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 Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 1:55 pm
Man!! I lovie writing stories!! What does yours have to be about?
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 1:59 pm
Moonduster Man!! I lovie writing stories!! What does yours have to be about? it doesn't have to be about anything, mines about a guy who hates kids, he goes on a plane and he is sitting beside a baby, his mother, and her firend, the baby starts crying and the mother gets motion sickness so the guy has to hold the baby... how should I end it?
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UltimateBiscuit Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 1:59 pm
i would prefer the coconut milk really
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:01 pm
sweatdrop Reminds me of Drake in my story. sweatdrop
Hmmmmm.....lemme see..........well..in the story do you tell why he hates children? If so then that's a plus....and..perhaps..you can have the baby he is holding..make something click...that reminds him of himself or something...I dunno.....That's kinda a tuffy...
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UltimateBiscuit Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:03 pm
or make the plane crash . .
I'm sorry i tend to kill people in my short stories sweatdrop redface
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:05 pm
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:07 pm
hmmm... *begins laughing* the dude is going to be wearing a really expensive suite and the baby will throw up all over him, then the baby will fall asleep in his arms 3nodding
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:08 pm
Well...the writer is suppose to make at least one of the characters die in a story..that is for a novel. A short story is a completely different thing. And..having a plan crash in that kind of setting does not roll with the story at all.
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UltimateBiscuit Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:08 pm
Master of the Skys hmmm... *begins laughing* the dude is going to be wearing a really expensive suite and the baby will throw up all over him, then the baby will fall asleep in his arms 3nodding thats much better then my idea . . mine made no sense redface
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:09 pm
it wouldn't really work, you would need to get to know the characters more, or else it would have no effect 3nodding
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UltimateBiscuit Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:11 pm
Moonduster Well...the writer is suppose to make at least one of the characters die in a story..that is for a novel. A short story is a completely different thing. And..having a plan crash in that kind of setting does not roll with the story at all. i'm moreinto a kinda strange ending when it comes to a short story . . . I'm gonna stop talking now
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:15 pm
blaugh you dont need to stop talking
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:17 pm
...dude....i'm trying to enter another short story contest so I can get another piece of my work published...its bloody hard to find one!!! I already have a plot and everything I just need to write it out have a couple of drafts..then find a bloody contest..
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:18 pm
Moonduster ...dude....i'm trying to enter another short story contest so I can get another piece of my work published...its bloody hard to find one!!! I already have a plot and everything I just need to write it out have a couple of drafts..then find a bloody contest.. you've had your work published??
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Posted: Thu Mar 31, 2005 2:21 pm
3nodding Yessir!!! Not bad for a 16 year old!! I have a piece of my work already published. It got published right at the beginning of this new year.
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