@ Serial No. 89757: I like that style! > <,, Changmin's hair was DROOL WORTHY during Tri-Angle!! OㅂO
@ ` T a p i o c a `: Your pictures a very beautiful! ^___^ But I do have some critique.
In your first picture~ > <,, I love it. It looks like it was drawn with very smooth strokes. The style is also very attractive. :3 But-- The pose is a bit awkward. I don't really like how his shoulders are so far apart, but that's only my input. > <,, Also~ I'm looking at the bottom right portion of your picture, and I see this... thing. xDDDD At first I thought it was a leg. OwO
In your second picture-- realism is VERY hard. xDDD I can barely do it. I can only get the hair, eyes, and nose. I can NEVER get the mouth. The reason why your picture looks like an old version of Chunnie is because of the really dark bags under his eyes. Either stray away from that, or make them closer to the eye. A few other reasons why he looks old is because of his, again, deep impressions of his cheeks. And... The chin is shaped for an older man. xDDD It's a bad comparision, but in manga style drawing... The rounder the chin (accompanied by an overall round cheek and forehead), the more baby like the face will look. The pointier (with the optional longer length for the face), the older. But once it reaches the point where you want them to look old, you keep the cheeks long, but you round the chins and add wrinkles. But this is realism, I'm not exactly sure what Chunnie's chin looks like, but if you fix those things, he might look a BIT younger. OwO My critique isn't very detailed. xDDDDD
Also~ The nose is in an awkward position. The right side is a tad too small. In the viewer's prospective, you can see that Yoochun's looking at us with his head slightly turned and tilted. The eyes are fine (maybe a bit too small, but as I said, I'm not the best at realism), but the position of the mouth is funky. You might want to tilt the left part up more. ^___^
Ahhh~!! o__o That was long... Your pictures are wonderful!! But everyone has somewhere they need to improve on. Hell, I know exactly what I need to improve on. xDDDDD It's frustrating. xDDDD
I hope that helps~ >w<,, (I'm sorry if I sounded mean~~ ;__ wink
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