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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 1:47 am
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:19 am
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Character: Tsume Hyouton Technique Name: Black Heart Rank: D-A Type: Genjutsu Element: Hyouton only. Description: Once the user's sword makes contact with someone's skin, the opponent feels it begins to freeze them. For a human, it freezes their nervous system for three [3-4] posts making them vulnerable. It can cause death if the Genjutsu not stopped. [First post, D rank] - The opponent starts to feel heavier and stiffer, however they can still move and react. [Second post, C rank] - The opponent's stiffness is increased and they feel extreme coldness surging through their body. [Third post, B rank] - Reactions are much, much slower and the opponent's nervous system is almost completely froze over. They are hardly unable to move and their skin turns icy. [Fourth post. A rank] - This can mean certain death. The opponent is now unable to move, and their veins and blood also begin to freeze over along with their organs. If it runs into a fifth post then it means death. This jutsu can be broken. The user, however, cannot break it. It can be broken like any normal genjutsu. Even when broken depending on the stage the opponent can still feel a little of the sideaffects. From the third stage on once broken the opponent can faint from two to four posts. [2-4] [Takes up two custom slots]
Character: Tsume Hyouton Technique Name: Death's Chilling Kiss Rank: S Type: Ninjutsu. Element: Hyouton Description: This technique means certain death. Once this jutsu is activated and the user's lips make contact with anothers, it works the same way as Black Heart. However, this is physical and not an illusion. Depending how long the kiss is held for, it ultimately freezes every liquid and organ inside the body. If it is held for more than three posts then it results in death for the opponent. [First Post] - The opponent can slowly feel his blood freeze over. If broken in this stage, the opponent's reflexes are slower and their physical endurance and strength is decreased for two posts. [Second Post] - The opponent is in extreme pain from hypothermia. They can no long move and can result in a coma if not stopped immediately. Same effects, however it lasts for five posts. [Third Post] - Death for the opponent. They suffer from extreme hypothermia and their heart stops beating resulting in a cold, icy death. If, somehow they manage to survive, the effects last for ten posts. This jutsu has an effect on the caster, as well. No matter what their rank, Chuunin and above, they feel extreme fatigue and become physically exhausted. One must be careful when using this technique. It can be combated with katon jutsu to warm the opponent up. [Takes up two custom slots]
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Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2011 7:37 am
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Posted: Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:59 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 10:28 am
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Reminder: Genin can only learn up to B-Rank, Chuunin can only learn up to A-Rank.
Conan: How is Pool Creation different from the other Suiton techniques that create water?
Condemned Memoir: Black Heart is approved as long as the "Bukijutsu" part of the type is taken out.
Death's Chilling Kiss is approved with the following stipulations: in the first post paralysis does not occur, but rather a slowing of the target's movements; the technique can be combated with a technique to warm up the target (Katon or whatever).
Avedis: The Eater techniques are both denied.
Jelani: Sekai Hashi no Sakibure is approved with the following stipulations: it cannot actually see the future; it is not unstoppable.
Hen Kyoku no Koe is one that we're hesitant about approving. The fact of the matter is that the user would have to know the words are coming in order to use this, which is usually only possible because the words have already been spoken; as such, we're worried that a certain amount of auto-knowing would have to happen for this technique to be useful. One of the crew is pretty sure that we have something like it already, so if you'd like to look through the lists, that would be fine.
Tenshi no Hane is denied because it is way too cheap a technique to allow flight for that long.
Tenshi no Hoyo and Hogo are approved.
Tenshi no Kaidan is denied because it covers too large an area for that little Chakra.
Tenshi no Sasayaku is approved with the following stipulation: the technique is not permanent. Also, it was suggested that something like this is already in the lists; please feel free to take a look.
Tenshi no Uta is disapproved because of its infinite range and permanence.
Tenshi no Yori Te is approved if it gets a duration.
Kori Kuinzu is disapproved as long as it doesn't have, quote, "the most specific freaking guidelines ever".
Pandora: Yumegatari, Fuuhaizu and Kazanretsu are approved.
We had a question on Tenchuu: What happens if fewer than all five pillars are destroyed? We want to know if the pillars regenerate or if the Chakra strings are simply lost.
Jikouseimei is approved, but we'll be keeping an eye on it.
Houden is approved, but don't we already have something that does this in the Raiton list?
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 10:58 am
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:38 pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:41 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 14, 2011 2:20 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:37 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2011 2:54 am
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Ergo War Jelani: Hen Kyoku no Koe is one that we're hesitant about approving. The fact of the matter is that the user would have to know the words are coming in order to use this, which is usually only possible because the words have already been spoken; as such, we're worried that a certain amount of auto-knowing would have to happen for this technique to be useful. One of the crew is pretty sure that we have something like it already, so if you'd like to look through the lists, that would be fine.
I'll just scrap that one and go back to the drawing board. ^_^
Ergo War Tenshi no Hane is denied because it is way too cheap a technique to allow flight for that long.
Would 1-4 be an exemplary amount of time? If not then it could be bumped up to C Rank while retaining the initial 1-8 post duration.
Ergo War Tenshi no Kaidan is denied because it covers too large an area for that little Chakra.
Would it be better if I made it a B Rank technique then?
Ergo War Tenshi no Sasayaku is approved with the following stipulation: the technique is not permanent. Also, it was suggested that something like this is already in the lists; please feel free to take a look.
I never said it was permanent, and I think you're referring to the Voice techniques. I made this one specifically for her to be more effective and to make up for her lack of Genjutsu slots. It is slightly more effective seeing as the cold practically constricts blood vessels and lessens the amount of blood to the brain, thus not allowing for swift/advanced thought process. I would like to ask for it to cost a bit more than the norm for a person to Kai out of this Genjutsu. Maybe an extra 10 chakra points?
Ergo War Tenshi no Uta is disapproved because of its infinite range and permanence.
I guess I did fail to explain that one better. Yes it has an infinite range, but only for the person under the influence of the whisper. This is only to allow her to give commands to said person no matter where she is as long as they haven't broken out of the first Genjutsu. She can't give them new commands, only strengthen the one(s) already given by singing it for them. It is by no means permanent. Maybe the person would have to exert an equal amount of chakra for this technique's rank as well as the extra 10 chakra points as a result of the cold? Or maybe if Eirlys' song is disrupted by any means then the afflicted person will be free? Think of her singing as a Siren. Even when people aren't close to the Siren they can somehow hear the beautiful voice.
Ergo War Tenshi no Yori Te is approved if it gets a duration.
How about if it lasts for a maximum of 2-3 posts?
Ergo War Kori Kuinzu is disapproved as long as it doesn't have, quote, "the most specific freaking guidelines ever".
I'm assuming I went a bit overboard with this one. I only did it to make up some for the Shinsetsu clan's lack of decisive techniques. Maybe her resistance to Katon Ninjutsu could drop to C Rank and below when in this form. The freezing of Suiton techniques could only count for those C Rank and below as well. Think of her freezing a person's body by touch just like the Ice Prison technique. The only difference being that she can only freeze the specific part that she touches. It could possibly take two of the opponent's posts before said limb begins to freeze from the touch, then if that limb remains frozen said person will start to experience frostbite in the next two of their posts. Maybe a person who is naturally used to the cold will be unaffected completely, meaning that if it is for example another Shinsetsu clan member or a Hyouton clan member, the limb touched would freeze, but they would virtually feel nothing seeing as they are so used to it. In the case of a person with a hot body or their surroundings is naturally heated, the ice would not affect them and begin to melt as long as the heat source matches the rank of this Jutsu.
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 9:57 am
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2011 3:38 pm
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