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Something kind of like this, only a bit less dramatic?

I'm not very good with real responces that are well thought out (just ask my english teacher! Though, you can't... x.x;; ) so, I'll just give you what I was thinking/feeling through the story.

Chapter 1 - As soon as I heard the part about the swords not being something that she carried with her, I felt it was Moryera. I don't know if you meant to make it so we could sence would it was or not, but if you did, awesome job. When I saw the words soft voice, I thought of Weston/Westonian. I guess Mory's art rubbed the pair into my head or something. I love the way you weave what is going on. Like you just walked into the middle of the story, skipping the normally boring background stuff that is needed into action/suspesence while sprinkling the information we need so that the story makes sence. Awesome. heart

Chapter 2 - Whee! A band of different people trying to find a Princess! Sounds like an adventure/love story to me! xd For some reason, when I saw dagger with Rue, I thought theif/assisission. I guess my friend exposed me to too much RO. The way you discribed the apple skin made me hungry for some apples with honey. It sounds like something new and fun to try! The shivers went down my spine when I heard what Rue hinted at for those that cross her. I wonder what the Rank Heresy was... I guess it will be an important part of the story if not at least the character later on.

Chapter 3 - Wow, so the group doesn't take missions based on a certain honor code, they just do it for monies? That works. I hope we'll get to find out the other rituals that the fallen holy man did. That would be a great way to show more detail in this world. Hee hee! A bet! How cute! That adds flavor to the story. Shadow-walker? This sounds imporant. That moment longer seems to hint that Arcadian is going to hit on Moryera later on. I bet Weston would get a bit steamed over that! whee I love the line about a shirt made out of metal. It is like the story is being told to you by the memory of someone. Seeing coffee there makes the place seem a bit closer to home. WHOA! That arrow thing freaked me out! At first I thought they killed someone in the party, or worse, the princess! Wheeee! Kyraa is here! I love how her tribe has a different type of gender roles then most people would think of these days. heart

Chapter 4 - It is amazing how the priest could pray and keep them pretty healthy. It is also neat to see that they are foot travelers. Yay! Alliance is in! I love seeing the names I know... xD;; HOMG! And Blue! heart So, Alliance is a man in this story, that is interesting and makes sence. I love the hard time the two give each other. It is cute and made me giggle a bit. I love Blue's line! Did you lift it from 'The Princess Bride'? I wonder what is going through the minds of each as they walk towards Highguard. Kyraa has a interesting mind set. Hunt or be hunted. Wanting something that would challange her skills. I just hope she doesn't get more then she can handle from this desire!

Chapter 5 - Protect and Rob? That is an interesting assignment... I wonder who put them up to it! Hee hee, the poor sheriff is flirting with a man... whee The Mayor's wife sounds like a fun person to hang out with though. I hope she doesn't get brutally killed. Wait, are they protecting and robbing two people or one? Or are they different jobs? Oh the confusion in my brain at 2 am! I wonder what color Grayed's glove was. HOMG. Grayed Eath = Graye Death! The scariness of it all! All in all, that was a brillent move! Isn't irony a complex thought? Maybe Kyraa's tribe had a higher level of education then I thought at first. Dragonbone!? Awesome! Odd creatures have a place in this story! Danti is a sneaky one! ninja

Chapter 6 - Poor group. I hope no one had their heart set on going to town. sad Oooh.... informants.... this is sneaky sounding. I wonder what is so important about those papers and where they landed. Wow, Blue sounds like he needs to prove something. Arcadian sleeps at morning? In chain mail? Tough guy... o_o; I wonder who has the third set of eyes.... Maybe Grayed? Eeeeppp! The tribe girls tricked him! Smexy! I wonder if we learn more of the gods (or whatever they were) that Ananel was invoking to do magic. It is good to know that magic can drain the user in this world.

Chapter 7 - I love the start of this chapter. It just seems so simply put. Wow, I wonder why I cannot figure out who is talking to her at first. I know it isn't Weston or Rue or Mory, but that is all I know. I'm guessing it is Blue. Welp, I was wrong! Rue can sure make an enterince! heart And an EXIT! eek Seems like Grayed is setting up the Tribals against the Group.

Chapter 8 - POOR KYRAA! T_______T Ooohhh.... Seems like they are talking about Rue's past lover at this point... I'm guessing you. *shivers* Scariness! Oh my! It was Grayed! And she is working for someone! Long red ponytailed man? Alliance! heart Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Grayed and Weston were a couple in this story before? How cute! heart

Chapter 9 - Hee hee, snappy come back for the 'can't blame a girl for trying'! Danti's and Kyraa's side of the story is so sad! It makes me want to cuddle the both of them up! u.u; Yay! Moryera is back in the focus! Ouch, what a terrible way to start the day. HOSNAP! Rellies in the picture! This is such an awesome plot twist! Looks like Grayed lost a lot of loved ones to Rue. Makes me pity her a bit. Alliance and Blue make a good couple. I'm sure you'll keep the yaoi out.

I love the story so far, but it is 3 am and Icy needs sleeeeeeeeep! xD <3 I'll read the rest later! 3nodding

Chapter Thirty-Six is up for everyone to read.

surprised heart

NecroGendou makes me giggle. So snarky.

*twitching and dancing*

YAY blood!

... gonk Tongue...

When I have more consciousness, I shall reply with more coherence. 3nodding heart

Happy Anniversary. heart

It doesn''t have to. Anything with enough velocity to penetrate bone fully will have enough force to render brain tissue to pulp.


Ooh, not bad. That''s actually a damned good reference picture for what happened to NecromancerLich Gendou. And it''''s all your fault for killing him.

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