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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:19 am
Now onto Sleeper's Dust. xD
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:46 am
Okay lemme see...
Essences aren't created by people, Brolis. >3< They're found in nature and are in fact things in nature that shouldn't exist. So a dust made by sorcerers is an automatic 'not an Essence'. Sleeping Sand or something (like a play on the old sandman story) would be a better bet, HOWEVER, Toshiaki's Essence 'Reverse Coffee' already dealt with sleep powers. Although he was never developed, his Essence was coffee that made people sleepy, not perk them up and as such he has the monopoly on those sorts of things, even though he's now permanently NPC'd.
I recommend reading through the Gallery in the guild as well as on the shop's lore in the main thread to get a better idea of what makes an Essence. Also, in your description you mention Dr. Kyou. Do not do this, as this is considered powerplaying Kyou's character. When you write an Essence description, keep it about the Essence itself - what it does, what it is, etc. Not where it was found or who found it, okay? c:
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 10:55 am
Oh fail. XD
I totally remember that it's not suppose to be man made. Haha.
But even sleeping sand is a no than, eh? Drats. XD
Back to the drawing board haha.
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:32 pm
Cleansing Cyanide's turn! XD GO GO GO! <33 Please? :3
And please help on names for the potential powers. @__@ I'm kind of at a loss. xDD
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 2:57 pm
In my honest opinion, overlap is going to happen now that there are so many Raevans. It happens even now, just look at all our fire based Raevans and then all the bird souls we've had. Obviously those are much more abundant than the sleeping/dream essences, which none ever got off the ground to begin with really, so it makes more sense to avoid those a bit more than the latter.
I believe the key here is finding something that you really like, that fits the requirements of being a fel essence and then seeing what Kyou might say. You just never know, you might come up with something that may not be completely new, but because of the way you approached it, Kyou might find it interesting enough.
The best approach, I think, is not to limit yourself. Think up of as many interesting essences that you can because one of them is sure to be the one that will make it. I'd tell you the same thing with souls, but I believe you've had your heart settled on the peacock and it is a rather interesting soul choice lol.
And just one last thing about powers. Depending on the Raevan, powers can be similar to others, yet again it's about making it work differently than the others so it's more unique. Let's look at our fire based Raevans as an example. Lazarus can summon flames because his essence was the Eternal Flames. Zul's summoning is more like lava because his essence was the Lava Ice Rock. And then Prajna's essence is the Inverted Flame and thus it's ability is more about draining heat than giving it off. So you see, all though all three can be considered fire based Raevans, due to the uniqueness of their essences their powers are all different. There is also their souls to consider because powers can be derived from that as well. Or in some cases, they can cross over and create a completely unique ability that can only exist because of the merging of that Raevan's particular essence and soul.
I really hope this helps and that I'm not just rambling on for nothing, lol.
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Posted: Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:35 pm
I actually like that, it did help. Now I am not afraid to post another of, what I thought, was a good idea because it seemed to overlap a little. XD
I'll post it up once I get home and work on the Raevan himself. :3
But yeah. Soul wise I've been stuck with the peacock for years. XD since 2007 haha. The making of this thread. :3
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 1:34 pm
Now, I also have Cleansing Fire added to the list. ^-^
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 2:14 pm
I would say take off the cleansing fire. We already have 3 fire based essences as it is. Although your idea is interesting, there comes a point when it's better not to consider a certain element as a fel essence because too many derivatives from that element already exist.
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Posted: Sun Aug 12, 2012 3:22 pm
Rather it's too close to Prajna and Laz's fire essences, thus Kyou is more than likely not to accept it. I was just using those as examples earlier anyway. You can still try for a fire essence, but you have to make it really really REALLY different from all the others to have it even be considered. And even then I can't say whether Kyou will accept it or not. So please keep trying to come up with other essences. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2016 11:27 am
Thread updated once again, only 4 years later, haha, you know, no big deal. xd mrgreen
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Posted: Sat Jul 30, 2016 5:40 am
Alright, I think I have a solid idea formed up on the front page. Any critique would be appreciated. heart
And since you can tell I suck so much at creating essences, I'm using some of the available ones in the Fel Essence thread this time around.
EDIT ;; Waiting for the event to end before I can actually do something finalizing with the essences.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2016 10:28 am
Now that the event is over, I've been able to finalize some ideas for the Visible Imagination essence in combination with my Toadstool soul. :3
I really hope that this combination sounds interesting to people! 8D
Any suggestions/questions/critiques are much appreciated!
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 4:00 pm
I'm liking it so far! I can only begin to imagine the numerous ways Kyou could approach drawing this Raevan lol.
Though I am curious, with Mind's Eye, does it have to be limited to projecting onto other objects? Can't it be some sort of telepathic thing? Like maybe it's a mind wave he transmits unknowingly within a specified radius and as the Raevan grows so does the radius? Also, the spore power, it can be tied in better with the essence by perhaps making is more like a spore cloud instead of actual toadstools? Though you could probably still use toadstools for something, I'm just trying to give you some more ideas on power refinement. Still, looking like a solid concept. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 6:54 pm
Ebony Shade I'm liking it so far! I can only begin to imagine the numerous ways Kyou could approach drawing this Raevan lol. Though I am curious, with Mind's Eye, does it have to be limited to projecting onto other objects? Can't it be some sort of telepathic thing? Like maybe it's a mind wave he transmits unknowingly within a specified radius and as the Raevan grows so does the radius? Also, the spore power, it can be tied in better with the essence by perhaps making is more like a spore cloud instead of actual toadstools? Though you could probably still use toadstools for something, I'm just trying to give you some more ideas on power refinement. Still, looking like a solid concept. Keep up the good work! Aww thank you, Ebs! I'm glad you like it so far! I'm actually wanting to request the custom from Roo once approved, but overall I'm enjoying the Rowan concept a lot and hope to make him grow on everyone! /fungi pun totally intended *shot* My intention for Minds Eye was to make it so he can project the images outwards to show other people. But it could be fun to play with it your way, as well. To clarify so I'm not mistaken, in your description, it would do the same thing, but just telepathically done? My reasoning for making it projected is because of the description of the essence itself. It stating that you can see the past imaginings of people...though I guess that's just kind of the same thing you're describing huh? Just making it visible in the viewers mind instead of through an object?? Oh if so I do like that idea a lot. And as for the spore cloud, I really like your take on that! It would bring the essence together with the soul a bit better, clouds and all that after all. But the power doesn't need to change anyway other than what's produced? Ahh yeee, i do like these ideas. Thanks so much!
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Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2016 7:22 pm
sweatdrop I was around a lot more when Kyou was the only artist, so I forgot about Roo. Bad Ebs, bad. But I'm sure Roo would have lots of fun trying to concept this Raevan.
And yes, I was thinking of it being more projected within the mind, but thinking more on it, you are probably right that making it more of a physical manifestation would play more into the hands of the essence's well essence, lol. Honestly this concept has a lot of potential for fairy tale type escapades! You could even play around with the idea of toadstools or mushrooms that the Raevan makes or can make "special." Like once eaten it could make almost anything happen! Oh my gosh, I'm getting Wonderland stuff popping into my head with this lol. I'll stop for now, but I hope I'm helping you think deeper into your chars possible powers.
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