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 Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:12 am
Puka's gone, gone, gone gone... crying
Yes, it's in english. Thanks Nie!
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:23 am
Mattlo do you mind if I fix some of your usage errors? And substitute a few words?
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:26 am
Nie Chan Mattlo do you mind if I fix some of your usage errors? And substitute a few words? I'd love it, only, can you mark your changes with [b ][/ b] or something? heart
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:37 am
What I'll do is I'll resend you your original and then I'll send the one I changed and you can compare them. We do this all the time in my english classes, peer review. So if you don't like the changes feel free to ignore them. smile
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:43 am
I'm not gonna bold cuz I'm a brat. But I think if you print both you can compare. I'm not gonna say it's perfect. But I have edited it to the best of my abilities.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 11:46 am
Mattlo.. what does "I was totally lyric" mean? Context.. "The first time I sa it I was totally lyric"
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:05 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:08 pm
Hey Link! I can see your belly. 4laugh
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:12 pm
Nie Chan Mattlo.. what does "I was totally lyric" mean? Context.. "The first time I sa it I was totally lyric" Lyrisk in swedish xd I was going to change that but forgot it, I didn't have a dictionary when I wrote it. xd it's exited-isch.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:16 pm
Yes...Yes you can...Sorry, I decided to try fishing. I'm not very good at it. sweatdrop Well, I gotta go, homework and lots of it. Cya!
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:17 pm
Oh well you would just say excited.
See ya later Link! G'luck on your school work.
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:29 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 12:30 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 1:03 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 3:48 pm
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