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 Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2011 10:43 pm
Character: Zero
Technique Name: Genmu Zero
Rank: C
Type: Bukijutsu Complex
Element:N/A
Description: Zero leaps up and pivots himself before launching a huge, supersonic energy wave from his saber This chakra will do a decent amount of kinetic damage at genin and will gain more and more cutting power as the nin himself goes up in level thus gaining more chakra control.
((Short vid description: Genmu zero.
Character: Zero
Technique Name: Rekkouha (Rending Light Supremacy)
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:Zero Punches the ground with his sabre in hand, bringing down a salvo of rainbow-colored pillars of energy onto the opponent made entirely out of raiton chakra. Delivers moderate shock to the target.
Character: Zero
Technique Name: Sougenmu (Twin Phantasms)
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Null
Description:Creates a shadow copy of himself that mimics his actions and doubles his hits from attacks. Different from a shadow clone in that it must mimic the action of the user and stands in the shadow of said user at all times. Form is a grey version of the user.
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Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2011 12:50 pm
(((At first I posted in the wrong area redface OOPs..... how embarassing crying )))
Character: Manfread (Hyuuga) Bogojlanskist
Technique Name: Herculean Lifestyle
Rank: E (it comes naturally, if you knew Manfread you wound understand xd )
Type: Passive, Taijutsu
Element: none
Description: (What it does)
After countless visits of the hospital the nurses began to notice, Manfread could with stand extreme amounts of punishment and carry on as if nothing had happened. He has with stood explosions, deep gashes, broken bones and numerous other horrendous wounds and has still continued to fight. Rumours began to spread about his unnatural resilience and that anything short decapitation would not kill him. Although no one knows whether this it true or not, since no one has tried...
Over the course of his life, Manfread has suffered thousands of near fatal injuries and some how been able survived. By some freak act of nature, (or possibly the blessing of a happy god of war) Manfread is now able to withstand blows that would normally be considered fatal and carry on fighting as if 'nothing' had happened. His muscles, bones and organs can take multiple heavy blows and still work nicely. Shrugging off large explosions, demonic attacks, impacts, cuts or flesh maiming wounds, even mass blood loss as if it were nothing serious continuing to fight at his full capacity. However his won't help decapitation or the loss of a limb.
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Posted: Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:58 pm
Manfread: Denied.
Rinaku: Sougenmu is approved. The following suggestions have been made for the other two:Quote:
[ Genmu Zero: ]
Rank: E
Zero leaps up and pivots himself before launching a vertical wave of concentrated chakra from his sabre. At its bare minimum, the wave stretches to half the user's height, travels three {3} yards before dissipating, and is only capable of cutting into Earth. However, depending on the amount chakra focused into the weapon, the wave's size, distance, and strength can all be modified. The user simply feeds additional chakra to their blade, effectively increasing the technique's rank by one {1} in proper order ( D/C/B/A/S ). For each additional rank of chakra spent, the wave stretches two {2} feet taller, travels two {2} yards more, and possesses cutting power equivalent to that rank. ( If the user cannot learn techniques of a certain rank because of their level, they cannot increase Genmu Zero's power to that level either. For example, genin cannot make this an A rank technique, as they cannot learn A rank techniques. )
• Zero must train for two {2} posts per rank before being able to increase this technique's power to that rank. ( In order to use D rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, in order to use C rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, and etc. )
Rekkouha:
"Zero punches the ground, sabre in hand, causing a salvo of rainbow-colored lightning pillars to dance around him. Although it only forms a perimeter of roughly two feet, used at proper distance, this can be both a powerful offense and defense."
Dreadno: All three parts of your technique need to be separate techniques. Earthquake can be simple, but the other two need to be complex.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:00 am
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Crystal Quartz Mirror
Rank: passive with materials required present (B-rank training, can be retrained at S rank)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Garasu (Glass) Bloodline
Description: A Hari clan member Garasu Chakra user can create even stronger glass when they take the time to perfect their glass making abilities and use the natural silicate involved in their glasscrafting abilities and carefully allow carbon dioxide to flood into the forge of the speedily made glass.The molecular structure of this glass can be forged into crystal quartz glass. Which functions much like normal simple silicate glass but is much more hard due to the carbon involved in it's structure. The density grade stands on a scale of 1-10 to be seven, half a point higher than steel, which would be 6.5. (looked it up and the scale I'm using is the Moh's scale of hardness that the periodic table refers to). The only draw back is that the glass make is slightly slower and the glass made is heavier. Yet other wise the grade of the glass and the ability to make it shatter proof can create very powerful constructs that may not be easily broken by average means.
Blood Ruby Quartz A Hari clans member who seeks to go even further than glass that is even more versatile and deadly than crafting the normal harder than steel Quartz variant of their glass make can further their glass making skills with the use of blood. Drawing blood into the forge of the glass the crystal quartz retains a blood red hue and becomes capable of carry over chakra signature for a given period of time before shattering or until shattered. Normal Hari clan techniques become even stronger with the energy of different chakra natures running trough them. This Glasses length of use stands by the Chakra poured into it Via blood. For each turn of use 10 points chakra is depleted. [Though this level requires S-rank clearance ]
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Anthropomorphic (A.K.A Man=Beast)
Rank: C, A, S
Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu (Tamer)
Element: Maruton
Description: This technique focuses on Yuugao working along with her partners to open themselves mentally and physically with one another and trade chakra. By doing so Yuugao is capable of retaining some physical traits and added appendages from her partners that usually a normal human being wouldn't hold. On the opposite end her partners are capable of retaining more humanoid forms that allow them to use human made weapons and tools and with their natural animal skills layered over this they're capable of training in combat styles that their spliced human/animal form promotes. (In a word I can make Antro's out of my partners)
Yet theirs a limit to how much animal chakra Yuugao can splice into herself and at Genin rank she starts with at least one animal at a time, and with rank she earns the ability to accept one more (konin included) at any one moment. This Trading of Chakra also allows the partner involved to temporarily communicate with the humans other than the Tamer. Any boost of ability provided is slight in terms of what the Tamer gains. [Last for 5 turns]
Animism:The length of Chakra traded can go even further and the number of partners that can be retained is shot down by one. Yet this stronger bond mentally and physically improves. The two partners connection is made even stronger and their fighting skills around one another Communicate an understanding of the very spirit or nature of the opposing ends chakra. This connection even extends into natural chakra of their surroundings providing their surrounding to play into the evolution of their abilities to be a boost to their skills and provide the animal partner with a weapon manifested from chakra (if they retain one, this new weapon improves the one they have already to be slightly stronger than normal, and retains a single desired Chakra nature). The animal partner now looks almost fully human. Though now they're clothed and lightly armed in the armaments they'd need to learn how to use in the previous stage.[6 turns] [A-Rank]
True Familiar: A True familiar means the Tamer and partner are now fully in sync and the partner that completes this trade in Chakra with the Tamer shares their Chakra pool freely (meaning they can perform techniques taking in half from each other to perform it, not the total) with the Tamer. Not to mention their weapons and clothing shift into what spiritual mastery their weapons communicate of their skill (meaning the better they are at their style the better the weapons and armor. So being stage six makes the weapon equally deadly, nothing beyond the typical chakra based weapon but far harder to break.)The animal partner now looks fully human but their eyes and their physiques still carry over their natural abilities from their former bodies. Their Strengths are sharply improved by their depth of skill they have along with probably more versatile physiques. This state full on allows the tamer and partner to act as support systems to one another. Natural healing is increased along with senses and given physical abilities. Though they do not share consciousness totally (the remain of separate minds but can feel each others pain to some degree). The two are aware of dangers to one another and can act to prevent harm other reflexively.[8 turns] [S-Rank]
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name:Gotoryu [Five-sword Style]
Rank: B, A [Stance]
Type:Bukijutsu
Description: Simply enough this fighting style is a Santoryu stance especially developed by yuugao to allow her to translate her Taijutsu skills into her sword techniques more fluidly. The Five [5] blades of this style spawns from her blag leg techniques working into her sword style. making her legs two more swords to be reckoned with. This stance doesn't just transfer only her black leg Techniques over into being useful with her blades and legs but also one more Taijutsu style as well, though only two is the limit of this particular stance. To retain the second style into this stance one must retrain it to A-rank. Simply said this stance brings Taijutsu techniques to the sword. The Gotoryu stance translates into a sub-par realization of some forms as it's inclusion of the legs as a "blade" allows the shinobi to never be with out extra blades naturally integrated into their style. Culminating with the former stances of the style (ito, nin, san...), an early three and also a four blade style can be produced. Even further a 11 blade style one with in sixth stage techniques.
~The one requirement is that the first taijutsu style conjoined in this stance to be Black leg
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Spectral Havoc
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu
Element: Garasu (glass) Bloodline
Description: By forming a number of mirrors or glass shards of a prism shape around her Yuugao is capable of capturing light and transmitting her genjutsu's nature trough the constructs of her glass to refract this light as a Genjutsu that operates on not only sight but the sensation of the lights heat as well. With a number of these Prisims or even one thrown in hand, Yuugao can create illusions of a mass destructive blast or devastating shows of power and speed using the flash of the light and the genjutsu to stun and temporarily hinder the reaction of her opponents. When used in a hidden fashion she can have the prisms bounce light around to illusions of her position. The attacks or "blast created from the intense flash created from this glass prisms cause a seriously painful burning sensation that feels as it ones skin and muscles are being burned trough.
Character: Yuugao Hanshou
Technique Name: Jutsu Support
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Maruton (Tamer)
Description: An ability specific tot he Tamer class that allows their animal partners whom have the physical capabilities to to perform hand signs to remotely perform said hand-sign for the Tamer while standing still. Resulting in the Tamer creating Jutus with what would seem as if they hadn't used any hand-signs. This technique is an extension of the "Astral projection" Technique. Yet rather than sharing chakra remotely in dually formed techniques the moving part is capable of activating complex techniques with out performing the hand signs themselves. (Vice Versa is true with both parties share Jutsu)
~ partner must know this jutsu, and Astral projection for it to work.
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Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:01 pm
Character: Akane Hakura
Technique Name: Thread Spit
Rank: C
Type: Bloodline
Element: N/A
Description: Akane can perform this technique without handsigns, when he opens his mouth, a straight, long singular solid thread will shoot out like a blade and has the force to break bones. He can then bite down on it to disconnect it, or he can even fire it outwards by biting it hard during it's way out of his mouth to make it a projectile. The solid rod of thread is about a meter long.
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Posted: Fri Dec 02, 2011 4:13 am
Character: Izaya Toryo
Technique Name: Zettai Shokan ~ Absolute Redemption
Rank: E-S
Type: Bloodline ~ Passive
Element: N/A
Description: Genjutsu of Izaya's own rank cannot do him any harm as long as he has his Sakkakugan active. That is to say, if a D Rank Genjutsu were to be used against a D Rank Izaya with his Sakkakugan activated, it would not work. This being the case, the need to use chakra to Kai out of the Genjutsu would no longer be required seeing as the Genjutsu did not work to begin. It should be noted that if he reaches S Rank and an S Rank Genjutsu were to be used against him, it would work. He can only stop Genjutsu his rank up to Jounin. He also is able to use Genjutsu at a cost of -5 the original amount of chakra.
Character: Izaya Toryo
Technique Name: Magen: Kiyoki no Mugen Odori (Demonic Illusion: Endless Dance of Madness)
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Can only be used while his Sakkakugan is activated. He is able to implement his Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu into a Genjutsu, creating an endless supply of crows. These crows act as a means of offense within the Genjutsu to rain down and all around the foe(s), addling them and causing blunt damage, pecking, or just flying around ominously. Essentially a first step for his other attacks.
Character: Izaya Toryo
Technique Name: Magen: Kiyoki no Rondo (Demonic Illusion: Rondo of Madness)
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Magen: Kiyoki no Mugen Odori. The endless number of crows will start to reform into various different forms of Izaya's choosing. These forms range from a washing machine to a giant ooze monster made entirely of crows. Imagination is the user's only limit. These many forms can be used to issue massive damage depending on the size and strength behind the attack.
Character: Izaya Toryo
Technique Name: Magen: Kiyoki Yumemi (Demonic Illusion: Dreaming of Madness)
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Magen: Kiyoki no Mugen Odori. The endless crows all began to swarm around the foe(s) in a twister of blackness, completely blinding them from view of the outside world. These crows can then reform at any point in time into Izaya, showing the little boy going in for a physical attack (if one knew him then they know that he is weak physically), which will point the foe(s) attention to him. While they try to defend or attack against the fake, or fakes depending on how many are made, Izaya will come in at one point or another to deal the physical blow, mainly with a Kunai.
Character: Izaya Toryo
Technique Name: Magen: Kiyoki no Ame (Demonic Illusion: Raining Madness)
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Magen: Kiyoki no Mugen Odori. The endless crows will begin flying around madly in one direction, which is a natural sign of something bad to come. An even larger number of crows will fall from the sky, no spaces between any of them, leaving no room for escape. They come in a giant hurricane-like shower of rain, beating down on the foe(s) and delivering bone shattering damage to the foe(s) body while somehow drowning the victim, as if they were underwater. As with all Genjutsu used with the Sakkakugan, this technique has the potential to kill.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 12:14 pm
Character: Sanshi Satetsu
Technique Name: Electromagnetic mirage
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Satetsu
Description: San, being of the bloodline class and having a massive control over his magnetic chakra, begins to pump pure electromagnetic waves into the air around him for a 40 foot radius. Light, being electromagnetic radiation, will then be reflected and refracted in this area, messing with depth perception and vision clerity. The waves will be stronger the closer you get to San, but so will the effects as well.
*Basically, he is making the air ACT like water, if you can visualize this difference.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 12:47 pm
Yo-ko: Please note that photons are not affected by magnetic fields in the least.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 1:32 pm
Ergo War Yo-ko: Please note that photons are not affected by magnetic fields in the least. .....it was AandOE who gave me the original idea.....i guess talk with him over the science of it
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:34 pm
Ergo War Manfread: Denied.
Rinaku: Sougenmu is approved. The following suggestions have been made for the other two:Quote:
[ Genmu Zero: ]
Rank: E
Zero leaps up and pivots himself before launching a vertical wave of concentrated chakra from his sabre. At its bare minimum, the wave stretches to half the user's height, travels three {3} yards before dissipating, and is only capable of cutting into Earth. However, depending on the amount chakra focused into the weapon, the wave's size, distance, and strength can all be modified. The user simply feeds additional chakra to their blade, effectively increasing the technique's rank by one {1} in proper order ( D/C/B/A/S ). For each additional rank of chakra spent, the wave stretches two {2} feet taller, travels two {2} yards more, and possesses cutting power equivalent to that rank. ( If the user cannot learn techniques of a certain rank because of their level, they cannot increase Genmu Zero's power to that level either. For example, genin cannot make this an A rank technique, as they cannot learn A rank techniques. )
• Zero must train for two {2} posts per rank before being able to increase this technique's power to that rank. ( In order to use D rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, in order to use C rank Genmu Zero, he must train for two posts, and etc. )
Rekkouha:
"Zero punches the ground, sabre in hand, causing a salvo of rainbow-colored lightning pillars to dance around him. Although it only forms a perimeter of roughly two feet, used at proper distance, this can be both a powerful offense and defense."I actually like the wording and setup that you have placed there. May i use them in that format?
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:06 pm
@ Yoko: Please do.
@ Rinaku: If you'd like, that's fine.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:11 pm
Ergo War @ Yoko: Please do.
@ Rinaku: If you'd like, that's fine. I discuessed with him, and although it is possible, the numbers are to great for it to be worth it (90% of chakra to make me to do it)
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 6:27 pm
@ Yoko: A'ight.
@ Logicka: Thread Spit is approved.
@ Reaper Elyse: Crystal Quartz Mirror is approved, but with the following stipulations: 40 Chakra be taken from your character's Chakra cap for as long as the technique is known; the technique is not shatterproof, even if it is hard; Blood Ruby Quartz is its own technique.
Anthropomorphism, Jutsu Support, and Gotoryu are all denied.
Spectral Havoc needs to be broken into a Ninjutsu component and a Genjutsu component and the wording needs to be simplified slightly. If you can do that and submit them again, we'll take another look! ^-^
@ Jelani: Zettai Shokan is approved with the following stipulations: the technique is not passive; it has a 4-6 post duration.
Kiyoki no Mugen Odori, Kiyoki Yumemi, Kiyoki no Ame are all approved.
Kiyoki no Rondo is disapproved.
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Posted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 8:50 pm
Ergo War
@ Reaper Elyse: Crystal Quartz Mirror is approved, but with the following stipulations: 40 Chakra be taken from your character's Chakra cap for as long as the technique is known; the technique is not shatterproof, even if it is hard; Blood Ruby Quartz is its own technique.
Anthropomorphism, Jutsu Support, and Gotoryu are all denied.
Spectral Havoc needs to be broken into a Ninjutsu component and a Genjutsu component and the wording needs to be simplified slightly. If you can do that and submit them again, we'll take another look! ^-^
Blood Ruby Quartz, I'll rewrite it as it's own jutsu. I can understand that it's workings may well be a different branch from Crystal Quartz Mirror. =3
As for the other three (Anthropomorphism, Jutsu Support, and Gotoryu ) You know I'm gonna ask what is the issue with them. So could you Pm me about them.
Spectral Havoc, I'll work on it. Though the primary thing about spectral havoc is in using reflected light that passes trough or bounces of Hari clan glass ninjutus and making the light carry a Genjutsu that creates a visual and physical illusion of the user to be one. moving about at enhanced speeds, and creating explosions with their hands. though that is simply them shining the light on them. Though from the explanation above I think I get what you mean in me explaining exactly how the jutsu might work with this but the Jutsu really doesn't break the Genjutsu from Ninjutus but rather fuses them in using her ninjutus to project her Genjutsu by a different means. Where ever you see the light or are touched by it the Genjutsu takes hold. Anyways I'll work out the bugs.
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Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2011 11:54 am
Character: Zero
Technique Name: Demonic arts: Heaven viewing technique
Rank:C
Type: Genjutsu: Seduction
Description: A perversion on the origional hell viewing technique this attacks a target in a different manner. The target is subjected to their wildest erotic fantasies as they seem to live them out. This can have several implications in combat and has a number of other uses. (Will keep it within the guild rules on actually using this...)
Duration: 3 rounds
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