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 Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 10:32 pm
oh yea thnx this is actualy my first time rping seriously (paying atintion to grammer and stuff, non one liners etc.) so im still kinda learning.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 1:04 pm
Hayaku walked down the hallway of the prestgious academy thinking i wonder if I passed or not, I put in so many months of training and study to be where I am today. no, there is no room in my mind for doubt. with a determined look on his face he waited.
He heard the footsteps of the sensei coming closer and closer. He knew the time of judging was upon him. He sat in the first desk and waited for the sensei to come in and give him the pass or fail, all the time thinking I hope I pass, I hope I pass, I hope I pass.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 6:38 am
Sounds pretty good. It should be well enough to pass so long as you know that this type of post (length mostly) is pretty much expected within the guild. Oneliners will be tollerated to a small extent but don't become a one-line-wonder. Hope you pass.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:39 am
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:55 pm
Pass and try to keep this same standard, OK? :3
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 8:35 am
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 3:11 pm
RP sample:
Night was drawing closer. Koshiro was wandering the woods aimlessly. A sudden snapping of a twig caught his attention. He lept into a tree. "Blast! Who could that be?!" After what had happened earlier that day he felt strange lefting his kunai. To shurikans hit the tree trunk near his feet. He began leaping from tree to tree. Running. Depressed. Scared. Alone. He wondered weather he was cut out to be a ninja. Koshiro lost his footing. Why me? Why today? Why now...?
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 5:08 pm
My character's name is going to be Zaioru Taiki.
RP Sample:
Breathing heavily, Taiki dashed across the badlands as fast as his legs would let him. He couldn't think of his own well being right now; he knew that if he didn't reach the others soon enough, everything he knew would all fall to pieces before him. Running too fast to see it, he tripped on a small rock in his way. Tumbling on the ground, he finally scraped to a halt, finding he was unable to rise, he lifted his head to look to the hills. As he saw a small light begin to erupt on the horizon, terror struck his heart.
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Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2007 7:14 pm
My character will be- Tanoku Nori (Sorry i love that name if I cant use it then tell me, and ya its an original name)
Well here it is:
Rp Sample:
The Village was lively from what he thought, enough people about running around, going to work, getting food, and whatever they really felt like doing. Little did he know, today was the first day he was supposed to go to ninja school. Looking out the window in his blue/cloud pjs, he stretched and yawned while rubbing his eyes. He leaned over on the window watching the people go by, and then he saw it, a few kids his age walking to the academy. It rung right then in his head that today was that day he was waiting for.
He rushed as fast as he could throwing on his set out cloths that he must have walked over getting to the window, and darted toward the stairs. After the third step down, he was going so fast he lost his balance and started face first to the rest of the stairs below him.
(((ok I stopped my self as much as I wanted to go on)))
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 2:30 am
All pass!
-thumbs up- =D
Kirigakure is recruiting! -waves Kiri flag-
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 8:17 am
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:08 pm
RP Sample:
Naiko stooped in the leaves of a large oak tree that grew on the outskirts of the playground. Assuring her footing on the trusted branch, she watched the children of her village play. Her hungry gaze watched each interaction with curiosity. With a gloved hand she flicked away a spider, that had crawled up on her leg, annoyed by its presence. Naiko's gaze never shifted, though she grew more annoyed at how oblivious they were to the simple pleasures they enjoyed. They took turns pushing each other on the swing; another group of children held hands and spun in circles till they all fell over from light-headedness. She would always come here during lunch to watch, and they never knew how envious she was. Naiko doubted that anyone would understand which made her angry. She heard the bells toll from the high tower, her time was spent. Naiko leapt from her trusted branch to the ground, and walked back towards the classroom. Her classmates buzzed around her, yet she felt like she was walking alone.
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 3:10 pm
Wow, thats pretty nice Phayedead. You should pass no problem. I like your attention to detail. Keep it up.
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 6:45 pm
Carlos Ralfer Wow, thats pretty nice Phayedead. You should pass no problem. I like your attention to detail. Keep it up. TY, just waiting now to get things Okayed.
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