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 Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 9:06 am
Rpc Name: Hatsuharu Cambrien
Village: Mist
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Suigetsu's Bloodline
What you know about the clan/bl: The user gets the ability to melt down into water and travel. Suigetsu was able to increase muscle strength by taking body mass away from one part of his body and adding it to that arm. The user is weak to Raiton and must have Suiton as their main Element. Must also continue to drink water all the time.
Rp Sample
Hatsuharu and Yuki were fighting again. Yuki swept at Hatsuharu's legs, but Hatsuharu jumped above Yuki and then came down with an Axe Kick. He smashed into Yuki's face with the kick and then jumped backwards. "Damn, Haru! You're getting good!" Yuki then charged and sent kick into Hatsuharu's stomach, but the kick just went through Hatsuharu. Hatsuharu turned that portion of his body into liquid and caught the attack. Hatsuharu then reach out and punch Yuki clear across the face. He hit him a few more times then released Yuki's leg. Yuki flew back a bit as Hatsuharu then jumped towards the lake. He stopped right before the water. "What's the matter!! You give up yet?" Yuki got up and looked at Hatsuharu. "Not yet Haru. I still have a few tricks up my sleeve, but I suspect you do as well." Yuki charged and tried punching Hatsuharu in the face. Right before the attack hit, Hatsuharu fell backwards into the water and disappeared. Yuki lost his balance and fell in as well. "s**t!!" Hatsuharu then appeared and grabbed Yuki throat. "Give up now or I'll drown you!!!" Yuki smirked and muttered, "As if.... b***h." Hatsuharu snapped even worse than usual and dragged Yuki down to the bottom of the lake. Hatsuharu then appeared at the top of the lake and emerged from it onto dry land. He stretched a bit and looked back to the lake. "He'll get out. Yuki's impossible to kill." Hatsuharu turned his head forward and saw Yuki. "You got that right! Lightning Bolt Jutsu!" he shouted as shot a lightning bolt at Hatsuharu. It hit him and Hatsuharu started spazzing out as the shocks surged through his body. Hatsuharu was fried. He fell backwards and was unconscious on the ground.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:46 pm
Rpc Name: Zanzo Rikuruma
Village: Leaf
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Roronoa Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: This clan is mainly Taijutsu. Can fare well against a Sharigan user and have Sharigan like reflexes because of their inhuman strength, speed, ans stamina. Good charkra reserves and have good charkra control through their weapons.
Rp Sample: Walking down the road to his village, Zanzo spotted a upcoming group of bandits. "Hold up there buddy and empty your pockets of your gold so that you can pass through here alive" sneered the leader. "Amateurs" laughed Zanzo as flexed his arms and prepared to charge. "Get the him" yelled the leader. A group of five bandits rushed at Zanzo with their own weapons drawn and raised for attack. Charging at his foes, Zanzo sped past them without the bandits realizing. He then spun around and struck one bandit it the back of his head to send the bandit flying and unconsicious. One bandit rushed forward and swung his blade down at Zanzo who easily side stepped and grabbed the bandit by the neck to throw him into another bandit. The last two rushed at Zanzo slashing at him with their blades and Zanzo dodged to the left and right causing them to miss. Smiling the whole time, Zanzo danced around the bandits after they made attempt after attempt to hit him, but he would always dodge them at the last second. Deciding to end it, Zanzo waited til both of them raised their blades up to slash downward at him while he was crouching. Before they could bring their blades down, Zanzo had moved moved quickly to clothes line both of them in their throats. Their bodies flew backwards and landed roughly on the ground as they tried to gasp for air. Looking at the mess he had made of the bandits, Zanzo looked up to see if the bandit leader had more to send. All he saw was a trail of dust, where the bandit leader and the rest of his crew had fled. Shrugging his shoulders, Zanzo put his hands in his pockets and walked casually back to the village for body training.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:12 pm
Cupcake, just because a mod does not look at your application immediatly does not mean you can post it again.
Now for my main raeson in posting here. Elijh, Mist has a Jounin, so your rank would be an academy student.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:22 pm
Sorry had to edit a few things >.<
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 8:04 pm
Rpc Name: Shaoran (awaiting approval)
Village: Mist (if not allowed, then leaf)
Rank: Academy Student
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Orogami no Dara
What you know about the clan/bl: It was originally introduced to the series with the Akatsuki character, Konan. This kekkei genkei gives the user the ability to control paper and morph it into anything they need. They are also able to scatter their body into pieces of paper, make shuriken out of paper, and create wings. The user must have suiton and doton elements to use and cannot make paper out of mokutoun wood. The paper is also weak against raiton and katon elements.
Rp Sample:
The salty ocean air blows across his face as a young man looks out upon the ocean. He lies against what looks like an old shack that had been recently, but poorly repaired. He smiles as the man watches the fishermen go out into the water to check their nets. The man is Shaoran, a mist ninja. And this was his home. He looked up at the sky as some clouds began to roll in.
"Damn...looks like rain again."
He gets up and turns around at the sound of a breaking twig. He notices several men carrying swords and clubs. His face turns serious.
Man 1: Well, if it isn't the paper-boy.
Shao sighs.
"What do you want?"
Man 2: We want you dead. Your kind is not welcome here!
Shao shook his head as he takes out a sketchbook. He takes out a few pieces of paper and forms a handsign in one hand.
"Chou-Tokkoutai..."
The paper began to morph themselves into shapes. They took on the form of butterflies as they began to fly around Shao. The rogues begin to laugh.
Man 3: What is this sissy lil' show of yours?
Man 1: Forget about his little pieces of sh*t, KILL HIM!
They begin to rush him as Shao closed his eyes and grinned. He simply extended his arm. The butterflies suddenly rushed infront of the men and began to glow. The tiny paper entities explode around the men, killing them instantly. Shao looked at the charred, lifeless bodies as rain began to fall from the sky. He let out a sigh as he formed another handsign.
"kimitate."
He grabs one of the thing wooden clubs that one of the rogues was carrying and scattered the paper in his sketchbook. The paper swirled around the top of the stick and formed into an umbrella. Shao smiled as he walked back to his small fishing shack.
((I hope that works. I actually enjoyed typing that up.))
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:57 pm
Cobra_X Since everything is taking so long, I'm stepping in just for now...
@Overflowing Hatred (Anasi Hyuuga): You Are Approved!
@Hark (Hydration Bloodline): Denied. I don't doubt your RP ability, but I need to see more then just one jutsu from the bloodline. Also, might want to reference how Taijutsu/weapons don't work well agaisnt you, since you can jsut separate and reform yourself with water.
@Zarase (Yamanaka): You Are Approved!
@Solitude (Hyoton): Denied. I'm sorry to keep denying you, but I'm still seeing things that indicate me you don't full understand the bloodline. A couple of times, you referenced the fact that the ice around would help you use more jutsu, but the very basis of the Hyoton Bloodline is that preexisting ice IS NOT NEEDED. You form it on your own from the air, spontaneously, and at will by using the hand seals. Sure, preexisting ice CAN be used, but it's not needed as I believe you have been referencing.
@Orchid (Aburame): You Are Approved! ...HOWEVER, one thing I noted was that you used the Bug Gathering jutsu to bring bugs to you in order that you might have extra bugs. This jutsu DOES NOT work this way. You can't jsut use any bugs as part of your jutsu... they HAVE to be the kikai bugs that reside and grow inside you. therefore, there is no short terms way for you to gain more Kikai to use for your jutsu. The only reason I'm not denying you because of this though, is because you showed the proper way to use the hugs in all other instances.
@Tsubaka (Ink Artistry): Denied. However, I'm sure you'll get it on the next try. Some problems: You never made referencing to drawing the umbrella... and all of the visual effects of the jutsu, even how they are destroyed could use more detail description. Slso, what's up with this line? --> "
Ichigo got closed and tried a new technique, "Sumi Gasumi no Jutsu," the area started to unsheathe his sword."
...please try make sure your descriptions of what jutsu do and why your character is doing things is present, because due to lack of description, I have no idea what is going on in that sentence.
@FEAR (Crystal): Denied. My only problem with this is that it doesn't make much sense in terms of the fact that you haven't been to the Academy yet, but are using all of these Crystal jutsu. Same goes for the Arrow of Light... I don't believe a Genin would be able to use it. I think it requires a much higher mastery of the bloodline, with the ability to control more crystal then you would currently be able to. Some of the jutsu could use a better physical description as well, in terms of what it looks like as it's created, moreso then just focusing on what it does.
@Master Pain (Anigan): Denied. I need to see more than just one instance of how the Anigan is used. It could also use more description in how you are taking on the characteristics AND some of the physical traits as well. it would also be good if you could show part of the bloodline's weakness to raiton as well.
I did the Jutsu with the guide lines of the Bloodline skills on here. It didn't have a Rank requirement for the Arrow of Light, that's why I felt it was possible. Also, idk how I could learn them in the Academy if I don't already have the bloodline. I'm sry I don't mean to be rude sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:01 am
Rpc Name:Hecmot
Village:Sand
Bloodline Clan applied for:Hyuga Clan(Byakugan)
What you know about this clan: I know that there fighting style Gentle fist was made to repersent the push and pull motions of Tai chi. The hyuga clan's generation resemble a dynastys family tree. The byakugan's blind spot is directly in the middle of the back of there head.The 8 triagrams repersent how far or how close someone is within there reach.The hyuga's rarley rare Flak jackets because they restrict there agile movments.The hyuga clan was the strongest clan in konaha until the uchiha clan was formed.
Rp Sample:
Hecmot wiped the sweat from his brow as he wanderd through a seemingly endless forest in search of latest assignment.After letting out a slow gasp Hecmot whisperd "Byakugan" and was barley able to react to the three kunai knifes flying from his left.
With a flawless side step to his right he spun and threw a kunai knife in the direction of the attackers and smiled with satisfaction as he heard the thud of his kunai peircing the skull of one of his attackers.
Three rogue ninjas stepped from the bushes wearing light robes all in battle position.Hecmot instantly activated his byakugan to annalyze his opponents. One of his oppents(Who he guessed was the leader) Had an medium amount of chakra flowing through his body which led him to the assumption the he must be atleat jounin ranked.The other two had chakra of an amature level meaning that they might be atleast chunin or genin ranked."Enough of this" screamed one of the smaller foes as he charged towards hecmot kunai in hand. Hecmot smiled and slowly fell into his gentle fist stance and swept the heel of his foot at his attackers heel and pushing gently on his chest sending his foes momentum back, he then slid his hand up to his attackers chin slamming it into the ground and smiled as he felt his skull crack against the ground.
The jounin ranked ninja smiled from the skill of hecmot and instantly fired 3 missle sized fireballs from his mouth towards Hecmot. Not having enough time to stand back up hecmot spun and yelled "Rotation" and the momentum from the spin flung the dead genins body through a tree. The other genin charged guard up as hecmots jutsu began to end. With out a seconds hesitaion hecmot through a smoke bomb towards the ground and the mist engulfed the battlefield. The panicked Genin yelled to his partner "Where is he" as the smoke began to slowly ingulf him. Without another seconds hesiation Hecmot quickly closed the distance between him and the remaining Genin and quickly fell into 8 triagram 64 palm stance. The genin looked down but wasnt quick enough with his retaliation as Hecmot began battering on his opponent with a flurry of pokes jabbing and crippling his opponents chakra flow and at the sime time cracking his ribs.
As the smoke cleared the Jounin stood there shocked at his team mates crippled body underneaths Hecmots feet. The Jounin Charged at Hecmot with speed that he wasnt even able to keep up with jabbing his elbow into hecmots ribs knocking the wind from his lungs.Flying back from the sudden assault hecmot quickly reached into his Shuriken/Bomb pouch. The Jounin charged again and unleashed a flurry of blows upon Hecmot that he struggled to evade and weave around.The Jounin through a heavy let that hecmot ducked under and tapped the Jounins under arm with his palm.The Jounin through a sudden knee at Hecmots skull that Hecmot weaved to the right and tapped the Jounins calf.The Jounin then through a heavy right that Hecmot weaved to the right and tapped the jounins shoulder,but this time the jounin came down with a heavy headbutt uptop Hecmots skull right as hecmot tapped the jounins chest.Hecmot leaped back from the blow and hurled a kunai at the Jounin that he deflected with a kunai of his own sparkig it and sending it flying into the closest tree.
Hecmot smiled at the Jounin and pointed and everyplace he tapped on the Jounin uncovering paperbombs that the spark from the kunai had lit. The Jounin let out a horrific scream as the combined explosion ripped him to shreds and sent peices of him flying into the sky."Now back to my mission" Grumbled Hecmot as he turned around and continued his treck through the forest.
(Lol hope you like.....i applogize for the lenght....lol just really got into it........even if it's not approved can you notify me of the changes that could be made so that i can fix them. 3nodding )
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 1:26 am
The Only Sosay Uchiha
@Shadow: Much better RP sample but for your knowledge on the bloodline remember that when your and an academy student or genin you can only make small things with the paper.
Other then that, your approved.
@Cupcake: Denied. You need to put more for your knowledge on this bloodline and make your rp sample a little longer please. Yeah, but just making small things and what not didn't seem as exciting as doing what I did lol, but thanks again ^^
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 4:16 am
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:18 am
@Cupcake: Denied. Your RP sample was hard to follow. It was hard to figure out who was talking when and where. Plus your rp sample didn't really have a lot to do with the Clan your applying for.
@Hark:
@Elijh4: Denied. Your knowledge of the clan is well known but you could add some of that into your rp sample. It doesn't really show you know what your doing.
@Cain:
@Razor: Denied. Your RP sample was well done but please add more to your knowledge of the bloodline.
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:32 am
How can you not tell who's talking? and my clan is the usio, they react without thinking and have excellent chakra control. I put that into the rp perfectly?
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:35 am
Cupcake-Cakecup How can you not tell who's talking? and my clan is the usio, they react without thinking and have excellent chakra control. I put that into the rp perfectly?
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:38 am
The Only Sosay Uchiha Cupcake-Cakecup How can you not tell who's talking? and my clan is the usio, they react without thinking and have excellent chakra control. I put that into the rp perfectly? Well I told how I cn control my chakra by letting the shinobi feel a bit of it. Then I let all of it out. But i'll revise it so people can understand more thouroghly
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:49 am
The Only Sosay Uchiha Cupcake-Cakecup How can you not tell who's talking? and my clan is the usio, they react without thinking and have excellent chakra control. I put that into the rp perfectly? Ok I edited it, hope its better..
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Posted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:20 am
VanillaBear 166 Rpc Name: Konaga Kirama
Village: Cloud
Rank: Genin
Bloodline or Clan applied for: Konaga Clan
What you know about the clan/bl: The People in the Konaga Clan are born with Unlimited reserves of chakra and the natural ability to perfectly manipulate it. This blessing however isnt without a curse of its own,Every second of everyday their bodies are racked with immense amounts of never ceasing pain. They have the ability to augment their body parts to increase their speed,stength ect. but that to is not without a cost. Doing so will cause a searing pain in the area of the augmented part called"The Burn" and if the person contines to augment that limb it will become useless from the burn. Konaga memebers also have to meditate to rest and heal the limbs from the augmentation which can at least to six hours.
Rp Sample:
Kirama walked down to abandoned streets of the west sector of the cloud and surveyed the damage Those Damn Iwa Ninjas! They blew the place right to friken kingdom come! And abducted half of out Civilians! Death is better then an Iwa slave camp! Four days prior,whilst Kirama was on a scouting mission, a large party of Iwakagure Ninjas had slipped past Kumo's defences and demolished the west sector before taking many civilians prisoner and disappearing...well not before Kumo forces killed off half their numbers before they could reach the damned gates. His footsteps echo's loudly as he continued down the empty streets,his only compantion being his shadow,the birds circling high overhead and the pain that was always with him. He was a Konaga and was proud of it, but that also meant he was cursed with eternal pain. The Konaga's were spread out and he had known of only one other clan's men in his village. Kirama rounded a turn to head towards the Raikage'ss office as his memories drifted back to that senile old man. He had been a kind mand despite having the same effects on him as Kirama did. He taught him how to use their clans abilities up to his rank which turned out to be two recorded clan jutsu but also how to augment his muscles for srength and speed and how to meditate,the only way their people could sleep with the nuisence keeping them up. He had eventually given in to his old age however and now rested peacefully away from all this pain and war...and Kirama envied him. He finally came to the gates off the building and proceded up,the gaurds knew him and often referred to him having a "Death Wish" for he constantly accepted many difficult missions and as many of those as he could. He walked up to the front desk and looked down on the secratary"Assignments for Konaga Kirama,please" The Secratery looked up and smiled before shifting through some papers and pulling out a small scroll. Kirama accepted the scroll with a smiled and exited the building. Kirama walked until he had found a seculded place behind and oak tree and opened the scroll and read its contents Hmmm an Iwa Supply Caravan eh? Shouldnt be too awfully hard although it should be lightly gaurded as it is passing straight through the land of fire from the Sunakagure into the Land of Stone Kirama rolled the scroll up with a frown,taking out a more thne likely lightly gaurded caravan,not exactly what he was hoping but then again any shot at the Shinobi from Iwakagure was a good thing
After a an hours preperation and a meditation session Kirama finally arrived at the gates and although he need not leave for anouther Twelve Hours he felt that it was time to get on his way. He looked over and nodded at the gaurd nearby who gave the order for the gates to be opened. Kirama merely marveled as the lumbering peices of steel as they swung open for his exit. He nodded his thanks to the gaurd as he walked out of the gates. He kept walking down the dirt path that led down from the mountain that the Village was stationed on, it was going to be a long journey so he might as well start off at a good pace. It would take him three days to arrive at his destonation. That figure would include 7 hours per day for mediatation or control his pain and for rest. And so it came to pass that three days later he arrived at the rondevouz point for the ambush. He set up in a comfortable yet very well seculded spot in the brush of a tree. He sat there for hours until the faint sound of wook rolling across stone and dirt was heard. He smiled wickedly at the thought of finally having some action. Kirama clasped his hands together has he funneled some chakra into his eyes,using one of their clan jutsu called 'Chakra Sight' Hmmmm,I think its two...No wait Three Shinobi....one in the front and...two on either side of a perticular enclosed cart Kirama then closed off his vision as it flickered back to his normal sight Ok time to get started...
Kirama waited until the lead cart was in front of him to make his move. He would dispose of the lead gaurd first at then take out the other two afterwords. Kirama took a deep breath and then lept from his cover. He crossed the distance between him and the lead cart in seconds before jumping into the air and knocking the gaurd off the cart via a spinning roundhouse kick to the jaw. He had been driving the Oxen which pulled the connected carts and without their master to tell them where to go they came to a rather sudden stop. The lead gaurd started to slowly,yes very slowly arise but not before Kirama lept to him and delivered a strong punch to his gut which sent him doubled over. It was then that Kirama caught a glimps of his eyes,they held fear and sorrow yet something was also fimiliar about them. He shrugged it off as he turned his attention down the road to the second and third gaurds who were slowly making their way up to the front of the caravan,likely to ask their counterpart why the cart had stopped moving. It was then he noticed they all wore masks over their mouths but once again wrote it off as a minor detail. Kirama pupped some of his Konaga Chakra into his legs,augmenting them for high speed. He then took off in a dash,covering the ground between himself and the second and third gaurd in seconds. The second gaurd seemed to panic and throw a hastily prepared punch to which Kirama parried. He then grabed the arm with which he threw the punch and brought his other elbow down upon it, making a sinister crunch of bones breaking. He then ducked down and kicked the man straight in the chest,sending him through one of his own carts and leaving him in a horrible condition of one broken arm,three crakced ribs and a bruised ego. The most peculiar thing happened with the third gaurd,he tried to run away. Kirama however still had his Augmented legs and quickly chased him down. Kirama ran slightly ahead of him then quickly planted his foot in the ground and pushed off,using them momentum to jump at an angle and bring his knee slying into the chest of the last gaurd whom sent sailing after the blow,landing directly in front of the cart he and the third gaurd had been gaurding. Kirama relaxed as the last gaurd was taken care of but then tensed again as he felt the burn slowly creeping upon him due to the augmentation he had preformed on his legs and eyes. He gritted his teeth and emptied his mind,a technique for slightly supressing it but to no avail,as he was still a youngling and had yet to master the greater aspects of his clan. He merely clenched his fists to bare it and proceded to slowly walk over to the cart that was singled out to be gaurded,the only enclosed one on the caravan. He slid the door's open to find it empty and was shocked Why would they gaurd it? It was then something landed on his foot,the third gaurds mask had been knocked off. Kirama reached down and picked it up and looked over to the gaurd whom he had most recently dispatched....and a look of total horror came over his face. The gaurd had one of Kumokagures customary tatoo's on his left cheek,and whats more also had tape wrapped around his mouth and head. It was then Kirama understood why the second gaurd had thrown sloppy punchs,why the first gaurd had fear in his eyes and why the third tried to run,They were the civilians abducted from Kumokagure in the last attack. He then turned his gaze back to the empty cart and relized it was not empty at all. There was wire strectched from one end to the other...it was lined with paper bombs Its a Tra...! was all he had time to think before his world was rocked,and he felt a searing heat before being knocked unconcious,maybe dead,who knew?
Wha...what...happened....Am I...dead....No...Im in a room...I gotta...move Kirama thought as he finally returned to conciousness. His visions was blurry at best and his head was swimming. He looked around groggily and figured out with his limited brainpower at the moment that he was in a room of some sort,strapped to a...chair.Look Von,He's awake!" The voices sounded like they were a thousand miles away to Kirama and he had barely enough sence of being to turn his head to where the noise came from and finally relized there was someone in the room with him. A door slid open and a second man entered"Finally,I was getting tired of their little brat sleeping our time away!Nick pour me a cup of water wil you?" The one called Nick nodded and pour some water from a pitcher on a table nearby into a cup next to it and handed it to the one called Von. Von took the cup and walked over to Kirama,standing in front of him. Von took a sip of it and then usddenly threw the reminents of the cup in Kirama face. It seemed to wake hm out of his daze,revitalize him to life and for the first time since he became aware again he started to take mental notes of the things going on. He was strapped to a chair in the middle of the room with two men watching him. Von as he was called was Small,Less then five foot eight but was very well muscled and Kirama did not doubt that he had some sort of formal Shinobi training. Nick on the other hand was large and fat. He was undoubtably strong but it was more from his pure size then muscle like Von. Nick yawned loudly"That was some sort of explosion Vom,the Iwakage will be very proud of you,you prbobly will get a promotion Haha its been three days and this kid just finally wakes up,you really outdid yourself this time!" Von grinned and looked back to Kirama"But it was he who disposed of the 'Iwa Gaurds' and pretty swiftly too eh? He would have been a trouble if we had to fight him then and there" At that moment Kirama noticed the Iwakagure headbands they both wore and it was also then Kirama found the strength to speak"You...Monsters...where are they...civilians" Von straightened himself and clapped his hands together with a grin"Oh hoho He speaks! Dont worry the civilans are safe,they are here actually,well...the ones you didnt kill to be exact. But thats not why YOUR still alive,YOU are here to tell us everything you know about the military going ons of Kumokagure" Kirama composed himself,this was an interogation,he would need to be strong or else...they would get what they wanted but until he was dead or his mind was in peices he would resist"I wont tell...you anything" Von's seemingly eternal smiled vaporized with those words into a dark scowl. He turned to his partner and gave him a signal to which the lumbering Nick took a few steps towards them and brought his hand across his chest and then back again across the side of Kirama's head. Kirama was kocked to the ground,chair and all,before being shortly arighted by Nick,most likely to be hit again"You will talk...or we will start killing off your precious innocent civilians...you have two hours...if you dont talk before then we will kill an innocent every five minutes until you do" Von said rather coldly. He then nodded to Nick and in unison they turned and left the room
It had to have been at least an hour and a half before Kirama finally returned to normal once again,it was due to the higher endurance the Konaga Clan gave him that he could keep going despite all that had happened since the Caravan. First things first, he had to escape from this room. Kirama concentrated chakra in his hand,which was behind his back bound by chais to the chair, and formed a Chakra Dagger. He shifted it downwards and the blade cut through the steel chains like a knife through butter. He then proceded to unbind the rest of himself from the chair and make his way over to the door. He slid it open and peaked out Empty good,I gotta find those civilians and get them out as well He proceded down the hallways,looking everywhere for those civilans. Once a gaurd came around the corner and Kirama had to augment his Arm for strength in order to knock him out with one shot,which he did. He put th body in a broom closet before continuing his search and letting the burn take its toll on him. Eventually he rounded yet anouther corner and came to the cell block and finally found all the people. They were scared and he had to show them His Kumokagure Headband from them even to look at him. He then proceded to use his still augmented arm to rip their jail cells of their hinges and liberate them from their confinment. He then looked around for an escape root and saw it,a window,it was barred but it was large enough for them to all get out. Kirama then walekd over and bent the bars"Go now! Head East to The Land of Lightning! Go Now!" He only raised his voice because in the distance he heard heavy footsteps and he could only guess it was the one called nick. And sure enough the big man came lumbering around the corner"Hey,Stop making all that damned noise!" His face froze in confusion for a second when he saw Kirama standin their and the last prisoner escape out the window before he charged with his hands raised high,bringing his fists down on top of Kirama whom dodged at the least second and threw a punch at his gut. The punch merely sank into his massive belly as Nick Laughed"Hehe That tickled" he said before backhanding Kirama into a wall. Kirama pulled himself out of a crater he had formed just in time to see Nick charged him and it was then Kirama had an idea. He augmented his legs once again as well as his arm. He lept up at an angle at the ceiling. The then kicked off the ceiling,coming straight down at Nick. He used the force from the jump and his augmented strength and brought his knee into contact with Nicks forehead. Kirama then kicked off his torso and landed a few feet away. Nick swayed back and forth,and for a second Kirama thought he would be okey but then his eyes rolled back in his head and he fell over on his back. Kirama then breathed a sigh of releif before The Burn consumed him,it was worse then ha had ever experianced before. He barely had enough strength to crawl out the window and walk away before the Sirens in the Iwa compound blared They are coming after us...we gotta move Kirama's arm was limp and The Burn was agonizing. He even started to feel a Fit coming on if he continued to use his power No,I will not goin into a Fit...I wont let it happen! Not Now!! Kirama's will power was the only thing that kept him going as he walked to catch up with the civilians and make his way back to their home and haven,Kumokagure
I'm sorry, but you have been denied. The reason being that your mis-use of the bloodline abilities in the rp (despite not having approval for the bloodline in the first place), and the lack of one of the key elements of your bloodline (pain) in your posting not being present. And so I am sorry but you are not a member of the Konaga Clan.
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