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 Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:20 am
PrincessRyoko -huggles joy- @Sin: We may beable to get away with it.  o:
I see.
*Leans forward, and pecks you on the lips, smirking.* And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:23 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:24 am
Two off campus threads I REALLY wanna make.
A bubble tea shop, and Atra's warehouse. And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:24 am
Sinyao PORGY JoY_AnGel wee. Wanna read what?? ..A good portion of my Poems is about Kurai and Joy,since I wrote most while during the hwole figthing. Then mushy love ella poems. Well..not relaly mushy,more violent. Favorite love poem of mine is..The Why is it one. Or was it called The reason. bahh.
Yours sound coool~ Because they're amateurs.
One should be able to use simile and metaphors with ease.
That is the writer's weapon, and the epitome of a good story or poem is a wide array of words. And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
And, a good story or poem? I disagree entirely. Words are important, but characters and plot are something the reader will remember. I would rather use a simple vocabulary well with wonderful, believable characters than rape a thesaurus or try to fiddle around with my words until I warp my own meaning.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:25 am
-Gasps at Sin-
ELLO SHUNKO! -TACKLES-
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:26 am
Hey, Shunko! :"D How're you?
And, uh...I think I got a little worked up in that last post. Aplogies to Kurai-san. xD
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:26 am
Neveada-tan,I posted them up the ones that are good. To me.. >.
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:27 am
PORGY Sinyao PORGY JoY_AnGel wee. Wanna read what?? ..A good portion of my Poems is about Kurai and Joy,since I wrote most while during the hwole figthing. Then mushy love ella poems. Well..not relaly mushy,more violent. Favorite love poem of mine is..The Why is it one. Or was it called The reason. bahh.
Yours sound coool~ Because they're amateurs.
One should be able to use simile and metaphors with ease.
That is the writer's weapon, and the epitome of a good story or poem is a wide array of words. And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
And, a good story or poem? I disagree entirely. Words are important, but characters and plot are something the reader will remember. I would rather use a simple vocabulary well with wonderful, believable characters than rape a thesaurus or try to fiddle around with my words until I warp my own meaning. And remember poems are not usually made to be awesome; just to be emotion.
Most people write poems when they feel strong emotion, and in a teenager's time, most of it is about change, and change is awkward, confusing, and frustrating, which sometimes results in angst. So therefore just because it's crappy, opinion or not, think of the mood the author might feel as he writes it, and seperate it from the tone of the poem/story.. And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:28 am
PrincessRyoko -Gasps at Sin- ELLO SHUNKO! -TACKLES- Well, if you wanted, I could have held you close, and made it longer...
=P And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:31 am
[Crawls in like a depressed little chibi.] I hate.. some.. things.. in life.. crying
And hello all.. gonk
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:31 am
Wow imagine this Darius is back onlie now! Hello everyone!
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:33 am
...................
::stares at tai-chan::
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WAHHHHHHHHHHHH TAI-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::ultraflyingtackleglomps::
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:34 am
-Cuddles Lucia-
-Gaspu- Sin! Everyone is minus Ceron and Kurai (I think) and Ame, and Misao, and a few others, are jailbate to me. gonk
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:34 am
HILLOU EVERYONE! HOW ISH EVERYONE!!!??
WAAAHHH ISH TAI!!!! XDDDDD *prances like a huge maniac* WAAH *tackle glomps* HOW ART THOU?!
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Posted: Sun Jul 23, 2006 9:34 am
PrincessRyoko -Cuddles Lucia- -Gaspu- Sin Hmm?
*Hugs, and licks your cheek.*
What? ^-^
EDIT: Jailbait? o.O And you lied to the angels, and said I stabbed you to death...
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