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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:49 pm
Unknown Variable Miri: Does your fanfic need knowledge of the past games to understand it more than just a little? I'm not worried about spoilers at all, so if I'd be able to understand the story with limited knowledge on the KH series, then go ahead and mail a copy to webmaster@unknownvariable.net and I'll send a bunch of comments / critique in my free time at the hotel. :3 Thanks, but it does require beating both games to understand what's going on. sad *overkill'd*
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:50 pm
My typo's hurt me x.x
Sadest part of the story is Ancient's anakins soul is still tied to where he died. He had fallen in love with Vilakar and hadn't realesd what she went through just to spend a few moments with him. Her father loved to manipulate so whenever she spent time with anakin when she wasn't supposed to she was very badly beaten afterwards.
Only after his death did he find this out, and well she dearly loved him and he treated her so badly without even questioning as to why her father ordered him to be kind to her at times. Anceint Padme abadoned him though, and in some sick way vilakar was always loyal.
He wants to tell her how sorry he is so she can finlly just die in peace, but since he can't leave it becomes quite problematic. She's just highly misunderstood, all trace of the old real vlakar has left her she's just programmed to do the same thing while her kind self slumbers in the back of her mind.
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:52 pm
I see...
That's sad. crying I feel kinda bad for Vilakar...
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:53 pm
Taylor_Highwind LOL
Aw man...is that some RP, because it sounds really fun. ^_^ heart *wants Star Wars OCs*
EDIT: ...Can Zabraks be any color besides red? sweatdrop o_o Zabraks can be any color. Most are born brown both Maul and Equinox have intricate tattooing, representative of station in life. So they can tattoo themselves any color they please ;o any race can for that matter. I always saw you as more of a twi'lek myself. rofl
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:54 pm
...Really? eek
That's funny because I was considering being that for this one roleplay that never happened. rolleyes
It'd be cool to be a blue tattooed Zabrak. ^_^ The only thing I dont like about Twi'leks is the weird things on their heads... sweatdrop
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:54 pm
Taylor_Highwind I see...
That's sad. crying I feel kinda bad for Vilakar... Most do She used to be a kind, sweet, nuturing person. x.x However bad gentics and life screwed her over.
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:56 pm
Wookies can tattoo themselves?
*lacks significant knowlege of the star wars series*
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:56 pm
Taylor_Highwind ...Really? eek
That's funny because I was considering being that for this one roleplay that never happened. rolleyes
It'd be cool to be a blue tattooed Zabrak. ^_^ The only thing I dont like about Twi'leks is the weird things on their heads... sweatdrop Lekku XD Hmm Yeah i've seen blue Zabrak before ;o It's the things you put on the character and the story behind them that makes them unique ^^ o_o
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:57 pm
Miriam The Bat Wookies can tattoo themselves? *lacks significant knowlege of the star wars series* XD No they have waaaay to much fur. Maybe if they shaved x.x but they'd need gardening shears I'm sure
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:57 pm
In my stories, one of Christina's children marry one of mine...he's a good guy though...
His twin brother however...bad. sweatdrop
And Christina's daughter Ray...I raised her. xd She's Christina's only daughter...
And when Ray was born, Christina wanted to kill her because she lied to Sorojo, saying it was going to be his son...and it ended up being Marco's daughter. sweatdrop
Neither of them realized she was two-timing. sweatdrop But she went back to Marco in the end.
The doctor who delivered Ray had a heart, and didn't do what Christina asked about killing the baby if it had red hair and gold eyes. So...Sorojo told Christina that, since she technically caused my baby to die (Ray was born the same time as my baby...except mine was about a month premature due to poisoning in my body), that I would keep Ray.
And I did. ^_^
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 8:58 pm
LOL (about the wookie thing).
Oh man...I want to make Star Wars OCs now... heart It sounds so fun...
*wonders what my character's BG story would be*
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:00 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:01 pm
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:03 pm
Lessie
Vilakar gave up Lenne just left her behind somewhere as the girl was born just before she went over the edge totally. No one knows what happened to Lenne, she just came back out of the blue MANY years later as the universe best bounty hunter. Dios and Dinas her first set of twins were sort of raised never knowing of the mother and then she killed them later because they tried to claim heirship.
Luke was taken hostage and got royally screwed over with toxins so he's addicted to drugs. Leia for some reason seems fine and acts fine we just need to weed out what's wrong with her. Vilakar wasn't aropund to raise them after they were born she locked herself in her room and just forgot about them.
Brigidale is a pity child she had. x.x
o_o It's all anceint anakin's fault too, he enver even got to hold his child with Vilakar, heck he just shrugged her off and went off with Padme when she told him she was pregnant. Which is in turn what screwed her up so bad, she ran because she knew her father would beat the baby out of her. x.x
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Posted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 9:05 pm
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