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 Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:24 pm
The Darkness Makuta Trying adding a bit more description, along with using more variations of names to call yourself. Such as 'he', 'the student', etc etc. Also, for now, don't mention the Raikens. The clan wasn't approved by the captain of the guild, so...their abilities pretty much don't exist here. Yet. Yeah I didn't mention the Raikens, and I'll work on it.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 9:23 pm
Muramasa Zero The Darkness Makuta Trying adding a bit more description, along with using more variations of names to call yourself. Such as 'he', 'the student', etc etc. Also, for now, don't mention the Raikens. The clan wasn't approved by the captain of the guild, so...their abilities pretty much don't exist here. Yet. Yeah I didn't mention the Raikens, and I'll work on it. The Raiken thing was in regards to your player profile. McClane ....Sukotto had a bird's eye view of a vast wheat field. For miles and miles, nearly nothing except the tan ocean could be seen. However, two objects stood about twenty meters apart, dwarfed by the immense plantation.
As the entities came into focus, Sukotto realized that they appeared to be nearly perfect clones of himself. The only difference between them stood out more than the two men among the wheat. Their eyes.... The man to his left had bright blue eyes that reflected the sun quite radiantly. In contrast, the one to his right had a pair of dark, green eyes. The peculiar thing about this man's eyes is that, however dark, they were just as apparent as the other man's eyes.
Without so much as a word, the two men engaged in close and quick combat. The man with green eyes was far more powerful and aggressive, yet the man with blue eyes was calmer and more controlled. After a few moments of their kunai clanging together, their battle ceased, their fighting styles were far too equal for a winner to determined by melee fighting alone.
Simultaneously, the two men bit their thumbs, painted a red symbol on one of their palms, and began to expertly preform the same hand seal. Finishing at the same time, the two thrust their open hands into the air, calling forth mirrored summoning jutsus.
The air above the wispy field flashed in a brilliant display of blue and green, fading only to reveal two gigantic hawks that matched the color scheme of each man's eyes.
After each man mounted his own hawk, the two knew that the whole conflict was about to come to its end. The two birds of prey charged each other, closing ground quite fast for their size.
As the beaks of the two birds were only inches apart, Sukotto heard an obnoxious voice echo through his head, "Sukotto!" Then darkness....
Opening his eyes to the academy classroom, Sukotto mumbled, "Wha....?" His sensei glared at him with much frustration. "I asked you, what is the most important thing to remember about summoning jutsus?" O_O If this doesn't get passed first time through, I don't know a good post when I see one.
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:08 am
Kamahi My character is Tankado Seija, from Kirigakure. RP Sample: "N-no! Please, I've got family!" Shouted the villager, as he was being held up at the neck. His voice was not heard out behind the deserted alley from which he was. "I-I can give you money! POWER!! ANYTH--" He choked, only to be left breathless as he fell to the empty grounds before the tall shadow. A gleam came from the eyes of the woman standing over the corpse. She raised her hand up and flipped her hair over her shoulder. "See Yuki? I didn't need your help this time..." She chuckled as the Ice Phoenix that roosted on her broad sholders almost give a smile. I've been lazy! >.< Pass! Scary..
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:09 am
McClane ....Sukotto had a bird's eye view of a vast wheat field. For miles and miles, nearly nothing except the tan ocean could be seen. However, two objects stood about twenty meters apart, dwarfed by the immense plantation.
As the entities came into focus, Sukotto realized that they appeared to be nearly perfect clones of himself. The only difference between them stood out more than the two men among the wheat. Their eyes.... The man to his left had bright blue eyes that reflected the sun quite radiantly. In contrast, the one to his right had a pair of dark, green eyes. The peculiar thing about this man's eyes is that, however dark, they were just as apparent as the other man's eyes.
Without so much as a word, the two men engaged in close and quick combat. The man with green eyes was far more powerful and aggressive, yet the man with blue eyes was calmer and more controlled. After a few moments of their kunai clanging together, their battle ceased, their fighting styles were far too equal for a winner to determined by melee fighting alone.
Simultaneously, the two men bit their thumbs, painted a red symbol on one of their palms, and began to expertly preform the same hand seal. Finishing at the same time, the two thrust their open hands into the air, calling forth mirrored summoning jutsus.
The air above the wispy field flashed in a brilliant display of blue and green, fading only to reveal two gigantic hawks that matched the color scheme of each man's eyes.
After each man mounted his own hawk, the two knew that the whole conflict was about to come to its end. The two birds of prey charged each other, closing ground quite fast for their size.
As the beaks of the two birds were only inches apart, Sukotto heard an obnoxious voice echo through his head, "Sukotto!" Then darkness....
Opening his eyes to the academy classroom, Sukotto mumbled, "Wha....?" His sensei glared at him with much frustration. "I asked you, what is the most important thing to remember about summoning jutsus?" Pass! I loved it! Too bad Sunagakure is closed crying But if you have no one I may be able to rig up a spot for you >.>
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 8:21 am
The Darkness Makuta Muramasa Zero The Darkness Makuta Trying adding a bit more description, along with using more variations of names to call yourself. Such as 'he', 'the student', etc etc. Also, for now, don't mention the Raikens. The clan wasn't approved by the captain of the guild, so...their abilities pretty much don't exist here. Yet. Yeah I didn't mention the Raikens, and I'll work on it. The Raiken thing was in regards to your player profile. McClane ....Sukotto had a bird's eye view of a vast wheat field. For miles and miles, nearly nothing except the tan ocean could be seen. However, two objects stood about twenty meters apart, dwarfed by the immense plantation.
As the entities came into focus, Sukotto realized that they appeared to be nearly perfect clones of himself. The only difference between them stood out more than the two men among the wheat. Their eyes.... The man to his left had bright blue eyes that reflected the sun quite radiantly. In contrast, the one to his right had a pair of dark, green eyes. The peculiar thing about this man's eyes is that, however dark, they were just as apparent as the other man's eyes.
Without so much as a word, the two men engaged in close and quick combat. The man with green eyes was far more powerful and aggressive, yet the man with blue eyes was calmer and more controlled. After a few moments of their kunai clanging together, their battle ceased, their fighting styles were far too equal for a winner to determined by melee fighting alone.
Simultaneously, the two men bit their thumbs, painted a red symbol on one of their palms, and began to expertly preform the same hand seal. Finishing at the same time, the two thrust their open hands into the air, calling forth mirrored summoning jutsus.
The air above the wispy field flashed in a brilliant display of blue and green, fading only to reveal two gigantic hawks that matched the color scheme of each man's eyes.
After each man mounted his own hawk, the two knew that the whole conflict was about to come to its end. The two birds of prey charged each other, closing ground quite fast for their size.
As the beaks of the two birds were only inches apart, Sukotto heard an obnoxious voice echo through his head, "Sukotto!" Then darkness....
Opening his eyes to the academy classroom, Sukotto mumbled, "Wha....?" His sensei glared at him with much frustration. "I asked you, what is the most important thing to remember about summoning jutsus?" O_O If this doesn't get passed first time through, I don't know a good post when I see one. Well then I guess I'll wait to start a profile.
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:20 pm
kouri-chan_xx Kamahi My character is Tankado Seija, from Kirigakure. RP Sample: "N-no! Please, I've got family!" Shouted the villager, as he was being held up at the neck. His voice was not heard out behind the deserted alley from which he was. "I-I can give you money! POWER!! ANYTH--" He choked, only to be left breathless as he fell to the empty grounds before the tall shadow. A gleam came from the eyes of the woman standing over the corpse. She raised her hand up and flipped her hair over her shoulder. "See Yuki? I didn't need your help this time..." She chuckled as the Ice Phoenix that roosted on her broad sholders almost give a smile. I've been lazy! >.< Pass! Scary.. Scary? Haha Just wait till you see the rest of her xD
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 3:01 pm
kouri-chan_xx Pass! I loved it! Too bad Sunagakure is closed crying But if you have no one I may be able to rig up a spot for you >.> Thank you, I had fun writing it ^_^ I would really like to go to Sunagakure; I think it matches my style a little better than any of the other ones. Plus I haven't really decided on any one village as of now, though if it is closed, I know it is for a good reason. Could you let me know if you could get me in?
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Posted: Mon Apr 02, 2007 8:12 am
(Ok, this is a non-Naruto related RP sample)
Both began walking towards the back entrance of the museum, which was, of course, closed.
I can lockpick it, said Manchet.
Nah, that would take too long, said Cerberus and kicked the door open.
Inside, there was a sleepy guard, dressed in the normal guard uniforms. When he noticed Cerberus and Manchet getting in, he awoke completely and shouted.
HEY!!! What the...? He began asking and Manchet slit his throat with a knife hidden in his sleeve and then pushed him away so the blood coming out of the wound wouldn't touch them or their clothes.
They continued walking in until they reached the main room, which was protected by two guards and two safety cameras. Cerberus and Manchet sat down, away from the cameras' reach and began talking.
I know where's the security room with the camera's and the other guards, so I can go there, kill the guards, turn the cameras off and you kill this two guys here, how does that sound?
I like the idea... How will I know you've turned off the cameras?
Cerberus smiled and put his sledgehammer leaning on the wall.
Can you take care of this? He asked, pointing at his hammer.
Sure.
Well, then, give me two exact minutes and then you kill them.
(BTW, I'm not a trenchcoater, I swear!!! This was exaggerated on purpose)
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 12:25 pm
cancerbero_8 (Ok, this is a non-Naruto related RP sample) Both began walking towards the back entrance of the museum, which was, of course, closed. I can lockpick it, said Manchet. Nah, that would take too long, said Cerberus and kicked the door open. Inside, there was a sleepy guard, dressed in the normal guard uniforms. When he noticed Cerberus and Manchet getting in, he awoke completely and shouted. HEY!!! What the...? He began asking and Manchet slit his throat with a knife hidden in his sleeve and then pushed him away so the blood coming out of the wound wouldn't touch them or their clothes. They continued walking in until they reached the main room, which was protected by two guards and two safety cameras. Cerberus and Manchet sat down, away from the cameras' reach and began talking. I know where's the security room with the camera's and the other guards, so I can go there, kill the guards, turn the cameras off and you kill this two guys here, how does that sound?I like the idea... How will I know you've turned off the cameras?Cerberus smiled and put his sledgehammer leaning on the wall. Can you take care of this? He asked, pointing at his hammer. Sure.Well, then, give me two exact minutes and then you kill them.(BTW, I'm not a trenchcoater, I swear!!! This was exaggerated on purpose) Nice dude. I'm pretty sure you should get passed. Just remember that in the guild. all talk is put in "" and thoughts are italizised. Other than that, looks pretty good. Hope you pass.
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 5:31 pm
My Character's name is Seiko Wattan and I haven't decided on a village yet.
Seiko woke up, sweating, from a horendous dream. In the dream Seiko was falling through water, watching dead bodies falling through the water, filling the water with blood. He just kept falling through the water until he saw his family fall through the water. In the dream he literally roared like a lion at the sight of his familie's blood shrouding the vision, and awakening from the dream.
Seiko looked at the clock, it was midnight and he needed sleep for school, so with reluctancy, he fell back to his firm mat, and tried to sleep.
A Little wordy and you have to say it with emotion, sorry. I hope I pass. xp
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Apr 03, 2007 7:02 pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 12:41 am
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Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 6:25 pm
here gose nothing. ok i'm planning on joining hidden rock...my friend plays kinako just in case you care.
Mia sat in a tree reading her book. She was supposed to be training with her brother but she did not want to train. Normally she would have been at the library at this hour but Kinako had insisted that they practice and it being his turn to pick Mia had gone with him.
She sighed looking down at her brother ‘I don’t understand why we have to stay together’ she thought. After all what was there to hurt them, the most dangerous things on the training ground were some of the boys. However, they weren’t a danger to her, just to themselves. The worst they ever did was make fun of Kinako. This never turned out well for them. Mia was quite over protective of her brother.
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Posted: Fri Apr 06, 2007 3:51 am
Wait is Kinako the brother?
Pass anyway~
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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Apr 08, 2007 10:50 pm
Kagai winced as he removed the Kunai from his leg. His opponent stood before him looking down at him with an evil grin across his face. Apparently the fool had gotten the idea through his head that he had the upper hand...
...but he would quickly learn of his error.
As a low mist gathered on what had become the battlefield of these two young ninjas the sun began to rise. It made the grass around them glow with a golden radiance and if Kagai had the choice he would have had this scene become his Eden for all eternity.
The masked ninja began laughing whole heartedly as if he was able to read Kagai's mind. "If it is your desire to meet your end here then I will grant your request." He unsheathed his Katana and came at Kagai with a powerful overhead attack.
The next few moments are burned into Kagai's memory for it was the first time that he had killed.
The masked ninja yelled a loud battle cry and brought the Katana down on Kagai with blinding speed. Kagai stepped down and to the right quickly to dodge the attack and then plunged the Kunai deep into his enemy's neck.
He eased him down slowly to the ground and rested his head down upon the Earth. "You have my respect my worthy adversary...." Kagai said as he closed his eyes "...may you find the peace that I will never know."
Kagai stood up and looked down at his opponent. It was foolish that a war such as this claimed the young. With that thought Kagai stood and watched the sunrise...
...his life would never be the same after this moment.
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