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EchoStryke

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:52 pm


*runs at sanctum at expedential speeds and starts to throw tornado punches all at him as a distraction blows himself in the air and pulls his sword with electricity flowing throught the blade and atempts to strike him on the head*
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 5:52 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:00 pm


EchoStryke
*runs at sanctum at expedential speeds and starts to throw tornado punches all at him as a distraction blows himself in the air and pulls his sword with electricity flowing throught the blade and atempts to strike him on the head*

((OK now here's where I'm gonna stop you. I'm going to take this time to try and get you to RP better. That post is one big sentence that's completely jumbled. I don't even know where you're trying to go with it. Use punctuation, and above all, don't try to force 3 different attacks into your post. A good way to do that, if I read it correctly, would be this:

Echo runs at Sanctum at a blinding speed. He starts punching the air, forming tornadoes as he does so, all aimed at Sanc.

Then I would probably dodge the tornadoes and try to attack back or something. To which you would say something like:

The tornadoes were a mere distraction. By the time Sanctum launches his counter attack, Echo had already launched himself into the air with a whirlwind. He now bore down on Sanctum from above, aiming his lightning blade at his head.

That's a good way to run things. Now try to be more detailed and less jumbled. Punctuation is your best friend.))

*Sanctum raised his katana and blocked Echo's sword. The electricity emanating from the sword was absorbed into Sanctum's shoulder and released 5-fold towards Echo.* ((For reference, if you get hit by this attack, it has the intensity of being hit by 10 of the lightning clones I had you fight))
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:05 pm


*He remembers his training. So he drops his sword. Then he stops the electricity and absorbs it into his chest to make himself stronger. Because he has learned how to absob energy rather than let it hurt him*

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:10 pm


"Well that's new. Oh well." *Sanctum makes 2 clones of himself. He then rakes at Echo's face while the other two clones aim for each leg with their katanas.*
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:13 pm


*Echo sees this attack coming. So he uses a tornado to push himself upwards. Sends punches of lightning and wind at the clones. Then comes down with a counter-attack at sanctum as a lightning tornado*

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:17 pm


EchoStryke
*Echo sees this attack coming. So he uses a tornado to push himself upwards. Sends punches of lightning and wind at the clones. Then comes down with a counter-attack at sanctum as a lightning tornado*

((OK good you're getting better. Keep it up))

*The two clones jump back away from the battle to avoid the lightnadoes. Sanctum merely smiles at Echo's feeble attempt and whips his hand through the air, dissipating the tornado. The lightning is once again absorbed into Sanc's shoulder.* "You're better than that, Echo!" *He reaches up with his Demon arm to try to catch Echo as he falls, as both clones loose their shuriken at towards him, one on his left, one on his right.*
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:24 pm


Fine how about this *Shoots himself up once again to aviod getting grabed by sanctums demonic arm. Shoots what seems to be lightning nets at the clones. Then runs once again at expedincial rates towards sanctum. Then a strike of lightning and hes behind sanctum with 2 clones. the clones go after sanctums clones. Then another strike and hes in front of him and he then atempts to cut Sanctums body armor off*

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:33 pm


EchoStryke
Fine how about this *Shoots himself up once again to aviod getting grabed by sanctums demonic arm. Shoots what seems to be lightning nets at the clones. Then runs once again at expedincial rates towards sanctum. Then a strike of lightning and hes behind sanctum with 2 clones. the clones go after sanctums clones. Then another strike and hes in front of him and he then atempts to cut Sanctums body armor off*

*Sanctum traces all of Echo's moves and is prepared. He allows the sword to hit his shoulder blade, and it bounces off harmlessly* "What? Did you think that was armor? That's my bones. I don't wear armor. Armor is for the weak. Nope, that's genuine Demon Bone right there. Shall we continue?" *He made to uppercut Echo with his demon arm*
PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:42 pm


*Echo swiftly put barely moves out of the way. Then he blows himself in the air again* ((sorry my i really g2g we shall finish this tomorrow))

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 6:44 pm


EchoStryke
*Echo swiftly put barely moves out of the way. Then he blows himself in the air again* ((sorry my i really g2g we shall finish this tomorrow))

((We'll see....))
PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:50 am


EchoStryke
*Echo swiftly put barely moves out of the way. Then he blows himself in the air again* ((sorry my i really g2g we shall finish this tomorrow))


* Echo realizes how strong his aponent is so he stops to think. So he uses a stike of lightning and makes 8 tornadoes off at a distance. Using the technique calpoeria he sends all 8 at sanctum. But he is hidden in one.*

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:55 am


((Just for reference, this fight is taking place in a different time than now, cause IC Sanctum is at the lobby of the GIT and is EXTREMELY weak.))

*Sanctum whips his hands through the air and dissipates the tornadoes, revealing the fact that Echo is trying to hide in one.* "I don't think so." *He throws his shuriken at Echo's head and charges after it, matching its intense speed, waiting to see which way Echo dodges*
PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:59 am


*Echo decides only to jump higher than the shuriken then comes down blade out to meet sanctums blade with his own*

((why what happened last night?))

EchoStryke


Sanctum-Darkholme
Crew

PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 3:03 am


EchoStryke
*Echo decides only to jump higher than the shuriken then comes down blade out to meet sanctums blade with his own*

((why what happened last night?))

((Lots of s**t... I'll only explain if you really wanna know, for some reason.))

*Sanctum allowed the blades to hit, then reached up to grab Echo's jacket with his free hand, trying to use his downward momentum to slam him head-first into the ground*
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