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 Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 10:47 am
@Echo - Thanks Echo that makes me feel great, i am hoping that the reason someone hasnt posted in awhile is because it is the middle of the school week.
@Bill - Thanks, you'll be able to see your part soon, I am almost done with it. I intend to write another short right now so if anyone is on it will be something for you all to read.
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:15 am
If i were you I would change the chapter links and character bios round. You see then people insead of just clicking on chapter links , they will have to go past the bio first xd
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 11:20 am
Hm, Nice Idea. I will probably do that. I might also change the posts around so the chapters themselves are first and than everything else.
Half way done with the second short!
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 12:48 pm
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 12:52 pm
Nice short. It was very interesting.
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 7:34 pm
Oh snap. At least he fought before he went down, eh?
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 5:46 am
Interesting , though totally opposite to me. xd . Good short though
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 1:22 pm
Whoa when did you get the idea for shorts? I like them!
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 1:42 pm
*is still doing happy dance and grinning like an idiot for winning* THAT. WAS. AWESOME!!!!! heart heart Seaphron, I think you just won my 'best battle ever' award. 4laugh
that first short was pretty awesome too. 'loaded coin' my a**, Betman. The moment you pulled that little stunt, you were going DOWN. Never under-estimate the wrath of a woman.
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 1:47 pm
Psh I could have just DROWNED you but I'm too nice for that >_> rofl
or I could have used my electrical attack on you while you were in the bubble for MASSIVE DAMAGE xd
moving swiftly onward... Awesome Mini chapter Seaphron =D ALL ABOUT ME! IT'S PERFECT! xd
my mother is slightly peeved that you've made her wussy though rofl
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 2:18 pm
but then you would've been a murder. and who knows what would've hapened then.
stare do I LOOK like a gaint enemy crab? Answer wisely
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 2:20 pm
Maybe ninja
and I could have just done it until you were like.. you know... unconsious, then handed you over to Forsaken to give you the kiss of life followed by some kinky wind cuff adventures in the locker room. o_O
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 3:13 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Maybe ninja
and I could have just done it until you were like.. you know... unconsious, then handed you over to Forsaken to give you the kiss of life followed by some kinky wind cuff adventures in the locker room. o_O so how did that knife in the side feel again? it could alawys happen again. xd how do you know we haven't already? wink whee
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 3:17 pm
Koosei stare so how did that knife in the side feel again? it could alawys happen again. xd how do you know we haven't already? wink whee
it tickled, how did being suspended in a bubble of water helpless and slowly choking to death feel? >_>
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Thu Dec 07, 2006 3:21 pm
Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.] Koosei stare so how did that knife in the side feel again? it could alawys happen again. xd how do you know we haven't already? wink whee
it tickled, how did being suspended in a bubble of water helpless and slowly choking to death feel? >_>
it tickled
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