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Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 2:12 pm
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Personal Healing Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu Description: Doc puts his hands over a cut, broken bone, or strained muscle and focuses his chakra in to his hands. It will mend cuts, fix fractures (just enough for Doc to get to someone that can fix them), and relaxes strained muscle. It allows Doc to numb the pain of injures and stop bleeding as well.
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Posted: Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:46 pm
iBromantic Character: Hikori Hozuki Technique Name: Eye of The Art Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Clay Manipulation Description: This jutsu allows Hikori to view the world through the eyes of a single piece of art he creates. This jutsu can only be used on one creature at a time and even then can only be used once per day. This jutsu costs the regular amount to use and then an extra ten for every post it is active. Character: Hikori Hozuki Technique Name: Flashbang Art Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu Element: Clay Manipulation Description: Quiet an odd jutsu, this gives the user the ability to detonate any normal explosive attack a little bit differently. For instance, if the user created a C1 bird and sent it flying the user could detonate it, however instead of creating an explosion it creates a blindingly bright light and deafening bang. Note: This jutsu does not create anything, it just gives the user the ability to make the clay explode in a flashbang style instead of an explosion
Both are Accepted
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 9:01 pm
Character: Flou Hojo Uwa Technique Name: Clear Blend 012 Rank: D Type: Bloodline Element: N/A Description: Unlike other blends of ink that the Hojo produce, the Clear Blend is an accessory rather then a serious technique. It is used in conjunction with Twin Blend 050. The blend takes away the color warning of the ink, making it hard for a enemy to, if they have experienced a Hojo before, hard for them to say which blend will do what. Perfect for the Hojo that wants to not leave a mess afterwards. The ink is completely clear and is somewhat transparent, allowing light to shine through it. On top of that, if used with Peircing Blend 044, it almost makes the small senbon like ink pellets invisible to the untrained eye.
Character: Flou Hojo Uwa Technique Name: Hallucination Blend 057 Rank: A Type: Bloodline Element: N/A Description: This blend acts like any other, it has the rather unique olive color and act's unlike any other blend. Some may think this is a Genjutsu Based Ink Blend, but it is not. It is a poisonous toxin that, without doubt, is not fatally deadly, but adds for a good time for the user. In battle, if the ink makes contact with the skin, it will take [1] post before the effect's begin to show. The world will begin to alter and bend, as if it was a bad trip. This technique lasts [5] posts and makes the target look and act like a bumbling idiot that has no sense of direction, balance, coordination, or sobriety. Acting like a man who had to much to drink last night, the target will see things that aren't there and be caught in their own little hallucinogenic world, while the user can flee freely, or go for an assassination. It can also be used as a good prank among friends.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 8:21 pm
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Personal Healing Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu Description: Doc puts his hands over a cut, broken bone, or strained muscle and focuses his chakra in to his hands. It will mend cuts, fix fractures (just enough for Doc to get to someone that can fix them), and relaxes strained muscle. It allows Doc to numb the pain of injures and stop bleeding as well.
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Deathwatch Rank: D Type: Eiseijutsu
Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is within 30ft, if they are close to death and anyone within 5ft will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them.
duration 1 post
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Posted: Mon Jan 23, 2012 2:41 pm
Character: Eirlys Shinsetsu Technique Name: Tenshi no Uta (Angel's Song) Rank: A Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: This Genjutsu plays on an individual's mind through sound, Giving Eirlys the most beautiful voice ever heard. Eirlys will start to sing a song. Anyone within range of her voice is susceptible to her song, but only one person can and will immediately fall under her spell, emulating whatever the song being sung tells them to do. While she sings, the constricting aura of frost around her extends further outwards until it wraps around the person she wishes to hear the song, and only that individual will hear what she sings. The colder the area the more angelic her voice will seem, and the one influenced will only seek to please. The Genjutsu lasts only as long as Eirlys continues to sing, and any interruption will immediately break the spell.
Character: Eirlys Shinsetsu Technique Name: Kori Kuinzu (Ice Queen) Rank: S Type: Bloodline Element: Yukiton Description: Eirlys is able to use this by forming five complete Hatsuyuki about herself, allowing them to cover her entire body and harden into solid ice. She is still conscious beneath the ice and can move about freely in her new ice form. Her physical attack and defense are significantly increased due to this, and her resistance to weaker Katon Ninjutsu (C Rank and below) is absolute. Suiton techniques C rank and lower begin to freeze once they come within 3 yards of her in this form. The cold air about her is so cold to the point where it burns. She can freeze any part of a person's body almost immediately as she touches them while in this form. The person will immediately start to feel the limb touched begin to freeze, and exactly after two of their posts have passed, said limb will be frozen solid. If two posts have passed and nothing is done, the cold will have traveled throughout their body and they will begin to experience frostbite. Members of the Shinsetsu and Hyouton clan are virtually unaffected by her touch, and Katon Ninjutsu that are S ranked will immediately melt the ice around her upon contact. This form lasts for a duration of 8 posts.
Character: Izaya Toryo Technique Name: Hataori no Jutsu: Fusui-shi no Hoyo [Weaving Technique: Geomancer's Embrace] Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Element: N/A Description: This Genjutsu works only as long the user can keep their hand on the victim(s). Without delay, the victim(s) is hurled into the Genjutsu, and the user can freely control all things within the area depending on where the victim(s) is situated. If they are standing in a building, then the user can only manipulate artificial things. If they stand in nature, then the user can manipulate the grass and trees all around. If they stand on plain land, the user can manipulate the earth, etc. Imagination is key.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:21 pm
Grand Chevalier Haji Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu Technique Name: Snowblade Rank:A Type: Ninjutsu Element:Yukiton Description: Noctis sword slowly begins to fall apart into what seems like snow.This is possible because the blade was also made with the user's chakra. The snow of a shinsetsu user's justu is a materialization of their chakra. The pieces float around together in what seems like a mass of snow. But the secret to it is that every piece of snow is a razor sharp snowflake.As strong as the steel the sword is made of The mass of razor sharp snowflakes follow the directions of the users blade cutting and slicing everything in its way. Lasts for 5 posts. Now I know some will say this instantly, yes the base Idea is from bleach -senbonsakura-, But i think with a shinsetsu user's abilities and the way the sword was made this would be plausible in the shinobi world. I took the idea and made it my own. Also I do not want a flat denial, but ideas or conditions on how to make it work. Also- How would i go about removing a jutsu from my custom jutsu?
Sorry for the delay. Apparently I am the person to do the accepting once it's been debated on... only I never received that memo.
It's denied.
Reason: 1. You need to add a set amount of snow, a limiter to this technique. 2. If this is exactly like the tech from bleach you are going to have to tweak it some to make it a little more different, target the weakness. Fortify it and make it so that it is something different.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:31 pm
Reaper Elyse Resubmitting my revisions to these techniques since i had totally spaced on revising them since the time I was sent a Pm about the issues with the first. The first was passed with the addition of the clause at it's end about the subtraction of 40 points to chakra pool permanently. The rest were all rewritten or changed. Character: Yuugao Hanshou Technique Name: Crystal Quartz Mirror Rank: passive with materials required present (B-rank training) Type Ninjutsu Element: Garasu (Glass) Bloodline Description: A Hari clan member Garasu Chakra user can create even stronger glass when they take the time to perfect their glass making abilities and use the natural silicate involved in their glass crafting abilities and carefully allow carbon dioxide to flood into the forge of the speedily made glass.The molecular structure of this glass can be forged into crystal quartz glass. Which functions much like normal simple silicate glass but is harder due to the carbon involved in it's structure. The density grade stands on a scale of 1-10 to be 7, half a point higher than steel (*6.5)The only draw back is that the glass make is slightly slower and the glass made is heavier. Yet other wise the grade of the glass and the ability to make it “shatter proof” (though still technically breakable yet at a much more straining cost) can create very powerful constructs that may not be easily broken by average means. ~This technique permanently reduces the users maximum chakra pool by -40DeniedReasons: 1: This is not a B ranked Jutsu. At least an A and it is most certainly not a passive technique. If you want to argue it I leave you with this... For Saiketsu it costs A ranked amounts of chakra to fortify any weapons they create. Character: Yuugao Hanshou Technique Name:BloodRuby Quartz Rank: passive with materials required present (S-rank training) Type: Ninjutsu Element: Garasu (Glass) Bloodline Description: A Hari clans member who seeks to go even further than glass that is even more versatile and deadly than crafting the normal harder than steel Quartz variant of their glass make can further their skills with the use of blood ( hardness *9 on scale) Drawing blood into the forge of the glass the crystal quartz retains a blood red hue and becomes capable of carrying over chakra signature for a given period of time before shattering or until shattered. Normal Hari clan techniques become even stronger with the energy of different chakra natures running trough them. This Glasses length of use stands by the Chakra poured into it Via blood. Activation cost 40 points of charka per item ( kunai, swords, clone,etc. E-B techs) formed. Four items or one large construct ( large dome, terrain cover, rain of glass tech, etc.*A-S techs) can be made in a turn cost of 160 points total. This glass being formed can retain at most 60 chakra from the targets blood it's formed from. Each turn these constructs are active it depletes 10 points of chakra shattering when empty.( these glass constructs can carry over an ability of the blood such as keiki genki's that are elemental) Clones formed under this technique resemble the person who's blood is retained in the ruby quartz. These cost are placed on top of the chakra spent to form the whatever specific technique is being produced. Denied. Reasons: 1: This one will not pass simply because it is dealing with blood. We have a bloodline that already harnesses blood for their techniques. This encroaches on that whole bloodline. Character: Yuugao Hanshou Technique Name: Beast-Shinobi Shadow Transformation Technique Rank: C, A, S Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu (Tamer) Element: Maruton Description: The Beast-Ninja Shadow Tranfomation Technique is essentially a technique which turns a tamer ninja's partners into humans by degree's. Each stage spends and exchanges the chakra equal to rank and in this transference of chakra trough the shared action of the partner and tamer nin. Shadow of the Shifter: This chakra transference allows the animal to gain more human characteristics like hands and the ability to use weapons. The Tamer gains a animalistic trait from the partner used in the technique which is only one to begin with (three is the maximum at jounin rank). Three transformation takes from in a the form of the tamer and partner being temporarily concealed from sight in an absence of light. The change reveals the partner with an antro appearance as stage one C-rank with the most basic abilities suggestive of the technique. Shadow of the Warrior: The Tamer on the other hand gains one simple trait from the partner and their eyes change to resemble that of the animals. When changing the beast takes on it's own independent form, making it different from the “Beast-Man clone technique” which has the partner turn into the tamer shinobi in likeness. The Partner takes on their own independent form full clothed in respecters to their ninja village., by stage two they look fully human rather than a human animal mixture. The shroud of darkness now not only changes the as described but also grants them one simple weapon to which that can draw with the expense of 20 charka at A-rank. Shadow of the Beast-Master: The final stage the full transformed partners and the tamer all become shrouded by the darkness once more emerging not completely revealed of the the shadow like cloak which envelopes them from their feet. The partners are fully clothed in black garments or armor and the tamer is as well wearing a flowing shadow like version of their apparel. This shroud grants the animals an added trait of being hidden from being sensed by sensor techniques of any type. Their sheer presence seems to bring a darkness with them which darkens the are of at most half a mile. With a superficial mental link to the Tamers position an actions (not senses but more over motions) they can improve their fighting ability as a unit . The tamer working as a terminal between the partners can spread this communicative ability to all partners used in this technique.The tamers body has shifted rather than just taking on the traits of the three partners but has a chimer like form which collaborates each form (human +3animal appendages). They are capable of taming near by creatures which are shared in the mixture the chimera form that are in listening distance of the tamers roar. Each stage of this technique can last up to five [5] post. DeniedReasons: 1: You cannot dupe sensors, its what makes them sensors. << You can momentarily confuse them, sure but not dupe them. It's god moddy. 2: Every single one of those techniques is S rank. It seems like you are trying to get more bang for less buck here. You are going to have to split them apart in order for them to pass. Character: Yuugao Hanshou Technique Name:Gotoryu [Five-sword Style] Rank: B [Stance] Type:Bukijutsu, Taijutsu Description: Gotoryu is a sword-style which elaborates on the Santoryu's styles by adding the legs as another pair of “blades”. The legs don't actually become blade like but trough this style Santoryu techniques can be performed using the legs, yet the cutting force would be very much like being hit with the blunt edge of a single-edged blade. Though with the use of items such as bladed grieves or anything which would add a actual razor edge to the legs would increase the cutting potential of the legs all together. In learning Gotoryu Santoru techniques trough out it forms can be considered to have two more “blades” and Black Leg techniques will dig in or cut more deeply than they usually would. Gotoryu style allows for this strong mix of taijutsu and bukijutsu allowing the strength of either form to intermingle and support the other. The strengths of both are slightly improved and bolstered to match the others. Accepted Katekyo Hitman all the way. Character: Yuugao Hanshou Technique Name: Spectral Havoc Rank: B Type: Genjutsu Description: A Genjutsu based on the transmission of light. The Shinobi uses the proper hand signs to permeate signal of into the ambient light around them which creates and illusion that Activate trough sight and touch. This illusion allows the Shinobi to have their opponent suddenly believe they are capable of spontaneously combusting the very air around them with a gesture. Once captured by the technique one can sense all things pertaining to what it would feel like to be willed to explode into flames. Even the environment would seem to be effected. Since this technique works on light whom ever looks at the user or sees some one effected will be put under a half state of the illusion. Where they will not feel the sensation but experience the genjutsu trough all other senses. This jutsu is weaker in the dark, and can be amplified trough focusing light. (when amplified the rank of the effect rises by one, in darkness it lowers by one. Making the experience end with in a turn rather than three.) In summary the first party or the one directly put under the jutsu is made to feel the full effect to it's full duration. The second party or those outside of the shinobi who cast the technique are only fooled for one turn but in the instance that someone touches their burning ally the jutsu won't make them feel pain and it would be broken. DeniedReasons: 1: Needs a set distance. 2: Cannot have it work through both sight and touch. 3: You are going to need to clarfiy whether or not it makes you feel like you are on fire or going to combust. It's unclear what this whole tech really is at the moment.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:40 pm
pliokiju Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Personal Healing Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu Description: Doc puts his hands over a cut, broken bone, or strained muscle and focuses his chakra in to his hands. It will mend cuts, fix fractures (just enough for Doc to get to someone that can fix them), and relaxes strained muscle. It allows Doc to numb the pain of injures and stop bleeding as well.
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Deathwatch Rank: D Type: Eiseijutsu
Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is within 30ft, if they are close to death and anyone within 5ft will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them.
duration 1 post
Personal Healing Denied Reasons: 1: 'fix' fractures is basically healing a broken bone. That is a rank A technique. 2: This would have to be an A rank to consider passing. You are giving it a large range of 'temporary healing' especially when there are S ranked types of jutsu for medics which allow self healing with more of a cost.
Second one is denied Reasons: 1: This is not a D ranked jutsu. :/ This would need to be B if it's going to just spontaneously start working and healing people within a distance in order to keep them alive. 2: It is close to the Byakuran abilities in that they can 'see people' You can't see them. Make it so that you don't infringe on another bloodline or class ability and it might work.
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Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 6:44 pm
digital m u f f i n s pliokiju Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Personal Healing Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu Description: Doc puts his hands over a cut, broken bone, or strained muscle and focuses his chakra in to his hands. It will mend cuts, fix fractures (just enough for Doc to get to someone that can fix them), and relaxes strained muscle. It allows Doc to numb the pain of injures and stop bleeding as well.
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Deathwatch Rank: D Type: Eiseijutsu
Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is within 30ft, if they are close to death and anyone within 5ft will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them.
duration 1 post
Personal Healing Denied Reasons: 1: 'fix' fractures is basically healing a broken bone. That is a rank A technique. 2: This would have to be an A rank to consider passing. You are giving it a large range of 'temporary healing' especially when there are S ranked types of jutsu for medics which allow self healing with more of a cost.
Second one is denied Reasons: 1: This is not a D ranked jutsu. :/ This would need to be B if it's going to just spontaneously start working and healing people within a distance in order to keep them alive. 2: It is close to the Byakuran abilities in that they can 'see people' You can't see them. Make it so that you don't infringe on another bloodline or class ability and it might work. ok thank you. ill work on them
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:25 am
Character: Akane Hakura Technique Name: Chakra Pulse Puppet Cleaner Rank: B-A Type: Kugutsu Element: N/A Description: Akane will send a pulse of chakra into the chakra wires from him to his puppet and when the pulse reaches the puppet it will, like a wave on water flood the puppet and disperse anything that wasn't originally on the puppet away from it. This skill is based on the main weakness of the Puppet user, having the joints of a puppet getting stuck by Iron sand, sticky substances or binding's can be a pain. But with this technique, it creates a wave of chakra which deactivates all active foreign chakra signatures and substances. This technique cannot hurt a target.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 7:59 am
Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Deathwatch Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu
Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is, by their chakra, within 30ft. If a shinobi is close to death within 5ft, will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them. But it only will save one person. So if there are more then one ninja down, Doc is able to see them but can only save the closest one. This Jutsu will stop working on bloodlines that prevent this or any techniques that can prevent this as well. This jutsu cant differentiate between a genjutsu and a real person.
Duration [2] posts Character: Sakurta Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Healing Shadows Rank: C Type: Shadow Technique/ Kageton Element: (Wind, Water, Fire, Ect. Only If Ninjutsu) Description: Doc will gather shadows up into his hands, making his palms all black. He can then make the shadows on one of his palms reach out to someone that needs help. It will create a dome around the person that is injured. The dome is extremely strong and will block any long range attacks. It will only disappear if someone attacks it close up and any light will dispel it as well. Doc moves his chakra through the shadows so that it makes the dome strong and will have chakra flowing in side the dome healing minor wounds someone might have. Note: The dome isn't that strong and will break from an attack from a ninja that is 2 ranks above Doc. Also, once Doc is Jounin, it will heal major wounds. And once Doc becomes Sannin, it will heal all wounds. At every level, the healing time that is needed is reduced.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 11:35 am
Logicka Inferni Character: Akane Hakura Technique Name: Chakra Pulse Puppet Cleaner Rank: B-A Type: Kugutsu Element: N/A Description: Akane will send a pulse of chakra into the chakra wires from him to his puppet and when the pulse reaches the puppet it will, like a wave on water flood the puppet and disperse anything that wasn't originally on the puppet away from it. This skill is based on the main weakness of the Puppet user, having the joints of a puppet getting stuck by Iron sand, sticky substances or binding's can be a pain. But with this technique, it creates a wave of chakra which deactivates all active foreign chakra signatures and substances. This technique cannot hurt a target.
Be a little more specific on the range. <<
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 11:39 am
pliokiju Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Deathwatch Rank: B Type: Eiseijutsu
Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is, by their chakra, within 30ft. If a shinobi is close to death within 5ft, will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them. But it only will save one person. So if there are more then one ninja down, Doc is able to see them but can only save the closest one. This Jutsu will stop working on bloodlines that prevent this or any techniques that can prevent this as well. This jutsu cant differentiate between a genjutsu and a real person.
Duration [2] posts Character: Sakurta Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Healing Shadows Rank: C Type: Shadow Technique/ Kageton Element: (Wind, Water, Fire, Ect. Only If Ninjutsu) Description: Doc will gather shadows up into his hands, making his palms all black. He can then make the shadows on one of his palms reach out to someone that needs help. It will create a dome around the person that is injured. The dome is extremely strong and will block any long range attacks. It will only disappear if someone attacks it close up and any light will dispel it as well. Doc moves his chakra through the shadows so that it makes the dome strong and will have chakra flowing in side the dome healing minor wounds someone might have. Note: The dome isn't that strong and will break from an attack from a ninja that is 2 ranks above Doc. Also, once Doc is Jounin, it will heal major wounds. And once Doc becomes Sannin, it will heal all wounds. At every level, the healing time that is needed is reduced.
Please do not quote me. Someone will check this place when they can. I am a little stiff when it comes to quoting me and pming me about this stuff. o.e
I messed up on one of the rules. For the first one, healing, there was a third reason. I ended up accidentally placing it as the second point in your second jutsu by accident.
SO. The first one cannot have you 'seeing people through their chakra' . Unless you are a sensor with that ability or a person with the Byakuran you cannot 'see' anyones chakra.
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:01 pm
Character: Noctis Lucis Shinsetsu Technique Name: Snowblade Rank:A Type: Ninjutsu Element:Yukiton Description: Noctis sword slowly begins to fall apart into what seems like snow.This is possible because the blade was also made with the user's chakra. The snow of a shinsetsu user's justu is a materialization of their chakra. The pieces float around together in what seems like a mass of snow. But the secret to it is that every piece of snow is a razor sharp snowflake.As strong as the steel the sword is made of The mass of razor sharp snowflakes follow the directions of the users blade cutting and slicing everything in its way. He can create enough razor sharp snow to encase one person completely. Lasts for 5 posts.
1:added set amount, enough to incase one person. 2:What is the weakness? I don't know it XD
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Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:19 pm
pliokiju Character: Sakurta Hentona Nara (Doc) Technique Name: Healing Shadows Rank: C Type: Shadow Technique/ Kageton Element: (Wind, Water, Fire, Ect. Only If Ninjutsu) Description: Doc will gather shadows up into his hands, making his palms all black. He can then make the shadows on one of his palms reach out to someone that needs help. It will create a dome around the person that is injured. The dome is extremely strong and will block any long range attacks. It will only disappear if someone attacks it close up and any light will dispel it as well. Doc moves his chakra through the shadows so that it makes the dome strong and will have chakra flowing in side the dome healing minor wounds someone might have. Note: The dome isn't that strong and will break from an attack from a ninja that is 2 ranks above Doc. Also, once Doc is Jounin, it will heal major wounds. And once Doc becomes Sannin, it will heal all wounds. At every level, the healing time that is needed is reduced.
im sorry digi. ill just not use that one.
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