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 Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:57 am
ForsakenSwordsman Akuyoko Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. How about you land on the ground with many a broken bone, but still alive? You can just hang out there in pain and misery until you die of starvation. Death don't sound so bad now, huh? Also, Fisher's awesome. He managed all that gunpowder and explosives in what, two minutes? It might have felt like two minutes, but it wasn't. They were in that city for a fair while, running around and stuff, I just trimmed it down to fit it in. Ah, I figured as much. Anyway, great chapter. Poor Fisher
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:00 pm
ForsakenSwordsman @LF, I probably won't bring anyone back tbh, I was just messing about. (Still, you can't rule it out ninja ) HOPE! whee
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 12:58 pm
Chapter 39 is online.
Chapter 40 is coming soon too.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:01 pm
Oh god, another crazy murderer. They are just having terrible luck, huh?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:01 pm
Did not see that one coming! Nice, I like how you have devloped Drakem throughout the story!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:04 pm
Another crazy maniac. Yay!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:04 pm
Didn't see that coming.
I thought it was going to be a trap, and Drakam was gonna die trying to get back.
Good chapter.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:05 pm
Wow, you cought me off guard on that one!, are you letting Drakam live to make me read XD?, Great chapter FS very unexpected
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:15 pm
How many more chapters until the end?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:28 pm
Wow, again, just wow. You really have the touch to get to people's emotions with your words, David, and you're a great writer. I was really surprised that Fisher was going back (I had thought him as a bit of the leader of the group) and laying down next to Ms. Carol. Very touching. Again, just wow. Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. Stop ******** whining, Jesus. At least you're in the story, and the comic, which is more than most people would have given you.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:32 pm
Meta Fish Wow, again, just wow. You really have the touch to get to people's emotions with your words, David, and you're a great writer. I was really surprised that Fisher was going back (I had thought him as a bit of the leader of the group) and laying down next to Ms. Carol. Very touching. Again, just wow. Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. Stop ******** whining, Jesus. At least you're in the story, and the comic, which is more than most people would have given you. >_> Ancient news, Fish.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:48 pm
Final Chapter online.
I hope that the end is satisfactory for all. Thanks for reading everyone, I may be starting a new story soon, but I am taking a short break first.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:52 pm
Well, Tyler ain't alive. But who cares. THIS STORY WAS AWESOME. blaugh
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:53 pm
lol Drakam the last hero xd
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:54 pm
BOO Drakam was the hero, I am joking but it was a great chapter you had there, so many deaths, so little time.
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![Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]'s avatar](https://a1cdn.gaiaonline.com/dress-up/avatar/ava/43/40/61d661e3184043_flip.png?t=1251485661_6.00_11)