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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Mon Apr 23, 2007 5:56 pm
Wow that is beautiful T.T Pass! Definite!
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 8:17 am
RP Sample: NO village yet sweatdrop
As Ryu was waking up from his sleep, Ryu noticed that the tree he slept on had some apples on them, so Ryu got up and picked an apple that was on the tree. Ryu jumped down from the tree and when Ryu's feet hit the ground they started to tremble, Ryu was running to a nearby town and while he was running he was also looking at the necklace that his parents gave him, Ryu was remembering the great memorys he had with his parents before they died, Ryu's eyes started watering, Ryu wiped his eyes and he put the necklace away and got to the town and as he got there he said "I am sorry".
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 4:35 pm
Try using more than just Ryu and he. How 'bout mentioning your eye color, or hair color. Stuff like that.
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 1:01 pm
I sprinted down the hall, it was only a matter of seconds before they would catch me. I had just recently stolen the srtifact of lightning and had to get back to my village. My name is Itizuki and I am a spy for the village hidden in the leaves.
My friend Frederick was waiting just out sid the wall. If I made it to him, I would be safe. Three ninja of the village hidden in the grass were after me. They were huge, probably the gaurds. Anyways, I was almost to the gate. A few seconds and I would be safe. My heart was racing, my adrenline rushing, and my breath was short. All that stood in my way now was the gate. Then, it happened.... a loud boom.... I don't really remember what happened next because I was knocked unconcious. Though when I woke up, I was back at my village. Frederick said he saved me so I was safe.
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:37 pm
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Posted: Tue May 01, 2007 2:47 pm
RP Sample: NO village yet
Ryu was a 13 year old boy who had small spiky black hair and he had red sharp eyes, Ryu's Parents died when he was 5 and he had an X scar on his back.
As Ryu was waking up from his sleep, he noticed that the tree he slept on had some apples on them, so Ryu got up and picked an apple that was on the tree. as he jumped down from the tree and when hes feet hit the ground they started to tremble, Ryu got his bag ready he start running to a nearby town and while he was running he was also looking at the necklace that his parents gave him, Ryu was remembering the great memorys he had with his parents before they died, his eyes started watering, Ryu wiped his eyes and he put the necklace away and got to the town and as he got there he said "I am sorry".
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 1:56 am
OMFG! SORREH! Didn't check here for a while...
Dude if you guys check back POST YOUR NAMES IN THE VILLAGE LESS ACTIVENESS CHECK. If not you will be banned. We're cleaning up the member list and I can't guarantee that you will be safe >.>
@Tyranitar: That's like telling a story... what about describing a certain situation? Ok I'll give you the one I normally give people: You're cleaning some person's house for a mission.
@Uzumaki Naruto of Konoha: The background is kinda cliched, but the actual sample is OK. Pass.
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 5:46 am
Yay Thank you very much so now what should i do?
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 7:14 pm
Well first thing is to post in the damn activeness check for village-less people!
That is the only way to ensure that you won't get banned as we are having a guild clean up now >.<
Then figure out which village you want to join, check the Village Status to see if it's full then PM the Kage politely with your profile if it isn't to request to get in.~
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Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 7:31 pm
ok i am goin to go post on some places
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 11:30 am
I'm just going to say now that I live in Canada, so some of our spelling is different.
(example: American - Color / Canadian - Colour)
RP sample:
Aurikan was just too tired. He sat down on a large rock next to the dusty road. He had been walking all day trying to find his Sensei, and he hadn't yet. Aurikan never liked exerting himself unless he had to, but this was too much. In addition, it was incredibly cold outside, and the wind kept blowing his brown hair all over his face. When the wind finally did die down a bit, his blue eyes caught a glimpse of someone standing off at a distance. He squinted, trying to make out who it was. And there he was! Aurikan had found him.
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 1:44 pm
I'm going to try to join Kusagakure, so my sample's based on that.
RP Sample:
A delicate breeze swept over the range of rolling hills that dotted the landscape, blowing against the myriad blades of grass and causing them to shift and dance, their rustling seeming to create a melodious song of nature itself. There was a reason why this was one of his favorite spots. The village was nearby, but no sounds drifted past the hills to his ears. There was only the swaying and shuffling of the grass, a beautiful and calming melody.
Anamori stood by himself atop one of the hills, closing his rust-colored eyes to simply listen. His long crimson hair was pulled up in a topknot, the winds brushing long chin-length bangs against his face, errant strands of hair blowing against his eyelids. His long red muffler billowed in the air behind him, as did the overlarge sleeves of his jacket, the only other sound aside from the wind and grass. He basked in the warm glow of the morning sun as it rose in the sky, an orange light drifting across the horizon.
He came out here almost every morning, and every afternoon as well. At times like these he felt that the wind was actually talking to him, whispering soft words in his ear. But he never said anything back. Nothing needed be said. Words were insufficient. But as he opened his eyes again a stray thought occured to him, and he wondered if the wind was trying to tell him that he was late for class.
Oh well.
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 2:22 pm
Heh, it will be blan and kind of remind you of some old movie but its how I am lol. This will be a character from a book I have been working on for some time named Icheti. Yes I used the name from my avi. The look too. So this is not how I rp with others but if I am alone its how I rp and if I am rping with those who know I don't god mode I just make a story lol.
RP Sample:
The clanking of metal was heard in the distance past some trees. As the view focused past the massive trees all eyes who watched could see a massive man standing there. His body was easily twice the size of any human and with muscles that would crush mountains with a flex. The man was shirtless showing his huge abs and massive pecks. His body was covered in hundreds of scars and about three slashes that looked brand new. His pants were more like shorts now torn from the knee down from being on his body for years and never taken off. His legs were covered in huge wraps to help seal the wounds on his legs and feet from walking for years without stop. The wraps were covered in red splashes being the blood of other men.
He busted a huge two handed battle axe. The blade was double sided and had a spear like edge that came from the top of the massive slate of steel. This spear like edge had a skull pushed onto it showing this man had killed before and judging from the insane look on his beaten and distroted face he had killed hundreds of women and men. The axes blades had carv marks in them from the edges of blades being smashed against it and pushed the metal of the axe inwards.
Now, as the eyes of looked into the mans shadow they saw a dark smaller figure. It only stood at six feet the most holding the sheath of long blade. The figure had on black baggy pants and a muscle shirt which looked alittle dressy. He had on a pair of black kickboxing gloves and a pair of black shoes. His stance was god like and his face black like the hair that covered his one eye. This showed he was wearing a mask. But this mask had one eye showing and the mouth was in a grin almost mocking his foes. The figured used the opposite hand of the one griping the sheath to grab the hilt of this long blade. The swords sheath was touching the ground even as he held it showing how long this sword was.
Screams were heard as the huge man with the axe lifted and brought the sword down in one large thud. All thought the smaller man was dead but as the dust from the wind of this huge axe stoped there stood the man holding his sword up blocking the axe of that monster of a man. He used only one hand and did the wierdest thing, laughed. This was no normal laugh though it was insane, muniacle and even sick. It made woman fearful, it made men step infront of the women to protect them. Something wasn't right about this warrior something was evil about him.
Then they heard it the sickened voice of this evil warrior. "Fullish ox of a man, you think you stand a chance against the power of Icheti?" Gasps were heard, and the huge man stood back from the raspy voice. It was Icheti the great, a man of many names none striking fear like Icheti. The people were running and he stood there grining. This huge man thought he would have won till he heard the name. Icheti then shuved the axe off his own blade and took one slash a huge wave of energy cutting through the man, pushing its way past him and into the forest choping down trees making them fall on the people.
Icheti just laughed and looked at the half of a man shaking his head. "Should have backed away like your gang, you would havel lived." Icheti grined behind the mask and let his sword drop on the face of this huge beast of a man killing him. Thuds and crashes though still heard as trees fell the blast still traveling till it collided with a huge mountian. The mountain had an avalanch and one last thud was heard as the bottom half of the man finaly feel. Icheti just shook his head at the clearing of trees as rocks rushed down it for Icheti himself. He bowed to the rocks and then disappeared minutes before they hit him.
The rocks crushed the people and the huge man, then they stoped as they smashed against the trees on the other side of the clearing the rocks adventure over just like the huge mans. Another life taken by Icheti, with no one to stop him.
((Sorry is a bit long I don't know if thats a bad thing to you guys but there it is lol.))
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 2:50 pm
If those last two examples don't get passed, Hell must've frozen over.
Those are beyond awesome. Good job, you two.
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Posted: Fri May 04, 2007 2:54 pm
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