mind, and a higher sense of things. A child of upmost respect, why because she was blind, and deft.... Yet lived as though without ailments did... But that made her a target, and when the devil comes for you masked in kindness not even a higher sense of thing can reveil that the woman you trust is the devils advocit, how are you to know what learks ahead?
"Hehehehehe..... Rosie Yubie...," A dark laugh issued from the throught of the carming lady fallowing the blind girl, "What do I have in store for you?" a sly grin spreed across the womens face. Rosie turned around, her pitch black eyes stairing right through Allura, "Well whatever you have in store is all nce and good, but can ya' please stop fallowin' me?" Allura took a step back caught off gaurd, how had she heard that... Allura had been told the yubie girl was deft... "Well you see.... Rosie is it? I have something I want to show you!" She laughed, a kind warming laugh. Rosie took this as an offer to make a new friend and began walking into Allura clutches.
"Would you lke to see a very special music box Rosie?"
"Would I ever! I always enjoy bein' around music, even if I cant always hear it."
"Good good, well turst me you'll be sure to enjoy the way it sounds."
And so it whent, Rosie fallowed Allura into her music boxes home, her own home, the house of death.
"Rosie will you please wait at the bottom of the stairs?"
"Yes miss Allura Trapt."
Allura stifeled back, how did the girl know her name? This was most chilling, and unfortunet... For only three types of people knew her by Allura Trapt, and that was the damned, the dead, and the dearly departed. That ment she must know... She had to be delt with. Allura ran up the stairs fliping switches and pulling triggers, she was ina cold sweat, a sweat of fear that she had never felt before.
"Okay Rosie will you please walk up the stair to me?"
"Sure thing..."
Rosie took hold of the hand rail walking up the first step. She calmly let go of the handrail, just as Allura had sent 3000 Volts of electricity hurteling down it. She continued up the stairs taking one step at a time. As she was about three steps up she stoped, just what Allura had wanted. Allura quikly looked down pressing a button, as the tile Rosie was on snaped close much like a bear trap. When Allura stoped though, she heard no screams, no stuggling or begging for her life. She looked up. The Yubie girl had steped onto the tile next to the bear trap looking now at the wall.
"I'lll give you a hint... Misses Trapt.... You had best run before I get up there."
Allura held her ground however. Waiting. As Rosie took another step up the stair case Allura hit a button sending a pendulum swinging towered her prey. But Rosie was not in it's path, she had taken one step back... and she simply stood there snikering as the trap slamed into the wall and Rosie crawled over it. She continued her advance up the staircase slowly, smiling... And laughing so demonicaly it chilled Allura to the core.
"Left..."
The arrows shooting out of the floor passed her by.
"Forwards..."
Rosie advanced up the staircase
"Right..."
A Giant rock fell from the cieling crushing the place Rosie once stood.
"Forwards... Backwards."
She moved up the staircase then took her step back as a lance shoot out from the wall.
"Forwards."
Rosie advanced.
"Your not running?"
Rosie stoped, now at the top of the staircase. Smiling and stairing through the shell of a person That was Allura...
"But how... Olof... and... You are no child... You are the Devil in his rightful skin!"
Allura paniced trying to run passed the girl to escape. But she was stoped by the armed of a little girl. An 11 year old girl had done what an army of 30 year old men could not do...
"Now... How should I deal with you." Rosie closed her eyes for a moment thinking of an idea, "I know just the thing."
Rosie desened the staircase walking into the midle of the room, holding Allura by the throat. Doors behind the sacrafice opened up as a chain shoot out, piercing the body of one Allura Trapt, as she was dragged into the turning gears of her own trap. As she reached the door she was raised riding on a gear before being crushed by thefour gears. But her ride through the trap only had just begun... It had been feed blood, so now it played it's haunting melody. Alluras body was dragged alonge the gears through the clockwork in the glass box. The chain had ripped through her body, and her entrails could be seen issueing form her body. At the end of the road, through the crushing gears, all the whiel the haunting melody palyed in the background. The Music box then spat out the remains of the victum, throwing it only a grate, as all of Alluras blood ran down the drain Rosie bent over the ragdoll body, "You where right... I did like the music." Rosie kicked the grate, as hinges broke open and the body feel into the grave Allura herself had dug.
The blood had been collected in the trap and was now dispened in bottles, this was to make it so Allura could dump the blood without bringing suspicion to herself, but now. As Rosie took the seat that Allura had been sitting in, some two days ago, she opened the bottle and began drinking the blood of Allura. All the whiel Smiling, and laughing to herself, humming the tune the music box had played.
Rosie set down her bottle leaving the house. It was about time she meet with some old friends. And more oft, it was time for her to get to school, or someone may come looking for her. A two days walk to get back into Oto... She would have to hurry.
((And thats basically what happened and why she was gone for so long...)) holy s**t this is good how long did it take you to come up with this AWESOME work of literary art sweatdrop its both intertaining and horrifying to read at the same time yet not to gorey in the details of allura's death burning_eyes from start to finish i was drawn into the story and i want more gonk
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 3:05 pm
^.^ thank you very much. And i'm not sure if I'll write much more super creepy stuff until out next time skip. And by the by, it took me about, thirty minutes start to finish, I skipped spell checking it.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 3:11 pm
im good at writing about gore
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 3:15 pm
*attacks Night* MY LOVE!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 3:21 pm
well anyway what happened to raine was (I'll just do a summery)
Hatchi basically grabbed him and shif off the street and took off out ot Oto. Raine just kind of went along with him because he wanted an adventure but had no clue they were actually on a "S" rank mission. At first they went to Konoha where they didn't have any trouble they ate some ramen and taked to rin about how badly she hated her village and than Raine had a little moment where he was talking about loyalty to your country. after that they were heading to taki. and snuck into the village... that's when poor raine got ditched because level went dormant. so heres an eight year old boy with no training in a hostile village with no one to protect him. He meant Hiro and some other boy (sorry kira I forgot his name) they were all haps and all until Kusari (basically a rip off of zabuza) comes over screaming at Raine about papers Raine gets all defensive and starts bitching back at him, but Kusari is totally hardcore and breaks every bone in raines tiny body with a tap of his gaint sword. Raine goes down bloody and uncounicious. Hiro feels bad so he heals all of raines wounds but he can't heal his bones. while raine is out Kusari and hiro get in a fight and raine just lays on the ground. Pretty soon Hiro carries him up to these springs that heal his bones and raine wakes up but he can't move for quite a while. all the time Kusari is still bitching and wanting to kill raine. so shif comes along and raine can finally move around they both are about to flee from the village when the kage comes up and puts them in a genjutsu. Both their minds are fried and they drop like flies. the kage throws them into some sort of portal jutsu and bam they end up back hear mad as haters... walking around until thank god yuumei b***h slapped their minds back into place.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:35 pm
Rosie was going to do the same thing with Hana and Frost to get a summoning Jutsu biggrin .. T.T But alas she had to back down because she did not have the prerequisits.
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 4:50 pm
lol!! With Rosie and Raito...I have this...scene stuck in my head between them...Like....she said head counts and i was like 'dude...' I got a pic of them like...after he adopts her or you know...right before...XD something happening and he kneels down in front of her and hugs her adn says "You know Rosie, I'm here for you. Whatever you need to say, I'm here to listen. I love you, Rosie, you know that, right?" and she confesses everything that happened about the time she was away and i was all 'awwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!' XD
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 5:29 pm
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 5:34 pm
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