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 Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:32 pm
I get back to the spot as I focus my chakra closeing my eyes as I see the tree in a diffrent image as I look at it in my minds image as I focus my chakra through the ground locking on the shados of the tree as i zip in the moonlight dissapearing once again in the wind as i get to the tree in mere seconds as I land on the side of the tree hitting the bark sliding off of it because of the speed rush I stand on the side with my arms crossed as i think of what i'm doing wrong "What am I doing wrong, I'm locking on to the shadow perfectly and I'm getting there, but maybe it has something to do with the shadow, maybe i'm locking on to the wrong part of it, instead of locking on to the whole shadow mayb i should lock onto a certain part which be the middle as I've been trying to get to." I walk back at the spot placing my hands back on the ground as I get ready to focus to the front of the shadow
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:41 pm
As I focus my chakra I see the spot i have to get to as I concentrate my chakra to the center of the shadow as I try to form it to match the area I need to get to I mold it to the bodt of me as I dissapear off into thin air again traveling quickly at the tree I appear right infront of it as i asked for as I look at the tre hitting it with my fist proud of what I've done knowing now easily what i have to do now as I jump back to my spot trying it one more time to see if i really have the the jutsu down to the extent i want I place my hand back down on the ground as I set it up perfectly where i was to launch myslef off at the same spot "Ok lets finish this jutsu and continue even more.....here we go."
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 11:47 pm
As I get ready as I mold my chakra into the shape of my body as I slowly move my chakra at the shadow front tip as I then closed my eyes and then open them doing a quick prayer as I dissapear in thin air as I move quickly throw the ground and air at the same time as I come up right infront of the tree as i smile knowing i have it down perfectly I use my hands again to lock on to rock lees foot shadow as I mold my chakra to the tip of it dissappearing again as I end up right infront of him as i see him fast asleep I sit down near him as I pull my hood down closeing my eye's going to sleep knowing i've done enough
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:31 am
After a day’s passing, Ryuu found himself within Konoha searching for Sasuke. “Maybe he will be back at the tree where I first met him.” So that is where Ryuu returned to, only to find that Sasuke was not there. “Where could Sasuke b..” Ryuu stopped dead in his words, as he saw a Ramen shop. His eyes could not help but widen with happiness, as his stomach seemed to be punching him, as I furiously growled. “I haven’t eaten since yesterday..” And it was after those words, that Ryuu ran into the Ichiraku Ramen shop and began to drool just from looking at the menu. However, the chef could not help but give Ryuu a strange look, upon seeming his face.
“Are you going to order something, or are you just going to stand there?” The chef said.
“I’ll take anything!” Ryuu said, his stomach still seeming to be kicking him.
“Good choice.” The chef said with a smile. “My special for today is Spicy Miso Ramen!” The chef said, and after those words, Ryuu found himself sitting down, on a stool, waiting for his ramen to be served.
“It’ll just be a little while longer, kid.. Hmm.. I haven’t seen you around here before, are you new or something?” The chef said.
And Ryuu just nodded at the chef’s words, the moment he got a whiff of his food. “That smell’s sooo good.” Ryuu said, sniffing the air a little more.
“Here you go.” The chef said as he placed the food down. “The kid acts as though he’s never had a meal in his life.” The chef said to himself.
And just about three minutes of his food being set down, Ryuu had basically inhaled the whole thing. “Could I have more?”
**Two hours and fifteen bowls later**
“Uh kid.. How do you plan on paying for all of this?” The chef said.
“Pay? Uh.. Well..” And just before he could answer, he heard a familiar voice.
“I got him covered.” It was Sasuke. “Just put it on my tab, I will pay it all tomorrow.” Sasuke said. “After all, how much could Ryuu eat?” Sasuke thought in his mind.
After that, Sasuke sat himself down and ordered a bowl of Ramen himself. After he had finished eating, he had stood to his feet, turned around, and walked out of Ichiraku’s Ramen shop.
“Alright Ryuu, lets go. Today I have a few soldier pills, and they replenish chakra, so there won’t be any need for breaks today.” And with those words, both Sasuke and Ryuu were off again, to the same spot there were last in.
“Today I’m going to teach you a technique called Mythical Fire Flower. This technique will prove to be far more difficult than the last. And just as last time, you have to watch me carefully, because I am only going to show you this one time and one time alone.” Sasuke stood on the dirt road, and began to execute a number of hand seals “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger.” After completing the hand seals, Sasuke converted fifty percent of his stamina into chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled five balls of fire, each of them the same exact size, seeing as Sasuke had given each of them ten percent of his chakra each. "Now.. You try.” Sasuke said to Ryuu.
And it was with those words, that Sasuke moved to the side-lines, and that Ryuu motioned to the center of the dirt road. “Okay, this doesn’t seem so hard.. I can do this no sweat.” And with that thought, Ryuu performed the necessary hand seals, gathered together thirty percent of chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled two fire balls. However, one fire ball was much larger than the other, as Ryuu had given twenty-five percent of his chakra to one and only five percent to the one that came after it.
( 1/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:32 am
“You have to give each of the fire balls the same amount of chakra, Ryuu. You want them to be even. Remember how mine looked.” Sasuke said.
And as Ryuu heard those words, he just nodded in agreement. “I’ll try this again.” He said to himself. Ryuu began making the proper hand seals for the technique “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger”, at which point, he gathered together only ten percent of his chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled two fires balls, which this time were identical in size, unlike the last time he tried the technique. And he had correctly transferred five percent into each of the fire balls of chakra.
( 2/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:33 am
“Good job that time. However, in a battle, it will surely take more than a little heat wave to do some damage to your opponent. Try using more chakra and dispering it evenly.” Sasuke said, from his position against the tree.
And Ryuu responded, “Alright, I will try to use more chakra this time.” So Ryuu went through the process of making the hand seals again, “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger”, and this time Ryuu gathered together thirty percent of his chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled what seemed to be three balls of fire. The first one had fifteen percent of Ryuu’s chakra, the second, had fifteen as well, but the third came out as a puff of smoke.
( 3/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:34 am
“Ryuu, you have to remember to balance your chakra out. If you are going to make three fire balls, all you need is gather thirty percent of your chakra, and distrubute it evenly among the other three, which would be ten percent each.” Sasuke said. “He doesn’t seem to be very good at molding chakra.” Sasuke said to himself.
“Okay.. so I have to remember to balance things out. Balance..” Ryuu said in his mind. And soon, he brought his hands back together and began the hand seals “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger”, then he once again gathered thirty percent of his chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled three fire balls once again. This time, Ryuu did a better time than the last. The first fire ball containing nine percent of chakra, the second fire ball containing nine percent of chakra, and the third fire ball containing nine percent of chakra. However, three percent of chakra was wasted because it was never used.
( 4/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:35 am
“Sasuke.. Don’t say a word.. I can get this Jutsu, I know I can. And I will. . I won’t leave this spot until I get it right..” Ryuu said, panting heavily, and taking notice of this, Sasuke threw a pill towards Ryuu and told him “Catch and eat that. It will replenish your stamina, which you use to convert into chakra.”
And upon eating the pill, Ryuu’s muscles tensed up. “Wow! I feel great.” Ryuu said. “Now.. Back to the Jutsu.” And as he finished that sentence, he began the Jutsu again, going through the same process once more, and after he finished the hand seals, he gathered together another thirty percent of chakra, opened his mouth, and expelled three fire balls once again. This time, all three fire balls came out the same way, each one of them having ten percent of chakra each.
( 5/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:36 am
“Much better Ryuu. However, you should try using more chakra. Just to test your own personal limits.” Sasuke said.
As Sasuke said that, Ryuu took a deep breath, and started up doing the hand seals, once more. “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger.” After finishing this seals, Ryuu gathered together fourty percent of his chakra, opened his mouth up wide, and expelled four fire balls from his mouth. The first of the fire balls, containing ten percent of his chakra, the second one of the fire balls, containing ten percent of his chakra, the third, containing ten percent of his chakra, and the fourth, also containing ten percent of his chakra. Ryuu had seemingly mastered how to mold chakra together for this technique.
( 6/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:37 am
“Very good, Ryuu. It looks like you caught onto hold to mold and equally distribute your chakra into your fire balls. However, I want you to try the same thing again. Using the fourty percent of your chakra once again.” Sasuke said lightly.
And it was then that Ryuu began the hand seals once again. “Rat, Tiger, Dog, Ox, Rabbit, and then Tiger.” After finishing this seals, Ryuu gathered together fourty percent of his chakra, opened his mouth up wide, and expelled four fire balls from his mouth. The first of the fire balls, containing ten percent of his chakra, the second one of the fire balls, containing ten percent of his chakra, the third, containing ten percent of his chakra, and the fourth, also containing ten percent of his chakra. Ryuu had seemingly mastered how to mold chakra together for this technique. It had worked just as well as the last time. Ryuu knew at that moment that he master the technique, but it was after finishing it, that his head began to feel very light. “Sasu..”
( 7/8 )
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:38 am
“Chew and swallow.. Chew and swallow Ryuu." And after a moment, Ryuu’s eyes opened slowly.”
“What.. What happened?” Ryuu said.
“You passed out again. But I revived you with a soldier pill.” Sasuke said.
With those words said, Ryuu once again rose to his feet, while Sasuke moved to the side of the road and leaned up against a tree.
“This time, Ryuu, use ninty percent of your chakra.” Sasuke said.
But Ryuu had already begun gathering the necessary amount of chakra for the technique. And once he made it up to ninty percent, Ryuu opened his mouth, and expelled five fire balls, each of them containing eighteen percent of his chakra.
( 8/8 ) Mythical Fire Flower Technique completed!
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 6:40 am
bonedragon17 "Oh well. I'll just have to work around that now." Said Orochimaru with a sinister smile as it started to rain oil from the skys due to Drago's black cloud technique. It was around but the constent flow of his chakra around him prevented the majority of the oil from landing on him. Drago looked and he Used Kage No Bunshun again. Creating five clones of himself. e looked and he pulled out a fire seal lighting himself on fire along with the other clones. He looked and he pulled himself into a ball. As did the others and they all went spinning towards him. "ASSIMLATED MEAT TANK!" Drago called out at the top of his lungs. The five large balls of fire went rolling towards him as the forest around him was catching on fire.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:54 am
Nova had gone into a daze while the fighting progressed. Now Drago was turning the tables of the match as he took on the flaming charge with his assimilated meat tank technique. Nova wondered whatever happened to the lord summons he had seen earlier. He told Doragon to stay back and on gaurd for any attacks. He was to charge in when he was needed by himself. Nova jumped off of Doragons back, and came alongside his other Shikon and three bakuretsu clones. The shikon and himself both had the properties of darkness still, so they masked their presences with the shadows as they moved in on Oroichimaru. As the sky began to rain oil, Nova channeled steady flow of chakra within himself to avoid getting any on himself, Doragon did the same. A fire seal would have a fatal affect, but without oil on yourself, you should be safe. Doragon flew to the opposite side of Oroichimaru as Drago's meat tank. Two of the three bakuretsu clones took the other two sides, ready to move in. Their chakra scalpels were still lit up. The Shikon and actual Nova stood back further away, ready to take down any aerial movement.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 11:48 am
Drago_the_Blackrose bonedragon17 "Oh well. I'll just have to work around that now." Said Orochimaru with a sinister smile as it started to rain oil from the skys due to Drago's black cloud technique. It was around but the constent flow of his chakra around him prevented the majority of the oil from landing on him. Drago looked and he Used Kage No Bunshun again. Creating five clones of himself. e looked and he pulled out a fire seal lighting himself on fire along with the other clones. He looked and he pulled himself into a ball. As did the others and they all went spinning towards him. "ASSIMLATED MEAT TANK!" Drago called out at the top of his lungs. The five large balls of fire went rolling towards him as the forest around him was catching on fire. Orochimaru was hit hard by 3 of the five rolling tanks and started to catch his breath from his crushed chest. Blood was coughted up as he stood up. He then watched Drago move waiting for him to make anotehr attack.
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 12:59 pm
As the day comes around I wake up writing and leaving a note to rock leetelling him thanks for the motivation and trainning but i'm off to find the great naruto i've heard so much about and as I leave I sneak around the village in search for him "Ok, if I were naruto, then where would i stay..." Then i spot a giant building with a giant sparkling sign as I see ramen boxes everywhere outside in his trash I only wonder why it would be easy "Well.......... I guess thats him.." I knock on his door walking in as i see noone there as naruto soon comes out of nowhere as he reeks of a bad smell "Are the great naruto?" He wides his eyes as he sees me clearly he put on his cape doing a weird pose
"Yes that is I the great, the legendary, the incredibley good looking Naruto!!!" I rub my head as I see a piece of toilet paper on his foot knowing he just came from the bathroom "Uhhh Naruto sensei I came here to learn from you if that ok... I wish to learn the kage bushin no jutsu skill and the legendary rasengan jutsu if thats ok with you?" He rubs his head in a bad grunt as he makes me feel bad for asking but then he smiles as he say "Why of course you can kid, alot of people come around asking me that and they learn it lickety split, so lets begin this now why i'm still good looking." He walks outside as I follow him
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