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 Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:37 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:39 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:40 pm
Miriam The Bat You know, I should probally start commenting on other people's work in the way I'd like people to comment on my work. Honestly and wordfully. KH character: Tattoos are kind of strange on a hero-type KH character, but if you're gonna have them, make sure they're more visible. You might want to make the sleeves shorter or non-existant so that the tattoo arm bands are easy to see. I like the belt and the chain, but they should be chunkier. Everything in KH art is large and visible. The design lacks zippers. All the major characters have outfits that includes zippers, even if they're useless (Donald's hat?). Stick a zipper on the jacket or even the pants. How about pants that turn into shorts when you unzip the extra length of fabric? The shoes need to be detailed. All of the main characters have very detailed sneakers, sometimes making them really annoying to draw. Also, brown doesn't seem right for a KH character. Try a flashier color, like yellow or red. Mix them up. Most characters have a large range of different colors in their outfits, even if it's only in the acessories. A unique symbol (besides the tattoos) would make him stand out better too. Like Sora's crown necklace, or the zipper pull on Roxas's shirt. Man, now I feel bad.
Lol Thanks,
I wasnt really attempting to make it a Kingdom Hearts charcter in the begining, but my friends told me to do it. (they've been bugging me for a while to do it) So I made it simple.
But If I redo, I'll keep all of that in mind, Thank you. ^^
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:49 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:50 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:53 pm
Do we still get gold for lurking? I've been stuck at 42g even though i've been browsing and refreshing for a while now...
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 9:02 pm
I dunno...I hope so. neutral
*just made some pudding for a night of roleplaying* ninja
Whoa...my mom's backspace button is...jammed I think... eek
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 9:06 pm
My new mule is getting it...
but I need his Activation email!
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 9:21 pm
Puddin's ready. xd
Oy...my friend's mom is doing one of her things again... rolleyes
She told my friend that if she got a job, she wouldn't have to go on a two week camping trip with them. gonk She tried to get a job, but couldn't.
Now she's going to be gone for two weeks. stare
Ugh my summer's starting our reeeal great... stressed One friend went to New Jersey and the other is now going to Del Mar for a camping trip she doesn't want to go on... crying
*looks at Gaia and my brother longingly*
Plus Brandon left... crying
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 9:34 pm
Taylor, where did your one friend go in New Jersery? :0 I'm dragging Emi down here on Friday xD I live in the southern part, close to Atlantic City.
Mine's starting out bad too, My boyfriend's father will no longer let me see him. So we have to have a secret relationship, but my boyfriend is too nervous to stand up for himself. It's ashame too, because both my parents said he could move in with us u_u; Oh well, maybe Rory will change his mind in a few months. *snugs him virtually*
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:01 pm
That sucks... gonk
I don't know where she went. sweatdrop All I know is she's visiting relatives. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:02 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:05 pm
HI MERI! xd *huggles*
...Well...so much for the lurkiness. xd sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:11 pm
Will Meriko ever open her slot?? crying
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:23 pm
LegolasPrinceofMirkwood Will Meriko ever open her slot?? crying
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