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 Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 4:39 pm
 Full Name: Yuroshi Aukumori
Nicknames: Yuro
Age: 13
Birthdate: March 30th
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Japanese
Nindo: "the silence is so lound silcen kills,silence protects, i am silence "
Personality: Quiet
Behavior: Shy
Biography: yuroshi aukumori was born in a small town in japan he was very quit in school and still is his family was famous for being quit and killing thier enimes with no emotion yuroshi had no freinds throughout school still dosnt it's not becaouse no one wanted to be freinds with him it's becaouse pepole were afraid of him now he works alone and lives in solitude.
Village: Hidden Leaf
Rank: Genin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: N/A
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Katana
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
● Stealth
● Speed
● Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
● Weak-Bodied
● Low Attack Power
● Doesnt Think Before He Acts
Shinobi Skills:(Abilities/characteristics granted by Ninja Class/Bloodline/Curse Mark)
● Can learn jutsu up to 1 rank lower then current rank
● Can coat your weapons with poison for faster killing, but all weapons with poisons
● Cannot learn Medical jutsu
● When in Stealth, Ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninjas of a higher rank can sense you but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Kage or Sannin.
Chakra Element(s): fire
- Primary: Fire
- Secondary: Wind (learned at:Chuunin)
Chakra Color: Blue
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Fire - Fire Jutsu
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Wind - Wind Jutsu
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Genjutsu
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
Head | Leaf l Black
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
Under Left Wrist | Black
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
Waist | Black
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
Back | Red
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10
Makibishi: 10
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 10 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'3
Weight: 190
Body Build: Slim
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Brown
Family: N/A
Theme song: New Divide - Linkin Park ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 0
A Rank: 0
B Rank: 0
C Rank: 0
D Rank: 0
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 5:42 pm
Light:
1. Your back story is confusing. first off, the Kyuubi was jsut assigned to someone and was previous the Raikage. How could you be a son of the Kyuubi? ...and have you been approved to have Raijuu?... and does this mean Kaku is now up for grabs?
2. You can have a weakness to Suiton if you like, but you need to have your Elemental Vulnerability as the opposite of your primary element. In your case, this would be Elemental Vulnerability: Wind.
3. Shinobi skills is a section where you fill out what is granted to you as a combination of your Ninja class and your demon. Please put the specifics there and remove 'gunblade'
4. Can you link me to your taijutsu style?
5. Your custom weapon confuses me slightly... the way it's written is jsut VERY confusing. I don't know what Bekamon Kodachi is... and I dont get what you mean by Fire Jutsu that make projectiles...
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Light Of The Damned Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:03 pm
Cobra_X Light:1. Your back story is confusing. first off, the Kyuubi was jsut assigned to someone and was previous the Raikage. How could you be a son of the Kyuubi? ...and have you been approved to have Raijuu?... and does this mean Kaku is now up for grabs?
2. You can have a weakness to Suiton if you like, but you need to have your Elemental Vulnerability as the opposite of your primary element. In your case, this would be Elemental Vulnerability: Wind.
3. Shinobi skills is a section where you fill out what is granted to you as a combination of your Ninja class and your demon. Please put the specifics there and remove 'gunblade'
4. Can you link me to your taijutsu style?
5. Your custom weapon confuses me slightly... the way it's written is jsut VERY confusing. I don't know what Bekamon Kodachi is... and I dont get what you mean by Fire Jutsu that make projectiles...
The Back Story has to Do with my Old RPCs.The Kaku Havik has now.But Kenji had it before, and when This First became a Naruto Guild I had a RPC who was a Half Demon Light and my other RPC was his Brother Soul and they were both Son of the Kyuubi.
Tenshi Approved me For Raijuu.
Link is there now for the Taijutsu.
I fixed the Shinobi Skills.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:10 pm
Am I approved? Sorry sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:19 pm
Sako:
(Obviously we are working on your bloodline, but I'll put some edits here, so your approval will be pending bloodline approval...)
1. Would you possibly consider joining either Sand or Cloud instead of Leaf? ... Leaf is a bit full.
2. You have to choose one thing for strengths, it can't be speed/agility... it has to be one or the other. Same goes for all strengths.
3. Weaknesses are also dictated by your class. In your case, you need to choose between Elemental Vulnerability (wind) or Low attack power... but you are also weak-Bodied.
4. Shinobi skills are a combination of your Ninja class and Bloodline granted skills. (I wouldnt go so far as to say that your abilities are GREATLY increased... or really put anythign there until we are done with your bloodline)
5. I will be nice and say that your bloodline can start with 1 soul. heart
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:23 pm
Buffer:
1. Would you consider joining Sand or Cloud instead?
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:26 pm
BluewolfofMibu Am I approved? Sorry sweatdrop YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:35 pm
Full Name: Soul
Nicknames: Soul
Age: 15
Birthdate: 12/17
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Caucasian
Nindo: "When there's Souls around, I get hungry. CHOW TIME!!!!"
Personality: Laid back and easy going. He really doesn't do too much and is a lazy b*****d at times. He is psychotic when he gets into fights sometimes. He will do whatever it takes to eat a Soul.
Behavior: Gets into trouble for not doing much and gets into trouble for causing Chaos
Biography: Soul grew up as an only child. His parents payed little attention to him because they didn't want him to find out about his Clan's Background. Being a Soul Eater, he would eventually crave Souls. If he was kept hidden from his history, then he wouldn't end up craving Souls and would never find out about his powers.
One day, Soul stumbled across a secret room in his Clan Compound and found scrolls containing all the Clan's History. Soul went berserk. He burn his home and ran off. He did not whether his family had lived, but he just wanted to get out. He then entered Konohagakure and became a Shinobi. Now, at the Age of 15, his hunger for Human Souls has come to an extreme and all he wants is for him to devour the souls of humans.
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Genin
________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation
Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Soul Eater Clan
Curse Mark: N/A
Weapon of Choice: Alternate Souls (Clan)
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
● Speed
● Stealth
● Chakra Control
Weaknesses:
● Weak Bodied
● Elemental Vulnerability: Wind
Shinobi Skills:
● Can coat your weapons with poison for faster killing, but all weapons with poisons
● Cannot learn Medical jutsu
● When in Stealth, Ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninjas of a higher rank can sense you but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Kage or Sannin.
● Enhanced Physical Abilities (based on #souls eaten)
● Enhanced Senses (based on #souls eaten)
● Ability to Consume Souls
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Raiton
- Secondary: Fuuton (learned at : Chuunin)
Chakra Color: Orange
________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation
Sensei:
Team Mate:
Team Mate:
________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation
Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Lightning - Raiton
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Wind - Fuuton
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Genjutsu
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Kekkai Genkai - Soul Eater Clan
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities
Taijutsu Styles Known:
Primary Style: _________ (learned at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
(Provide brief descriptions below. Also provide a link to your approved Taijutsu style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles
# Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
____________________________________
(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color:
| N/A | N/A | N/A |
Flack Jacket Style | Color:
| N/A | N/A | N/A |
Kunai Holster Location | Color:
| Left Thigh | Gray |
Projectile Holster Location | Color:
| Left Thigh | Gray |
Scroll Holster Location | Color:
| Right Thigh | Gray |
Exploding Smoke Grenade: 10
Makibishi: 20
Shuriken: 30
Flash Bombs: 10
________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 110
Body Build: Average
Eye Color: Red
Hair Color: White
Family: N/A
Theme song: [Darkness Eyes]
________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation
S Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:
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精神と精神
[u]| Leaf | Genin | Soul Eater Clan Head |
Souls Consume: 0[/u][/color][/align]
[imgleft]http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i153/ShinigamiLaharl/SoulEater.png[/imgleft][imgright]http://nerdrage.sc-gaming.net/avatars/Soul Eater/Souleater_Spirit.png[/imgright][size=10][color=white]xxxxxxxxxxxx[/color][color=black]
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:43 pm
Light:
I made a few more edits, but so far everything looks good, except ONE thing...
1. You can only have 10 taijutsu techniques total (I didn't count how many you have, but I'm just throwing this out there.) the Ninjutsu class has the number of Genjutsu and Taijutsu you can learn as restricted...You have a total of 20 points to spend on both. [Taijutsu = 2 pts ... Genjutsu = 1]
...you also cant access any S-rank taijutsu techniques within your style.
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:46 pm
Sako:
I will re-assess the profile when we are done with the Bloodline
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Light Of The Damned Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 6:47 pm
I knew That and I only have 4 so I have 6 more techniques I could learn.
So is Crono approved?
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:02 pm
Soul
精神
Leaf | Genin | Soul Eater Clan Head  xxxxxxxxxxxxOkay then. And new Posting Format. This one is a lot simpler. XD
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 7:38 pm
Light Of The Damned I knew That and I only have 4 so I have 6 more techniques I could learn. So is Crono approved? YOU ARE APPROVED!
(Sorry I took so long, I'm all over the place today...)
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 4:59 pm
Hey wudup peoples umm Cobra Buffer wanted to be in the Konoha because I asked him to thats why. he chose the Leaf.
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Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 6:05 pm
Cobra_X Spontaneity:
1. Good Lord... when the hell did you become a Special Jounin? I approved you as a Genin less then a month ago. Who approved that?
2. I assume you learned all of those techniques legitimately? Care to link me?
3. Is there anyway you can reduce your picture's size... it stretches screens and that's a huge pet peeve of mine (and many others)
Corby (Mist Kage) gave me Special Jounin rank. He needed more trainers supposedly. I was approved like two-three weeks ago I think... sometime in maybe mid November.
...Link ALL of them? I think it might be just... a tad near impossible to locate the place where I learned all of them... a bunch I learned in the Ukyohan Temple.
As for the picture, I don't really know how to downsize pictures... i can make it a link if you want (if it really bothers you all that much...).
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