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 Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:11 pm
The Kakuzu girl's eyes widened suddenly as the aura formed around Drago, and an instant later, he made a swift seal. At first, the girl felt nothing, yet as she glanced back up at the shinobi, she felt a sudden weight press down upon her...Rather, she felt heavy...Increasingly heavy. And if that wasnt enough, she found it even harder to move even her fingers as she remained frozen in place.
A paralyzation technique!?...No. What she felt now was something much more primal.
Fear. The pure intimidating front that this man emitted right now struck fear into her very core...And Furanken was just fine with that. In fact, she was coming to adore such a feeling.
The very image of blood, of pain, of death! They all raced through her mind, tickling her deep down as she smiled then, more then that, even a small chuckle escaped her a second later.
"Excellent, Drago-sama..." She whispered in a shaken, yet evidently amused tone as she finally grew a sense of respect for this man. She looked over at the woman beside her. "Oi, you ready, Little Miss Princess?"
(70/)
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 4:34 pm
((just so you two know Axel is blond too. there is a picture of her in the ooc forum.))
Axel smiled as the technique drago used was one she had wanted, it was a gas filled with chakra coming out of his pores. Drago had just enough time to make another handseal as he would begin to freeze, "Hahahahaha," she laughed as she watched him begin to encase himself in poisonous ice. "i've already set the die in place, but... s**t!" she said as her head began to get cold, she quickly made a set of handseals as she released the genjutsu upon herself to keep the chakra Drago had used from freezing over. Axel quickly ran to the other girl and did the handseals once more then touched her to release the genjutsu effect on her before she would break down completely and then begin to die from the chakra freezing inside of her head. once kakuzo was released Axel turned back to drago, "well you could have killed us there, but you cant win if you try, you would have to do jutsu without handseals if you wanted to escape, and besides that. if you could do jutsu like that, you could end up killing yourself." she said in full spirits as she anounced her victorious win in mere seconds. "Demon iceberg: Chakra Trap. a jutsu that freezes water vapor upon chakra from a body source." she said as she waited fro Kakuzo to respond.
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:03 pm
Furanken didnt quite know what it was, but something about this woman irritated her greatly. However, she had to admit, the lady was skilled, and that was probably the 'kindest' thought the Kakuzu girl had on Axel. As the Mizu touched her however, the 'intimidating aura' vanished...However, fear still remained. Drago's powers had proved his strength to her already.
As she listened to the woman's explanation, she raised a brow. "Water vapor?" She repeated slowly as she turned her gaze to the blonde beside her. "If we increase the amount of moisure in the air, can that increase the effectiveness of your technique?" She inquired, though she was already in the process of severing her heart once more, this time sending it towards the Mask of Fire.
"For example...Steam?"
Or was the technique more focused on chakra...?
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:25 pm
Axel looked at Kakuzo and smiled, "no need to, the ice is unbreakable from the inside, its also not meltable." she said as she made a set of handseals and would ready herself once again to begin a chant, but first she unrolled a small scroll and opened it releasing a set of small dolls, each one with one more tail then the previous one. it started with 1 tail and ended with nine. she quickly grabbed a second scroll and sealed the other dolls other then the second doll. she set the second doll on the second scroll as she put the first scroll away. she then focused her chakra and waited to begin the chant.
((sorry drago, but i'm removing your demon, also, no need to post unless you want to try something, because any chakra exerted from your body will freeze on instant. also you'll still be alive.))
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:53 pm
((your ice is unmeltable? Okay but not exactly unpassable?))
Drago looked and his left arm started to work. Drago only watched himself trying to be froze was hard. But then his right arm started to activate at the same time. The ice keeping his body from being froze. The Right keeping his body heated so that he could move. Then Drago started to work all together. Drago was speed. Nothing could stop his body from moving. As he began to move his body in such a speed his body would begin to separate. As his body began to separate the ice that was kept in would still be standing there. Drago would appear standing next to the ice.
"Oh you ladies play dirty..."
Drago looked and he performed a set of handseals.
"Multiple Clone No Jutsu!"
As Drago said that about a hundred clones would stand were Drago was standing. Drago would fade back with the clones. Each one of the clones rushing in with Pooch most excellent attack. one hundred charging elephants they would resemble.
"You want a War! Come get one!"
The Drago's said as the doujutsu activated.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:12 am
((hahaha, nicely done, but any and all chakra that comes off of your body will freeze. so you are still trapped and worse off you have a huge field of icecubes around you.))
Axel watched as Drago began to form a series of clones having narrowly escaped the first prison, although it was starting to catch him aswell. "a large ice cube should be fun." Axel began to chuckle as the clones froze almost instantly, not giving them a single move since they were pure chakra. Drago was now to his final move, he had created a large field of ice to try to get through, which wouldn't work without drawing out more of the nibi's power. Drago would find that his right arm was completely frozen, having used it to access the nibi's power. Axel quickly focused as she had to start the removal of the nibi before someone else tried to break the ice. she then began to ready herself to take the Nibi, he was most-likely stuck inbetween all of his clones with the amount of ice around him and chakra he had, he would be frozen solid if he tried to escape.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:14 am
"When facing such severe odds...It would be wise to retreat. However, that just isnt the case here..." Furanken mused as she drew out a handful of kunai, several of which had small pouches tied to their ends. "So instead...We'll just blow a hole right through the ********' middle!" She shouted, throwing the pouch-holding kunai above the oncoming horde before following up with a second set of blades effectively severing the pouches as many little scraps of paper fluttered down.
By now, the reconnection of the heard was complete as the tendril-beast slipped out of her body, standing beside her now.
"Katon - Zukkoku!"
In one groan, the golem exhaled a great breath of fire towards the mob, as well as the explosive seals that drizzled down amongst their ranks. And once the first seal was set alight, it exploded...Setting a chain reaction for the rest. A shout of surprise came from the Kakuzu girl several moments later as she felt herself drop to one knee, just for a moment.
Fatigue...Was finally taking effect...And after severing her heart so much in such a short amount of time, the blonde was beginning to doubt she could do it again without injuring herself. Hastily then, she called the Fire-Tendril-Beast back into her as she allowed her heart to reconnect once more, using chakra to mend the two halves together.
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:27 am
((First off. One reason why your jutsu shouldn't be at full strength is because of my zodiac seal. Which causes Taijutsus and Ninjutsus at full strength to be weaker.... unless the technique is canceled. It is active through the whole battle to anybody that enters.. Secondly the thing I have a problem with is that you used like three different ways to describe your technique. The First one is that it has to be water based...Poison is not necessarily poison based...the Second one is that you say that any chakra that comes out of the pores freezes...which one is it? Why isn't this technique submitted to the technique Compendium? Thirdly. you are placing a weakness on my Left and right arms. -Offense- After being experimented on Drago has been given arm full of a tattoos. However these tattoos arn't regular tattoos. They are acutally seals that cause his right arm to burn at all times. Drago can release all of this power at one time. Causing his arm to glow a bright red. If Drago can connect with this right arm whatever Drago touches will turn into ash. Simply because of how hot his arm is acutally burning. So...Since I do belive my character is stronger how would your made up...stop my made up? Some food for thought....))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:46 am
((drago, the zodiac seal, didn't see that one. the poison freezing was just a bonus from the actual gas freezing and being trapped inside of the ice. so the poison never froze from the technique directly, it froze from contact with super cold water vapor around it. well its actually any chakra that exits your boy becomes frozen, it doesn't have to be just the pores. if your arm is so hot that it can turn anything to ash, then we'd have to see how others feel on the subject of an unmeltable ice technique[found in hidden light] to turns everything to ash because of extreme heat. another thing is, the heat of the arm would obviously be large amounts of concentrated chakra, which then changes to a fire element inside of the arm and super heats to melt/burn through anything that is its way. which would also mean that once the chakra began to exit the arm as super heat it would be hit by the freezing water vapor. which being unmeltable vs turn to ash, would would bring us back to we need someone else to decide. thats all i got.))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 8:51 am
((Your not using Extreme cold so how wouldn't your technique melt. what MY technique is..its an alchemy seal too. So while the ice is melting, it is being trans mutated too...but yeah...I will get another mod down here to read this battle...))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 9:37 am
((Jeez... Much of these things doesn't seem right to me.
The first thing I'm going to address is the Ice. That move seems like an instant god mod right there... Unbreakable from the inside as well as unmeltable... Although I'm fully aware of the Mizu Clans ability to make rather hard ice that seems unbreakable, I found that there is a way to create the illusion that the ice is unmeltable. Haku is able to use his chakra to repeatedly create layers of ice upon the mirrors that would have otherwise melted by combining his Wind and Water Based Chakra. So, unless you were doing that, I don't believe it's unmeltable, period.
The second this is those tattoos of yours Drago. The only reference of those experiment for me was right now. Also, this is probably the first time that I know about that you have used those... But the ability to burn things straight to Ash? That too seems like God mod. All you would have to do to win would be to place on finger on the person and that would be an ultimate god mod...
Third, I have to agree on Metal Mist for the poison part... It doesn't have to be water based or whatever to freeze. But I would only have to say that because of it being frozen, it would fall to the ground in ball-like ice spheres that would be hard to see, not into a pillar like many would think... But on that note, wouldn't the cold also affect your friends seeing that the technique doesn't exclude them from having the "water vapor upon a body source" freeze as well. So, in using that one technique the only person that would probably have been spared by the technique would be the person that cast the technique...
Lastly, Drago's Nibi includes speed. Taking that into account, it would have forced chakra into the molecules, causing them to speed up heating anything around it. Although I really hate to think this, he could actually pass through most substances, including ice, just by having his molecules vibrate fast enough that can slip through other solids of molecules although I'd suppose he'd have severe internal damage as there is no 100% way to have the molecules rearrange back to where they were causing major internal problems. The only safe thing that can be done is causing friction from the body to heat the atmosphere around himself to halt ice from forming on him but not around him.
My summary: Ice technique looks to me like a God Mod because of the Unbreakable and Unmeltable parts. Not only that, your friends would have also been frozen in place since I do not see anything that would have excluded them from it. The tattoos seems a bit cheap so I'm dubbing them "the Cheapest set of Tattoos this guild has ever seen. I can say that Drago can use the Nibi to speed up his molecules for heat but no more than that unless he wants major internal damage as well as DNA deformities.
This is my ruling... I feel like a powerful master named Bill Gates. ninja ))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 10:32 am
((Bone- here is the technique[which if one or more of my techs aren't in the compendium then blame Komen, i sent each technique to him to be put in there. alsoblame Ace if the techs are to strong, he approved them.]Demon Iceberg: Chakra Trap- the first technique that is needed for the series. this technique forms using the water vapor in the air to condense upon a person's chakra and freeze. if their chakra is vast then it will form a large iceberg trapping them in it and slowing the flow of chakra. this acts as a prison to demon, curse or beast seal, or enchanted weapons(with their own chakra) wielders to stop them temporarily and give them time to "cool off." the ice can only be broken from the outside.____ when i used this, i added the Extreme cold technique from the hidden light village to make all of my ice techniques unmeltable. i played fair and square, besides, and it does say in te technique that it condenses upon A person's chakra.))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 12:08 pm
((Yes, but if fails to state that it is upon your choice. Thought it may say "A person's chakra," that still doesn't rule out any other person within the immediate area. For all we know, that "A person's chakra" could be one of your friends or that golem. The wording upon that description had been a downfall upon it's original usage never stating "a target ninja of the user's choice." With that phrase in the description, I would have stated that the technique was justified and Drago's in a bind.
As for the Unmeltable part, alrighty then. I didn't see that before and now I have. lol
But wait! I have yet to post! So Drago may still be saved. mrgreen SPLEE!!! MY TURN!))
Ginsa would appear over the fight, having ran from the village gates. Without a single handseal, Ginsa created five clones around him and they all placed their hands in front of them. In a down pour, they launched Blood Kunai's everywhere down below them breaking the ice from the outside chunk by chunk as well as bing incredibly deadly for anyone who gets cut by them.
Ginsa's emotionless face merely gazed upon the battle field as his blood continued to pour out of his hand down towards the fighting below while the always active Blood Rejuvenation was in effect.
((Ya, ya. Call me cheap or messed up but I know when I can do things. Besides, I want in the fun too since I was already coming here! *Happy face*))
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Posted: Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:13 pm
((Oh bugger...))
Furanken managed to get back to her feet, but froze as a shadow appeared in front of her, and soon that single shadow was accompanied by several more. Her eyes widening suddenly, she redirected her gaze towards the sky. All she saw was a downpour of crimson blades descending upon the entire area. Cursing under her breath, she bit her lip.
"I cant deal with this right now!" She hissed, evidently angered by the arrival of the new opponent.
Gripping her katana then, she lashed to the side, allowing the blade to break down to it's whip-like form, though the movement allowed the blade to sweep away quite a few of the blades that came close to her. What she hadnt anticipated however, was a constant barrage.
Swinging again, she barely managed to knock any more, though a moment later, she felt a splitting pain in her side.
One had cut her...Several moments later another managed to embed itself in her shoulder...Then another in her thigh...
Once more, the blonde felt herself drop to her knees. While she could've probably batted a few more away with her tendrils, fatigue was taking it's toll...
She was only a genin, after all.
(96/)
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