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kouri-chan_xx Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 4:56 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 6:52 am
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Posted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 11:13 am
kouri-chan_xx Oblivion Zero Project ((I hope i can get the hang of this whole guild soon, there's so much to remember...)) RP Sample Obi looked down on the dying man that laid before his eyes. It seemed like only minutes ago he was in a fierce battle with this cloaked man, this man who seemed so bent on killing Obi. He felt a trickle on blood flowing down his left arm, followed by a searing pain. He barely noticed the kunai stuck in shoulder. He winced briefly before hearing the stranger mumble "You have become stronger"...and then silence. Dead silence. Obi recognized the voice immediatly, closed his eyes as though this only a nightmare, that he would wake up to another beautiful day any second now. He opened his eyes, and he was still awake. Obi Bent over and unmasked the stranger. He lost all breath in his body. It was his father. [Don't worry, it all comes to you in time ^_^] O: SEEMS LIKE STAR WARS MOMENT... ALMOST. Pass. woo hoo!!
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 10:32 am
kouri-chan_xx Emily Marneth Hitomi was crouched in the branches of some old tree... She began to wonder if they would ever show up... She adjusted her straight, blood-red hair to hang over her right eye... The last thing that anyone needed to know was that.... She sat patiently, watching... waiting... and, finally, they began to approach... Walking along the decrepit road, her Targets... there she was... The only girl that Hitomi'd ever met that truly interested her... Hitomi pressed herself against the rough bark of the tree trunk... watching her with her boyfriend... Hitomi was going to follow them all day if she had to, to find out what was so special about this boy... Just when the couple drew even with the tree, she looked over towards Hitomi, who had been sure she hadn't given any signs of her presence...
"Hello, Hitomi-san..."
I suppose Hitomi still had work to do... Pass! I love it, sounds interesting. The plot I mean :3
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:36 am
Well see I had already graduated, but go bannned on accident. So do you want me to do it again?
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 12:04 pm
So.. I hope I get this right. -__-'' I don't have a village yet.
Kinako walked along the halls of the ninja academy, holding a scroll in her hands. It was a simple scroll, really. It read: Mame Kinako, You have been accepted in to the Ninja academy. Your room is 107. The academy will start at 8:45 AM and end at 3:00 PM. Please bring your basic weapons like Kunais and shurikens.
It was now 9:00 AM, and Kinako couldn't find her classroom.
"103... 105... ah, 107!" She opened the wooden doors to the classroom, the door making a creaking noise. Class had already started, and there she was, interrupting their class.
"Ah.. sumimasen, I'm sorry for interrupting the class, but I'm new at the academy. The scroll that they gave me says that this is my class."
She bowed down respectfully [and nervously] and looked up at the woman who was probably teaching this class. The woman looked annoyed. Today might not be such a wonderful day after all.
"Sumimasen.."
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:49 pm
Tyranitar45 Well see I had already graduated, but go bannned on accident. So do you want me to do it again? Yes.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:50 pm
Rabbits Galore So.. I hope I get this right. -__-'' I don't have a village yet.
Kinako walked along the halls of the ninja academy, holding a scroll in her hands. It was a simple scroll, really. It read: Mame Kinako, You have been accepted in to the Ninja academy. Your room is 107. The academy will start at 8:45 AM and end at 3:00 PM. Please bring your basic weapons like Kunais and shurikens.
It was now 9:00 AM, and Kinako couldn't find her classroom.
"103... 105... ah, 107!" She opened the wooden doors to the classroom, the door making a creaking noise. Class had already started, and there she was, interrupting their class.
"Ah.. sumimasen, I'm sorry for interrupting the class, but I'm new at the academy. The scroll that they gave me says that this is my class."
She bowed down respectfully [and nervously] and looked up at the woman who was probably teaching this class. The woman looked annoyed. Today might not be such a wonderful day after all.
"Sumimasen.." Pass.
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 6:55 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:04 pm
Uindo was walking home from the academy when his brother came up to him.
"Hi brother," Uindo said.
"hello,"he said,"I got something to tell you."
"What is it?"
"Well, the hokage wanted me to go to the Village hidden in the Grass."
"So what is going to happen to me?"
"Well I told him I couldn't go because I had to take care of you."
"Oh."
"So he said that the best way to go there and investigate was to live there, so we are moving there."
"Thats great, when do we leave?"
"Today!" So after they talked it over Uindo wen to his room and started to pack. He went into his closet and grabbed a bag. He started to put everything into it. He even tried putting his bed in there.
"We arn't taking are house Uindo,"his brother said.
"I know, but I was just wanting to take everything," he said.
"Well we are going to have to get some other stuff later and leave other things too."
"ok." After they had managed to get their packs together, they headed off. They only problem was, that they needed a map.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON'T HAVe a MAP!"Uindo said.
"Sorry, but I kinda got excited and forgot," his brother said. "I'll go back and get one."
"ok." So after his brother got the map, they left.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 12:58 pm
Tyranitar45 Uindo was walking home from the academy when his brother came up to him. "Hi brother," Uindo said. "hello,"he said,"I got something to tell you." "What is it?" "Well, the hokage wanted me to go to the Village hidden in the Grass." "So what is going to happen to me?" "Well I told him I couldn't go because I had to take care of you." "Oh." "So he said that the best way to go there and investigate was to live there, so we are moving there." "Thats great, when do we leave?" "Today!" So after they talked it over Uindo wen to his room and started to pack. He went into his closet and grabbed a bag. He started to put everything into it. He even tried putting his bed in there. "We arn't taking are house Uindo,"his brother said. "I know, but I was just wanting to take everything," he said. "Well we are going to have to get some other stuff later and leave other things too." "ok." After they had managed to get their packs together, they headed off. They only problem was, that they needed a map. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DON'T HAVe a MAP!"Uindo said. "Sorry, but I kinda got excited and forgot," his brother said. "I'll go back and get one." "ok." So after his brother got the map, they left. a bit too much dialogue, and because you separated EVERYTHING, its just as hard to red as when you make it one piece of text. give more description
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Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:18 pm
My character is Tankado Seija, from Kirigakure.
RP Sample:
"N-no! Please, I've got family!" Shouted the villager, as he was being held up at the neck. His voice was not heard out behind the deserted alley from which he was. "I-I can give you money! POWER!! ANYTH--" He choked, only to be left breathless as he fell to the empty grounds before the tall shadow.
A gleam came from the eyes of the woman standing over the corpse. She raised her hand up and flipped her hair over her shoulder. "See Yuki? I didn't need your help this time..." She chuckled as the Ice Phoenix that roosted on her broad sholders almost give a smile.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 3:33 pm
K I was just informed by my Kage that my RPing was horrible and now I'm sad here's my sample:
Muramasa headed away from the academy with a black cloud over his head. "Stupid Kage," He thought, "One day he'll be begging me to be a chuunin" Muramasa turned from the main road and walked a little ways through the grassy fields that surround the village. Sitting down under a great oak tree Muramasa closed his eyes and felt his anger sneak away. "whatever," he thought, "I could care less about the Kage" Muramasa enjoyed the shade of the oak tree and stared at the passing clouds.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:20 pm
Trying adding a bit more description, along with using more variations of names to call yourself. Such as 'he', 'the student', etc etc.
Also, for now, don't mention the Raikens. The clan wasn't approved by the captain of the guild, so...their abilities pretty much don't exist here. Yet.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:25 pm
....Sukotto had a bird's eye view of a vast wheat field. For miles and miles, nearly nothing except the tan ocean could be seen. However, two objects stood about twenty meters apart, dwarfed by the immense plantation.
As the entities came into focus, Sukotto realized that they appeared to be nearly perfect clones of himself. The only difference between them stood out more than the two men among the wheat. Their eyes.... The man to his left had bright blue eyes that reflected the sun quite radiantly. In contrast, the one to his right had a pair of dark, green eyes. The peculiar thing about this man's eyes is that, however dark, they were just as apparent as the other man's eyes.
Without so much as a word, the two men engaged in close and quick combat. The man with green eyes was far more powerful and aggressive, yet the man with blue eyes was calmer and more controlled. After a few moments of their kunai clanging together, their battle ceased, their fighting styles were far too equal for a winner to determined by melee fighting alone.
Simultaneously, the two men bit their thumbs, painted a red symbol on one of their palms, and began to expertly preform the same hand seal. Finishing at the same time, the two thrust their open hands into the air, calling forth mirrored summoning jutsus.
The air above the wispy field flashed in a brilliant display of blue and green, fading only to reveal two gigantic hawks that matched the color scheme of each man's eyes.
After each man mounted his own hawk, the two knew that the whole conflict was about to come to its end. The two birds of prey charged each other, closing ground quite fast for their size.
As the beaks of the two birds were only inches apart, Sukotto heard an obnoxious voice echo through his head, "Sukotto!" Then darkness....
Opening his eyes to the academy classroom, Sukotto mumbled, "Wha....?" His sensei glared at him with much frustration. "I asked you, what is the most important thing to remember about summoning jutsus?"
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