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 Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 1:52 pm
rofl I love that. There were only four battles that I decided the way it was going to end.
Both of Fish's. (Hence the reason the story is advancing)
My 2nd Fight
And Zne's First Fight.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:33 am
Nice work! Now put Chapter 28 up I finished editing it already.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 11:59 am
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:18 pm
I thought it was a decent chapter. I'm eager to find out what happens next.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:24 pm
Decent is at least better than bad.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:44 pm
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Draken [The.Spork.Ninja.]
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 12:47 pm
My characters is the total opposite of me in real life lol , I'm total anti-social, and I hate phones. emo
Good chapter BTW
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 3:51 pm
@Draken - Thanks
@Skull - Sorrry, that is just how I saw it working out.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 7:40 pm
-dramatic pose-
I'm so going to kill someone on this mission.
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 8:38 pm
I wondered if Meta Knight might not have been my sensei/master. I really liked the part with the lovey and all that, it was quite comical. I bet we find out about.. Sonia in the next chapter. Snaps. Keep up the good work.
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 4:30 am
@Betman - ninja
@Fish - Thanks! You'll have to see for yourself next chaper. I am already well into it.
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 5:59 am
I loved the chapter, I loved the comic bits XD
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 10:35 am
Thanks!
Just curious, what do you all think of how I have the first three posts designed?
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:25 pm
You have lost so many readers! rofl
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Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 8:21 pm
Great chapters. I can't wait to see what I do next chapter.
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