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Actually i would like the jutsu to be reduced to C rank with these new changes, is that acceptable?

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Character: Hayashi Mizuumi
Technique Name: Mokuton: San-Sacchi Kouyou Jutsu (Wood Style: 3 Sense Enhancement Technique)
Rank: C
Type:Ninjutsu
Description: Once the user who posses mokuton then forms the necessary hand signs. Then the user sinks into a tree, and can see hear and feel everything in the area using the tree as a conductor. The more trees the stronger the jutsu. The user can only feel and see what the trees can (so eyes from on the trees but if the opponent travels underground or above the trees without touching them the opponent can still be undetected.
Drawback: The user is in the tree so if said tree is burned down the user will be burned down also.



Character: Hayashi Mizuumi
Technique Name: Mokuton: Ki-Tabi Jutsu (Wood Release: Tree Travel Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Description: After the user forms the necessary hand signs the user can literally sink into the tree with ease, and can travel virtually anywhere through wood.This is similar to Haku's technique in that any source of wood can pretty much be used as a source of travel. This technique isn't however an instant transportation and if the opponent can destroy the tree quick enough The use can in fact be destroyed as well.

Both are Denied

Resubmitting my revisions to these techniques since i had totally spaced on revising them since the time I was sent a Pm about the issues with the first. The first was passed with the addition of the clause at it's end about the subtraction of 40 points to chakra pool permanently. The rest were all rewritten or changed.


Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Crystal Quartz Mirror
Rank: passive with materials required present (B-rank training)
Type Ninjutsu
Element: Garasu (Glass) Bloodline
Description: A Hari clan member Garasu Chakra user can create even stronger glass when they take the time to perfect their glass making abilities and use the natural silicate involved in their glass crafting abilities and carefully allow carbon dioxide to flood into the forge of the speedily made glass.The molecular structure of this glass can be forged into crystal quartz glass. Which functions much like normal simple silicate glass but is harder due to the carbon involved in it's structure. The density grade stands on a scale of 1-10 to be 7, half a point higher than steel (*6.5)The only draw back is that the glass make is slightly slower and the glass made is heavier. Yet other wise the grade of the glass and the ability to make it “shatter proof” (though still technically breakable yet at a much more straining cost) can create very powerful constructs that may not be easily broken by average means.
~This technique permanently reduces the users maximum chakra pool by -40


Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name:BloodRuby Quartz
Rank: passive with materials required present (S-rank training)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Garasu (Glass) Bloodline
Description: A Hari clans member who seeks to go even further than glass that is even more versatile and deadly than crafting the normal harder than steel Quartz variant of their glass make can further their skills with the use of blood ( hardness *9 on scale) Drawing blood into the forge of the glass the crystal quartz retains a blood red hue and becomes capable of carrying over chakra signature for a given period of time before shattering or until shattered. Normal Hari clan techniques become even stronger with the energy of different chakra natures running trough them. This Glasses length of use stands by the Chakra poured into it Via blood. Activation cost 40 points of charka per item ( kunai, swords, clone,etc. E-B techs) formed. Four items or one large construct ( large dome, terrain cover, rain of glass tech, etc.*A-S techs) can be made in a turn cost of 160 points total. This glass being formed can retain at most 60 chakra from the targets blood it's formed from. Each turn these constructs are active it depletes 10 points of chakra shattering when empty.( these glass constructs can carry over an ability of the blood such as keiki genki's that are elemental) Clones formed under this technique resemble the person who's blood is retained in the ruby quartz. These cost are placed on top of the chakra spent to form the whatever specific technique is being produced.



Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Beast-Shinobi Shadow Transformation Technique
Rank: C, A, S
Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu (Tamer)
Element: Maruton
Description: The Beast-Ninja Shadow Tranfomation Technique is essentially a technique which turns a tamer ninja's partners into humans by degree's. Each stage spends and exchanges the chakra equal to rank and in this transference of chakra trough the shared action of the partner and tamer nin.
Shadow of the Shifter: This chakra transference allows the animal to gain more human characteristics like hands and the ability to use weapons. The Tamer gains a animalistic trait from the partner used in the technique which is only one to begin with (three is the maximum at jounin rank). Three transformation takes from in a the form of the tamer and partner being temporarily concealed from sight in an absence of light. The change reveals the partner with an antro appearance as stage one C-rank with the most basic abilities suggestive of the technique.
Shadow of the Warrior: The Tamer on the other hand gains one simple trait from the partner and their eyes change to resemble that of the animals. When changing the beast takes on it's own independent form, making it different from the “Beast-Man clone technique” which has the partner turn into the tamer shinobi in likeness. The Partner takes on their own independent form full clothed in respecters to their ninja village., by stage two they look fully human rather than a human animal mixture. The shroud of darkness now not only changes the as described but also grants them one simple weapon to which that can draw with the expense of 20 charka at A-rank.
Shadow of the Beast-Master: The final stage the full transformed partners and the tamer all become shrouded by the darkness once more emerging not completely revealed of the the shadow like cloak which envelopes them from their feet. The partners are fully clothed in black garments or armor and the tamer is as well wearing a flowing shadow like version of their apparel. This shroud grants the animals an added trait of being hidden from being sensed by sensor techniques of any type. Their sheer presence seems to bring a darkness with them which darkens the are of at most half a mile. With a superficial mental link to the Tamers position an actions (not senses but more over motions) they can improve their fighting ability as a unit . The tamer working as a terminal between the partners can spread this communicative ability to all partners used in this technique.The tamers body has shifted rather than just taking on the traits of the three partners but has a chimer like form which collaborates each form (human +3animal appendages). They are capable of taming near by creatures which are shared in the mixture the chimera form that are in listening distance of the tamers roar. Each stage of this technique can last up to five [5] post.



Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name:Gotoryu [Five-sword Style]
Rank: B [Stance]
Type:Bukijutsu, Taijutsu
Description: Gotoryu is a sword-style which elaborates on the Santoryu's styles by adding the legs as another pair of “blades”. The legs don't actually become blade like but trough this style Santoryu techniques can be performed using the legs, yet the cutting force would be very much like being hit with the blunt edge of a single-edged blade. Though with the use of items such as bladed grieves or anything which would add a actual razor edge to the legs would increase the cutting potential of the legs all together. In learning Gotoryu Santoru techniques trough out it forms can be considered to have two more “blades” and Black Leg techniques will dig in or cut more deeply than they usually would. Gotoryu style allows for this strong mix of taijutsu and bukijutsu allowing the strength of either form to intermingle and support the other. The strengths of both are slightly improved and bolstered to match the others.



Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Spectral Havoc
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Description: A Genjutsu based on the transmission of light. The Shinobi uses the proper hand signs to permeate signal of into the ambient light around them which creates and illusion that Activate trough sight and touch. This illusion allows the Shinobi to have their opponent suddenly believe they are capable of spontaneously combusting the very air around them with a gesture. Once captured by the technique one can sense all things pertaining to what it would feel like to be willed to explode into flames. Even the environment would seem to be effected. Since this technique works on light whom ever looks at the user or sees some one effected will be put under a half state of the illusion. Where they will not feel the sensation but experience the genjutsu trough all other senses. This jutsu is weaker in the dark, and can be amplified trough focusing light. (when amplified the rank of the effect rises by one, in darkness it lowers by one. Making the experience end with in a turn rather than three.) In summary the first party or the one directly put under the jutsu is made to feel the full effect to it's full duration. The second party or those outside of the shinobi who cast the technique are only fooled for one turn but in the instance that someone touches their burning ally the jutsu won't make them feel pain and it would be broken.

Character: Hikori Hozuki
Technique Name: Eye of The Art
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Clay Manipulation
Description: This jutsu allows Hikori to view the world through the eyes of a single piece of art he creates. This jutsu can only be used on one creature at a time and even then can only be used once per day. This jutsu costs the regular amount to use and then an extra ten for every post it is active.



Character: Hikori Hozuki
Technique Name: Flashbang Art
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Clay Manipulation
Description: Quiet an odd jutsu, this gives the user the ability to detonate any normal explosive attack a little bit differently. For instance, if the user created a C1 bird and sent it flying the user could detonate it, however instead of creating an explosion it creates a blindingly bright light and deafening bang. Note: This jutsu does not create anything, it just gives the user the ability to make the clay explode in a flashbang style instead of an explosion

Character: Sakura Hentona Nara (Doc)
Technique Name: Deathwatch
Rank: D
Type: Eiseijutsu

Description: Allows Doc to see where a shinobi is within 30ft, if they are close to death and anyone within 5ft will be prevented from dying for just long enough for Doc to get to them.

duration 1 post

Character:Noctis Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Snow military movement
Rank: E
Type: Bloodline
Element: Snow
Description: When this jutsu is activated, the user's body is turned to snow and falls apart into the ground. They are now able to freely move through any connecting snow on the ground. For greater effect, needs to cover the ground in snow. Or be somewhere where snow is already on the floor. Lasts 5 posts