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 Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 1:05 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:09 am
((sorry man, I've had company staying with me so I haven't gotten on since she arived. I read everything, Dog's okay in the bar for you, Finn likes you, even if he's a bit gruff.))
Scarlet came out of her room, sitting calmly at the bar. She hoped nobody would notice her today, a repeat of last night would be too much. Her tweed jacket was done up today, as to cover her body. "Drake, could I get a drink and a game?"
Drake pulled Scarlet behind the counter to stand with him. He gave her a glass of milk, trying to not get alcohol into her system again. "The game's going to have to wait. I have things to tell you, but for now, there's something going on." He indicated the TV as they both began to watch.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:16 am
The clouds in the sky slowly went by as the light breeze of fresh air continued to run through everything it had encountered, this one had lasted for a short while as a bright light could be seen from up above, the bright light continued to head down towards the earth, it looked like a shooting star,the moment it had hit the atmosphere it had begain to burn, seconds later it had landed, creating a very large crater in the earth's ground, it was afew miles away from everyone else in the off distance.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:22 am
[[Lord Exodus, I don't see your profile on the first page. And while, you may have pm'd it to Onamisaki, she hasn't accepted it yet, thus you're not supposed to post as your character here. Neither of our thread mods are here so I'm saying this, because they can't at this particular moment in time.]]
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:26 am
[[No, I'm saying wait 'till Saki comes on so she can accept your profile. That's it, just wait. It's not that hard.]]
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:27 am
{Well...Are there anyother place were people are on that will rp with me??}
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 8:30 am
((Nm then??? I will wait... see ya..))
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:05 am
(( lol np dark i just got impatient cause thats just me whee whee whee
i just pretty much jumped the gun your probably either going to join me or sum thing or im going to come back for some reason))
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:17 am
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:38 am
Izzy sighed. they all needed sleep. It was a given, but while she was tired, she knew she probably wouldn't be able to sleep. It was just gonna be one of those nights, and when she finally would fall asleep, it would be that annoying light, half-sleep. Izzy cleared the rest of the food, and the atlas, and whatever other 'junk' (for lack of better words) off the bed, and she set it all on the desk in some sort of semi-organized fashion. It was really late, or rather, early morning by the looks of it. The sky had been dark and dotted with stars for a while. Izzy headed out to the balcony, and while she was absolutly scared with being up as high as she was, the chilled night air was refreshing. She had one hand grasping the railing, and her other hand was gently holding her dragonfly pendant. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, when she opened her eyes she was staring at the moon. It's soft light comforted her in a way, kinda like her pendant, everything about it seemed to make her calm. Her life was changeing, and so were her beliefs, but she knew that the moon and her pendant would never change, and in that fact, she took comfort.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:56 am
Ohjiro Mihara sat at the bar watching a seventeen inch tv behind the counter. It had a wooden base along with a black plastic lining around the tv screen. The television sat on a wooden shelf behind the bar right next to a potted plant in a clay vase. The plant was green with notches taken out of it. This plant resembled the leaves on a palm tree. Not that he'd seen one up close before but he'd seen them on tv before. He'd been sitting there observing people as they entered and exited the bar. The television just happened to be a minor distraction for the moment. Ohjiro folded his hands on top of the counter then lay his face down on top of them. Arhhhh, there is nothing on right now. I'm so bored, but this beats being at home at least.
He noticed a young lady by the name of Scarlet sit down about eight bar stools down. They didn't seem to have noticed him sitting there. After all he'd been sitting at that bar for so many hours he was starting to blend in. Ohjiro had seen that face before in this bar. From his observation Scarlet didn't wish to be bothered right now. He was fine with that, Ohjiro was fairly shy when it came to speaking with women.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:58 am
Iori left the cab out of sight of the military guarding the scene as he proceeded to walk towards it. He entered the scene unnoticed and decided to walk up the rubble. He walked into the thick black smoking spewing out as he picked up a piece of rubble and held it to his nose. He put the piece down as he looked around at the military at the scene.
"Morons." he said as he turned around and started to walk out of the scene.
He returned tot eh cab and opened the passenger side door letting his little friend jump out.
He proceeded to walk back towards the city taking him a couple of hours to get to the city limits.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:29 am
Ryn was tired, and knew he needed rest, but even though it was late or rather, early, he couldn't sleep. He had perched himself on the small couch, and folded his wings around himself, trying to fall asleep, but the thought of the Purifiers actually actively hunting the defenders had him spooked slightly.
He sighed, saying quietly," If the purifiers start hunting us it will be hard for us to keep Izzy safe, or anyone safe for that matter."
Slowly, his eyes drooped, and he finally fell into a light sleep, his wings curled around him tightly, as he sat perched on the edge of the couch.
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 10:42 am
Nendir lay motionless in the uncomfortable hotel bed. He was indeed asleep, but his subconscious was bringing every horror he could think of to life. He thought about Izzy, and how unsafe she would be, possibly even killed. He thought about Ryn as well, and how if it came down to it, where Didi his allegiance truly lie.
He saw himself standing on a ledge, Izzy and Ryn by his side, and they all looked at each other with forgiving faces before jumping over the edge. Nendir woke up with a start. The morning sun barring down on him. He shaded his eyes with the palm of his hand and headed into the restroom.
He left the light off as he walked into the restroom and found the knobs and faucet of the shower, cutting it on full blast and then stripping down to his bare essentials. The water felt pure and warm against his tired body, but after about thirty minutes he was rejuvenated, though still tainted by the dream he'd had the night before.
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