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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 6:48 pm
Chakra level and Chakra Control is still incorrect.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:03 pm
SparrowNara Sparrow Yamanaka ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoCharacter Name: Sparrow Yamanaka Nicknames: In, Ina Title(s): none Rank: academy student Village: Mist, KiriBackground InfoPhysical DescriptionAge: 14 Sex: Female Hair Color: white Natural Eye Color: blue/ green Body Type: Curvy, very pretty for her age, she gets mistaken for a 16 year old because she is so gorgeous. Distinguishing Features: She always has her hair pulled or parted over one eye, and because of this she has her own unique hair pin that is always in her hair.---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoBloodline, Clan, or Demon: Applying for Yamanaka Bloodline/Clan Stage: None yet Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: None yet
1. 2. 3. Companion Info.Companion Type: (dogs, bugs, etc...) Companion Name: (name of companion if applicable)
 Bug Evolutions: (Place Aburame Clan bug evolutions below with the effects of the evolution; provide link to the evolution post) 1. (ex: fire resistance- fire jutsus C rank and lower do not affect the bugs) 2. 3. 4. Transplant InfoBloodline/Clan Transplant: None yet Transplant Stage: None yet Abilities of Transplant: (Provide basic info on your transplant) 1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------Shinobi ProfessionShinobi Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefit: Increased Chakra Pool: Ninjutsu specialists' heavy dependence on the ability to use jutsus, they train themselves to increase their chakra reserves. (the bonuses apply after the medium/high chakra level benefits have been calculated) Learning Information: Ninjutsu Specialists receive a -1 post learning bonus when learning ninjutsu, but receive a + 1 post penalty for learning genjutsu and a +2 post penalty for learning taijutsu/weapon techniques and styles. Weakness: 2) Fewer Taijutsu Styles [description here] (The Assassin Can learn only 2 taijutsu/weapon styles, and can only learn up to 1 rank below their current rank for their secondary style, the primary style can be mastered up to their rank)
Rank Benefits
Genin
Chuunin
Jounin
Shinobi Type(s)Speed Ninja: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja)
Chakra Control: This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ----------------------------------------------------------------Chakra InformationChakra Level: Low
Chakra Point: 15 Chakra Control: -2 posts for training, -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques
Elemental Affinities: Medical, Water Jutsu InformationNinjutsuUniversal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: (Water) • • • • •GenjutsuUniversal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: (Water) • • • • •Bloodline/Clan JutsusNinjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • •Taijutus • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------Summoning Type: None yet Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------: (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------WeaponsType of Weapon: Name of Weapon: (name of your weapon if applicable; if it's a custom weapon link the name to the description of the weapon) Base Range:(The effective range of the weapon without utilizing any jutsus or special abilities)Shinobi ToolsKunai: 12 Shuriken:24 Makibishi:0 light bomb:0 smoke bomb:0 steel wire:20 feet ApparelHead-Band Style: Belt Head-Band Location: Mid section, Belt Head-Band Color: Purple Flak-Jacket style: none yet, wait till chunnin Flak-Jacket color: none yet, wait till chunnin

How about now?
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:09 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:10 pm
Gregar828 @Ronin: Medical is a Primary Element, not a Tertiary element. Please fix that. 65 CM? Thats a bit short for a Katana, thats more like a Wakizashi. @All Three: Until you get your Bloodlines/clans, please take off your Bloodline/Clan bonuses, and change your chakra to Low. @Everyone: ASIDE FROM THESE THREE, MIST IS NOW CLOSED. CHOOSE ANOTHER VILLAGE. Please repost your profiles when you're done. 1. A katana is a japanese sword with the blade length between 60-72 cm. I thought I was being reasonable with 65, I know my japanese weapons. 2. I didn't know it particulary mattered where I put Medical since it is put in the description as a 'bonus' element, which to me means that on top of my 'primary' element I get medical. But just to please you I changed it. 3. I didn't know that putting a strike to the only two benefits I gained was hurting anyone. I'm sorry. And my chakra was already low
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:11 pm
Kenji Hajime-Nara ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoCharacter Name:Kenji Hajime-Nara Nicknames: Ken-Chan, Hajime-Kun Title(s): Has not received any Rank: Academy Student Village: KirigakureBackground InfoPhysical DescriptionAge: 8 Sex: Male Hair Color: Cyan Natural Eye Color: Hazel Body Type: Average Body type for someone his age Distinguishing Features: He is very short, being only eight years of age. Other than that, there are no distinguishing features.---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------Main InfoBloodline, Clan, or Demon:Dormant Hyoton Applied For Bloodline/Clan Stage: Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: Applied for Stage 1 ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------Shinobi ProfessionShinobi Profession: Medical Shinobi Profession Base Benefit: Natural Healer: Gains medical as a bonus starting "element" Learning Information: Medical Shinobi recieve a -1 post learning bonus when learning medical jutsus, but recieve a +1 learning post penalty for all other types of techniques. Weakness: Weaker Genjutsu: all jutsus of that type used by the medical shinobi are counted as if one rank lower in power to a minimum of Academy Student, this would not apply to Medical Jutsu
Rank Benefits
Genin N/A
Chuunin N/A
Jounin N/AShinobi Types Speed Shinobi: Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounnin to even track these ninja
Elemental Control Wind: -3 posts learning of Wind Jutsu, +1 rank to Wind jutsu used normally, +2 ranks around the elemental ninjas element, +1 post when learning jutsus not of the shinobis chosen element, -1 rank to power of jutsu when used in an extreme environment near their elements weakness ---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ----------------------------------------------------------------Chakra InformationChakra Level: Low Chakra Point: 15 points Chakra Control: 1. Wind Element: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques for the chosen element
Elemental Affinities: Medic, Fuuton, Jutsu InformationNinjutsuUniversal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: Medical • • • • •
Second Element: Fuuton
Third Element: N/A GenjutsuUniversal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Bloodline JutsusNinjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • •
Taijutus • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------Summoning Type: N/A Summons Known: N/A ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------: (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------WeaponsType of Weapon: Katana Name of Weapon: N/A Base Range: 65 centimeters Shinobi ToolsKunai: 10 Shuriken:15 Makibishi:15 light bomb:2 smoke bomb:2 steel wire:15 yardsApparelHead-Band Style: N/A Head-Band Location: N/A Head-Band Color:N/A Flak-Jacket style:N/A Flak-Jacket color:N/A
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:21 pm
I'm really disliking your attitude, especially when all I'm doing is my job, Za- I mean, Ronin. But your profile is correct, so.....
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:36 pm
...now I'm a little confused sad I didn't mean to offend you, I was just replying back to your comments. I'm sorry if it came out that way I wasn't trying to give you any attitude. I said in my post that all I wanted was to please you. If you're not happy then my profile doesn't get approve...so in order for you to do your job, my job is to make you happy 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:42 pm
Lets take the phrases "Just to please you" and "I didnt know it was hurting anybody." Repeat that aloud, but try to do it so that it doesnt sound smug to the person who would be hearing it. Personally, I cant. But if that was truly not your intent, then I do forgive you, and I'm sorry for accusing you of that.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:46 pm
crying Ooooohhh...I didn't know I was coming off smug. I'll try to choose my phrases carefully next time then. It really wasn't my intent. I was told that you are the last person that I would want to upset here so I'm going to try really hard not to sweatdrop Anyways, keep up the good work with profiles and I'll see you in the rp blaugh
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:37 pm
Greg, i would have laid the smack down. just sayin. stare hate brown nosers.
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Posted: Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:58 pm
Aya Gensai
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Character Name: Aya Gensai Nicknames: Aya, Gen Title(s): None Rank: Academy Student Village: Sunagakure
Background Info
Physical Description
Age: 15 Sex: Female Hair Color: Faded Blond Natural Eye Color: Amaranth Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Her eyes, and a tattoo on her right hip that looks like the head of a cat.
---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ----------------------------------------------------------------
Main Info
Bloodline: None Bloodline/Clan Stage: N/A Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: N/A
1. 2. 3.
Companion Info.
Companion Type: (dogs, bugs, etc...) Companion Name: (name of companion if applicable)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession
Shinobi Profession: Taijutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefit: Physical strength increased by one rank. Learning Information: One less post for learning taijutsu, a one post penalty for learning weapon techniques/styles, and a two post penalty for learning ninjutsu/genjutsu. Weakness: Less Elements (A taijutsu specialist can only have 2 elements, starting with 1 at academy student and acquiring the second at jounin; if the character has a combination release Kekkai genkai they get their two primary elements and their combination element at academy student, but never get another element; demons that give their hosts access to elements can still learn the jutsus for that element, but only up to their churrent rank, unless they are willing to take it as 1 of their two primary elements)
Rank Benefits
Genin (place chosen genin rank benefit here)
Chuunin (place chosen chuunin rank benefit here)
Jounin (place chosen Jounin rank benefit here)
Shinobi Type(s)
Speed Shinobi: Like the name says these ninja are faster and more agile then normal ninja, allowing them to more easily avoid attacks, and to close distances equally fast. (Move, dodge, and attack speed is one rank higher, hard for anyone below Jounin to even track these ninja)
Tactical Ninja: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. Being highly intelligent, learning jutsu comes quite easily to these shinobi, allowing them to acquire a vast array of jutsus for any situation. (-3 posts for learning jutsu, reaction speed is one rank higher)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Chakra and Jutsu ----------------------------------------------------------------
Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Low Chakra Point: 15
Chakra Control: None
Elemental Affinities: Fuuton
Jutsu Information
Ninjutsu
Universal • Henge no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • •
Genjutsu
Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
First Element: Fuuton • • • • •
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus
Ninjutsu • • • • •
Genjutsus • • • • •
Taijutus • • • • •
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Summoning Type: None
Summons Known: None
---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ----------------------------------------------------------------
: (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities
---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ----------------------------------------------------------------
Weapons
Type of Weapon: Kunai Name of Weapon: Beauty's Assistant Base Range: 10in.
Shinobi Tools
Kunai: 5 Shuriken: 5 Makibishi: 5 Light Bomb: 10 Smoke Bomb: 8 Steel Wire: 8 meters
Apparel
Head-Band Style: Collar Head-Band Location: Neck Head-Band Color: Dark Brown
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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:42 pm
May I ask how a kunai with a name is different from your standard Kunai? Does it have some special property, or does it look different, or anything of that nature.
The title of your background history prompts a concern as to your character's species. You ARE aware that you must be entirely human, and cannot be a "neko", right?
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Posted: Tue Feb 15, 2011 5:24 pm
Obviously, as you can see, the whole Neko reference is because of her hat. I don't see how the title of my character's background has anything at all to do with her race.
Also, it has a different name because it's specially designed. There's no bonuses, it's the same length as a standard kunai, it just looks different. I may in the future create a custom weapon out of it if I feel the need to, but at the moment, it just looks special.
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Posted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 7:40 pm
Rahenno Yagino ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Character Name:Rahenno Nagino Nicknames: Rah Title(s): Rank: Sannin Village: Cloud Background Info Physical Description Age: 17 Sex: Male Hair Color: Natural Eye Color: Purpleish-Silver Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: ---------------------------------------------------------------- Bloodline, Clan, or Demon ---------------------------------------------------------------- Main Info Bloodline: Hyouton Bloodline Link Bloodline/Clan Stage: Stage 1 Abilities of the Bloodline/Clan: Able to use Ice using the wind and water elements. 1. 2. 3. Companion Info. Companion Type: (dogs, bugs, etc...) Companion Name: (name of companion if applicable)
Bug Evolutions: (Place Aburame Clan bug evolutions below with the effects of the evolution; provide link to the evolution post) 1. (ex: fire resistance- fire jutsus C rank and lower do not affect the bugs) 2. 3. 4. Transplant Info Bloodline/Clan Transplant: (name of the bloodline/clan transplanted; provide link to transplanting post) Transplant Stage: (current stage of transplant; provide link to achievement of current stage) Abilities of Transplant: (Provide basic info on your transplant) 1. 2. 3. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession and Shinobi Types ---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Profession Shinobi Profession: Assassin Profession Base Benefit: Shadow's Shroud: Assassin's are incredibly adept at moving unseen and unheard, learning to hide themselves from all but the most perceptive of individuals. (cannot be found by shinobis of equal rank when hiding unless they have a Kekkai Genkai with extrasensory abilities; Shinobis of greater rank without an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the Assassin's presence, but not the exact location of the shinobi; Shinobis of lower rank with an extrasensory Kekkai Genkai will be aware of the presence of the Assassin, but not the exact location)
Stealth Focus: Assassin's are also highly skilled in the use of stealth based jutsus. Any stealth based jutsu is treated as if it were equal to the Assassin's rank in terms of effectiveness. (stealth based jutsus treated as equal to the Assassin's rank)
Learning Information: N/A Weakness: Fewer Weapon/Taijutsu Styles
Rank Benefits
Genin Shadow's Sight: Assassin's spend so much time in the shadow's that many of them gain the ability to see clearly no matter how dark it is. In addition these Assassin's come to realize just how much the average shinobi relies on sight, and more importantly they realize the advantage of taking away that sense. (can see clearly no matter how dark it is, can still be affected by supernatural darkness; gain the Kurayami no Jutsu [see below])
Chuunin Hide in Plain Sight: [need a good description]
Jounin Perfect Shadow: The Assassin has truly become one with the shadows, they can no longer be detected by even the most powerful extrasensory abilities unless they wish it or until they strike. (cannot be detected even by kekkai genkai, higher ranking shinobi are still aware of the Assassin's presence, but they cannot pinpoint their location even if they have a kekkai genkai)
Shinobi Type(s)
: The ninja who have a very specific jutsu type and style are called Ability Ninja. Considering their intense training in one area, these ninja are formidable opponents, normally well beyind their rank when using their specialized jutsu. However, when utilizing anything else, they tend to suffer a drop in power. (+1 rank in strength of attacks for abilities *ex. people who use bug jutsu only, bug jutsu attacks increase in power*, jutsu not of the chosen type are decreased in power by one rank.)
: This Shinobi is a master of Chakra Control, allowing them to more easily learn to mold their chakra to perform jutsus, as well as allowing them to use their chakra more effeciently when using jutsus. At higher ranks they even learn to mold chakra without the use of hand-seals. (-2 posts for training, reduced chakra costs (see Chakra System), can perform jutsus that are two or more ranks below you without hand-seals.)
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Chakra Information
Chakra Level: Medium
Chakra Point: 156
Chakra Control: -Two shinobi types: -1 chakra point cost of all Genin techniques, -2 for all Chuunin, Jounin, and Kage techniques when using chosen abilities jutsu
Elemental Affinities: Ice, Water, Wind
Jutsu Information Ninjutsu Universal • Henge no Jutsu (Transformation) • • • •
First Element: Suiton • Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu (Water Clone Technique) • Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation) • Suiton: Mizu Shuriken no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shuriken Technique) • Mizu Tate no Jutsu (Water Shield Technique) • Mizu no Yaiba (Water Sword) • Suiton: Fuuma Mizu Shuriken (Water Release: Evil Windmill Water Shuriken) • Kirigakure: Shunshin no Jutsu (Hidden Mist: Instantaneous Body Skill) • Suikusari no Jutsu (Water Chains Technique) • Suimenka no Kisoku ( Breathing underwater Technique) • Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique) • Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu (Mist Vision Technique) • Suiton: Suihou no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Cannon Technique) • Suiton: Mizu Ryuu no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon Technique) • Doiru Suiyari no Jutsu (Drilling Water Spears) • Suijouki no Jutsu (Steam Technique) • Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Shark Blast Technique) • Gekiryuu Chikara (Raging River Force) • Suiton: Suishouha (Water Release: Rising Blast) • Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu (Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique) • Tsunami no Jutsu (Tsunami Technique) • Suiton: Shindo Futan (Water Release: Depth Charge) Second Element: Fuuton • Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation) • Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill) • Boufuu Kyouzuu no Jutsu (Gale Surge) • Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast) • Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds) • Fuuton: Shinkuutai Naihatsu (Wind Element: Air Pocket Bursts) • Fuuton: Furyuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Dragon) • Fuuton: Tei Hakusha (Wind Release: Air Riding) • Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu (Wind Torpedo) • Fuuton: Tatsumaki Wana (Wind Release: Tornado Trap) • Fuuton: Kyoushu no Tosshin (Wind Release: Assassin’s Rush) • Sansai no Ketteiteki Shikiichi (Final Threshold of the Three Calamities of Fire, Flood and Storm) • Fuuton: Kanketsusen Souzou (Wind Release: Geyser Creation • Fuuton: Renkuudan (Wind Release: Steroid Blanks) Genjutsu Universal • Bunshin no Jutsu • • • •
Bloodline/Clan Jutsus Ninjutsu • Koori Waku No Jutsu [Ice Slide Technique] • Shikki Kansei No Jutsu [Moisture Trap Technique] • Retsu Kaze No Jutsu [Cold Breeze Technique] • Hyouga Bunshin No Jutsu [Glacier Bunshin Technique] • Koorikoku [Ice Carving] • Hyouga Kassha No Jutsu [Glacier Block Technique] • Hyougatama [Ice Sphere] • Hyougai no Jutsu (Frozen Armor) • Koori Chiyu No Jutsu [Ice Healing Technique] • Koori Tsubame No Jutsu [Ice Swallow Technique] • Hisame [Hail] • Akakoori [Red Ice] • Reinami [Zero Wave] • Raikou Koori No Jutsu [Lightning Ice Technique] • Reido Bunshin [Zero Clone]
Genjutsus • • • • • Taijutus • • • • • ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Type: (what type of animals do you summon, dog, snake, toad, etc.) Summons Known: (don't worry about filling this out just yet) ---------------------------------------------------------------- Taijutsu/Weapon Styles ---------------------------------------------------------------- : (brief description of the style) current stage:(current stage that your character has reached in the style: provide a link to the post learning that stage)
Maneuvers
Abilities ---------------------------------------------------------------- Equipment ---------------------------------------------------------------- Weapons Type of Weapon: Name of Weapon: (name of your weapon if applicable; if it's a custom weapon link the name to the description of the weapon) Base Range:(The effective range of the weapon without utilizing any jutsus or special abilities) Shinobi Tools Kunai: 15 Shuriken: 30 Makibishi: 0 light bomb: 5 smoke bomb: 10 steel wire: 15 Apparel Head-Band Style: Head-Band Location: Right Arm Head-Band Color: Black Flak-Jacket style: Vest Flak-Jacket color: Navy Blue
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