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Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2010 9:01 pm
Stormold Your Rank: Genin Name of Jutsu: Steps of Light Rank of Jutsu: Genin to learn (Jounin rank chakra cost) Range of Jutsu: sight range, or to a premade seal (no range restrictions for a seal) Jutsu's Element: Universal/chakra (no real element required) Description: The use takes "steps" at nearly the speed of light to a chosen destination. The user takes in chakra, manipulates it throughout their body and in a sense covers it completely. Once a spot is chosen they transport, unable to attack and unable to be attacked. However, a jutsu prepared before "stepping" can be used immediately after since it is not lost during the process. Rp Sample ((the not-so-long awaited rp sample rofl )) -The character name is Fyn, Jounin, Leaf- A long, cold breeze blew across the surface of the river. Fyn had been staring out over the water for some time now, the sun had begun to rise even. "Ahh... well, now that I can finally see the other side... time to go." He was referring to the other river bank. He had walked for a day and a half with no luck of a boat or bridge. Fyn, without wasting another moment, focused his chakra. He erased all other possible marks in his mind, focused on a dry spot of grass... and jumped. Not up, but forward through space. To him, he took one step forward and arrived on the opposite bank. A smile crossed his face, which faded instantly as his eyes fell on his backpack... across the river. "Ohh... you little son of a..." A moment later and Fyn had the backpack in hand, and just as quickly he was back to the other side of the river. Tired from stepping that many times so quickly back to back, he walked slowly to catch his breath. "Ehh... tired is not the best way to start out a day." Fyn muttered to himself, sighing as he walked on. I got ignored crying
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Posted: Fri Aug 20, 2010 5:59 pm
Your Rank: Gennin Name of Jutsu: Suiton: SuiKei Water release: Water Whip Rank of Jutsu: C Range of Jutsu: 3 feet from the user Jutsu's Element: Suiton Description: The user places chakra into the palm of his/her hand and begins to control a small and thin amount of water and then shaping it into the form of a whip, from that the user can inflict damage to the opponent. The jutsu is 5 inches thick and three feet ling initially and the user can only control 1 whip at a time as a gennin. On chunnin the whip is 7 inches long and 4 feet long. At jounin it is a foot wide and 5 feet long. And at Kage/Sannin the whip is 2 feet wide and 6 feet long; at this point the whip is able to carry only the user by simply not making it long, by turning the length into how wide the jutsu is; also, the whip’s thickness is controlled by the length, for example, if a gennin is using the jutsu and he’s fighting someone at close range, instead of the whip being 5 inches x 1 foot, it could be 7 inches by 10 inches, the jutsu can only drop/increase two inches from the original length. The jutsu only lasts 3 posts and it can be broken by any disruption will break the jutsu. It requires a large amount of concentration to use it as a gennin. For a extra 4 chakra points a nother whip can be taken out of the current whip is it cannot be moved for a reason; this can only be done for ninja chunnin and above and the whip is at 1/8 of the original power.
Name of Jutsu: Stone twister Rank of Jutsu: B ( A rank chakra cost, to use this jutsu either one jounin ranked ninja that knows wind armor and any doton jutsu that includes throwing or other forms of earth ( Such as te stone clone jutsu and others. ) Range of Jutsu: 4 feet from the flying stones Jutsu's Element: Earth/ Wind Description: The user places chakra into the hand, feet and floor which cause loose, small or medium sized rocks to begin to spin around the user. The stones can block any suiton jutsu B rank or lower, any other technique C rank or lower but it can be broken even by a D rank raiton technique. While the jutsu is used the users speed is lowered by one rank. The stones have the capability (if used by an assassin ninja) to potentially knock out an enemy if he/she is one rank bellow the user. The stones can also be thrown at the enemy but they do very little damage that way unless a futon jutsu is used to back it up.
Your Rank: Gennin Name of Jutsu: Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip Rank of Jutsu: A (Takes B rank chakra to use and every 3 whips used takes C rank chakra) Range of Jutsu: 25 feet from the dragon sphere Jutsu's Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element.This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target. (A maximum of 5 whips are used at a time, they can be detached and once they are they go on a straight line for the next five feet until they simply evaporate of merge back whit the water. The dragon itself lasts only 4 posts, but if the whips are moved back to the dragon, or the dragon is near a body of water, if can draw the water source from it and last up to 6 posts.
Rp Sample:
A young tanned girl with a anbu mask walked into the iceberg stage on Yukigure, she rose her view and saw another ninja off at the other side of the 40 foot iceberg like stage. Both of the ninja walked slowly toward the center of the stage as the leader of the village watched them steadily. The girl rapidly made seals as she jumped five feet away from the other ninja," Suiton: SuiKei."She said coldly once her foot touched the floor, she moved her arms upward in a fluid motion as the two pouches on her back opened and water came out form them. "You will pay, today you breathed your last breath!" She exclaimed as she abruptly lunged her arms to the front as the foot wide whip exploded toward the man, the man jumped back swiftly as the whip impaled into the ice, the anbu then made seals as another much thinner and shorter whip came out from the initial whip and wrapped his foot as the anbu began to spin her hand as the whip wrapped the man, she then pulled back on her arm as the whip pulled the man back toward the anbu, he was pulled upside down beside the anbu and she glared deep into his eyes as he gave her a smile. "Sekkai Saka (Rock Hill Creation) " He plainly said as a five foot hill rose and broke the anbu's water whip right on it's tracks.
The man then made few seals "Doton: Rikujou Shougekiha no jutsu (Earth Release: Ground shockwave technique)" He said as he punched the hill and turned it into large chunks of rock. He them made another seal and wind began to form around the man " Stone Twister." He said as the smile on his face along with the hill were gone. " Today I breathed my last breath huh." He said comely as he walked toward the girl as the gusts of wind picked up the stones he crushed. "Suiryuuben!" A cry was heard from the crowd as a man jumped into the stadium. A large dragon of water began to form behind the man as water roared from bellow the iceberg. The new man then looked back at the girl who was trammeling with fear, the ninja then walked over to her and took her mask. " I'll take it from here." He said as the water dome behind him roared once more.
The two ninja stood looking at each other for a few minutes until the one with the stone twister smiled his damned smile. " I knew I had seen you before..." The man spoke as the other ninja looked at him a little shocked. " That voice.... It can be..." He muttered as he moved his hands upward and water came from his dome and spun around him, the other ninja jumped back as he felt uneasy to the strange jutsu the man was using, " I am Kay, of Sunagakure." He said plainly as the stone twister flew around him and the other ninja smiled as well. " The final showdown brother." The man with the dragon, which was Akura, said plainly. Akura then shot his hand forward as three whips shot directly toward Kay, he then moved his hand in an upward motion as two more whips came out of the dragon and shot to the top of the stone twister. Kay saw the first three whips and shot out three stones from his jutsu to smash into the whips and to destroy them, but instead the whips smashed into the rocks whit out a clear winner, both the whips and the rocks turned into dust and disappeared. Both Kay and Akura glared at each other and Kay ran toward Akura, Akura then moved his arms upward as the two whips from above crashed into the stones inside the twister, but the same result came out. Once Kay was 10 feet from Akura he was at point blank range for his stones, but Akura already knew this so he moved his dragon into direct attack possition, Akura pushed his hands toward Kay as the dragon itself acted like a whip and smashed through Kay's jutsu and shattering the iceberg.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 5:38 am
Name of Jutsu: Kikaichuu radar Rank of Jutsu: D Jutsu's Element: bug user Description: This jutsu requires chakra to use, plus an extra 1 chakra cost per turn. The Aburame sends his/her bugs around them creating a wide grid. The bugs are connected by a very thin thread of chakra which can be used to send information. This allows the bug user to search an area, or watch a base camp for any disturbances. This would allow for any important information to be known immediately to the user, instead of waiting for the bugs to deliver information directly. This jutsu does not allow the user to see all, it merely lets them know if anything is wrong around them. The exact nature of the disturbance is not transmitted, although the size and speed of the object is. When used to search an area, small details are very easy to miss. The grid covers a radius of 30 feet in all directions at genin, and then grows 10 feet per rank. The bugs are spread thin so they are very difficult to notice. Rp Sample Nagisa frowned as she inspected the area. If anyone were to get too close she was in danger of being caught in her sleep. A thin stream of bugs flowed from her sleeve, and then spread out through the area. A byakugan user was the only real threat to this jutsu Nagisa knew, the line of chakra spread through the bugs would broadcast her location instead of the enemies. It was a good thing that she wasn't running from a Hyuuga however. Nagisa had only just driffted into the world of dreams, when she was awoken by the breaking chakra lines to her right. Something small had startked the bugs, and she could tell that it was moving quickly as well. shurken nagisa assumed and she launched out of her makeshift bed, prepared for battle.
@Akusa the swamp illusion. your description isnt very descriptive. does it create a genjutsu or does it only cause interference for the byakugan/sharingan users? if it casts a genjutsu what kind of genjutsu is it? sorry that one kind of stuck out to me...
((does the description make sense?
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 7:01 am
@ Rin: Thanks for pointing that out.
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Posted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 9:02 am
(( Jutsu completed ^^ On last page. ))
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:50 pm
Alright, I have some time, so I'm taking a quick look at these!
Hikaro: Going to let Shira finish with you on those, sorry.
Zin: I'm honestly not sure, can you PM whoever usually works with you on your clan stuff?
Storm: Could you set the rank to the proper settings? E-S. We have two different jounin level costs, so yeah.
Considering the rather high price, the basic use of teleporting within sight seems fine, but I'm not so sure on the long distance part. Would the seal needed have to be made by a sealing master, or are these things you'll be able to randomly pull out of your pocket as if you have an infinite supply? You'll need another technique for the seal, being that they are separate uses. In fact, I'd personally recommend splitting the technique. One for the visual jumping, and another one entirely for the long distance seal travel.
Akura: I'm not even looking at those until you fix the RP sample. One prolonged story does not work, because you have a bunch of useless information, and hardly anything about the technique.
Hikaro: So these bugs spread out, and telepathically relay information through the chakra strings? You're aware that if all of them started relaying at once, it would fry your brain, right?
I think you'll need to better define just what they are able to relay, and how the information is sent. Is it raw data, or like a conversation? And are they able to tell you about that poisonous snake hiding in the bush, or just that there is something in the bush.
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:37 pm
Your Rank: Academy Student
Name of Jutsu: Transmissive seal
Rank of Jutsu: c Rank
Range of Jutsu: N/a
Jutsu's Element: Fuinjutsu
Description: The User creates two ideantical seals, Both with the Same amount of chakra, and is capable of moving through one and out of the other. In lower ranks this jutsu is not much to speak of, but in Higher ranks, this jutsu can be applied and the Effects could be horrible to the opponent.
D-Rank: The seals can only be about 50 meters apart, while still working.
C-Rank: The Seals have doubled their prowess, and can now be 100 meters apart while still being able to work.
B-Rank: This Technique has now reached a much grander scale. The Seals can be up to one mile apart, and still work.
A-Rank: The Seals can now reach up to two miles apart without fail.
S-Rank: The Seals have reached their almost maximum peak. They can now be placed anywhere and their reach is limitless.
SS-Rank: This is the greatest height of this jutsu. The User can now even go into the Jinjuriiki's inner world, but they can not release the Seal from within the Seal's world.
Rp Sample
" Hello there, welcome to my little room... also known as your crypt. " Akaishi said smiling at the little Jinjuriiki that had touched his seal.
" Wh-where am I? " The Jinjuriiki said, His hair standing on end, Blue and black chakra starting to seep out. " I don't like this guy, Be on your guard... But it isn't necesarrily this guy I don't like... it is this room..." The Nibi said to his Host, letting out a low growl. " Who are you, and what do you plan to do with me? " The Host said, his teeth turning to fangs easily.
" I would so love to continue this but, Alas I must wrap this up quickly. " Akaishi said smiling, Standing against the wall where in a perfect outline of him there were no seals. " I'm sorry, but you must die. " Akaishi said smiling. Golden bits of his web substance began to form on his hands, and he placed them together, pulling his hands apart slowly he revealed a War bow. But that was only with his top hands. With his bottom hands, he began to create Kunai, letting eight get inbetween his fingers and thumb. He opened his mouth and a giant Arrow protruded. " Now, Say your prayers. " Akaishi said, pushing the war bow forwards, it's string, as well as the end of the arrow still in his mouth. He threw all of his Kunai threads following them, and smiled as when they came into contact with the wall they shot out of another part of it never losing speed. He Opened his mouth slightly, and smiled, the Arrow let loose, a string attached to it, he Aimed directly at the host, who dodged easily.
" Is that the best you can do? " The Nibi host said growling and attempting to runforwards, He gasped as his foot fell from under him, and he began falling through the seals in an endless ride. The Kunai and arrow all hit him simultaniously, as if Akaishi had planned all of that out perfectly in his head. " Damn you... Kumo clan member... " The Nibi said, letting out another growl as his Host's body was pierced through by all of the Kunai and The arrow. But nothing was too damaged he wouldn't live. " You had this planned from the start didn't you? " He said growling fiercly.
" Oh of course, I wanted to see what your insides looked like. I remember the Old Nibi host very well, she has started to finally take to the rehabilitation. But I wonder what the Seal i Placed on you will look like on the inside. " He said smiling. He bit the tread in his mouth and laughed. He shot another web out of his mouth and began to drag the limp useless body of the Jinjuriiki over to him. He held up the Boy's body, and tilted his head, looking behind the right ear. " There you are. " Akaishi said laughing, placing a finger on it, he began to Recite the Jutsu's call. " Seal please grant me entrance to the place of where i wish to go. " He said simply, the Jutsu had no hand signs. He then smiled as everything went black for a single second, and he landed onto a peice of stone floating in nothingness.
~ Inside the Nibi's chamber ~
" Huh? So this is what this seal looks like inside... It is horribly incomplete... I'll have to fix that... " He said, Jumping to another boulder as the one he was standing on burst into flames.
" I Will Kill you... " The Nibi host said, standing in the middle of the flames on the Rock. " I have removed most of my seal now, and I will use this overflowing chakra to end you.
" Awwww man... Now I have to make a new Seal just to exit your body... " Akaishi said sighing. In truth he was really spent, seeing as he had set up that entire room just the day before. " Well, 've collected all the data that I needed, So I will be seeing you. " He said smiling, pouinting forwards and Reciting the Chant again. " Seal please grant me entrance to the place I wish to go. " He Said smiling as the Enraged Nibi host's inner self attacked him, His forhead touching Akaishi's finger, Akaishi disappeared into the Nibi host's inner selv's forhead, and returned to where he was outside.
~ Outside the Nibi's chamber ~
" Eventhough you can get out easily while in this container, I'll make you an offer. If you promise not to jump out at an inopratune time, I won't have to seal you back into someone and kill them like this again, agreed? " akaishi said, his hand hovering over the Seal behind the Boy's ear that held the Nibi in place.
" Fine! Just let me out of this hell hole. " He said, sighing, all of the Nibi's chakra cloak heading directly to the Seal, where Akaishi's hand was waiting.
" Good boy. He said, placing a Tea kettle over the Bijuu's chakra and reaching down the spout he touched the seal dispelling it, and with his other hand placed the Lid on the kettle and put a seal on it. " There, now don't get out, or I'll seal the spout hole too so you can't even speak. " Akaishi said, Shooting webs out and into the Seal across from him, He Tugged on the webs and left the Area, smiling happily as he left his little makeshift room.
~ Back in Kumo Hospital ~ " Man, I love my job as Head Doctor in this place. " Akaishi said laughing, setting his new teakettle down and positionig his hand over the kettle when blue chakra started to seep out. " No you don't. I'll seal that thisng up so tight, I'll exhaust my chakra just trying to get to you. " He said, wagging his finger he sighed.
" Fine... Just find me a good host, and quit with these experiments. " The Nibi said growling, truely hatingthe fact that since he was one of the weakest Bijuu this human was treating him like a test toy.
" Not until I find the perfect Sealed chamber for you. Once I do that, I'll let you live your life inside of Aoi, The Rightful owner of you. But until then, I have custody... I commend her for allowing me to do such a thing. " He said, balling up one of his fists and crying at the ceiling.
" Gawh! I truely hate you... you do know that right? " The nibi said, gritting it''s teeth, the sound echoing through the kettle and making it sound like someone was sawing something.
" Quiet before I put some water and tea leaves in there and make you make me some Tea worthy of the gods. " Akaishi said not bluffing. he had done it before just as a test, and discovered that the Nibi's chakra made the Tea perfectly.
( That is the broad one, If you want, I could make a specific one, showing him using them ne by one. Also, I might need to work on the description a bit. )
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:34 pm
Akura Bashirou Your Rank: Gennin Name of Jutsu: Suiton: SuiKei Water release: Water Whip Rank of Jutsu: C Range of Jutsu: 3 feet from the user Jutsu's Element: Suiton Description: The user places chakra into the palm of his/her hand and begins to control a small and thin amount of water and then shaping it into the form of a whip, from that the user can inflict damage to the opponent. The jutsu is 5 inches thick and three feet ling initially and the user can only control 1 whip at a time as a gennin. On chunnin the whip is 7 inches long and 4 feet long. At jounin it is a foot wide and 5 feet long. And at Kage/Sannin the whip is 2 feet wide and 6 feet long; at this point the whip is able to carry only the user by simply not making it long, by turning the length into how wide the jutsu is; also, the whip’s thickness is controlled by the length, for example, if a gennin is using the jutsu and he’s fighting someone at close range, instead of the whip being 5 inches x 1 foot, it could be 7 inches by 10 inches, the jutsu can only drop/increase two inches from the original length. The jutsu only lasts 3 posts and it can be broken by any disruption will break the jutsu. It requires a large amount of concentration to use it as a gennin. For a extra 4 chakra points a nother whip can be taken out of the current whip is it cannot be moved for a reason; this can only be done for ninja chunnin and above and the whip is at 1/8 of the original power. Name of Jutsu: Stone twister Rank of Jutsu: B ( A rank chakra cost, to use this jutsu either one jounin ranked ninja that knows wind armor and any doton jutsu that includes throwing or other forms of earth ( Such as te stone clone jutsu and others. ) Range of Jutsu: 4 feet from the flying stones Jutsu's Element: Earth/ Wind Description: The user places chakra into the hand, feet and floor which cause loose, small or medium sized rocks to begin to spin around the user. The stones can block any suiton jutsu B rank or lower, any other technique C rank or lower but it can be broken even by a D rank raiton technique. While the jutsu is used the users speed is lowered by one rank. The stones have the capability (if used by an assassin ninja) to potentially knock out an enemy if he/she is one rank bellow the user. The stones can also be thrown at the enemy but they do very little damage that way unless a futon jutsu is used to back it up. Your Rank: Gennin Name of Jutsu: Suiryuuben - Water Dragon Whip Rank of Jutsu: A (Takes B rank chakra to use and every 3 whips used takes C rank chakra) Range of Jutsu: 25 feet from the dragon sphere Jutsu's Element: Suiton Description: Suiton • Suiryuuben is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element.This will grant him Water chakra, which he will use to generate a whirling sphere of water. This sphere can then emit whips of water, which can seek out and impale his target. (A maximum of 5 whips are used at a time, they can be detached and once they are they go on a straight line for the next five feet until they simply evaporate of merge back whit the water. The dragon itself lasts only 4 posts, but if the whips are moved back to the dragon, or the dragon is near a body of water, if can draw the water source from it and last up to 6 posts. Rp Sample: A young tanned girl with a anbu mask walked into the iceberg stage on Yukigure, she rose her view and saw another ninja off at the other side of the 40 foot iceberg like stage. Both of the ninja walked slowly toward the center of the stage as the leader of the village watched them steadily. The girl rapidly made seals as she jumped five feet away from the other ninja," Suiton: SuiKei."She said coldly once her foot touched the floor, she moved her arms upward in a fluid motion as the two pouches on her back opened and water came out form them. "You will pay, today you breathed your last breath!" She exclaimed as she abruptly lunged her arms to the front as the foot wide whip exploded toward the man, the man jumped back swiftly as the whip impaled into the ice, the anbu then made seals as another much thinner and shorter whip came out from the initial whip and wrapped his foot as the anbu began to spin her hand as the whip wrapped the man, she then pulled back on her arm as the whip pulled the man back toward the anbu, he was pulled upside down beside the anbu and she glared deep into his eyes as he gave her a smile. "Sekkai Saka (Rock Hill Creation) " He plainly said as a five foot hill rose and broke the anbu's water whip right on it's tracks. The man then made few seals "Doton: Rikujou Shougekiha no jutsu (Earth Release: Ground shockwave technique)" He said as he punched the hill and turned it into large chunks of rock. He them made another seal and wind began to form around the man " Stone Twister." He said as the smile on his face along with the hill were gone. " Today I breathed my last breath huh." He said comely as he walked toward the girl as the gusts of wind picked up the stones he crushed. "Suiryuuben!" A cry was heard from the crowd as a man jumped into the stadium. A large dragon of water began to form behind the man as water roared from bellow the iceberg. The new man then looked back at the girl who was trammeling with fear, the ninja then walked over to her and took her mask. " I'll take it from here." He said as the water dome behind him roared once more. The two ninja stood looking at each other for a few minutes until the one with the stone twister smiled his damned smile. " I knew I had seen you before..." The man spoke as the other ninja looked at him a little shocked. " That voice.... It can be..." He muttered as he moved his hands upward and water came from his dome and spun around him, the other ninja jumped back as he felt uneasy to the strange jutsu the man was using, " I am Kay, of Sunagakure." He said plainly as the stone twister flew around him and the other ninja smiled as well. " The final showdown brother." The man with the dragon, which was Akura, said plainly. Akura then shot his hand forward as three whips shot directly toward Kay, he then moved his hand in an upward motion as two more whips came out of the dragon and shot to the top of the stone twister. Kay saw the first three whips and shot out three stones from his jutsu to smash into the whips and to destroy them, but instead the whips smashed into the rocks whit out a clear winner, both the whips and the rocks turned into dust and disappeared. Both Kay and Akura glared at each other and Kay ran toward Akura, Akura then moved his arms upward as the two whips from above crashed into the stones inside the twister, but the same result came out. Once Kay was 10 feet from Akura he was at point blank range for his stones, but Akura already knew this so he moved his dragon into direct attack possition, Akura pushed his hands toward Kay as the dragon itself acted like a whip and smashed through Kay's jutsu and shattering the iceberg.
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:25 pm
Fenrir Graveheart LadyShirahime93
@Fen- Summoning Air Current- It last for ten posts?
Yeah, it kinda creates a windy day so I figured it would last a while, if anything. The only thing it really can do is keep people from traveling too high up into the air since the sky is naturally where the wind will be the strongest.
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Posted: Sat Aug 28, 2010 6:06 pm
Hinote Tosatsu Hikaro: Going to let Shira finish with you on those, sorry. I understand. Shira, if your looking i fixed my jutsu for you, they are on the last page. Highnote ToeSauce Hikaro: So these bugs spread out, and telepathically relay information through the chakra strings? You're aware that if all of them started relaying at once, it would fry your brain, right? I think you'll need to better define just what they are able to relay, and how the information is sent. Is it raw data, or like a conversation? And are they able to tell you about that poisonous snake hiding in the bush, or just that there is something in the bush. Its kind of like, something pokes your arm, you dont know what it is until you look but you know somethings there. Except, you only notice if the bugs find something strange. You wouldnt be able to sense trees and stuff unless one started to fall. The bugs wouldnt find a snake in a bush worth bothering with. unless you are in a crowd, they would tell you about any other people. I dont think this would completely overload you, since its not that much information being sent, though it would probably stun you a bit while you try and sort it out. I'll try and tie that in as well. Name of Jutsu: Kikaichuu radar Rank of Jutsu: C Jutsu's Element: bug user Description: This jutsu requires chakra to use, plus an extra 1 chakra cost per turn. The Aburame sends his/her bugs around them creating a wide grid. The bugs are connected by a very thin thread of chakra which can be used to send information. This allows the bug user to search an area, or watch a base camp for any disturbances. This would allow for any important information to be known immediately to the user, instead of waiting for the bugs to deliver information directly. The information sent, is similar to something poking your arm. You can tell how big it is, how hard and fast it poked you, and the general area. You don't know what it is though, until you look. The bugs are sending only information of unusual behavior. They will not tell you about trees if you are in a forest.(or people in a crowd) This includes objects that are dangerous, but still fit in. The snake hiding in the bush beside you, isnt something your bugs will tell you about. you have to wait till it bites you in the arse. The grid covers a radius of 30 feet in all directions at genin, and then grows 10 feet per rank. The bugs are spread thin so they are very difficult to notice. In the event of a very large amount of changes, the receiving ninja might have difficulty sorting it all out possibly leaving them vulnerable. Rp Sample Nagisa frowned as she inspected the area. If anyone were to get too close she was in danger of being caught in her sleep. A thin stream of bugs flowed from her sleeve, and then spread out through the area. A byakugan user was the only real threat to this jutsu Nagisa knew, the line of chakra spread through the bugs would broadcast her location instead of the enemies. It was a good thing that she wasn't running from a Hyuuga however. Nagisa had only just driffted into the world of dreams, when she was awoken by the breaking chakra lines to her right. Something small had startled the bugs, and she could tell that it was moving quickly as well. shurken nagisa assumed and she launched out of her makeshift bed, prepared for battle.
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:05 am
Your Rank: Genin Name of Jutsu: Steps of Light Rank of Jutsu: B (seems most logical) Range of Jutsu: sight range Jutsu's Element: Universal/chakra (no real element required) Description: The use takes "steps" at nearly the speed of light to a chosen destination. The user takes in chakra, manipulates it throughout their body and in a sense covers it completely. Once a spot is chosen they transport, unable to attack and unable to be attacked. However, a jutsu prepared before "stepping" can be used immediately after since it is not lost during the process. Rp Sample ((the not-so-long awaited rp sample rofl )) -The character name is Fyn, Jounin, Leaf-
A long, cold breeze blew across the surface of the river. Fyn had been staring out over the water for some time now, the sun had begun to rise even. "Ahh... well, now that I can finally see the other side... time to go." He was referring to the other river bank. He had walked for a day and a half with no luck of a boat or bridge. Fyn, without wasting another moment, focused his chakra. He erased all other possible marks in his mind, focused on a dry spot of grass... and jumped. Not up, but forward through space. To him, he took one step forward and arrived on the opposite bank. A smile crossed his face, which faded instantly as his eyes fell on his backpack... across the river. "Ohh... you little son of a..." A moment later and Fyn had the backpack in hand, and just as quickly he was back to the other side of the river. Tired from stepping that many times so quickly back to back, he walked slowly to catch his breath. "Ehh... tired is not the best way to start out a day." Fyn muttered to himself, sighing as he walked on.
-- It is a teleportation jutsu with the limit of what you can see, medium-high rank. description is still the same though >.>
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:33 am
Gold: No. Just, no.
Akura: Refer to what I said in my last post.
Hikaro: Looks good, but could it be C rank instead? D seems a bit low considering what it does. Jump it to C and it's approved.
Storm: You changed the price... And the description. Is this still the teleport within sight, or is it just a shunshin now? And when I said fix the rank, I meant using the lettering system. Sorry if that wasn't clear, though I thought it was...
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:37 am
@Hinote Btw have you come to a conclusion on my jutsu use here in pots? I figure I might just need it here since I've officially gone rogue and what not...
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:38 am
Hinote Tosatsu Gold: No. Just, no. Akura: Refer to what I said in my last post. Hikaro: Looks good, but could it be C rank instead? D seems a bit low considering what it does. Jump it to C and it's approved. Storm: You changed the price... And the description. Is this still the teleport within sight, or is it just a shunshin now? And when I said fix the rank, I meant using the lettering system. Sorry if that wasn't clear, though I thought it was... This is why I hate Rp samples....
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Hinote Tosatsu Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:41 am
Mistah BomChickaWahWah @Hinote Btw have you come to a conclusion on my jutsu use here in pots? I figure I might just need it here since I've officially gone rogue and what not... >.> <.< What page was it on again? *Dislikes working with techniques that were actually thought out, cause they take actual thought to judge properly*
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