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 Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:31 pm
veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? When I sleep I sleep in messy clothes because their the most comfy!
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:32 pm
Cattra Nightblade veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? possibly to make it look like she never left? To be in what her parents last saw her in? But when you go to bed you are in you're pajamas, but you are the one that is teaching her, and I don't want to start an argument, so please move on.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:35 pm
alliballi52 veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? When I sleep I sleep in messy clothes because their the most comfy! Oh, oke, anyways lets move on, that was much better, now lets see. You decide to go on a walk, so you leave home and take a little stroll around. ((just describe what you see, if you talk to anyone ect while your on your walk... thats what this one is for))
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:37 pm
alright i am here and you have my undivided atention
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:41 pm
All right Xanatavian, do you want me to go over the basics or start with a scenario?
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:43 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:45 pm
Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? When I sleep I sleep in messy clothes because their the most comfy! Oh, oke, anyways lets move on, that was much better, now lets see. You decide to go on a walk, so you leave home and take a little stroll around. ((just describe what you see, if you talk to anyone ect while your on your walk... thats what this one is for)) Tonight is beautiful night! I'm glad that I'm here with Matt! So I haven't seen you in five months it feels like im back home! Look the rock we threw on the roof is still there! I miss this place so much! I wish I could stay but, I have to get back to texas in a week! Atleast I'm here now right! I'm really going to miss you *I Hug him* Well I have to get back to the hotel I will see you tomorrow!- Was I good?
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:46 pm
Ok
You awake deep in a jungle, with no memory of what had happened, and you have no idea who you are, and why you are here.
Describe what you would do, and how you would go about it.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:49 pm
alliballi52 Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 veinkiller Cattra Nightblade alliballi52 was there anything i needed to do to make it better? becuase if so how about this one: -shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door. ok they check on me at five so i have to be here at four toget everything off and into messy clothes so okay! walks to theater. this place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack im busted!!!!!! This one was a lot better, but try this, watch what I do with your post: Shhhhh were going to get caught hold on let me shut the door, Ok they check on me at five so I have to be here at four to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! *walks to theater.* This place is amazing! look at the sealing it looks as if it was you. hurry hurry i got to get home before my parents check on me! *as im walking in my mom see's me as she has her midnight snack* oh no im busted! The way you RP try to put *'s or -'s on your actions and keep what your saying normal. Ok, I have a problem with you're post, after you have snuck out at night, why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? "to get everything off and into messy clothes so okay! " Why would you want to get back into you're messy clothes? When I sleep I sleep in messy clothes because their the most comfy! Oh, oke, anyways lets move on, that was much better, now lets see. You decide to go on a walk, so you leave home and take a little stroll around. ((just describe what you see, if you talk to anyone ect while your on your walk... thats what this one is for)) Tonight is beautiful night! I'm glad that I'm here with Matt! So I haven't seen you in five months it feels like im back home! Look the rock we threw on the roof is still there! I miss this place so much! I wish I could stay but, I have to get back to texas in a week! Atleast I'm here now right! I'm really going to miss you *I Hug him* Well I have to get back to the hotel I will see you tomorrow!- Was I good? Indeed you where, but your sentences could use some work, like I'm glad that I'm here with Matt! could be Matt, I'm glad I'm here with you tonight... Thats all I seen there, just sentence construction is what you need to work on now.
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:52 pm
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 6:53 pm
((For people that are here...the students that is...there's a subforum for tutoring...OH and by the way, I can tutor/ teach if anyone'd like me to. If anyone wants me teach them to RP with great skill just Pm me))
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:01 pm
Cattra Nightblade Xanatavian Xavier i really hate to sound in patiant but how do i subscribe to forums (I acually have not tried to subscribe to forums for in guilds, i have a folder under favorites for it so i just open a new window in firefox and open the file and select where I want) ((I am on the internet on my Wii. It will take 5 minutes a post min and my spelling might be off. You can not suscribe to a forum topic if it is in a guild.))
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:03 pm
Snake311 Cattra Nightblade Xanatavian Xavier i really hate to sound in patiant but how do i subscribe to forums (I acually have not tried to subscribe to forums for in guilds, i have a folder under favorites for it so i just open a new window in firefox and open the file and select where I want) ((I am on the internet on my Wii. It will take 5 minutes a post min and my spelling might be off. You can not suscribe to a forum topic if it is in a guild.)) (( You can get on the actual internet with a Wii?? Now I want one! lol))
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:05 pm
ques. this has always bugged me about memory loss and amnesia it seems like you wouldnt speak english lol
IC.I arouse to a sharp pain above my kidney I stand up and realise i'd on on a rock. i twist the top half of my body and it pops then I look around and notice the greenery instantaneously the synapses in my brain start firing and i get this feeling somthings wrong. After my brain came to terms with that and the panic subsided i realized i need to find ways to satisfy lifs basic requirements. My mouth felt like it was filled with sowdust and stung whenever I moved my jaw. So i set out looking for waterand walked in a straight line until i reached a lake the water on the shore was so muddy that I could aonly get down a gulp or twothat took at least wet my mouthe so i wade deeper into the water and take a large drink
ps i will type more if needed
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Posted: Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:15 pm
veinkiller Snake311 Cattra Nightblade Xanatavian Xavier i really hate to sound in patiant but how do i subscribe to forums (I acually have not tried to subscribe to forums for in guilds, i have a folder under favorites for it so i just open a new window in firefox and open the file and select where I want) ((I am on the internet on my Wii. It will take 5 minutes a post min and my spelling might be off. You can not suscribe to a forum topic if it is in a guild.)) (( You can get on the actual internet with a Wii?? Now I want one! lol)) ((Computer reclaimed!!!! Its very cool with youtube. Its like your actually watching a Japanese episode of Naruto on your TV. Because you are!))
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