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 Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:45 pm
|♪| Elvis! Elvis! |♫|~ ♫ ~ Teehee! **ish watching Grease** XD I love this song... X'D G'night all. I won't be on later. I stayed up ALL NIGHT last night eating Ice Cream flavored Skittles and Tropical Starburst, as well as getting pelted with slobbery/sticky marshmallows. gonk **goes to finish her piccyture of her OC's for a reference for avi edits while watching Grease** ~ ♪ ~ |♫| Keep that pelvis far from me! |♪|
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:09 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:24 pm
Why?
*sings random songs from Rent*
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:31 pm
Miri, shall I share with you my win of talking my mother into buying me a Python book? :o
( And by Python, I mean a web coding language named after Monty Python's comedy troupe, not a snake. :3 )
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:44 pm
huh? Share programing language?
I fail as a writer because I can't write sad
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:57 pm
xD Nono Miri.
I convinced my mother to buy me a book. That was a bit of win right there.
You said you fail as a writer.
I'm offering to share the bit of win so you no longer fail. :3
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:58 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:59 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:07 pm
*massages Miri's head and wrists* I have faith in you dear friend! heart
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:11 pm
I am forever destine to never be satisfied with anything I do.
It's incredibly frustraiting that I can't transfer the thoughts in my head into text, especially with this fanfic, where many people are waiting for me to finish the next chapter.
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:20 pm
You mean...you can't word it, or figure out if it's right or something? sad
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:25 pm
Well, there are a lot of parts of the story where I have event A and event C written fully, but I haven't thought up an event B to tie the two together. The part I left off at in Chapter 3 has that problem. I have all the important parts, but it needs not-so-important parts to lengthen it out and make it flow more naturally.
Another problem I have is that it's hard for me to make good descriptions. I have so many fight scenes, but it's really hard to describe hacking and slashing in an interesting way every time. I can't abbreviate it, either, because the characters are talking while they're fighting.
Right now I'm trying to fill the gaps inbetween the important parts of Chapter 3, so I can finally finish it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:29 pm
Oh I hate when that happens. gonk
So far I haven't really come across it much in the story I'm currently writing...but it's like...you know what happens in the beginning, and what happens in the end.
But what about the middle? That part...gets tedious. Because usually one event leads to another and stuff happens because of that. sad But then when writing the middle part, sometimes you add something and realize it'll change the ending.
I almost did that today. sweatdrop
I always feel like I'm repeating too many words, or making descriptions too brief that aren't supposed to be...except when describing the way a character looks...I feel like I overdo that in the beginning of stories at times. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:34 pm
Gweh, it's even worse when I have to break from writing to do research. I need to know some specific things from the game I'm writing about, so have to search for it onine...
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