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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:56 am
Narkosa2512 Cobra_X Diadem took Mauske (who has a shattered femur) not to the hospital, but put her on a cot in the middle of the fire country...
These seems like a bad plan, considering the massive amount of pain involved with a shattered femur and the overall threat to her life it is to not her her treated immediately (and instead carry her around to other areas). Wow you shattered her femur that is the single most strongest bone in the body. Its cause Sai's badass
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:00 am
Indeed. o:
Edit: I wish I had the nerve to approve bloodlines and stuff. I just get really pissed off at spelling/grammar mistakes; which hinders my ability to perceive things correctly. I doubt it'd be nice to have someone correcting several points in the RP sample, and then saying approved.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:01 am
Well I am just amazed he did something like that. Yes that is going to be a very painful recovery.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:07 am
ღღღღ   ............................... ................................ I'm glad that Mauske got in the way, and my RPC was saved from a broken femur. Though, I think she could have wrote the reaction to her RPC's broken leg, a lot better than she did. =/
................... ........................................................ஐ✬ Everything falls apart Even the people that never frown Eventually break down (The sacrifice of hiding in a lie) Everything has to end sometime We're out of time, to watch it all unwind The sacrifice is never knowing why I never walked away Why I played myself this way Now I see, you were testing me And that pushes me away. ஐ✬
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:42 am
LadyShirahime93 ღღღღ   ............................... ................................ I'm glad that Mauske got in the way, and my RPC was saved from a broken femur. Though, I think she could have wrote the reaction to her RPC's broken leg, a lot better than she did. =/
................... ........................................................ஐ✬ Everything falls apart Even the people that never frown Eventually break down (The sacrifice of hiding in a lie) Everything has to end sometime We're out of time, to watch it all unwind The sacrifice is never knowing why I never walked away Why I played myself this way Now I see, you were testing me And that pushes me away. ஐ✬ No offense to mint if she reads this... but she could use a LOT of improvement.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 10:57 am
Metaphorically Insane LadyShirahime93 ღღღღ   ............................... ................................ I'm glad that Mauske got in the way, and my RPC was saved from a broken femur. Though, I think she could have wrote the reaction to her RPC's broken leg, a lot better than she did. =/
................... ........................................................ஐ✬ Everything falls apart Even the people that never frown Eventually break down (The sacrifice of hiding in a lie) Everything has to end sometime We're out of time, to watch it all unwind The sacrifice is never knowing why I never walked away Why I played myself this way Now I see, you were testing me And that pushes me away. ஐ✬ No offense to mint if she reads this... but she could use a LOT of improvement. Ooh.. I was talking about Mauske... But Mint does need some improvement.. And so does Vanilla... I want to stab people when I read their writings, because I'm trying to figure out what the heck they are writing! I see so many mistakes in punctuation, spelling, grammar, capitalization... *keeps listing more* -rants-
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:06 am
LadyShirahime93 Narkosa2512 Cobra_X Diadem took Mauske (who has a shattered femur) not to the hospital, but put her on a cot in the middle of the fire country...
These seems like a bad plan, considering the massive amount of pain involved with a shattered femur and the overall threat to her life it is to not her her treated immediately (and instead carry her around to other areas). Wow you shattered her femur that is the single most strongest bone in the body. Its cause Sai's badass She took a direct hit from a Konaga Bloodline-empowered flying leg stomp... she's lucky I was aiming for the LEG...
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:15 am
Hey Cobra I know you over looked it but can you check my Drunken Boxing
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:43 am
Cobra_X LadyShirahime93 Narkosa2512 Cobra_X Diadem took Mauske (who has a shattered femur) not to the hospital, but put her on a cot in the middle of the fire country...
These seems like a bad plan, considering the massive amount of pain involved with a shattered femur and the overall threat to her life it is to not her her treated immediately (and instead carry her around to other areas). Wow you shattered her femur that is the single most strongest bone in the body. Its cause Sai's badass She took a direct hit from a Konaga Bloodline-empowered flying leg stomp... she's lucky I was aiming for the LEG...A nice, badass maybe...?
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 11:57 am
Wow, the drunken boxing is pretty cool!
...Did you make all of it up? It's pretty creative, but it does need to be grammar nazi'd. I'll stick one of the two above on the job.
One question, about winning the fights, I think we should simply say that the user has to engage in the fights. "Winning" a fight is a subjective thing in a Role play... so what we'll do is change it to this:
For a drunken boxer to obtain the first rank, they need to fight 3 times in a battle that lasts the full number of rounds in which he is drunk.
The same will follow for the rest of the ranks...(but before they can learn the techniques, they have to at least be the rank 1 below...)
Example: A genin could learn a C-rank taijutsu move, but not B-rank ones.
...and we should probably limit the number of C-rank moves a genin can learn as well.
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:06 pm
Cobra_X
...Did you make all of it up? It's pretty creative, but it does need to be grammar nazi'd. I'll stick one of the two above on the job.
One heaping of Grammar Nazi-ing coming right up!!! blaugh *is happy* Although... I'm not sure how I'm going to do that. =/
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:10 pm
lol, hey Shirahime! smile
How are you? Lucky save back there at the volcano eh? A broken femur would've been really bad. You wouldn't be able to travel back to sand. crying
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:12 pm
Here's the code version of his post...
...just send it back to me in code after it's been grammar-ized. Thanks! heart [align=center][size=18][color=darkblue]Drunken Fist[/color][/size][/align]
[img]http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd293/KAHTHR/Naruto/Team Gai/Rock Lee/naruto_ch210_p19special.jpg[/img]
Description:By drinking great quantities of spirits, the Drunken Boxer makes his body tougher, his strength mightier, fury stronger, and he becomes suppler—but there is a price to pay. The Drunken Boxer must recover from his binges and loses the ability to perform his other skills while drunk. The Drunken Boxer might also become sluggish of mind, slower to move, become a mean drunk—the spirits changing his disposition—and in the worse cases, become addicted to drink. But those who master this odd fighting art become nearly indestructible. [align=center]
[b]The Drunken Stupor[/b] This has it's advantages and disadvantages. All drunken boxing attacks are more powerful than if done sober. Attacks seem random and very hard to block or dodge. Becomes very lmber giving a drunken boxer a greater chance to dodge. Unable to do any jutsus while drunk weaving hand seals becomes to complex.
[b]The Hangover[/b] This is what happens when you are hungver. Severe headache stomach pains sensitive to light and sound Sluggish movement
[size=18][color=darkblue]Ranks[/color][/size] Buzz Brawler Drunk last for four post. Can Learn all E and D rank attacks, plus one C rank. can only use breaking wind once. Hangover last for two post.
Tipsy fighter To obtain this rank one must go through three fights and survive through all the hangovers. Drunk last for six post Can learn all C rank attacks plus one B rank attack Can use breaking wind twice. Hangover last for three post
Drunken Boxer To obtain this rank one must go through five fights and win at least three. Also must haft to suffer through the hangovers Drunk last for ten post Can learn all B rank plus one A rank attack (Cannot learn Tiger punches at ghost) Can use breaking wind three times Hang over last for four post
Drunken master To become a master one must go through eight fights winning at least half of the fights. Also you must use Bear drunk on honey and fracture three ribs to becom a master. Drunk last for twelve post Can learn all attacks, plus all attacks are raised by one rank can use braking wind five times. hangover last for four post.
Name: Breaking wind Rank: E Element: N/A Description: This is exactly what it sounds like. The user farts creating a cloud of noxious fumes that will make most people draw back. This also helps giving the user one more post to their drunk.
Name: Water to wine no jutsu Rank: E Element: Chakra Description: This a very simple jutsu for any drunken boxer. The user be proficient in making alcohol they can take a bottle of water and infuse it with chakra. Fermenting the water it turns into 100 proof sake.. (Yum)
Name:Iron Jug Rank: D Element: Taijutsu Description: This is another simple attack infusing chakra into the jug making it as hard as iron. The user will smack the opponent in the head without damaging their jug.
Name: Hung out to dry Rank: D Element: Taijutsu Description: This is a clothes line that if it hits it's opponent they will be knocked down for a single post. (Or a single paragraph for our better Rper *looks at the screen* yeah you know who I am talking to.)
Name: Numb Drunk Rank: D Element: Taijutsu Description: During drunken state the user can focus his body becoming immune to low rank Taijutsu attack. If hit by projectile weapons will still do bodily damage the user will not feel it until after the jutsu wears off. (Last for 4 post. Two post if you are a Buzz Brawler.)
Name: Grizz cub got into the wine. Rank: C Element: Taijutsu Description: This is more of a counter to a attack. The opponent throws a kick the Drunkne Boxer can catch the kick with their own leg. This happens when the opponent kicks the user fold their leg over their oppponent's with the opponent's leg trapped where the back of the Drunken Boxers knee is. As the opponent is trapped the drunken boxer can only strike three time before they haft to let go. These strikes aren't powerful but they do hurt.
Name: Spin the bottle Rank: C Description: User roll their opponent in their arms, Like a butter churn then giving the opponent a big wet kiss at the end. To understand how this works hold out your hands like you are making yourself a human basketball hoop. That is the position for spin the bottle.
Name: Wobbly whip Rank: C Element: Taijutsu Description: This is similar to the Hun out to ddry attack. This attack is much faster and does more damage than hung out to dry. If this attack lands then the opponent is knocked down for 2 posts (Or two paragraphs for the better rpers))
Name: Drinking song Rank: C Element:N/A Description: The user will sing a drunken song. In doing so this will infuriate opponent while giving the user a speed boost. (Note: this will not give the user a massive speed boost the rate of punches and attacks will come faster.)
Name: Drunken Ogre belches Rank: B Element:N/A Description: The user while drunk will belch within close proximity of their opponent. The belch iis so filled with wine spirits that it will intoxicate the opponent for two post. One will be where the opponent is drunk the other post will have them feeling the effects of a mild hangover (Mild headache sore muscles sluggish movement,)
Stumbling Elephant Rank:B Element:Taijutsu Description: User stumbles around throwing his weight into his movement. If the users stumbles into an opponent it can knock them off balance, knock them down or even knock the opponent out. This also can knock down heavy structure such as walls and trees so be careful when using this, it can be hazardous to the user as well.
Name: Dumb Drunk Rank: B Element Taijutsu Description: This is the second level to the previous Numb Drunk. This time how ever the the user will not be effect by any taijutsu under its own rank. (Meaning C rank or lower will have no effect) The same rules do apply sharp edge weapons will do damage but the user will not feel it until the handover is in effect. (This last for six post. Thee if you are a Buzz Brawler.)
Name: Bear drunk on honey Rank: A Element: Taijutsu Description: User pulls their opponent into a bear hug. Gripping tightly the user can stop their opponent from breathing and will fracture ribs if held for a short time.
Name:Grizzly hugs his other Rank: A Element: Taijutsu Description: This it the second part to Bear drunk on honey. The grip tightens and this will break ribs. If this attack isn't broken in a full post then the user will be able to break their opponents spine.
Name: Tiger punches at ghost Rank: A Element: Taijutsu Description: In their hallucinogenic state a Drunken Boxer can see invisible, ethereal, high speed movement they can track and even strike at their opponent. (Note: This is NOT like sharingan or byakugan it can't be use constantly only for four post. This doesn't mean that the user will be able to hit there opponent eiith just be able to strike at them.))[/align]
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:13 pm
...Wow Cobra, so deligent in your work. You're amazing you know that and really busy as well. lol
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Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2010 12:16 pm
White Water Lilly lol, hey Shirahime! smile How are you? Lucky save back there at the volcano eh? A broken femur would've been really bad. You wouldn't be able to travel back to sand. crying I'm perfectly, perfect! Thanks for asking! I got asked if I wanted to graduate high school a year earlier. I'm not sure if I'm happy or not about this yet, though. *glomps* How are you? Indeed it was a lucky save. I actually had no idea how I was going to get out of that. O_O The only thing I could think of, was that out of reaction she took a step back; but Sai probably would have got her anyway. And it's not like I could have said "She jumped out of the way before the kick hit her." simply because that would be Godmoding... and I'm not a fan of that. Call me crazy, but I like RPing as if it was really happening, and not a whole bunch of super powerful people on a drug high. =/
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