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 Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:37 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:09 am
Rpc Name:Hecmot
Village:Sand
Bloodline Clan applied for:Hyuga Clan(Byakugan)
What you know about this clan: I know that there fighting style Gentle fist was made to repersent the push and pull motions of Tai chi. The hyuga clan's generation resemble a dynastys family tree. The byakugan's blind spot is directly in the middle of the back of there head.The 8 triagrams repersent how far or how close someone is within there reach.The hyuga's rarley rare Flak jackets because they restrict there agile movments.The hyuga clan was the strongest clan in konaha until the uchiha clan was formed.
Rp Sample:
Hecmot wiped the sweat from his brow as he wanderd through a seemingly endless forest in search of latest assignment.After letting out a slow gasp Hecmot whisperd "Byakugan" and was barley able to react to the three kunai knifes flying from his left.
With a flawless side step to his right he spun and threw a kunai knife in the direction of the attackers and smiled with satisfaction as he heard the thud of his kunai peircing the skull of one of his attackers.
Three rogue ninjas stepped from the bushes wearing light robes all in battle position.Hecmot instantly activated his byakugan to annalyze his opponents. One of his oppents(Who he guessed was the leader) Had an medium amount of chakra flowing through his body which led him to the assumption the he must be atleat jounin ranked.The other two had chakra of an amature level meaning that they might be atleast chunin or genin ranked."Enough of this" screamed one of the smaller foes as he charged towards hecmot kunai in hand. Hecmot smiled and slowly fell into his gentle fist stance and swept the heel of his foot at his attackers heel and pushing gently on his chest sending his foes momentum back, he then slid his hand up to his attackers chin slamming it into the ground and smiled as he felt his skull crack against the ground.
The jounin ranked ninja smiled from the skill of hecmot and instantly fired 3 missle sized fireballs from his mouth towards Hecmot. Not having enough time to stand back up hecmot spun and yelled "Rotation" and the momentum from the spin flung the dead genins body through a tree. The other genin charged guard up as hecmots jutsu began to end. With out a seconds hesitaion hecmot through a smoke bomb towards the ground and the mist engulfed the battlefield. The panicked Genin yelled to his partner "Where is he" as the smoke began to slowly ingulf him. Without another seconds hesiation Hecmot quickly closed the distance between him and the remaining Genin and quickly fell into 8 triagram 64 palm stance. The genin looked down but wasnt quick enough with his retaliation as Hecmot began battering on his opponent with a flurry of pokes jabbing and crippling his opponents chakra flow and at the sime time cracking his ribs.
As the smoke cleared the Jounin stood there shocked at his team mates crippled body underneaths Hecmots feet. The Jounin Charged at Hecmot with speed that he wasnt even able to keep up with jabbing his elbow into hecmots ribs knocking the wind from his lungs.Flying back from the sudden assault hecmot quickly reached into his Shuriken/Bomb pouch. The Jounin charged again and unleashed a flurry of blows upon Hecmot that he struggled to evade and weave around.The Jounin through a heavy let that hecmot ducked under and tapped the Jounins under arm with his palm.The Jounin through a sudden knee at Hecmots skull that Hecmot weaved to the right and tapped the Jounins calf.The Jounin then through a heavy right that Hecmot weaved to the right and tapped the jounins shoulder,but this time the jounin came down with a heavy headbutt uptop Hecmots skull right as hecmot tapped the jounins chest.Hecmot leaped back from the blow and hurled a kunai at the Jounin that he deflected with a kunai of his own sparkig it and sending it flying into the closest tree.
Hecmot smiled at the Jounin and pointed and everyplace he tapped on the Jounin uncovering paperbombs that the spark from the kunai had lit. The Jounin let out a horrific scream as the combined explosion ripped him to shreds and sent peices of him flying into the sky."Now back to my mission" Grumbled Hecmot as he turned around and continued his treck through the forest.
(Lol hope you like.....i applogize for the lenght....lol just really got into it........even if it's not approved can you notify me of the changes that could be made so that i can fix them. 3nodding )
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:12 am
Hi, Ummm Cupcake? Could you look at mine please sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:34 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:07 am
The Only Sosay Uchiha
@Razor and Fear:
Thank you very much!!!!! biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:43 am
better? elijh4 Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons. Rp Sample: Walking down the road to his village, Zanzo spotted a upcoming group of bandits. "Hold up there buddy and empty your pockets of your gold so that you can pass through here alive" sneered the leader. "Amateurs" laughed Zanzo as flexed his arms and prepared to charge. "Get the him" yelled the leader. A group of five bandits rushed at Zanzo with their own weapons drawn and raised for attack. Charging at his foes, Zanzo sped past them without the bandits realizing. He then spun around and struck one bandit it the back of his head to send the bandit flying and unconsicious. One bandit rushed forward and swung his blade down at Zanzo who easily side stepped and grabbed the bandit by the neck to throw him into another bandit. The last two rushed at Zanzo slashing at him with their blades and Zanzo dodged to the left and right causing them to miss. Smiling the whole time, Zanzo danced around the bandits after they made attempt after attempt to hit him, but he would always dodge them at the last second. Deciding to end it, Zanzo waited til both of them raised their blades up to slash downward at him while he was crouching. Before they could bring their blades down, Zanzo had moved moved quickly to clothes line both of them in their throats. Their bodies flew backwards and landed roughly on the ground as they tried to gasp for air. Looking at the mess he had made of the bandits, Zanzo looked up to see if the bandit leader had more to send. All he saw was a trail of dust, where the bandit leader and the rest of his crew had fled. Shrugging his shoulders, Zanzo put his hands in his pockets and walked casually back to the village for body training.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:02 am
elijh4 better? elijh4 Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons. Rp Sample: Walking down the road to his village, Zanzo spotted a upcoming group of bandits. "Hold up there buddy and empty your pockets of your gold so that you can pass through here alive" sneered the leader. "Amateurs" laughed Zanzo as flexed his arms and prepared to charge. "Get the him" yelled the leader. A group of five bandits rushed at Zanzo with their own weapons drawn and raised for attack. Charging at his foes, Zanzo sped past them without the bandits realizing. He then spun around and struck one bandit it the back of his head to send the bandit flying and unconsicious. One bandit rushed forward and swung his blade down at Zanzo who easily side stepped and grabbed the bandit by the neck to throw him into another bandit. The last two rushed at Zanzo slashing at him with their blades and Zanzo dodged to the left and right causing them to miss. Smiling the whole time, Zanzo danced around the bandits after they made attempt after attempt to hit him, but he would always dodge them at the last second. Deciding to end it, Zanzo waited til both of them raised their blades up to slash downward at him while he was crouching. Before they could bring their blades down, Zanzo had moved moved quickly to clothes line both of them in their throats. Their bodies flew backwards and landed roughly on the ground as they tried to gasp for air. Looking at the mess he had made of the bandits, Zanzo looked up to see if the bandit leader had more to send. All he saw was a trail of dust, where the bandit leader and the rest of his crew had fled. Shrugging his shoulders, Zanzo put his hands in his pockets and walked casually back to the village for body training.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:07 am
As Academy starting Roronoa I know only bare fisted combat, I move up to one sword at Genin, two swords at Chunin, and three swords at Jounin. So no I can't use swords yet. The Only Sosay Uchiha elijh4 better? elijh4 Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons. Rp Sample: Walking down the road to his village, Zanzo spotted a upcoming group of bandits. "Hold up there buddy and empty your pockets of your gold so that you can pass through here alive" sneered the leader. "Amateurs" laughed Zanzo as flexed his arms and prepared to charge. "Get the him" yelled the leader. A group of five bandits rushed at Zanzo with their own weapons drawn and raised for attack. Charging at his foes, Zanzo sped past them without the bandits realizing. He then spun around and struck one bandit it the back of his head to send the bandit flying and unconsicious. One bandit rushed forward and swung his blade down at Zanzo who easily side stepped and grabbed the bandit by the neck to throw him into another bandit. The last two rushed at Zanzo slashing at him with their blades and Zanzo dodged to the left and right causing them to miss. Smiling the whole time, Zanzo danced around the bandits after they made attempt after attempt to hit him, but he would always dodge them at the last second. Deciding to end it, Zanzo waited til both of them raised their blades up to slash downward at him while he was crouching. Before they could bring their blades down, Zanzo had moved moved quickly to clothes line both of them in their throats. Their bodies flew backwards and landed roughly on the ground as they tried to gasp for air. Looking at the mess he had made of the bandits, Zanzo looked up to see if the bandit leader had more to send. All he saw was a trail of dust, where the bandit leader and the rest of his crew had fled. Shrugging his shoulders, Zanzo put his hands in his pockets and walked casually back to the village for body training.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:11 am
elijh4 As Academy starting Roronoa I know only bare fisted combat, I move up to one sword at Genin, two swords at Chunin, and three swords at Jounin. So no I can't use swords yet. The Only Sosay Uchiha elijh4 better? elijh4 Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons. Rp Sample: Walking down the road to his village, Zanzo spotted a upcoming group of bandits. "Hold up there buddy and empty your pockets of your gold so that you can pass through here alive" sneered the leader. "Amateurs" laughed Zanzo as flexed his arms and prepared to charge. "Get the him" yelled the leader. A group of five bandits rushed at Zanzo with their own weapons drawn and raised for attack. Charging at his foes, Zanzo sped past them without the bandits realizing. He then spun around and struck one bandit it the back of his head to send the bandit flying and unconsicious. One bandit rushed forward and swung his blade down at Zanzo who easily side stepped and grabbed the bandit by the neck to throw him into another bandit. The last two rushed at Zanzo slashing at him with their blades and Zanzo dodged to the left and right causing them to miss. Smiling the whole time, Zanzo danced around the bandits after they made attempt after attempt to hit him, but he would always dodge them at the last second. Deciding to end it, Zanzo waited til both of them raised their blades up to slash downward at him while he was crouching. Before they could bring their blades down, Zanzo had moved moved quickly to clothes line both of them in their throats. Their bodies flew backwards and landed roughly on the ground as they tried to gasp for air. Looking at the mess he had made of the bandits, Zanzo looked up to see if the bandit leader had more to send. All he saw was a trail of dust, where the bandit leader and the rest of his crew had fled. Shrugging his shoulders, Zanzo put his hands in his pockets and walked casually back to the village for body training.
@eligh4: Okay then. If your not planning on using swords yet then your application seems to be fine.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:19 am
HOLD UP! The Roronoa clan is all about swords, so you should make the sample about swords. I probably confused you with that whole jounin thing. For thr RP sample, you can be whatever rank you want as long as it shows all aspects of the clan, but your RPC rank is the rank you will start as. Sorry about that, but please remake the application using the Roronoa's swords.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 11:43 am
The byakugan is officially closed, if you have already submitted an app we will still look at it, but for now no more hyuugas will be accepted.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:59 pm
The Only Sosay Uchiha
@Cupcake:
Thank you biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:08 pm
Rpc Name: Tsume Inuzuka
Village: Konohagakure
Rank: AS
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Inuzuka Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: They use dogs in their fighting techniques , and they learn many jutsu's around them and their dog. Also they have a strong sense of smell ,and they have amazing hearing which helps them when they are in missions that require them to have to find rouge ninja.They are give their dog when they reach maturity and are seen fit by their clan leaders, they are also given fang like tattoos on the side of their faces
Rp Sample:
Tsume was walking home with Kuroi from the training ground when his sensei called him “Hey Tsume how about you show me how your’s synchronization is coming out to be with Kuroi’s ?” Tsume, “Umm sensei you shouldn’t try to mess with me and Kuroi.” Sensei, “HAHA so much talk are you so sure you can even handle that kind of talk?”Tsume, “Argh fine but don’t blame me sensei if you get hurt and need the medical ninja’s to save your life!” Sensei, “Fine then ill make sure I don’t kill you.” just then Tsume’s sensei charged at him. hmm… ok I need to think ahead and I need to find every weakness of his and smack him in the with it. Tsume, “Ok lets take him out Kuroi!” Tsume & Kuroi charge at the sensei and begin their assault. Tsume throws a punch at his Sensei’s face but his sensei grabs his fist and twists it behind Tsume’s back Sensei, “What kind of teamwork is that? Never forget that you always need to use your ninja hound as an attacker with you.” Tsume, “I know Sensei how about you turn around. NOW KUROI!” Sensei, “WHAT!” Kuroi charges at Sensei at goes for the hand that is attached to Tsume’s hand. Sensei instantly senses Kuroi’s movements and lets go of Tsume’s arm All right this is my chance to show Sensei my new jutsu. Tsume “Hehe to bad sensei this is the end for this little sparring match of ours, let’s go Kuroi.” Tsume instanley jumps back and throws Kuroi a food pill from his pocket. Kuroi catches it and turns pitch black and turns into an exact copy of Tsume. “ Ready? Cuz here we come Sensei. GATSUGA!” Tsume and Kuroi turn into two cyclones and charge at Sensei. Sensei, “Crap I didn’t think that Tsume and Kuroi could do this technique yet!” Sensei thinking that it would work throws a paper bomb at Gatsuga but because their speed was at maximum Tsume and Kuroi tore right through the paper bomb before it could blow up on them. Sensei, “Damn it guess I underestimated his abilities to soon, but im not out yet". Sensei quickly jumps right out of the way of gatsuga and because Tsume didn't notice that him and Kuroi smash into a tree. Tsume " What the were did Sensei go? " Sensei appears behind Tsume and outs a kunia knife to his throat. Sensei " Oi what the hell is that if this was a real battle not only would you have been killed but you would have endangered your partner Hmm?" Tsume " Haha you think i wouldn't have noticed you behind me Sensei I may have missed you with gatsuga but I won't let you get away from my sense of smell." Tsume*Sigh* ok that was my mistake I need to do something else hmm haha i got it this time ill make sure that our hits him head on. Sensei " haha this fight really sucks Tsume I could fight you blindfolded!" Tsume " Oh really Sense? You thinks so well lets see." Tsume reaches into his pocket and pulls out two smoke bombs and throws them at Sensei's feet. Sensei " What the hell are you doing?" Tsume ' haha ok Kuroi this will be easy go get him boy! Kuroi charges to Sensei and jumps into the air. Tsume " haha good boy now DYNAMIC MARKING." Kuroi sends out a stream of his urine into the smog. Sensei " Ahh what the hell is?! This it stinks and its burning my eyes!" Tsume " Haha alright got him ok Kuroi lets do this Man beast clone!" Kuroi turns into Tsume and waits for his masters command. Tsume " Ok now this is the end TWO HEADED WOLF GATSUGA! This time I won't miss." Tsume and Kuroi charge into the smog and hit Sensei. Sensei " Damnit this is it!" Tsume and Kuroi halt their attack and watch as Sensei goes flying into the trees, but instead oh him connecting to the tree he blows up into a puff of smoke. Tsume " What the?..." Sensei appears on a tree next Tsume and Kuroi . Sensei " haha that was good Tsume so I am going to call an end to this match I don't want to destroy you in my next move." Sensei "oh man what the heck is up with this kid he almost killed me twice!" Tsume " hmm I think Sensei is just a chicken and he ran out of moves to use on me" Sensei " Oi Tsume shut your mouth or i wont buy you and Kuroi food!" scream Tsume " haha alright awesome thanks Sensei lets go Kuroi we are gonna eat like kings tonight!
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Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:46 pm
Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma
Village: Leaf
Rank: Jounin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons.
Rp Sample: Zanzo Rikuruma was lazying underneath the shadow of a tree because he was taking a short rest while on his mission to capture two thieves, who had stolen a scroll. He was in no great hurry because it was a beauitfully bright blue day and he wasnt going to waste it on two thieves. Resting one hand on the hilts of his three swords and lying his head back against the trunk of the tree, Zanzo daydreamed for awhile. Getting up and flexing his limbs that had been resting, Zanzo readied himself for catching up to the two thieves, who were camped out just over the next tree. Zanzo had been watching them and assessing them for awhile to figure out the best way to capture them and keep the scroll safe. Both of them were shinobi one was fire based, while the other one was water based. Although they were weak compared to him, he did know that it wouldn't be easy knocking them unconsicious and transporitng them back. Jumping up high in the branches of a overlooking tree, Zanzo saw the two thieves dozing around their camp. Zanzo thought "Sweet now is my chance to get them, while they sleep." Hopping down and sliding down the trunk of the tree, Zanzo landed quietly next to the fire shinobi. Unsheathing one of his swords quietly as he could, Zanzo walked over to the other thief and checked to make sure he was snozing too. Unraveling his rope, Zanzo walked to the fire shinobi and stood over him and was about to wrap his hands.
When the fire shinobi sleepily opened one eye to look up at Zanzo, however thinking quickly Zanzo cracked the fire shinobi over the head with the hilt of his sword. His head lulled to the side so Zanzo let out a sigh of relief. Suddenly he felt charkra being channeled, a water technique, so he channeled ligthning into his sword and brought it up to block the attack. Slicing right through the attack like butter, Zanzo cracked his neck and unsheathed his other two swords flicking one into his mouth to hold on the right side. Moving into a stance Zanzo mumbles "Phoenix of the 108 Earthly Desires" swinging his blades in circular motion and slashing left with his mouth sword. By allowing acurate charkra control to flow through his blades, Zanzo was able to shot three compressed charkra blade projectiles at the water shinobi. Dodging quickly the water shinobi barely missed them only being nicked on his shoulder. However Zanzo was already charging him and yelling "Demon Slash" as him swung his hand held blades in a "X" across the shinobi's chest and slashing left with his mouth blade. The shock of the speed of the attack and the force of it left the water shinobi gasping for air before he passed out.
Sheatihng his blades neatly, Zanzo picked up his rope and tied their hands channeling charkra into the rope for extra security. Throwing one over each shoulder, Zanzo jumped up onto the lowest branch climbing up branches til he was halfway up the tree. He set them down on the branch and made his way back to their camp to look for the scroll they had stolen. Looking around he saw it lying on the ground cut in half by his "Phoenix of the 108 Earthly Desires". Panicing and cursing under his breath, Zanzo grabbed and tried to put it back together when he noticed that this scroll was a secret recipe for the Hokage's favorite style of ramen. Zanzo laughed to himself thinking of how these thieves stole something like this. Pocketing the scroll, Zanzo grabbed his packages and headed back to village. And he had to explain to Hokage why the scroll was in halve. Oh well, maybe he will get it right next time.
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Posted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:50 am
@Matthew: Denied. Please improve your knowledge on the clan, and your rp sample.
@eligh4:Approved
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