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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:43 am
[[For those of you who don't know. My character can't hear the gods as long as Amati is concious.]]
Sakeri arched her brow in intrest and snickered quietly to herself, before the girl whirled around to face her. Suddenly, asking her name. Sakeri was taken back back the sudden introductions that were taking place.
"Sakeri," she said, holding back from laughing at Kin's comedic introduction. Well, at least it was funny to her. "Sakeri Ito. And, this," She said, patting the ash gray wolf at her side. "Is Amati, my Daemon. Together we're stronger than the average demon, but apart... we're about as weak as any normal mortal being."
As she spoke, the air around them seemed to buzz and hang, but Sakeri didn't notice it at all. Amati, on the other hand, looked around observantly. Something was unsettling and his fur began to stand on end. The whispering voices buzzed in the the very back of his mind, but they didn't whisper loud enough for him to take notice. The leaves rustled next to him. Amati whirled around almost immeadiently, a snarl erupting from his throat. He had pitted himself against a turtle. He looked at the being, cocking his head in confusion as he clawed at it. The shelled creature hid quickly beneath the hard cover of its shell, eyes gazing at the canine in a somewhat lazy manner.
"Amati?" a voice inquired, interuppting his thoughts. He turned to look at companion his tail swaying lighthearted behind him. Sakeri was looking at him with one of those playful smiles. "What are you doing?"
"Nothing," he replied with a wolfish smile, steping aside to reveal the small reptile. Sakeri let out a light laugh and ruffled the fur on his head.
"You're so silly, Amati."
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 8:57 am
A slight breeze went through the bar as Scarlet sat. Things had calmed down, for her at least. The humans had all kinds of uproar lately, but her life had been nice. She hadn't been worried about any of the humans' troubles, it just wasn't her place.
A voice came out of nowhere, seemingly in the back of her mind. Hold nothing back She gave a nod before looking up to Finn. "You know, I've been thinking about taking a short trip Drake. Would you mind?
Drake was confused at this seemingly random question. "Sure, just stay out of trouble. You know that if you get hurt out there, there's nothing I can do for you here." He went back to helping patrons, greeting Iori as he sat at the bar.
Scarlet got up and went back to her room. She had to get ready for something like this. Her syringes should help, at least a bit. She collected all of them, the big and the small, hiding them on different places on her body, and in the pockets of her jacket. Without another word, she walked out the door and looked for a cab.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 9:14 am
Ryn hissed loudly, dropping into a squat, as he heard Aequis speak, but Something didn't seem right.
"She gave two sets of directions.... Both conflicting, but I caught both.... Which are they actually going to do?", He said, his claws clicking together as he thought.
He glanced up at Nendir, frowning, and said,"Aequis is telling the Purifiers to attack the Pentagon, as well as... the City of Angels... I think thats....L.A.?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 10:19 am
"So?" Nendir said as he walked to the balcony to wake Izzy. He had fallen to sleep first and did not know how long she'd been out, but regardless, it was time to get up just as He and Ryn had done. He whipped the sliding glass door open and Izzy toppled through it because she's been laying against it while asleep. "Time to get up princess." He said with a smile, pointing to the sleep crumbs that were plastered against her eyelids.
"If they are being ordered to attack the Pentagon, is that really the best place for us to be right now?" He didn't want to fight, but damnit all, it had to be done. "Forget I said that. Let's go then?" He began to pack up what he could, if need be they could just rest at another hotel before the impending battle royal. It was in Nendirs personality to want to fight, and protect those whom needed it, but their own safety had been compromised once already, and jumping into a battle with anyone would be favorable to the enemy for sure.
For a moment it seemed as if all the sound in the room had faded. The clicking of the clock on the nightstand, the morning doves that sang just outside the window, even Ryn's claws seemed to be inaudible. The instant any sound returned to the room, a portal had opened. She couldn't have sent it YESTERDAY! ripped through his mind in frustration. "I guess her High Majesty doesn't think it would be wise to fly to the Pentagon." He threw some of their items through the portal and shrugged his shoulder in apology toward Ryn, at least now they were rested and ready for an altercation, and in a way, Nendir was thankful of that fact.
"Do the gods know that your a rogue?" He asked Ryn, while stepping through the portal and landing in another large city, no doubt it was the one they would of needed to fly to. He made sure the belongings he'd slung through the portal were in tact and all accounted for, and then turned his attention to Ryn and Izzy, whom he could see clearly through the portal, like a two-way mirror.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 11:17 am
"Finn can i have some water." Iori says as he sat down.
He looked up at Finn with a glare.
"What did I tell you, stay away from her. A trip just the two of you... shes planning on killing you then and there when you are not expecting it, and I'm not walking out there to help you either I wouldn't do that for anybody. If you go on this trip I should just kill you now to save you the trouble cause you are going to end up dead by the end of it. Think about what i said the other day and what I'm saying now. Also if you do leave ill have no where to get a drink too
Iori sat the little dog on his lap as he spoke to Finn with an unusually calm tone. He pet the dog on his lap as he asked for the glass of water again.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:06 pm
But Kin never thought of it being silly at all. He heard the command, but not just that, but all of the gods' words, except for the LA part that the blue goddess spoke to the deffenders exclusively. He chuckled lightly unto himself, 'Godzilla huh? Perhaps I could do that, but what's with the straying the defenders? That's going to be no fun...' He pouted silently upon himself, looking at Amati who somewhat shared the same feeling. Nevertheless, it wasn't all the time that he'd get the chance to pat the wolf's soft fur. Carefully, and laughing in such a disturbing and nervous way, he reached out his hand for the wolf's shuffled head. His hands were shaking with the desire for the soft fur, while his eyes were narrowed and malicious. Teh wolf was distracted, and it was his chance to feel it once again.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:21 pm
"Well those are some int- Ah!" Ruko heard the gods voice in the back of her head and knew what to do" Kin and Sakeri Right? you heard what they said we need to move out.Lets travel together we will move faster. So are you going to obey the orders or not? She looked at the two with a fierce glare waiting for there response and still holding the lighter in her hand.'If there defenders they wont know were to go..'
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:22 pm
~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~ "ow.." she groaned quietly. Izzy got up and re-entered the room just as the portal opened. She looked at it and sighed. 'again with the portal.' She walkd through it, knowing that any passer-by's were probably spooked out of their wits. "how many times have you walked through one of those things?" she asked Nendir, making referance to the portal that now stood behind her apposed to infront of her. ~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:25 pm
Ryn carefully stepped through the portal, his eyes catching every detail around them, before saying to Nendir,"Yes... I do believe the Gods know I'm rouge, but they seem to have trouble preventing me from hearing what they want just the purifiers to hear... probably since I am quite directly, a creation of theirs."
He scrapped his claws together, observantly looking about, and actually quite happy that they no longer needed to fly wherever they went.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 12:30 pm
"Huh?" Kin glanced over, and asked in an extremely stern and agitated tone. The wolf would definitely have noticed him now, but did not stop reaching out slowly anyway, bending down ever closer. Annoyed, he sighed, and used his other (left) hand to make a portal. He placed his palm flat on thin air, where the atmosphere slowly gathered, pumping inwards like that of the heart in waves that could be seen in a strange liwuid-like manner. After the fifth pumping, it stopped, only to release an immense amount of energy all at once, bending space and time in a strange circular field the same size as a doorway, with swirling blends of images that slowly formed the image of the clouds in the sky. Static ran along the portal, but Kin seemed undisturbed. "Here's your free flight to the pentagon," he said coldly, turning away, but then smiled at the winged girl, "You can fly, can't you?"
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 1:42 pm
Nendir ignored Izzy's apparent disapproval to using magical means of transportation. Instead he gave her a glance and shook his head. Turning to Ryn he said, "So, are they at the Pentagon or do we need to hunt them down somewhere? Since now your like, our walking map of the Northern United States, and Some of Canada." He said jokingly before turning his heels and looking out over the horizon.
The portal closed behind them without a sound. The sun shined down on them and hardly licked Nendirs flesh with warmth. This city was in chaos. no doubt the word had gotten out about the attack, and most of the people seemed like a deer caught in the headlights, or even a chicken with its head cut off.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 4:54 pm
~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~ "oh, and don't forget. He's radio of the gods too." Izzy added sarcasticly. Her gaze darted between the two a couple times, but it settled on Ryn. Only because she wondered what his reaction would be. And while, she was watching Ryn, her thoughts werre on the pentagon, and the fact that they'd probably have to fight. It worried her that they'd be fighting again. Wasn't it just yesterday that they fought off dummie's that were possesed to kill them? Yea. It was. Wich reminded her that she had twisted her ankle. She had forgoten all about her ankle, and had ignored the pain in flight. And when she remembered these facts, she strugled to not swear under her breath. She would not let her troubles, trouble them, and possibly slow them. And she refused to let her ankle be a disability to herself. Uncertanty probably showed on her face,but she wasn't worried about that. Izzy was trying to figure out how she was gonna defend herself, cause if her ankle wasn't problem enough, her fighting skills would probably never stand up to a purifiers. Especialy if they've killed humans practicaly they're whole lives. She was gonna need a miracle in order to survive. ~*~♥ ♥ ♥~*~
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:04 pm
Ryn listened to Izzy and Nendir, feeling that neither had any clue what it was like constantly having people talking in the back of your head, telling you your supposed to be killing someone. He sighed, before saying,"I don't know where the Purifiers will be... But if they are going to attack the Pentagon, we would do best to assist the people at the Pentagon. So I suggest we go directly there..."
He glanced at them both, before turning away and walking in the direction of the Pentagon, his claws clicking on the cement. He glanced around at the various humans, all of them looking at him in fright, all of them obviously worried for their lives.
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Posted: Thu Aug 23, 2007 5:15 pm
Nendir followed Ryn in tow. Making sure not to part his lips to say anything offensive. He looked over his shoulder at the hobbling young girl who seemed to just be along for the ride. She wasn't' a fighter, and at the next chance they got he would have to sit down and have a serious talk with her. The thought of their time together coming to an end fazed him little, she would be better off trying to make a normal life for herself somewhere else, where she could start her own bath, separate from his.
He'd been a fool to bring her along in the first place, but the gods saw it fit, and it wasn't in his best interest to object. But she could seriously get hurt now, and if she couldn't handle enchanted dummies, how would she protect herself if Ryn or Himself were killed in battle? The thought of it was draining his energy, so he reserved himself into being a waking corpse, not paying much attention to anything but the essentials.
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