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 Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 7:12 am
Miri was here and I missed her? ._.
Ah well.
Germany is awesome, by the way.
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:28 am
-is reading Miri's fanfic- 
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:34 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:40 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:42 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:43 am
Hooray! Someone is reading my fanfic!
For the love of paopu fruit, please tell me what you like and dislike about it, and if there are any things that are especially good or if there are any ways I should improve. I am desperate for commentary.
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:56 am
So far, I can tell that you have a solid plotline going for it, which I like. I also like that you didn't add in any unnecessary original characters and kept the pairing of Kairi and Sora. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:04 am
Hooray! Thank you for your opinion ^_^
heart 's Sora X Kairi smile
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:31 am
I can't get to Chapter 4...it's asking me for a password. ^^;
If this was how KHIII is going to be, though, I would be the first in line to buy it. ^^
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:35 am
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:57 am
Izumi Hanae Miri was here and I missed her? ._. Ah well. Germany is awesome, by the way.
And you told me to remind you about the money thing.
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:33 am
**missed Miri and LadyD** TT3TT I've got a gift for LadyD... sweatdrop **hasn't started BP's piccu yet** Heheh...sorry, BP. I'll get right on that... sweatdrop
**leaves luff for Miri** I'ma draw all the regulars in a piccy. ^^ Any input on what you wanna be doing? **brick'd**
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:06 pm
Shadowed Fate **missed Miri and LadyD** TT3TT I've got a gift for LadyD... sweatdrop **hasn't started BP's piccu yet** Heheh...sorry, BP. I'll get right on that... sweatdrop
**leaves luff for Miri** I'ma draw all the regulars in a piccy. ^^ Any input on what you wanna be doing? **brick'd**
Its okay I can wait
Oh LadyD do these remind you of the Cheshire Cat to you?
 
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:17 pm
Chapter 3 is only 1/3 complete, and Chapter 4 hasn't been written yet. The pages that ask for a password don't exist yet.
Shadowed Fate: I'm a regular again already? I dunno, what is everyone else doing in the picture?
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Posted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 12:22 pm
Juliet Erika Daae Taylor_Highwind 'Night Ju. ^_^
I'm going to go home now...so I'll be spending time with my cousin. ^_^
So...hopefully I can get on later but...see you guys for now. I had a fun chat. ^_^
*really really wants to make a Star Wars OC now though* heart >3 ;o Have fun Wait, I do have one character that ends up being happy with only two kids Which is Rosiene ( OC ) and Quinlan Vos ( Canon ). Though she was pretty bad at the start x.x being she was partily trained by Vilakar as a Sith apprentice but then quit and became a Bounty hunter. x.x She seduced Quinlan away from both women in his life and decided to stay with her anyway. x.x Vila's universe is just a nicer place to live. - You will make a star wars OC now. You will make a star wars OC now -
Don't worry Miri, I went back and read your story thing, and it sounds cool.
I really want to make a Zabrak though...they look so cool. ^_^
Oh man I love the drawing my friend drew of my Angel and Demon Roleplay character...she's so pretty. heart
Ju, did you draw the stuffs in your sig and all your character pics?
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