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 Posted: Thu May 05, 2011 12:12 pm
Sweet, and I am not in any rush, just wanted to know.
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 12:17 pm
Hrm... How should I introduce my character?
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:10 pm
Well Havik's character is alone in the Bar & Grill, you could talk to him? Or come join me, Sadness, and Shay in the Courtyard.
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:27 pm
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:33 pm
Well, make him less boring? You can always mess with the RPC to make it more interesting to yourself, be it emotions, interests, preferences. Just go wild and see what comes out. Or you could try what I do, and just start with a base idea and let it evolve itself.
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Posted: Sat May 07, 2011 1:35 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Well, make him less boring? You can always mess with the RPC to make it more interesting to yourself, be it emotions, interests, preferences. Just go wild and see what comes out. Or you could try what I do, and just start with a base idea and let it evolve itself.That my friends, is called character development. Just remember, static characters are bad.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 11:56 am
No offense here, but you have no one to blame but yourself. It's probably indicative of not forming a strong connection with your RPC by creating an in depth backstory, or setting goals for him.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 4:43 pm
Cobra_X No offense here, but you have no one to blame but yourself. It's probably indicative of not forming a strong connection with your RPC by creating an in depth backstory, or setting goals for him. I did set goals for him; they where to be just like Yasashii... But he doesn't know what the hell Yasashii does no does he gonk And no, I'm not offended at all; I know it's my fault gonk
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 5:26 pm
Mai's goal is to become the best Medical Shinobi in existance, with superior knowledge in traditional medical procedures, and shinobi ones.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 5:56 pm
Yasashii's goal is simple. Make Oto the strongest village in the world. And learn/develop billions of sealing techniques and styles. The two may coincide a bit.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 7:37 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Yasashii's goal is simple. Make Oto the strongest village in the world. And learn/develop billions of sealing techniques and styles. The two may coincide a bit. When I say " just like Yasashii" I don't mean that sealing wise. You see, Tenza has this image of Yasa being this total badass destruction machine of death gore and destruction... Strong enough to bring a village down with just raising a finger; kinda like the Otokage, Jade and Cobra's Konaga, which I forgot his name. Tenza's goal is to be up there with the big dogs of the Shinobi world. [ Jade, Aeden, Greg's Rpc, Luo, and such. ]
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 8:14 pm
iAkura-kun Strong enough to bring a village down with just raising a finger The funny part here is, he could actually do that... Literally... But that isn't really such a good RPC goal. Sounds great, but it doesn't give much to push for. Which would explain why he became boring. My RPCs usually run on more immediate goals, without all that much thought for the future. They usually have one final goal that shapes their current ones, but they don't run entirely by it. Yasashii's goal is to make Oto great. To do that, his more immediate goals are raising the next generation, and keeping Oto hidden from view, while helping to forge alliances. He does as is needed at the time. David... Actually, David has no goals. His purpose in life is to survive, and he'll do whatever it takes to do so. More immediate goals for him are usually progression of his skills, or completion of whatever mission has been put before him. So really, what I'm going for is this. Don't pick a vague cliche goal like being the best around. Go instead for something more visible, such as becoming a master of something or other. I believe Tenza is a ninjutsu specialist, so he could have a goal of becoming a ninjutsu master, knowing every jutsu around, and using them in amazing ways, sort of like Yasashii uses his seals.
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 8:22 pm
Hinote Tosatsu iAkura-kun Strong enough to bring a village down with just raising a finger So really, what I'm going for is this. Don't pick a vague cliche goal like being the best around. Go instead for something more visible, such as becoming a master of something or other. I believe Tenza is a ninjutsu specialist, so he could have a goal of becoming a ninjutsu master, knowing every jutsu around, and using them in amazing ways, sort of like Yasashii uses his seals. Yea I know he can do that; which is why I said it. And I already know hos Tenza is going to fight... I just need to get him to Chunin to be able to use Ototon to mix it with his crystal release. My original plan for him was to mix the Crystal clone jutsu along with the jutsu that made the user turn into crystal; used by the clone, mixing it with another custom jutsu I made; sonic shotgun, to make a wall of sound that spands for about 50 feet... more or less, depending on how much crystals are made by that jutsu. All in all, Tenza will be boing until he reaches Chunin x.x What makes him badass is his crystal element, which he doesn't have yet... Combined with his Sound element...which he doesn't have yet either... Is that way of using my sound/crystal jutsu amazing enough for you? And I guess that will work...even though Tenza hates both Doton and Raiton...
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 8:27 pm
Mai is going to be that medical shinobi who kicks a** (More than Aeden when she ranks up.)
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2011 8:48 pm
Shin doesn't really have any goals, he just kinda bobs around waiting for stuff to happen.
How did Mai know what Shin did with his chakra? It is a sound Village tai style tech that I morphed into something far less brutal, so I don't really see how she would do it on her own I don't remember making people puke with chakra being a passive ability, and it was camouflaged with a drunken mans stupor. Not that it wouldn't be noticeable by someone who knew the style, or someone who was fairly high rank and had that awesome ninja ability to know every.
Just seems kinda like she shouldn't have noticed since she is a brand new Rpc and chakra usage should still be a fairly new activity for her.
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