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 Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:29 am
Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. How about you land on the ground with many a broken bone, but still alive? You can just hang out there in pain and misery until you die of starvation. Death don't sound so bad now, huh? Also, Fisher's awesome. He managed all that gunpowder and explosives in what, two minutes?
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:30 am
Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. Tyler fell down a massive pit, with no visible bottom. Drakam, fell from a tower a few metres and landed on a nearby roof. Big difference wink
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:30 am
Akuyoko Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. How about you land on the ground with many a broken bone, but still alive? You can just hang out there in pain and misery until you die of starvation. Death don't sound so bad now, huh? He could have landed on a hidden platform! You never know! >_>
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:31 am
Great chapter.
Fish is gonna kill Raui.
To hell.
Because.. FOR TONIGHT, WE DINE... IN HELL! But yeah, you should really get some stuff published.
With us in it. ; D
I'd totally buy like.. All of them. Same with Seaphron's.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:35 am
It's really good. There are a few small gramatical errors but nothing too serious. It is EPIC!!! domokun
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:36 am
Chapter 38 online!!
We're nearly there people, but that doesn't mean it's over. The full detials of the last two chapters are still up in the air. I might kill no-one. I might kill everyone. Tyler might return, because he landed on a platform. Forian might have really only been put to sleep by the needle. Sauvie might have nimbly escaped getting crushed.
Anyways, my point is, anything can still happen, and I haven't made up my mind about anything yet.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:37 am
I decided to start reading more cult stories, and to be honest, this one is really good. I like the new chapter too.
@LF, yeah he should try to get some of this published, who knows? maybe some one will make it into an anime!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:37 am
Masamune 5.0 It's really good. There are a few small gramatical errors but nothing too serious. It is EPIC!!! domokun Yeah, I keep spotting some errors everytime I read the story. I write so fast, that it can't really be helped xd . Thanks for reading anyways!
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:38 am
Quote: “Not without you,” said Drakam, “Come on e man!” “This city will soon be gone,” smiled Monkey, “And with it, my life. I have ^no^need to kill anyone anymore.” Great chapter it was nice and dramatic. I like how the man they thought ought to kill them ends up saving them and I really liked that last piece with Fisher. Nice work FS
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:39 am
Great chapter, again.
Poor Fish.
But if your going to bring some people back, I suggest not bringing them all back.
That ruins the suspense of some of the chapters.
Tyler would be good to bring back, maybe the needle people, but I'm not sure who else.
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:42 am
Seaphron Quote: “Not without you,” said Drakam, “Come on e man!” “This city will soon be gone,” smiled Monkey, “And with it, my life. I have ^no^need to kill anyone anymore.” Great chapter it was nice and dramatic. I like how the man they thought ought to kill them ends up saving them and I really liked that last piece with Fisher. Nice work FS Thanks, I added your friend to the subscribers list btw. Thanks for spotting the errors too, I really should slow down a little when I type xd . @LF, I probably won't bring anyone back tbh, I was just messing about. (Still, you can't rule it out ninja )
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:43 am
wow, that sums up my feelings to the chapter
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:44 am
ForsakenSwordsman Masamune 5.0 It's really good. There are a few small gramatical errors but nothing too serious. It is EPIC!!! domokun Yeah, I keep spotting some errors everytime I read the story. I write so fast, that it can't really be helped xd . Thanks for reading anyways! I got that problem too, I'm still going through my 22 page story finding all sorts of grammer errors. xd some of them I still can't get rid of! but oh well. it's a good story that you have written. 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:46 am
ForsakenSwordsman Thanks, I added your friend to the subscribers list btw. Thanks for spotting the errors too, I really should slow down a little when I type xd . No problem. I'll tell him the next time I see him XD
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 11:54 am
Akuyoko Hero Maul Meta Fish I wonder how this will all end, and who will live in the end. Did Tyler die? I seem to forget his death, but he hasn't been mentioned for a long time. He apparently "fell" down a pit. If Draken can "land" on a roof, then Tyler should have lived. How about you land on the ground with many a broken bone, but still alive? You can just hang out there in pain and misery until you die of starvation. Death don't sound so bad now, huh? Also, Fisher's awesome. He managed all that gunpowder and explosives in what, two minutes? It might have felt like two minutes, but it wasn't. They were in that city for a fair while, running around and stuff, I just trimmed it down to fit it in.
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